Tere bin (kuch rang pyar ke aise bhi) shot 3

Hello guys I hope you are liking the story.. Silent readers please please please do comment..We writers spend a lot time thinking about the plot, the dialogues, then it takes time to write it down..Even a small episode also needs lot of efforts. So please do comment..And this is not only for my ff..It’s about every ff you read.. love you all..Have a great time..Let’s start with the next shot..

Sona’s POV
I have no answer to Baba’s questions.. It’s hard to choose one from your love and parents. Though it’s been long 7 years of separation.. I couldn’t hate Dev. I am hell angry with him. In this 7 years I was praying to see him once, to talk to him once, to be there with him like we used to be.

In this 7 years, Baba took care of me n my Soha. He was always there when it came to console me, to stop Soha crying when she was little baby girl, changing her diapers.. If I choose Dev over baba then I am going to disappoint him..His efforts.. care. We can’t be together Dev..If you can do the same sacrifice for your mom..

Then how can I be so selfish to only think about you and me..You didn’t choose me. I was never your first priority. What if his mom refuses me one more time? She is so possessive that she is never going to accept me. She can accept her grandchild but not mother of her grandchild. And she will snatch my Soha from me. How can I allow Dev or his mother to snatch my Soha from me. No one can snatch my Soha from me.. Not even Dev. He once told me that “Achha hai tum ma nahi ban skti..Agr ban pati to tum bahot buri ma banati..” the one whom I loved unconditionally said that. It was like a worst curse..I am not going to forgive him. I failed to be a good wife, daughter in law..And he wished that I will be a bad mother too..

My past was killing me. He didn’t love me..He loved me when it was convinient for him to love me. He didn’t ask me to stop when I was leaving his house..He never tried to find if Sona is alive or not..How she will live without me..In this 7 years he never ever came to me and I was a big big fool to wait for him.. I always wanted him to come to me ..For me..Though I wanted him to come to meet Soha..But I always wanted him to come only once just for me to let me know that he still loves me. But he never did so. He never came. I was the one who fought alone. He came just for Soha. He wants to take her home so he is doing all this. He doesn’t need me. And I started feeling he ditched me again.

I am losing faith in love. I left him..But I didn’t let him go. There’s a difference, my feet stepped away from my world embodied in a person, a walking token of our memories- but my heart, my weak, trembling little heart still clings to him wherever he goes. Love knocks your door when you are not ready for it and ends when you need it most. Sometimes it feels more like a curse than a gift.. he betrayed me..he snatched my love..left me empty. I was so weak that I couldn’t get over him. His memories was the only thing that made me feel happy. The hope that he will return one day forced me give birth to his child..our child. I kept on searching him in Soha. I couldn’t be happy even in Sona’s presence. I used to be happy only when she used to call me khargosh..and used to do these little things that reminds me of Dev. I hate you Dev Dixit for making me this weak..for giving you all rights to betray me..and I hate myself for loving you..you took my everything. I was losing hopes.. happiness..faith.. everything..
Sona’s POV ends here***

Sona was looking at bijoy blankly..she was just crying..she was crying terribly. No one was getting anything..this was the first time Sona was crying like this..she was not uttering a word. Everyone was shocked. It was very difficult for everyone to see her like that. Asha was trying to console her.. Bijoy asked her what happened..Dev said sorry for what he asked her..but she was out of her control..Soha was scared looking her mom like that..sona was crying terribly.. everyone was trying to console her..and Sona fainted..

Dev called the doctor. Soha was crying. Jatin also came. Doctor examined Sona..
Dev: Doctor what happened to Sona?
Bijoy: Sona thik to hai na?
Doctor: according to me it was like a panic attack..she has high fever. She is under so much pressure that she failed to manage herself.. I feel like she suffered for a long time. She is very weak.. pamper her..and who is Dev? Ask him to be with her..she called her name once or twice.
Dev: ok doctor..

Dev’s POV
I don’t know what happened to her. She was looking so pale..a life less person. I can’t see her like that. I sat beside her..Took her hand in my hand..Mere tiny miny khargosh ke tiny miny hath.. I still remember those days..The time spent with her was the best period of my life. It’s been 3 hours now..Sona please call me by my name once.. Please..
Bijoy baba came inside and asked me to go and have some food till then he will be there with Sona.. I went outside. I don’t want to have anything. Soha was yet to eat.. I went to her room to make her eat.
Dev: Soha chalo khana khalo..
Soha: Papa Mujhe nahi khana..

Dev: Agar nahi khaogi to Mumma gussa karegi..
Soha: Papa mummy Ko kya hua hai?
Dev: aapki Mumma bahot Kam krti hai na isliye bimar ho gayi hai..Chalo aa karo
Dev started to feed her.
Soha: Kya main Mumma ke paas baith skti hu..
Dev: nahi beta Mumma Ko fever hai..Aap bhi bimar pad jaoge.. Mumma jabtak thik nahi Hoti Tabtak Papa hai na aapke saath.
Soha doesn’t say anything..She is lost in her own thoughts
Dev: Soha what happened..Kya soch rahi ho?
Soha: kuch nahi Papa..

