Tere sang yaara Kuch rang Bahara- (KRPKAB) Devakshi Five Shots part 1 of 5



Hi all. Fatarajo here. I hope you all still remember me. I am the writer of Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Ek Duje Ke Vaaste. And now I got some time so I am going to write a 5 shots on Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Aise Bhi , and one and only Devakshi. I hope you all will like the story.

Here is part 1 of the five shots .
She found a diary. What was the diary about? From the moment the diary caught her eye, she cannot move her eye from it. She isn’t able to help her paralysed eyes due to the book and her hands start moving and due to its movement the pages of the diary starts flipping. She started to read words, then sentences, then paragraphs ,chapters and when she finished the entire diary she didn’t even realised. It seems that the diary had something which touched her heart. This time instead of her eyes her entire body was paralysed but from inside. Without any thought she just climbed on the bed and closed her eyes and went to sleep. In her journey of her sleep, what was she thinking about? Maybe that diary. But what was the diary about? Her eyes were closed but from inside the words, sentences, paragraphs, chapters the entire diary was going on in the form her dreams maybe.

Next day morning,
Two teenage girls of the age of 14, is shown and they are happily hoping out of the place and chattering and laughing. Among the two girls, one had the same eyes. Literally the same eyes of that who was reading the diary.
And then the other girl was like,
“Give me a hi-5 Sonakshi!” The other cheered in excitement.
Yes that girl was none other than Sonakshi Bose, a teenager.
“Finally I can meet Mom after so many days. Mom must be waiting outside the airport .” Sonakshi said happily.

Yes Sonakshi just returned to her mom’s after a trip and is at the airport.
While Sonakshi and her Friend were walking and evidentially Sonakshi is more excited than her Friend after all she is going to meet her Mom who means the world to her. And then blossomed out as soon as he saw her Mom and her smile became more wider. Sonakshi holds her friend’s hand and starts running towards her Mom who was waiting for her and just some distances and a glass window is between them. Once Sonakshi comes to the other side, she will be out of the airport and she starts heading for it.

And while the chattering of the crowds jingled into her ears suddenly there was a loud sound. Very loud sound. Bang! Bang! Bang! Sonakshi’s happy face turned out to terror as she looks around and sees some guys overpowering the entire crowd and is in complete back. The airport was attacked by terrorists! Yes, there is an terrorist Attack going on in the airport. Sonakshi’s heart started to beat more. She wanted to go to her Mom now to feel safe but it was too late. The terrorists were surrounding around Sonakshi and others. Never ever in life Sonakshi felt so lonely and nervous despite the entire crowd around her. They were now controlled by the terrorists. Sonakshi just wanted to go to her Mom and nothing else. But the ruthless terrorist will kill her if she does so.

Sonakshi’s Mom for whom Sonakshi meant everything too. She couldn’t bear the fact that her Daughter was suffering inside. Polices were called and they slowly to tried to catch the terrorists and rescue all the trapped people there. Sonakshi and all the trapped people’s heartbeat increased with one bang. As the bang count increased the no. Of people alive also decreased with it as they were shot to death. Sonakshi was still alive and she knew her life was still at risk and she may also be one of them soon. Sonakshi’s Mom imagine what must be Going on especially when she saw her Daughter in this state. She couldn’t be patient anymore and she rushed into the airport.
“Bang!” Again it goes, Sonakshi looks and this time something happened which really stunned Sonakshi as if she was shot. It was her Mom who was shot.The ruthless terrorist just shot her once she stepped into the airport.

“Mom!” Sonakshi shouted.
Later slowly polices managed the situation and caught the terrorists and managed to rescue the rest of the alive people including Sonakshi there.
The first place Sonakshi ran was to her Mom. Sonakshi carried her Mom in her lap and realized that she was no more and her soul left. Blood was smeared on her hands.!Sonakshi was shattered!
“Mom!” Sonakshi shouted and conveyed her emotion and depression and sadness she had over the loss. Sonakshi had no one to cry over their shoulder as her Father also left her when she was a baby.

12 years later,
A beautiful city of Turkey is shown. The pretty buildings, the cute trees and the sweet people were surrounded throughout the city in Turkey. A lady whose eyes and the fringe of her hair is covered thanks to the hat on her head. She is shown Cycling the cycle through the city of Turkey. And that smile we saw in the initial parts is shown.

