Teri Meri Dosti….Yaariyaan…Manmarziyaan!!! Chapter 5

m so quick this tym…so u have to comment….

Radhika entered her room and rush to the bathroom….she is confused….what to feel…her mind say he is only your friend…
But on the contrary heart say…no…he is your husband also…..and the way he treats you…it show that he care for you..
Again mind shout… “stop this….he care for you from childhood….does it mean he also love you…no baby no!!”
Heart calmed…peacefully “the way he admired you….his intense settled gaze on you…what else do you want lady”
She just rush into bathroom and splash water on her face numerous times……she speak to herself “look…radhika you come here to enjoy…dnt make him feel bad…..behave mormal and dnt forget that he is your best buddy….no matter what…..this friendship is everything to you”
She come out of her terrance with the knock on the door….she again feel nervous what if neil is there and ask her questions……but after listening manya’s voice she feel relaxed ….manya comes there to called her for dinner…..”I will be there in 5 minutes manya….”
“Ok” by saying this manya left…..she get saral standing in the corridor and quickly push him to the wall “so…mr..saral …..u have 5 girlfiends in the past”
Saral shocked…he doesn’t expect such a quick encounter “but baby…those were the days when you were not with me”
Manya “ok…but still 5???”
Saral cupped her face “mannu…baby…u knew na that I love you?”
Manya “not only me but all other eight ppl present here knew that you love me”
She winked and he hug her….

Radhika come out of bathroom and stare her image in the mirror…all makeup washed away…she quickly apply some lip balm and come out….
Dinner is all set…..with all favorite dishes of neil and radhika which are almost same……they gather there and sit down to have their food…..radhika and neil sit opposite to each other and saral and manya sit next to neil and radhika… manya “to mneil…I wnt to sit with saral please will you shift here”
Neil have no other option so he nodded and now neil and radhika sitted together…
sam and saral tried their best to make the scenario comfortable for everybody!! Nitika and priyanshu are in their own world..staring each other shyly….excitedly…..smilingly!!
food is little bit spicy and neil coughed with that…radhika immediately turn and offer him a glass of water….rubbing her palm on his back…..neil’s eyes turn red with the effect….radhika “sam…yaar from where you order the food…dnt you tell them to keep food less spicy”
no body speaks and just stare to both neil and radhika to watch their reactions……. Radhika is worried for neil and after e few minutes and two glass of water neil feel a bit relaxed…radhika then sit back and starting having her dinner once again…..

neil in his mind “radhika…what is happeneing…we are here to spend some good time…and here…..everything is messed up…what should I do…to make u feel good?”
dinner is over and all get up after having their ice cream bowls……enjoying….saral wink towards sam and bumped into neil…with the jerk neil bump into radhika…both fell down with ice creame bowls on the floor and ice creame on their dresses…..
some of the ice creame on neil’s face and radhika laughed at that….watching her lovely wife smiling widely neil also unable to resist himself anf both of them have fits of laugh together!!
Saral and sam again sign each other with the thumbs up….
Nikita: ok guys…now radhika and neil…cleanup yourself guys then we will resume our game!!
The couple denied but then agreed….they get up from the floor and move to their room to change into some comfortable……again there is a box in the bed….radhika asked with a raised eye brow…”what is this?”
Neil “check it youself”. He changed into white v-neck tshirt and grey track pants and exited the room
Radhika immediately opened the box and find a night gown in that…it has strips on shoulder with a deep neck on both side…..litle bit below her knee length….she like that a lot but she cnt wear it in front of everyone…but what she saw next…is a simple matching jacket….full sleeve…she also changed and come out…neil feel satisfied watching her in that….
They sit down and agin start their game…
Bottle stopped on sam… “truth”
Saral “do you love someone?”
Sam “yes”
Everyone shocked to listen….none among them knew this…not even radhika “and who is that?”
Sam “you can ask only one question one time”
Radhika sign her with “I will see u after game”
Bottle stopped on neil this tym “dare”
Saral “sing a song for radhika “
Neil “o….no problem…but I have a very bad voice”
Saral “no matter but sing for her”

Neil sing

“kehte hain khuda ne is jahan mein sabhi k liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi k liye…
tera milna hai us rabb ka ishara maano
mujhko banya tere jaise hi kisi k liye…
kuch to hai tujhse raabta…kuch to hai tujhse raabta…
kaise hum jaane hume kya pta…kuch to hai tujhse raabta….
Tu hamsafar hai….fir kya fikar hai…jeene ki wajah yahi hai marna isi k liye….”

Radhiak’s happiness is at no bound now….she get up and hug him…unknowingly….she make her hug tight…neil also place his hands on her back to make that hug even more tight…..all other clap….and then the couple realisetheir proximity…. After few more dares and thruths all of them retired for the night and took their way to their respective rooms….