Dev: batao kya hua..
Soha: Papa..Kya mumma bohot bimar hai?
Dev: kya hua Soha aise kyu puchh rahi ho..
Soha : Mumma ne ek Baar kaha tha ki agar vo bohot bimar ho jaye ya vo kabhi bohot time ke liye aaspas na ho to mujhe aapko call krne ko kaha tha..
Dev: don’t worry beta I m with you..
Soha: Papa, Mumma ne aapko dene ke liye ek letter diya tha mujhe..
Dev: what? Letter diya tha? Kaha hai vo letter?

Soha: ek minute..Mai leke aati hu..
I was wondering why Sona will leave a letter for me..
Soha came running with an envelope..
I took it from her..
There was a letter and some photographs, documents..
I opened the Letter..

Dear.. sorry.. Dearest Dev

Episode ends here..

I know it’s short one..But while writing this much I was controlling hard not to cry. I just feel like I am Sona..And when it comes to write down her POV it really hurts me. I couldn’t write further. I feel like I can feel her pain..Sorry for short episode.. I know you will understand me..

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  1. such an emotional epi. i loved it. i understand. i also feel like i am sona. i am also crying…

  2. Brilliant di…lively episode ….sona ka point of view bohat ache se explain kiya apne…thanks for updating…ATSH jaldi se update karna

  3. Awesome episode

  4. Akanksha bhardwaj

    Amazing….vry emotional…you discribed sona’s emotions so nicely….its just mind blowing…hope serial k script writers bhi likhe kuchh aisa.

  5. Rekhadhir

    Very touching
    Jaldi post karna

  6. Really excellent!!!! Really nicely written. Your both fff are really great.waiting for yourr other fff agar tum sath ho…….. plssssss post soooonnnnnnn

  7. Darshana

    It was a very emotional especially sona’s part but the dialogues each and everything was perfect
    what’s in the letter..pls post soon
    and ya what you wrote on silent readers is absolutely right..i can understand it..
    loads of love and pls don’t cry!

  8. Akshita

    Brilliant yr ????? plzzz jldi post krna can’t wait for next episode ????❤❤❤❤
    lots of love

  9. Manya

    Rula diya Richa di apne do??????Bechari sona??
    Plzz post the next part soon???
    Love u??

  10. ShrutiP

    Awesome Richa…
    Could feel the character of Sona…
    Lovely way of writing dear…
    Please post soon…
    Love you????

    1. shruti di when will u post ur ff??

      1. ShrutiP

        Ritika sorry dear…I just posted a Short one today..???

  11. Priya12

    Heart touching epi..luved it..
    Amazing epi…superbbb
    Damn excited…
    I m very interested 2 know about the letter..
    Pls post asap di..

  12. are yarr suspence na chodooo ma’m
    but awesome 1 I think use koi bimari h….
    aesa hi h kya??

  13. lekin ma’m please dev ka point of view I mean uski feelings kya rahi in 7 saalo m ye b btao please

  14. Heart touching and very emotional I could also feel the pain post soon ❤️❤️❤️

  15. nice story

  16. Sgatik

    Omg!!.! Y richa y such a punishment for ur readers. Ended t episode with the letter. Amazing pov of sona. Pls post soon

  17. Srush

    It was very emotional epi….i am waiting for ur next epi’s…..the start is soo good….i am not able to wait…plz post the epi as soon as possible….love u…

  18. SamayraRaghavKashyap

    Super emotional???…
    Richa I’m in love with your work…??
    Plz post the next episode soon….
    Eagerly waiting for the letter to be read…..
    Jaldi jaldi jaldi………
    Love you ??

  19. Oh my tiny miny Richaaa. U write so well that even we can live that emotions while reading.. keep going on…

  20. I can cry buckets now…after reading this…
    You wrote it crying and we are reading it crying….?????

    H E L L I S H W A R I…..!!!!?????

    i swear agar ishwari mil gyi na mujhe….i will end her chapter then and there….??

    I am desperate to read the next par richa….
    I never say POST SOON in my comments…i always say that I WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE….because i know all the ff writers out there are all busy people….some are working and some are studying….so you people have to do your own work too…and still you guys write so flawlessly…..

    But today i will say PLEASE POST SOON….??(that too shamelessly?)

  21. Such good emotional one. Keep up the good work and post the next one soon

  22. It’s fabulous dear ….Today I read all part of ur ff ….If original show story was like that the show must be blockbuster …….U r such a fantastic writer……Love u dear

  23. Riti1107

    This was so emotional … Even I am trying to control my tears …
    It was flawless
    Take a bow
    Hat’s off
    But please please POST SOON
    Can’t wait

  24. V.V.harshita

    awsome post soon

  25. Nikkita0194

    Di I am very very late n even I think I had not commented on your previous epis but I kept reading them u r fab u r amazing even each of your word is heart touching
    I am commenting after a long time so I think u forgot me
    Always I will love ur work Di
    Plz post asap
    With lots of luv

  26. Richa so so sorry for commenting late. Actually my sister is back home after couple of months and I totally forgot to check the site and about the chappy it was damn emotional. Sonakshi’s feelings have been portrayed so well.
    Love you
    Post soon

  27. Berry

    I knw m commenting so late ..I just loved d episode …this epi made me emotional ..love u post soon this n agar tum saath ho ..tc ???

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