Tere liye ( kanchi fs) intro and epi 1 by niyaa

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Hi guys m back with my new kanchi fs.. I know i did’t complete my last fs but pakka pinky promise i’ii complete first my last fs then i start it… I just want ur suggestion should i continue or not and if u not like this idea plzz openly gave ur view.. Dosti ka usool pta h naa jo dil me aaye bol dena chahiye frnds kabhi bura nahi mante..
Intro-
kabir kapoor- a business tycoon
veer malhotra- a psychiatrist and kabir’s cousin
sanchi mishra- a school teacher
savitri and anand malhotra- veer parents
kusum kapoor- kabir’s maa and veer’ buamaa
kabir, kusum and all malhotra family live in a same house
raghu bhalla- a negative character , madly love/ crush on sanchi, want her at any cost but sanchi not interested in him..
EPISODE 1 STARTS HERE-
clock strikes around 9:00 am a men is working on the labtop.. Full on concentration searching for some medicine for treating a disease
suddenly someone knocked on the door
man-yes
ward boy- sir someone is came from house may i?
Man- unhe ander bhejiye
ward boy- yes sir nd went

men without looked at him-ramu kaka u here.. again maa send u naa
R Kaka- chote baba how u know i m?
Man turns- wo kya h naa kaka aaj monday h or i know maa is surely go temple for doing worship nd definately she sends u here for giving prasad to me, for all patient and especially for him
R kaka-right chote malik take it and plzz u gave him this.. madam said me strictly to handle this u
Man- kaka how many times i told u mujhe chote malik mat bulaiye
i m like ur son we grow up in ur arms
R kaka- achcha veer baba(so the man is our cute veer) kaan pakde aage se galti nahi hogi ab khush
veer smile- why not
suddenly veer phn ring.. some emergency call..
Veer hold on it nd said to ramu kaka- kaka plzz gave this prasad to him its an emergency call
RK- ji baba
Veer- kaka u know the room no is..
Before he completed kaka interrupted- i know baba room no 7 and patient no 786 how can i forget it and goes towards patient room no 7
@room no 7
room is completely dark, the wall r fully sketched with the pictures of someone.. Writtes some code word some name..
A men is skreching the wall with the help of a stone nd try to made a pictures of eyes..
R kaka- baba took it prasad maaji sends for u
men claps and behave childish- wowww prasad kya h bolo bolo
R kaka- baba mishri h
Man heads start dizzing hears mishri name(some blurr images comes in front of his eyes) and start shouts- No No No mishri No and got red eyes and angrily grabs his collar
R kaka panics and shouts for help
veer rushingly came -bhai plzz leave him
Man- no no(his voice r shivering in anger).. veer look at this men he said mishri.. Whr is mishri.. Why he killed her.. I never spare him.. i will kill him
Veer yelled at the top of voice ashe can- stop it kabir bhai he will be die(yes the mentally patient is none other than our handsome munda kabir but plzzz don’t glare at me warna m bhag jaungi)
kabir satdown nd crying bitterly- no my mishri no no they can’t do this..
Veer hugs kabir tightly but kabir’s pushes him back and again try to kill ramu kaka
veer called staff member and took kabir for ECT(imazine kyunki movie scene just like the shock therapy given to salman )

finally kabir calm down
outside the room ramu kaka and veer
veer- kaka u should go home don’t worry bhai is fine now nd i m here for him..
veer- and kaka plzz maa or buamaa ko kuch mat batana
kaka nodded head in agrees nd went home..
Veer in tearyeyed looked at kabir- why god why u did this with my kabir bhai? he never did wrong he opened this asylum treating mentally patient at low cost nd for poors free at cost.. Who know one day he himself admitted in own hospital.. I promise to myself at any cost i will treat u bhai.. We live life happily like before 2 yrs back.. chahe jo ho jaye ye dharti aasmaan ek kar dunga per apko thik karne ka ilaaj dund kar rahung ye ek bhai ka vaaada h aapse..(angrily)Or ek baar mujhe pta chal jaye kisne apki ye halat ki h aisi halat karunga uss bl***y men ki uski ruh tak kanp uthegi plzz god give me some hint plzz
veet shifted kabir in his rooms
kabir slept due to therapy nd doses effects veer looked at the room suddenly collide with a box and opened it
veer found a diary and read it..
Precap- kabir’ past nd flashbacks
regards
niyaaa(miss bakbak ki dukaan)

