Teri Meri Dosti….Yaariyaan…Manmarziyaan!!! Chapter 1

Jaipur……..in a huge palace….A wedding ceremony is going on…….a royal and rich decoration…..lights are sparkling like stars….flowers….ahhhh plenty of flowers…in plenty of variety are there….their fragnance mingled with each other and obviously purify the whole surroundings…… a bride in red heavy bordered lehnga….with heavy jewelry came into view……her big round nose ring………arms filled with beautiful designs of mehndi…. full of bangles……a royal waistband on her waist……….she is smiling, holding her dupatta while chanting something with her friend……heavy makeup….totally red……she is no less than a goddess tonight……..and why not…….she herself is a business woman….o no…sorry…a business tycoon Ms. Radhika Mehra…… and going to marry another business tycoon Mr. Neil Malhotra……. These guys friends form their birth….i mean yes….they even share same hospital…where they were born……same building…..she lives in 20th floor and he lives in 21st…their parents are bff……..so radhika and neil are also no less thn their parents…bff…………………

As radhika move towards the wedding stage where they are going to exchange their garlands……neil comes forward and hold her hand like a gentleman……yes…he is a gentleman…a pure heart soul…… radhika is totally impressed with him as he is wearing a golden sherwani with red pagdi (we use to call it helmet…lol) she fainted their…and about to fall but neil hold her in his arms…everyone is worried…what happened to the bride suddenly……neil also lost the glow of his face….”what happened kiddo?” at the same time…radhika open her eyes and wink towards him…placing her hands on her heart…. “ahhhh…..u are looking breath taking……look I fainted” everyone except neil start laughing……and neil stare her with a fake angry look….”not again you drama queen….” Radhika with a pouted face “what is mine fault…….ur looks……nearly killed me today” neil…..smiling shyly as everyone around them is laughing……… “if you are done…….?”
Radhika nodded and both of them move towards the stage……….their garlands…….ahhhh…white..red…yellow….with little green…looking so fresh and beautiful……finally they exchange and a rain of rose petals started……they enjoy…..while standing there….laughing and communicating something in each other’s ears……..

Now it’s a time for other rituals…….their wedding vows……… and pandit ji starts his job……both neil and radhika sit on their respective places folding their hands to take blessings of god……..

now flashback starts….
Radhika and neil are neighbors, but more thn that they are each others soul….i mean friends…not lovers…but more thn friends…..they spent their life together till now….same school…same college…same subjects……even they share same notebook sometimes…as one day radhika have to prepare notes whatever teacher mention in the class and another day…neil have to do that…so same notebook…..
After completing their masters in business administration…they were very much clear what they want to do…..o forgot to tell you that yes…here also they want to start a same business but somehow their parents make them understand to do something different from each other or you both will become business rivals…they were not ready but yes…their parents had a point and they couldnot neglect that…so radhika mehra start her business in consumer products and neil malhotra in communication sector…..they help each other in every possible way…..in business and personal life……
They are so close to each other that they never feel the need of any other friend…..share their pain….sorrows…happiness and joy together……but instead of all that they are not in love….awww….love…na na…not at all!!!

After 5 year of total focus in their business, now…their parents want both of them to settle down…..they decided their alliance …firstly neil and radhika create a lot of drama but slowly they start thinking that yes v are best buddies…they why not we will become a couple……may be it works…..

While sitting in a café:
Radhika : golu…what do you think…should we make a try??”
Neil : “hey….stop calling me golu…..how many times do I need to tell you?”
Radhika “that is not the answer of my question?”
Neil “ ahhhh…..look….we knw each other from our birth….we cnt live without fighting with each other….we cant live without making other smile at least once in a day…….. but its tooooo hard to tolerate you as a wife……radhika fumes in anger…but before she interfare neil speak again…”let me complete kiddo…..its a real fact that its toooo hard to tolerate you as a wife for life time…but I think we should give it a try……and also…I never imagine any other important person in your life except me……”
Radhika…”same here…I never allow any one in this whole universe to get more importance thn me in your life……”
Neil…. “thn its decided….we will marry..and then lets c….”
Radhika “okkkk…!!!!”
They hug each other and come out of café……inform their parents about their decision…and no time for engagement as they have damn busy schedule for few months so direct wedding…….
Flas back ends…..

