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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 23) challenge accepted

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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai 23
Hi friends..so are you ready for this chappy…ok then asra and mintu be ready for your punishment…hehe!!let’s enjoy friends…here we go…
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Bala(panics):I don’t know Krish bhaiyya is upto what!!but my future is on cliff…do or die…oh god why you’re punishing the innocents like me(pout)…

“what did you say…”laksh choked…
Laughter surrounds the room…
“is this hospital or what”nurse shouts…
Asra and Vidhu looks around…

“apparatus…equipments…oxygen…trips.. Patient…doctor…nurse…are there…so obviously it’s hospital only mam…”said Bala by controlling his laugh…
“apparatus and equipments…both similar hai na bro…”Vidhu whispers in his ears…
Bala:areyy…are you a lie detector…detecting my mistakes…enjoy the flow na Vidhu…
“you’re right Bala bhaiyya..am your side…”asra winks…
Vidhu:Bala don’t believe her…she is supporting you just to dump her punishments on you…hehe!!(evil smirk)
“asra…really…i thought you supported me…”Bala makes a pout…

Asra:nahi bhaai…don’t believe this detector…
“aahaaha…dramaqueen…”Vidhu smirks…
“ok ok…stop your silly fights now…Bala am really scared with your bhaai’s words…please do something na…”laksh pleads him…

Bala:don’t worry laksh…he said na the punishment will be less only…
“that only makes me scare Bala…”laksh holds the pillar and thinks about his condition…
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Laksh imagined himself sleeping on the road by keeping his hands forward and Krish is riding his bike on his fingers…
“this one’s for slapping my sister that day…this hand…this hand only slapped my sister that day hai na…this is the punishment for it…”Krish laughs evilly…
Laksh screams in pain…

Then next day…
Krish places a bowl full of halwa and asks laksh to eat it…
Laksh whose fingers were bandaged doesn’t know what to do but halwa is calling him…hehe!!
Krish understanding his situation feed him…

Laksh makes faces but somehow finished it…bala sees this incident and was wiping his tears…
Krish(in mind):this one for believing others and talking rudely with my Ragu…
“dekho laksh…bhaiyya has changed a lot…you’re so lucky to have us…”Bala hugged him…
Laksh realized that Krish left and splitted that halwa…and rushed to washroom and vomitted…
He came put finally by holding his head…
Bala:what happened…jamaai raja…

“it’s all because of that halwa…i can’t bear a second in this house…”said laksh and landed on floor due to tiredness…

Bala:laksh…about that halwa!!
“in my future…i won’t eat…no no I won’t think about that halwa…your Krish bhaiyya is too much Bala…”laksh was literally crying…
Bala:kya…he feeded you with love but you’re talking badly about my brother…not fair laksh…
Laksh:feeded huh…no no…he is trying to kill me…someone help me…
“overacting…”Bala frowns…
Laksh:why won’t you tell…wait I will bring that halwa…
Laksh took that halwa and feed Bala…he splitted out…

Bala:chi…salty…which idiot added salt on it…
“it’s your big idiot brother only..”laksh laughs…
“you…how dare you mentioned my brother like that…”said Bala and hits laksh with that bowl…
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“Maaa….”laksh screams….
“What happened!!”all at a time…

Laksh (in mind):dream…i hope this won’t happen in real…
“tumhare hone waale have gone mental…”Bala bursts out laughing and gave hifi with Ragini…
Vidhu and asra too laughs…
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It’s evening…
Krish came to hospital and spends time with Ragini…
They chat funnily and Krish was really happy seeing his laadoo smiling brightly…
“ok laadoo…i will go and buy something for you… darshu will take care of you…i will be back”said Krish and was about to leave…
Ragini holds his wrist…
“darling…don’t hurt him more…”Ragini says and a tear drop escapes from her eyes…
Krish wipes her tears and caresses her head…he leaves then without uttering anything…
Krish calls laksh and asked to meet him in the hospital canteen…
He came…