finally i complete my ist epi of it.. Plzz guys give ur valuable commnt.. all commnt r accepted nd throw what u want but again not egg u know i m pure veg..
And pardon me for grammetical mistake and thank u so much baring me and my sadoo ideas hope so i will see u soon after diwali but only if u all like it

HAPPY DIWALI IN ADVANCE ALL OF U MY DEAR FRNDS SIS AND BROS
LOVV U SO MUCH AND M LUCKY TO HAVE U ALL IN MY LIFE i never expected it u ave me so much love…. I found here a biggg family..
Sorry for all my bakbak i said i m bakbak queen so itna to banta h boss.. Agar nahi bolungi to pta h naa mere dimag me chemical locha ho jayega..hehe.. Okay enough of my bakbak quotta for today..
Bye
pakka
tc

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19 Comments
  1. Awesome

    1. Niyaaa

      Tysm dear

    1. Niyaaa

      Thanks a lot dear

  2. RuCh23

    It’s great Niyaaa 😍😍😍 do continue dear πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

    1. Niyaaa

      Thanks a lot ruwani..m really glad u like it nd sure i willl conitue and post it soon as i can.. Bye tc gud ni8

  3. amazing dear

    1. Niyaaa

      Thanks dear

  4. πŸ–’πŸ–’πŸ–’…continue it

  5. Riyarocks

    haye……..Niyaa………ek dum khidkitod……kamaal…….dhamaal……..bemisaal………waah…..aisa lag raha tha jaise ki main koi movie ka script padh rahi hoon…….ek dum fadoo tha……….& yaar….main yahaan se tere paas throw kar rahi hoon……..white lilies(haha…coz ye mere fav hai;))……jaldi se pakadlo……..& haan…..tujhe kabse permission ki zaroorat aan padi……..tu bejhijak kuch bhi likh sakti hai……tu hai hi itni amazing writer…..we would luv to read anything that comes out of ur pitaara………haha…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee………

    1. Niyaaa

      Hey prinku thak u so much dear nd thanks for such an amaz sweet commnt nd really agar meri chalti naa toh abhi phn se nikalkar tujhe itna jor se hug karti ki pucho mat nd returns gift me tumhare liye dherr sare lillies k flower(white ur fav.) bhej rahi hun. Chinta mat karo tumhare wale maine rakh liye h ye naye h..hehehe.. Lovv u too… tc gud ni8 with dharavane dreams per jisme sdch naa ho..hehehe..just kidding..nd if u r free from ur exam or on break… then post ur ff m waitting..

  6. Dhruti

    superb ff with new and different idea please continue this ne and update next one soon…………….

    1. Niyaaa

      Thank u so much dhruti dear m really really glad u like it nd sure i will contiue it but after diwali…. Bye tc.. Gud ni8

  7. Amazing….. Loved it very much

    1. Niyaaa

      Hey thank u so much dearie.. Tc bye

  8. Jessicca

    Heyyy Niyu… How are you..? Happy Diwali.. And such a beautiful concept of was…. Amazing… Fantastic… Just loved it… Keep going sweetie❀

  9. Niyaaa

    Hey jessi m fine dear, how r u nd happy diwali too u and thanks a loads sweety m really glad u like it.. Tc

  10. Sorry di…..Kaan pakadkar for late comment…..it is awesome di…..Khadoos kapooor as business tycoon….ohh….it’s amazing…..love it from bottom of the heart…do update soon….& complete ur last one……lots of love & Happy Diwali.

    1. Niyaaa

      Koi nah choti m bhi aisa kar deti hun tune ab dekha or pasand kiyawo badi baat h lovv u tc gud ni8 kahun ya gud morng subah hone wali h.. bye stay safe

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