Teri Meri Dosti….Yaariyaan…Manmarziyaan!!! Chapter 6

M feeling good…to share the thought of my mind…..like how I think about a couple in love like this…..!!

Radhika, who is standing showing her back to the door turn at 180 degree with the feeling of neil’s presence there…..neil look her like something else….something in his eyes which she never ever noticed before……
Neil “mmm…u r looking beautiful madam”
Radhika “ohhhh..thank you for these dresses…I can admit now, that u have a great choice”
Neil “my pleasure…” they smile and come out of room…neil took her to his car and ask her to have a seat..
Radhika “neil…where are we going at this time?”
Neil “just have a seat and please keep quiet for some time”
Radhika “ok…..but I m not comfortable in these clothes in front of any other person except you”
Neil smiled “dnt worry…I knew that”
They both drove off….after driving of almost 2 hour neil park the car and come out…quickly move and open the car door for radhika also as a true gentleman… “thank you” she said this and come out….
It is a old fort like mughal’s time out of the city….area is mostly dense with trees…. its beautiful also…neil offer his hand to her….radhika with a beautiful smile give her hand into his and they smile looking at each other….and neil then move towards the fort with her….
Radhika is all excited now…..she love to explore new places…and what is more better thn this when she is with neil…..all alone without any disturbance…..
Whole scenario in front of their eyes is covered with the light it look like its totally gold…eyes shine with reflection of lights that decorated whole fort….golden glow reflected the water of lake there and also the face of visitors…..
The fort is quite old so neil asked radhika to walk carefully…when she is about to slip from a small stair..neil hold her from waist…and they reached at the top of the building…..a small tent house type is arranged there with the red satin curtains falling from all sides and finally tied at the end….a white velvet cloth covered mattress, some softy soft cushions and again red blanket as it is quite chilled there…..neil’s one hand on her waist…unknowingly he forget to take it back from there and another one holding her hand carefully………they sit on the mattress without disturbing their eye contact….
Neil “do you want to have something?”
Radhika in a teasing voice “o really…do we have choices here to order anything?”
Neil “may be…”
Radhika “seriously?”
Neil “no…m just joking…”
Radhika rolling her eyes…” I knew…”
Neil “no…you dnt knew anything”
Radhika placing both her hands on her hips “excuse me….”
Neil “excused”
Radhika “do u take me here to fight with me”
Neil “no baby…I just want to spend some time with you….we hardly get this time from business for this meet…so I just want to enjoy this night”
Radhika ….”but its cold here…and this dress….”
Before she complete neil offer her the blanket which he already covered on himself……radhika move towards him and share that with him….. they talk about their childhood and then college..school inbetween these talks..they doesn’t notice that radhika’s head on neil’s shoulder now…neil’s arm cover her back and his hand placed on her shoulder….radhika keep on blabbering and neil keep on staring her…this time…her shoulderless less make him wild inside but no…this is not the correct time…he make himself understand …but her silky golden skin burns him……he arched for it……to touch it…to feel it!!
Neil are you listening me?” radhika asked
Neil cm out of his mind and asked “what?”
Radhika blushed when their eye meet….she nervously tuck the strand of hair which fell on her face behind her ear….but suddenly neil free her hair from two three small pins that placed to settle her hair….she feel a thunder inside her heart….!!
Neil try to be normal as much as he can “you look good like this….no need to tie them”
Radhika nodded and down her gaze….
Radhika “let’s play truth and dare again”
Neil giving an unbelievable look “here…only two of us?”
Radhika with fake anger “so…I always think that we two are enough to accompany each other…we feel happy…but if u want you can call whole gang here”
Neil chukled at her behavior…. “ok…kiddo….but where is bottle?”
Radhika “wait….give me car keys”
Neil “what??”
Radhika “there is a bottle n the car”
Neil “and you think I will let you go there alone?”