Krish asks him to sit and forwards him some papers and asked him to sign…
Laksh nods and was about to sign without reading…
“Read it…then sign…”Krish orders…
Laksh:no need…i believe you…
“then I will tell you what was in that…your resignation from the post of ACP…if you wanna need an apology from me then sign it and one more thing you have to live in our house for a week and you have to do what I asked to…and if you passed with atleast 75% in my test then I will give green signal orelse you have to leave from my sister’s life forever…deal…”Krish said just like that…

Laksh signed the paper without saying anything…Krish shocks…
Laksh:my Ragini is my everything…i can do anything for her…
Krish(murmurs):not bad…attitude…i like it…
Laksh leaves…
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Next day morning…laksh reached ragini’s quarters…
“am happy that you have accepted my challenge…the task is really simple for you…”Krish started explaining his works…
Laksh got relieved hearing the word “simple”…
But shocked the very next moment…
“what cooking…household works…washing clothes…cleaning utensils…”said laksh shockingly…

Krish:that’s great…you understood…and about the dishes you have to prepare only south indian dishes…got it…
Krish:and you(pointing asra and Vidhu)…you shouldn’t help him…your duty is to supervise him whether he is doing his duty properly or not…if I found that you’re helping him then your punishment will be more…got it…”Krish sounds rude…
“ji bhaiyya..”said asra and Vidhu and they blinked at eo…
Laksh:oh no…All the works…i can’t do it alone…there is no washing machine or dish washer here…Krish bhaai this is not fair…
“jeeju…Krish bhaiyya have locked washing machine and dish washer in store room and he has that key jeeju…”Vidhu makes a pout…
Laksh:idea!!let’s call Bala here…he will help me na…
Laksh dialled bala’s number…

Bala:haan laksh…bolo…
Laksh:oh Bala…wait wait…where are you now…i can’t here you clearly…your voice is cracking…
Bala(lil loud):Wo…am in Kolkata..Krish bhaiyya send me to handle his company for a week…laksh please help me am dying here..peoples are playing tabla in my head…
“haha!!my condition is better I think…”laksh laughs and cuts the call…
Laksh:okay kidoos let’s start with cooking…aah…south Indian dishes…do you have any idea…i don’t know anything about north Indian dishes itself…
“we don’t know cooking jeeju…”asra and Vidhu bend their heads…
Laksh:oh no…i thought you both will help me in cooking…ok never mind…do a favour…cut the vegetables…

“but what dish you gonna do jeeju…”asked Vidhu…
“you decide quickly…we will cut all the vegetables which are available on the tray…we will do a mixed dish…”asra winks…
Laksh:whatever!!
“oh no I don’t understand anything in this google…let me call darshu and ask her an recipe”laksh called darshu…
While asra and Vidhu giggles…
Laksh explained everything to darshu…
Darshu:ok but I can’t come now…because am with Ragini…i will tell you some recipes you do as per my direction..ok…

Laksh:Okay!!
Darshu:let’s make something simple like sambar…rasam…two side dish…no no you can’t do so one side dish is enough…aloo gravy will be easy for you…
Laksh:ok!!alloo…superb…
Darshu:you gonna serve for 4 members then take two bowl of rice…
Laksh:which bowl!!
Ragu said something…
Darshu :a brown one in the second rack…
Laksh:ok…then…

Darshu:put that rice in a vessel and clean it…
“haan darshu…i cleaned.then…”laksh uttered…
Darshu:with that same brown bowl add one and a half bowl of water on that rice vessel and keep it inside the pressure cooker…
“ok done…”laksh sounds cool…

Darshu:take tarmarind…
“tamarind…where are you!!”laksh was searching…
Ragini and darshu laughs…

Asra was cutting vegetables while Vidhu helps him and found tarmarind…
“take a tablespoon of it and soak it in hot water …”darshu explain by controlling her laugh…
Laksh:ok then…
Darshu:take 1cup of tuvar dal and boil it in 3 cup of water…
Laksh:which cup..
Darshu:that same brown waala laksh…

“oh no…”laksh screams…
Darshu:what!!
“darshu…i mistakenly kept that cup inside the pressure cooker itself after pouring water…”said he…
Darshu:Ragini…your love is eating my brain…
Ragini laughs…

