Tere sheher mein(manya and rachi forever) intro

Hi guys this my first ff on tere sheher mein. Hope u will like it.

Amaya:a hot,charming,beautiful,western girl. Daughter of sneha. Sister of rachita(rachi)and jasmine(jas).

Mantu:a handsome hunk. He z an orphan. He has a brother chintu.

Rohan: a simple,cute boy. Best frnd of jas.

Tilak: a cute boy and a flirt. Classmate of kangna.

Kangana:a beautiful girl.sister of ram a. Classmate of tilak

Uma: the villain of d serial. Childhood frnd of mantu.

All other characters r same.

The villain will be uma who loves mantu as . Uma and mantu were bf from childhood.

Hope u like it. Plz comment guys. Bcoz ur comment z d most important 2 me. And sorry for d mistakes.

Plz plz plz comment my frnds. And tell shall I continue or not.

I will update d next part tomorrow.

Credit to: Sahima

9 comments

  1. Sahima

    Nikhar dear. A villain z needed in d show. If there will be no villain then how the life will be of obstacles. I hope u can understand. Thank u so much for the comments.

  2. One suggestion rachita is called rachu not rachi ….
    And mantu’s bro is chiklu not chintu ..

    Or If u have given these names by ur own thn its ok u need not change …. U Cary on …. It’s great attempt

  3. Sahima

    Thank u deva for telling d correct names. Actually I was a little bit confused whether it z child or chintu. And thanks for the comments.

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