Radhika standing infront of mirror…brushing her hair and lost in the song neil sang for her…..he come behind and collecting all his courage hug her from behind…..to hids blush on his own face he buried it in her shoulder…..radhika is magents now…….neil is so much close to her…..that dress…then song….their hug and now…this!!! She cnt take it anymore…move ahead and break the hug…. “neil…when did you get this dress for me?”
Neil disappointed with the sudden coldness…”the time when I ordered previous one….radhika…are u feeling sleepy?”
Radhika really want to sleep..she is so tired but “no…m not sleepy at all”
Then lets go for a drive….neil said
Radhika….”this tym???’
Neil “yes…this tym,”
Radhika “no…lets go to the back side of the house and sit there…..”
Neil agreed and they come outside near pool and sit on the easy chairs placed there….neil doesn’t like when she setle herself in another chair…he want her on the same…..but brushed off his thoughts….
So…what you want to do now?” radhika asked
Neil…”mmm….just thinking something”
Radhika “what…u can tell me na”
Neil smile lightly “do you like someone?”
Radhika doesn’t understand what he said “what?”
Neil “I mean…v r married…but its arrange marriage and seriously I you like someone then tell me…v can finish this and you will plan your future with ur love”
Radhika feel so bad after listening but she is unable to show that to him…his words stabbed into her heart…it bleeds…bleeds with the pain…”whenever I will find my love…I will tell you for sure”
But now…I think we should sleep…m hell tired”
Before waiting for a reply..she ran in her room…and locked herself in washroom….cit there.and cried placing a hand on her mouth so that nobody listen to her sobs… “wow…on her wedding party…her husband ask her for seperation”
Neil entered and knocked the door….she collect herself and answered that she is taking a bath and need some time, but neil keep knocking…without answering….
Radhika frustratedly open and shout “dnt u understand that I need some time alone..”
Neil “alone…to cry sitting inside?”
Radhika doesn’t expect this “y do I cry?”
Neil “that is what I am asking”
Radhik a”I told u…m not crying”
Neil “o..yes…ur eyes also told me this….”
She cnt held anymore and brust out her tears hugging neil ….
Neil pacify her “what happened?”
Radhika “please dnt ask anything….just stay here like this”
Neil “enough now…..we are her to enjoy na…”
Radhika composes herself..”neil…I want to sleep….please dnt ask me anything right now”
Neil nodded….”please..may I use the washroom first?”
Radhika laugh at his need and give him a side…he quickly entered to loose himself…meanwhile radhika come into the room and again find another box….with a tag “please…I want to see you in this…..she opened and her eyes filled with the water again….such a beautiful dress….his all gestures sign her that he love her but why dnt he speak that…her mind thought…..
Neil come out of the bathroom and without meeting her eyes…said “I will be back in 15 minutes” he is giving her tym to change
She opened the box and change into the beautiful attire….she like this dress and also knew the reason why neil want her to wear that at this tym when no one else other then neil can see her…. Open the link guys

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she wear silver bellies and curl her hair again quickly….put liner and lip gloss…..she is un aware of the reason why is she so excited with his gifts….why she want to look good to him….she knw him from childhood….it never matter her before…..but y now….
Neil knocked on the door and open it…..his legs jammed on the floor……watching her like a fairy…..!!

neil is not going to propose her….but he understand that she also love him……he make her feel and believe that they are one soul!!

tell me…tell me…ahhhh…m confused…now i added here that sam also love someone….nikita and priyanshu….saral and manya…uffff….!! i dnt want to drag this!!

41 comments

  1. JoAn

    |Registered Member

    Jus bring Arjun cant bear to see Neil n radhu close 😐 sorry ya couldn’t control its ur story ur wish 😡

  2. subha

    wow………interesting story ………amazing episode…….as usual u r awesome………..eagerly waiting next one …..please update soon…..love uuuuu

  3. Sammy

    |Registered Member

    Superb di mind blowing awesome …loved it to the core …Sam I think now time for arjun to enter again update it soon di:-) 🙂

  4. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Cute cute cute…. Lovey dovey…. I liked the dress a lot… Superbbbb… First time I m commenting in this ff… Amazing ritu… I loved it 😍😍😍

  5. Lakshmi05

    |Registered Member

    Awesome ritu dear…ohh sam loves someone…wow..Neil is so romantic 😍😍…that dresses n song is superb…rads confusion… n Neil’s gifts r too good…n what next…waiting for next update… Luv u…tc…

  6. alex

    that day also i typed coment 3 times…nd now m typing this coment for 2nd time….ritu its short update… i waz jumpping with joy to read this…its too gud yr seriously superb…update next one soon coz i cant wait to read next one…plz add some romantic spice in next one…hope u will update next one asap

  7. manha

    lovely update. Radz n neil caring for each other. So sweet. Dresses were superb. Kaha se dhoond ke layi. Raabta fav song. Kya situation hain aur kya song. Loved it. Now how neil will make radz realize he loves her n make her confess that she loves him too. ufff so much work. Saral n manya and nitika n priyanshu ki choti si cute si love story. They were gud. Sam loves who??? Arjun. Lol. Arjun in cameo. Waiting to see. Loved the update.

    • RituM

      |Author

      manha……it took me one hour to search the dress and a song…tht suites the situation!! u like this…awwww…meri mehnat safal ho gyi……

  8. Dipika

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    Ritu di a tight hug to u for such lovely epi….n the song.. My most fav one…i like the every sequence .as i hv told u this story reminded me of someone.. So whn neil ask her abt her love..ut pained me too..y guys r do duffer… Excited for nxt..love u..

  9. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    I love that song and it’s so apt for them, this was such a cute update, so Sam also loves someone, wonder who could that be. Waiting for the next

  10. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Cute sweet and emotional update…I enjoyed it..Songs and dress were superb..Sam also love someone..now waiting for SaRjun to unite..plz post soon..love u..tc

  11. Bella

    Wow episode was so good n l loved it
    asap please update the next part
    I love the way how Neil express his love towards radhika just mind blowing

  12. Jnana

    |Registered Member

    Its first time I’m commenting. Its just beautiful. I never read ff of raniel. I loved their pair noe. And about sam is that arjun. Well let it be arjun raneil are superb like this.

  13. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww, superb ritu….mind blowing update. ..I just loved it to the coreeeee. ..the dresses were veryyyyyyy beautiful. …rads looking fairy…neil mesmerized. ..wowwww. …when they will confess…ahhh…for sam plz bring arjun…then it will be complete mmz…I’m missing arjun here….keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart ♡♡♡ 😉

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