Pandit ask them to get up for phere…..they stand up and completed all of their wedding rituals happily……guests wish them and started leaving one by one…..mala and dilip…radhika’s parents hug her and their eyes starting to become wet…neils parents consoles them but…..
Neil “daddy and mamma….why are u guys crying for this kiddo….?”
Dilip… “its just…she becomes your now…”
Neil “then you should thank me….”
Everyone start laughing and dilip and mala both hug the married couple…….

Finally…..neil reached his home with his wife radhika holding her hand…Prerna and Nikhil…parents of Neil come out with other to welcome the new member of their home…..they do all the rituals and finally…..neil reached to his room…where a little shy radhika is waiting for him…atleast he think that before entering his room but the scene is totally different when he entered…his eyes are becoming any time come out of their holes….

On a full decorated king size bed….radhika…I mean his wife……sat there with two bottles of whisky…..soda and some extra snacks……wearing a creame colour night suit……. “what is this kiddo?”
Radhika “golu…dnt behave like a melodramatic husband….i am dead tired and I knew u also have the same condition right now….so lets enjoy na”
Neil quick move and hug her…. “ahhh… I was damn nervous before entering….i cant even imagine you and me romancing….”
Radhika “same here……”
Neil “thts y……u r my bestie…..but how long…..both of us knew that very soon….our parents start asking us about family planning….”
Radhika “we will handle them later…but right now…lets start…”
She prepare drinks for both of them and after one hour or two…these husband wife are fully drunk……radhika’s head on his chest and one of her leg on his waist…….they sleep in this style various times…at the time of their struggling…when they have to wake up long hours to complete their business reports and proposals…….!!!

Guys….tell me hows it…it will be a short story…maximum….to maximum…5 chapters!!

RituM

62 comments

  1. Rosie

    Funny ritu….i always admired raneil bond in short span of time…but idiotic cvs lost that with pressure from star plus …is this having only raneil or Arjun is also there…??

  2. Suga

    |Registered Member

    Ritu year thank u sooooooo much for raneil pair 😀 😀 its more than fabulous 😀 I personally love raneil pair 😀 its my most fav ff dear coz of raneil pair 😀 😀 all penned d pure raneil bond but I badly want to c raneil as pair 😀 😀 my dream came true 😀 😀 just coz of u 😀 😀 thank u sooooooooooo much darling 😀 😀 😀 muhaaaaaaaaaaa n teddy hug for u 😀 😀

  3. Suga

    |Registered Member

    And I love ur dp 😀 😀 😀 ritu u already uploaded os ???? I men DAT foodie ff ??? 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • RituM

      |Author

      thx for luking my dp…n no dear i write nothing for you darling but still i love u…….only other thn this

      • Suga

        |Registered Member

        Maanday darling its uuuuuuuuuuuu 😀 😀 am so sorry hot sweetie I tot another ritu 😀 happy to c u with another ff 😀 yipeeeeee my hot sweetie with another plot DAT too my fav raneil pair 😀 😀 oh god darling hottie sweetie muhaaaaa 😀 😀 live u much 😀

  4. Jessie

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    Do we have Arjun here.. its different.. best buddies as couples… cud understand Raneil der.lets see… waiting 4 nxt update

  5. deiva

    Omg this is some thing I love from heart….. love to know frnd becoming a life partner…… but it is not necessary to be fallen in love every time…… there should be frndship love…….. o u r sooooooo cute….. nd wow know u called pagdi as hamlet…… ??? and that same notebook….. it was my and mine frnd secrete……. we always do like this…….
    Love u dear…… and amazing and unique plot……. loved it……. waiting for next love u tc

  6. nisha

    hey dear ,

    helloooooooooooooooooooooooo first time meeting you and very much liking the cute

    Rajshree kind of story in your very good and impressive title same to the real.

    and I just love the wedding instant and raneil bond of marriage

    wow < hey I know arjun and sam will have to came in ur second and third part

    but a requested as a reader and admirer of ur writing dear

    I want to enjoy this bond a little more , I mean their honeymoon masti in raneil style

    and many more things before jealousand other things start with sam and arjun came in their life

    Love u dear for expoloring such a beautiful side of the story

    I love u for this

    Keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend

    • RituM

      |Author

      nisha…..thx alot dear……n dnt worry…their s no crap like jealousy n all…..i will try to make u cry with tge fits off laugh…..thumbsup!!!