Radhika “m not a kid neil “
Neil murmured to himself ”I knw…u r more thn a kid”
Radhiak “did u said something?”
Neil “no…I mean no need to go anywhere” We are only two…so let’s play turn wise….”
Radhika “ok…but I will ask first”
Neil “sure….but there are some rules”
Radhika “tell me…m listening”
Neil “u have to play at least 3 times each…..u cnt not backout….i mean u hv to do whatever other asked you for”
Radhiak “anything else?”
Neil “no….lets start now”
Radhika excitedly “truth or dare?”
Neil “truth…”
Radhika “do you ever checked my phone without my knowledge?”
Neil “yes…..”
Radhika “hawww…u mannerless”
Neil “hey…listen na…I checked when we are in college….u use to peeping in phone all the time…but when I didn’t find anything…I feel bad”
Radhika laughed…” I use to play Sudoku in that”
Neil “ok…my turn..truth or dare?”
Radhika “dare”
Neil “ok…then you have to call a mental hospital and tell them that u want to adopt a mental ly imbalanced patient”
Radhika “r u mad???’
Neil “u cnt back out…”
Radhika “but I dnt have the number”
Neil “its aritel baby…anytime anywhere”
He quickly search on google and provide her the number of a mental hospital
She dialed and it ringing “are u sure neil?”
Neil “yes……u have to do this”
Phone picked up by person A “hello…how can I help you?”
Radhika “hie…I want to adopt a patient from your hospital”
A” mam…it is not a time to joke”
Radhika “hey…m not joking…”
A” then, who the hell in this earth adopt a mental person”
Radhika “me”
A “I think u also need to be admitted here….dnt call here again or I will surely find out you and admit here”
Person hung up the call murmuring some more curses to her
Radhika is about to cry and neil laugh hard with her facial expressions……
Radhika “dnt laugh now…ok…its my turn…truth or dare?”
Neil “this time dare”
Radhika “okay….then…u have to jump down from here”
Neil with a smile…get up….and reached to the boundary…he is about to stand on the cliff when radhika quickly drag his hand and hug him “are u mad?”
Neil “hahah…u asked me to jump…and now u r asking me whether I am mad??”
Radhika “ok…its done now…cm back”
Neil “truth or dare?”
Radhika “truth”
Neil “tell me do you check my laptop anytime without my knowledge?”
Radhika “this is cheating..u r repeating my question”
Neil “no…u asked me about phone…m asking you about laptop”
Radhika with anger “same thing…and the answer is yes”
Neil “and what did u check?”
Radhiak moving her eyes here and there…”mmm..i checked your youtube history….to check whether you watch p*rn movies or not”
Neil mouth open….”what???”
Radhika “yes…I checked that…on daily basis when we were in college..not now”
Neil “but how do you know my password?”
Radhika in a proud voice “I knew your all password dude…ur bank password…your laptop..mobile…ATM…everything….”
Neil “that mean u can easily do a fraud to me”
Radhia burst out in a laugh “yes…beware of me”
Neil “and do you find anything in my youtube history”
Radhika “no…never”
Neil “hehehe…coz whenever I watched a p*rn movie…I clear the history….”
Radhika “that mean……oh god”
Radhika “trith or dare?”
Neil “dare”
Radhika “ok…u have to dance on munni badnaam hui”
Neil “ok…but where is the music?”
As he is dead sure he will save himself to said that he can only dance on original track…
Radhika get out her phone and play “munni badnaam hui…darling tere liye”
Neil is shocked and radhika rocked here………”poor soul have to dance” and radhika having fits to see him dancing like a girl…with wierd face expressions……
Neil “enough now….truth or dare?”
Radhika “truth”
Neil “that’s not fair…u have to take dare now”
Radhika “ok…dare”
Neil “you have to kiss me”
Radhika unbelievingly “kiss??”
Neil in a serious tone “yes…”
Radhika “ok…close your eyes…”
Neil smile blushingly to imagine her kiss …and shut his eyes
radhika ..kissed him….on the back of his hand
Neil opened his eyes in big disappointment… “hey…this is cheating…..”
Radhika “what cheating??? U asked me to kiss..u didn’t mention any place”
Neil “but..”
radhika “no if or but…..m tired now….lets sleep”
neil face is expressed like he would cry anytime now…..they lay down at there and sleep for a while….actually both of them pretended to sleep only….in real they are awake…..
radhika knowingly hug him tight and neil’s body stiffed with that but he also reciprocate her hug by folding his both arms around her to fill the remaining gap!!