Darshu:ok…give it to Vidhu or asra…
“Asra is busy in cutting veggies wait I will give it to Vidhu…”laksh forwards the phone to Vidhu…
Vidhu:haan di… bol…
Darshu:I know he might have forgot to put the whistle…so take the pressure cooker aside and after steam gets out take that cup out…till then prepare dal and aloo sabzi…you know na Vidhu…you help in preparing aloo and asra will help him in preparing dal and rasam..you soaked tamarind hai na…
Vidhu:haan didi…i soaked it…i will help him in aloo sabzi…
Darshu tells the sambar recipe first…laksh listens it carefully and placed the utensil on gas stove…

Laksh heated the vessel and added oil…mustard seeds…veggies…chilli powder..a small amount of turmeric powder…
Darshu:ok laksh now pour tamarind pulp..
“haan…i poured…”said laksh…
Asra(screams):oh no…

Darshu:what now!!
“di…jeeju poured the pulp on sink…”asra makes sad face…
Darshu (angrily):I asked u to pour it on vessel na laksh…tum bina…asra make the pulp again for both rasam and sambar…before that keep the flame low…take some hot water and soak the tamarind…
“sorry yaar…i don’t know what am doing…in a hurry I did it..sorry”laksh apologies…
Darshu:that’s ok bhaai…no problem…don’t get nervous…still there are more time…so chill karo yaar…drink some water first laksh…
“haan darshu di…dal is ready and the tamarind pulp too…”Vidhu sounds tired…
Laksh:aww…my sweetheart’s…you two are too good…
Darshu:listen laksh…this time be serious…
Darshu explained the recipe and somehow he finished with sambar…asra and Vidhu helped with rasam and sabzi…

Darshu:thank god…we have completed the task…
“no…”laksh screams…
Asra and Vidhu:jiju…what!!
“darshu…rice..we haven’t cooked rice yet…”laksh landed on the floor by keeping the towel on his head…
“no problem…place the cooker and put the whistle…and make 6-8 whistles on medium to high flame…”darshu takes a heavy breath of relief…
All the trio landed on the floor being tired…
Krish came…

To be continued β€’β€’β€’

So done with this chappy…do you like it or I bored you…am so sorry I don’t know more about cooking so if you find any mistakes…please apologize me…
Don’t forget to comment…
Take care dear friends 😊
~Darshu

37 Comments
  1. Mintu

    Awesome sisy…. Enayum asra paka ungalauku pavama ilaiya??? Task enamo laksh ku dhn..bt nanum asra dhn mostly ellamey prepare panunom..!!!! Dharshu nenga pavam.. Ph la soliyae tired aaiytinga..!!! Aiyoo.. Krish anna engala tired ah patha therinjudymey.. Nanga help panadhu…!!! Sapadu epidi vandhuruko… πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰laksh pana lotti la..!!!! Bala my poor boy… Athuku laksh paravala..!!!! Fulfilled chappy dear…!!!

    1. Asra

      vidhu nama yeana dear darshu kida sonnom…nama 2peroda punishment seithu laksh Bala vukum kuduka than sonnom…but darshu dear laksh oda punishment namaluku kuduthudanga…pavam la nama…aama unga kida secret onu sonna nenga…Adha apadiyae Bala kida soli kuduthudenga…bad habit vidhu….sapadu yeapadi vandhadho…Adha krish bhaiya than sapda poranga….nalla ilaina laksh jiju than vangi kadika poranga….but help panathu madum therunchathu nama 2perum kaali dear….pray panikuvom dear god kida…

      1. Mintu

        Yeah asra dear..!!! Laksh kaga help pani nama nama mata porom krish anna kita…!!! Hehe..Na bala kita chuma unna tease pana sonnen da..!!!πŸ˜€ sapadu epidi vandalum pavam laksh dhn da anupavikanum punishment ah..!!! Idhuku sharing ila..!!! Nama 3perum anna kita matama irundha Sari dhn da..!!!