And then another lady is shown following her.
“Sonakshi, wait for me!” She said while chasing her.
Yes the lady in hat was none other than Sonakshi Bose who is now grown up to a 26 year old lady.
Sonakshi paid no heed to her and happily continued speeding her cycle.
Finally Sonakshi looks at her and have this cute naughty smile on her face. In joy she flies her hat off in the sky.
She smiles. Music plays.
End of part 1.

Precap for part 2: Sonakshi arrives in India and looks around. A guy is introduced who is a mamma’s boy as he hugs his Mom who means his world to him. He and Sonakshi meet each other and they stare at each other shockingly and lovingly at first sight!

The next part I will publish tomorrow as I already wrote the 5 shots. Sorry for no Dev scenes in this part, but I assure you there will be Devakshi scenes in part 2-5.
This story is more of Sonakshi’s life than Dev’s life that’s why. But next parts there will be Devakshi scenes.

I hope you all liked the first part of the 5 shots. The next part I will publish tomorrow. Till then feel free to express your opinions πŸ™‚

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  1. Great…

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey manya thanks for commenting
      happy u liked it πŸ™‚

  2. Sakthi

    Wow..superb..ur writings are so great..feels like reading novel.

    1. Yashfeen

      Heya u r nt less too…its always fun reading ur ff…so post daily plzzz..

      1. Sakthi

        Thanku dear..i wil post it daily.

    2. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey sakthi thanks for commenting happy u liked my writing
      really means a lot to me πŸ™‚
      its really a big thing for me novel πŸ™‚

  3. Joyee Aapi!!!!
    Oh my God!!!!
    So glad to see you back!
    And that too with a bang!!!!
    I am so glad that you are back!
    Please post this soon…
    Love u?

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey laddoo rani thanks for commenting
      happy to know that u r happy to see me back
      yeah m back with a bang πŸ˜›
      and will post next part tomorrow πŸ™‚
      and love u too πŸ™‚

  4. Manya

    Hey joyee Di glad u r back?Episode was super duper hit waiting for the next part ???

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey ayushi thanks for commenting
      happy to know u r happy to see me back πŸ˜›
      and happy u liked the ff πŸ™‚
      will upload next part tomorrow πŸ™‚
      and nice dp of ranbir kapoor
      and do u write any ff?

      1. Manya

        Yaaa Di I write an ff for kd our impossible love do read and comment if u like it ?

    2. RANdomfANCreationz

      Oh i see kd okay will definitely read it when i m free i watch kd sometimes so i have some idea about it and i actually only knew about rimjhim’s ff in kd ffs well i didn’t know about urs but m gonna read as soon as I m free πŸ™‚

  5. Yashfeen

    Damm interesting….its alwys a pleasure to read ur ff…nyc u r back soon bt just wid 5 shots is nt gud

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey yashfeen thanks for commenting
      Happy u liked it πŸ™‚
      And well this story is made for 5 shots only and i also completed writing the 5 shots
      The next 4 days i will upload next 4 parts
      And well if I get a good storyline i will come back with a ff soon but i can’t promise πŸ™‚

      1. Yashfeen

        I ws waiting for that “one more chance” which was a fan fiction of pkhjd, beinthaa and 2 mre serials…I really lyked tat one too….n ya plzzz do cme up wid smethng big….n I shud nt say new as wid whch ever theme u turn up is always new nly…

    2. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey yashfeen wow u still remember about that ff? I think i wrote that months ago yes it was a combo of Beintehaa, pyaar ko Ho janne do, and others shows were Manmarziyan and meri Aashiqui tumse hi well once i get a new story will definitely write a ff

      1. Yashfeen

        Ya..months back n ws waiting fr it last part..coz I really lyk it..d twost n turns in tat one ws too gud..

  6. Amazing……plz post soon.??

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Maria thanks for commenting
      Will post the next part tomorrow πŸ™‚

  7. Angel20

    Hi Jo,
    Finally you are back again! I’m happy, very very happy!!☺☺
    Wow nice start… Interesting!?
    Waiting for their first meet…☺☺

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Maria thanks for commenting
      Yes i m back again πŸ™‚ happy to know that u r happy πŸ™‚
      Happy u liked the start πŸ™‚
      And in the next part itself will be their first meeting πŸ™‚

  8. Erica

    It was so heartbreaking!!but it’s so dejavu because this happened to my friend(like exactly)anyways!great episode and keep the amazing as always work up!!;)