Heart beat at its fastest pace……..sleep……eyes forget that and started dreaming…..to feel love of each other………
After sometime neil move his finger in her hair kissed on her forehead and asked her to get up…holding her hand and playing with her fingers.
Radhika enjoying his touch blushed badly but she covers her face with blanket to be un noticed and after 2-3 minutes open her eyes……
radhika left his hand and automatically both other hands placed on her mouth to cover the excitement like wow…she witness something un believable…….sun is about to come and water of the lake besides the fort turn to be orange slowly slowly with the effect of sun rays…..it reflect everything present there…birds start their chirping….cool breeze touched her face and arouse Goosebumps……she move a little but neil hold her from behind and hug tightly…her back to his front…….his chin on her naked shoulder… “how s it baby?” he asked
radhika frozen with the word baby….but the scenario…….”its amazing neil…I like this…..(and in the excitement she shout again..) I love this…I love you neil….”
Neil tightened his grip on her waist after listening those magical words and burn his face in her neck and shoulder….
Radhika realized what she said…”I mean…I love this morning a lot…thx for taking me here”
Neil smiled realizing her nervousness….but he is so happy….to know that she also feel same for him…!!!

Confession is far away….may be…I dnt knw guys…..so you have to tell me what you want…..and and and…how is this episode????? Is it make you smile…plz tell me…it matters a lot !!

44 comments

  1. alex

    superb as usual …just loved it …too gud…plz do mention when u will update next one…that resort wala idea is great…n their truth n dares ..it was so much fun…but poor neil got a kiss on hand haahaaha…atleast cheek py hi krdaiti….update next one soon…n a long one

  2. Happy

    Hi…..nice update….liked not loved Neil…he is just amazing….thank you so so much…when ll update next one….update soon….waiting….

  3. rasha

    Its going really nice dear.pairs are too good.i cn imagine them clearly.raneil is too good together.actually I like ardhika pair most except here.dnt change the jodi plsss.ths story is and will different.

  4. gauri

    Love you for keeping my request and big hug for you and million kisses …loved it ….so beautiful…. best munni badnam hui… rocking 🙂 🙂 🙂 stay blessed

  5. Sammy

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    It was so cute .lol but I was expecting atleast a kiss ..hehe …naughty me ..pls maandey di ..in next update bring arjun too …and make a goody jealousy track. .I just want some friendship scenes of ardhika ..and this chappy ..like waoooo …amazing 🙂 🙂

  6. neetz

    Wow. So romantic loveeeeed it…i was sniling throughout oops i was blushing for them lol…superrrrr

  7. Jessie

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    Nice.. truth n dare part .. superb..waiting 4 nxt one.. now Neil 2 got 2 knw she loves him.. lets see who confesses first

  8. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Mind blowing…. Ritu dear… Such a wonderful episode it is… Awww what a feel they both have on each other…. I could easily imagine their scenes…. Lovely… U rocked it babe…. Post the next one soon… Love u 😍😍😍😍

  9. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Ofcours di this episode made me smile wide..like a colgate smile…wow..this episode is really very cute n romantic one..their hesitation still wanting each othr loVe..wow u wrote realle awesome.. Their antics teasing… Great…song dedication jaane tu yaa jaane na…maane tu ya maane na…love u di..tc..

    • RituM

      |Author

      awww….love you too sweety….eager to see ur comment here…..nd now glad that u like it……nd yes… “jaane tu…jaane tu ya jaane na??”

  10. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Wow..wow..jst wow..😊😊 every part was too beautiful..truth and dare..lovely😊😊 and Neil got a kiss on hand..lol..😂😂 now waiting to know how will they come close leaving their awkwardness…plz post soon…love u..tc 😊😊

    • RituM

      |Author

      girl…..i really like this smiley…which make other smile…..hahaha….nd thx for liking it……will be back soon to get some more good reviews from all of you!!

  11. Shree

    |Registered Member

    Lol !! Omg!! Munni babnaam Hui!! Yey!! Ite as awesome di!! I atleast hoped for a cheek kiss.. lol mental hospital😂😂.. too good di.. why can’t they confess? Stupid dumbos!! But you’re the writer.. do Something di.. soon… Please I don’t want Neil hurt..

    I loved it to the core.. from the bottom of my heart..

    Post soon di.. Love you 😍😘

  12. RituM

    |Author

    love you too dear…and yess munni badnaam ho gyi….lol

    confess…..not so early…..

    i will not hurt neil….i mean i will try not to hurt neil!!! thx baby…love you!!

  13. Manha

    |Registered Member

    superb one. Truth and dare game betn radz n neil awesome. slowly they are opening up their feelings more than friends. Lovely.

  14. Roma

    Rituuuuuu. My buddy…it’s mind blowing episode. …loved the truth dare game n all the tasks….neil’s surprise of sunrise was incredible. …she hulur out her heart…lol….I just loved the way neil pampering rads. …very interesting n lovely narration. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads my sweeeeeetheart….muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂 ♡♡♡ 🙂

    • RituM

      |Author

      hey….my grandpa expired…..so dwad busy…or u can say stucked….will be back on friday most probably!! m glad tht u r waiting for update n m sorry for delay….!!

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