  7. Shubhadha

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    It is good..But still my heart didnt accept radhika with neil as a couple..They are skways gud like best frnds..aradhika as a gud pair..But i try to digest it dear…

  8. Sammy

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    Maandey di wao I badly want to shift Neil and radhika ..I was thinking to do it ..but you give a beautiful surprise ..I love it 🙂 🙂

  9. Supriya

    Ohh di its you….this z so funny…. Loved the concept…. I feel best friends make best life partners if we leave that love part….nd its difficult for a person like me to fall for someone…. Frankly I don’t have any idea what it z but friendship z the best bond ever….di arjun nd Sam r there r8?….di you know I thought you are pairing raneil….but its kk we always love to see rads with arjun….its a totally new nd unique consept just like you….plz update soon….love you….muaaah…. Tc?

  10. Gianna

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    Just one word brilliant, just brilliant Maandey. Was not really expecting this but u gave me a pleasant surprise, love u for this. Now post the nxt one soon, love u ????

  11. Silent reader

    Hey I personally like raneil waiting eagerly for next update
    Two best buddies sharing their life forever wow I’m so excited about the story please update soooooon….

  12. Gayu

    I always liked raneil bond. Thanks for writing this story and pls don’t stop soon and the story is really nice.

  13. Roma

    Rituuuuuu. …..muaaaaahhhhhh. …raneil. ..bonding from birth….best buddies, share even same note books….lol….now sharing life together. …wowwww…what a unique and mind blowing plot….I’m just so so sooooooo happy to read this marvellous update. …couldn’t wait to read it as soon u told me….I’m in love with your amazing imagination and flawless talent of writing. ….n definitely love u from the bottom of my heart. …thank you sweetheart for this lovely surprise. …I love neil a lotttttttttt n often thinking, what if rads to be with neil instead of arjun….n you made my dream true…love you soooooooo muchhhhhh rituuuuu 🙂 …. I love these experiments…as you did here with raneil n madhumita did in checkmate for arsam….soooooooo lovelyyyyyy. ..ritu it’s superbbbbb narration…the shaadi, rituals….flashback….n finally suhaagraat scene was mind blowing n hilaaaaaaarious. …you’re amazingly awesoooooome writer…you made my day…very tight bear hug for you buddyyy….keep it up…all the best for this amazing story. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads…muaaaaahhhhhh….lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss for u n Lil princess arya… take care sweetie 🙂 😉 😀 ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

  14. priya

    it’s mindblowing ………………… update nxt soooon ……………… love you diiiiiiiii

  15. dipika

    Ritu di its superb yar..u reminded me of my best friend.. we r same like RaEil..n why 5 chapters only..make it longer na..n that faint wala scene is too cute..can’t control myself laughing hard..waiting for nxt..love you.tc

  16. Shree

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    Maanu di! Loved it to the core!! I’m way more excited… Loss of words to appreciate…

    Post soon please.. Love you ??

  17. Abi

    Oh my god……. My long time dream…. Finally happened that radhu nd my neil made a couple….. Maandey, i really loved it…. U know, i m eagerly waiting for the nxt update. Pls do update….. And i want radhu nd neil combination only….. Y u also want arjun nd sam in this…… Are they going to seperate our raneil….. No…. No…. No….. Ths should not happen…. Pls maandey…… I need ur reply pls…….. Reply me…. I m waie here?????

    • RituM

      |Author

      Abi…..dnt worry…arjun and sam will be here….but not to spoil their bond……main lead are neil and radhika only….n thx alot i will update soon!!

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