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey nishi OMG :O serious? Well i write this 5 shots because i got inspired from some bollywood movies and this part was of my own imagination after i read news regarding terrorists Attack and i feel so bad for those people who lost their family due to these attacks including ur Friend really sad to hear
      And happy u liked the epi and anyways thanks for commenting πŸ™‚

  9. Yeaaaaaaa!!! So Fari u R back!! Finally!!!

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Zaku thanks for commenting yes I m finally back πŸ™‚

  10. Dhira

    Superb episode

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey dhira thanks for commenting happy u liked it πŸ™‚

  11. Bhoomi

    Omg!!!! omg!!!! U r back i m sooooooooo haaapppppyyyyy……
    I m very curious to know more…. ??
    This is superb……. Will u post this daily??..
    Thanks for writing on DevAkshi ???

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey bhoomi thanks for commenting yes i m back πŸ™‚ well u will get to know more πŸ™‚
      And yes will post it daily as i already wrote the 5 shots so this week yes πŸ™‚
      And devakshi is one of my fav so that’s why i wrote on them πŸ™‚

  12. Aaru

    Hey Fatarajo..missed u??luvd dis ffs start..
    Ye accha h, saare episodes pehle hi type kr diye..wait nhi krna padega zyada..

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Aaru thanks for commenting happy u liked the starting ya actually i used to write the 5 shots whenever i got free i think this happened for around a month took me around a month to write the entire 5 shots and yes no need to wait also πŸ™‚

  13. Erina

    How can i forget such a awesome vala writter dear nd coming to this whole suspense was their. Firstly i was exiciteddddddddd when i saw ur ff nd what a ff ???????????seriously u made me literally cry. Its amazing, commendable, heart touching nd heart breaking for m. U write so beautifully dear that for one sec i forget that i’m reading ff i felt i’m watching this on tv. I hope u understand what i want to say nd plzzz i want another ff (bada vala) from u. I exiciteddddddddd to read ur 5shots. Oh my goooooooooood, ab mai nhi bolungi nhi to tm mujhe black list kr doge. ???????

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Erina thanks for commenting and ya it’s a suspense type wala story and Omg really? :O and really well this writing style i adapt when i write short story or few shots and well if i get a new story will definitely come with a ff and nahi yaar itna bura bhi nahi Hoon main πŸ˜›

      1. Erina

        Ok so be ready for my long comment kyuki mai ek baar start hoti hu to phir nhi rukti dear so abhi v time hai. Think once again ????????

    2. RANdomfANCreationz

      Haha i am ready i love big wala comments Dil khush Ho Jata hain

  14. glad that u r back to KRPKAB page ..dear ./////
    well its amazing ….suprb
    happy that u r back wid another stry

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey ibtesam thanks for commenting yes i m back πŸ™‚ and happy u liked it and yes i m back with another story πŸ™‚

  15. Sharica

    So nice. It was so sweet and loved it. Was missing ur writings and notw u r back. Really happy with ur comeback and this story?

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Sharica thanks for commenting and happy u liked it and yes i m back πŸ™‚ and happy u liked the story too πŸ™‚

  16. Hey…..glad that u r back☺️???….awesome post and I have read ur ff also but couldn’t comment Bcoz I wasn’t registered….☺️….this was amazing???????☺️

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey maleeha thanks for commenting and yes i m back πŸ™‚ and well it’s okay i understand and happy u liked this one too πŸ™‚

  17. Finally u r back fatarajo. Was eagerly waiting for your ff and soo happy now.??

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey uthra thanks for commenting happy u liked it and thanks for waiting πŸ™‚

    2. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey uthra thanks for commenting and thanks for waiting and happpy i made u happy πŸ™‚

  18. Esme

    Why would I do that??? Forgetting you is not my cup of tea…huh….I know I know I again started my joke. Coming to this 5 shots of Devakshi….Amazing that diary wow…and Aweeeeeeeeeesome precap. Well done.

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey esme thanks for commenting and well haha happy u remember me and love ur jokes πŸ˜› and happy u liked the diary idea πŸ™‚ thanks πŸ™‚

  19. Awesome ff

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey princess thanks for commenting happy u liked my ff πŸ™‚

  20. Awesome start ?I like ur ff.?. Plz jaldi sa post karoo ?

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey Nikki thanks for commenting happy u liked the ff and i already submitted the next part depends when they will post it πŸ™‚

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  22. Good to see u again
    Awesome story
    Keep it up

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey benish thanks for commenting
      Yes i m back πŸ™‚
      Happy u liked the story πŸ™‚

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