    2. Darshini

      Hehe!!mintu dear…na ennada pannen it’s ur jiju who tortured u two sweetly…
      Crct neenga daan ellame senjeenga…
      Don’t worry saapadu nalla daan irukkum…
      Do u remembered ur first day cooking…haha!!
      Krish Ku theriyura maari nadanthukaatheenga bcz my bro is so smart that he will find out…hehe!!
      Aama da poor Bala…he is suffering a lot…
      Tc da sissy 😊
      And unga rendu perukkum eduvum aagathu don’t worry drzzz

  2. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sinni😊 glad that you liked it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear Sindhu 😊 glad that you liked it…

  3. Follybraverl

    Haha awesome

    1. Darshini

      Hehe!!tq da sweetie 😊 glad that you liked it…

  4. Dharani

    awesome drashu that imagination of punishments by laksh is awesome

    1. Darshini

      Hehe!!thnks a lot da Dharu…infact I was laughing while writing it..tc dear 😊

  5. Dharshu, kalakitinga da. En veetla enna mental assylamla sekanumnu decide pannitanga. I was laughing non stop from start to end. But anyways awesome chappy. Laksh’s imagination was lol. The cooking part reminded me of struggling to cook for the first time. Keep rocking dear

    1. Darshini

      Hehe!!gayu dear thnx a lot da…how sweet u r..infact me too remembered my first day in cooking..
      First tyme sakkara pongal seiya vechaanga enga veetla…
      Keep reading dear 😊
      Tc da..

  6. Rockleon

    Amazing!

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear rockleon😊 glad that you liked it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear aleeza 😊 glad that you liked it…

  7. Awesome episode and feeling bad for Laksh. But it’s interesting. Waiting for next episode

    1. Darshini

      Tq tq so much sissy 😊 am so happy that you liked it…tc dear…

  8. Shrilatha

    Awesomely awesome Akka ..asra poor soul…

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much shri…have you read the previous parts??am so hpy that u cmntd..tc dear…waiting for ur dare ff post it soon da…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear ammy 😊 glad that you liked it…

  9. Asra

    omg darshu dear am not dreaming na….pinch me….enaku coffee tiffen na thavira yeadhuvum seiya theriyathu na laksh ku sambar vaika help panena…enala namaba mudiyala….darshu it’s cheating na en oda and vidhu oda punishment laksh and Bala vuku kuduka sona….laksh ku kudutha punishment nenga engaluku kuduthudenga….it’s not fair dear….na Idha read panum pothu siruchu kidey irudhen….en frnds already kalanda case nenachu kidu irundhanga…Ipa confirm Mey panidanga….omg am soo tired laksh jiju ku help pani….god plz help me…nanum vidhu vum help panathu krish bhaiya vuku therunchathu nanga 2 perumey seithom…plz bhaiya vuku theriyama kapathunga god….laksh jiju nenga thalaila thunda poda kudathu….nama 3perukum phone la instructions kuduthangala darshu dear than podanum….darshu dear hospital la thana irukenga healthy ya yeadhavathu doctor da kedu vangi sapdunga….pavam nenga than rmba tired ayidenga….varum Pothum engalukum vangidu vanga dear….Bala enala vida pavam pola….
    laksh imagination sema dear….loved it alot….krish bhaiya oda reaction kaga waiting…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    1. Darshini

      Hehe!!asra u r too gd dear…
      Enakkum mattum ennavam adaan theriyum na phne la running commentary sollala adha maari daan da…
      Adhu ennavo crct na daan thunda podanum hehe!!
      Don’t worry naanum glucose yethittu unga rendu perukkum varum bothu ethachum vaangi varen ok va…
      Adhu varaikkum rest edungoπŸ˜‰
      Laksh imagination lol…
      Tc da..
      Next epi la juice cnfrmd…hehe!!

  10. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear Saranya 😊 glad that you liked it..

  11. Superrr

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear avika 😊 glad that you liked it…

  12. IQRA222

    Darshu di it was a wonderful episode

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much da iqu😊 glad that you liked it…

  13. Hahahaha superb dear

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear rehna😊 glad that you liked it…

  14. AWESOME

    1. Darshini

      Tq Arjuna 😊 glad that you liked it…

  15. A.xx

    nice xx

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