Tere bin (kuch rang pyar ke aise bhi) shot 1

Heyy.. Richa here..The same person who is currently writing Agar tum saath ho ff. this is the first time I am writing few shots simultaneously. I am going to start from the part when Dev gets to know about Soha..Soha demands for staying with both.. but in a little different way..And the plot is little different.. Hope you like it..

Soha was sad..Jatin comes to talk to her.
Jatin: Bachha itna chup chap kyu hai..
Soha: I want to stay with Mumma n Papa..
Jatin: I know..Sona told me. And your Papa will be coming to this house…After 7 days you will go to his house…
Soha: that’s not the problem..
Jatin: To batao what is the problem?
Soha: I want to stay with them for my whole life..And they won’t agree for this.. I asked Mumma n Papa but they rejected..
Jatin: Ek idea hai.. I don’t know whether it will work or not but we can try
Soha: Sachhi?
Jatin: yup
And Soha hugs Jatin..
On the same day..
Soha: Mumma I want to talk to Papa..Call him
Sona: okay
Soha: Papa I want to talk about very important thing with you and Mumma.. Please aap yaha aajao
Dev: Soha kya hua? Sab thik hai?
Soha: everything is perfect..Aap bas yaha aao..
Dev: Aapki Mumma aapke pas hai? Unki phone dena..
Soha: Mumma.. Papa wants to talk to you
Sona takes the phone and Soha goes from the room
Sona: bolo
Dev: kya hua? Soha ne achanak kyu bulaya.. It’s 11:30 pm. Sab thik hai na?
Sona: I don’t know Dev.. I asked her but she refused to tell me.
Dev:ok I will be there in some time..

Dev reaches Bose house. Everyone gathers in the hall..Bijoy, Asha, Sourabh,Jatin…
Dev: kya hua Soha?
Soha: I was missing you Papa..
Dev: mai yahi hu aapke pas..Aur kal se to mai yaha rehne aa raha hu.. Aapke pas
Soha: Nahi Papa aap yaha nahi aaoge..
Everyone gets shocked. Dev feels very bad.
Sona: kya hua Soha..Tum khud Papa ke saath rehna chahti thi na..
Bejoy: pr ab agar vo nahi rehna chahti to tum log uspr force nahi kr sakte..
Soha comes to Bijoy.
Soha: Dadu aapko Papa pasand nahi hai na.. Aap unka hate krte ho na..
Bijoy: Haa beta..Tumhare Papa ne mera vishwas toda hai..
Soha: isliye Papa yaha nahi rahenge..
Dev feels lost..
Soha: mai Mumma aur Papa Kahi aur reh lenge..
Dev feels good but Sona is shocked.
Sona: Soha Maine tumhe samjhaya tha na..Ki Mumma Papa saath nahi reh sakte..
Soha: haa Mumma I know..But Papa jab yaha aayege tab bhi to aapke saath hi to rahege..To fir dusre ghar me kyu saath nahi reh sakte..
Sona couldn’t answer this question..
Dev: we can go to my house..
Soha: nahi Papa hum vaha nahi rahenge..
Dev: kyu beta..Vo bhi to tumhara ghar hai..
Soha: jaise dadu aapko pasand nahi krte vaise dadi bhi to mumma Ko pasand nahi krti.. Isliye mai na Mumma ke ghar rahungi na Papa ke ghar..Hum hamare ghar me rahenge..
Dev n Sona looked at each other.. Like now what? They had no solution to this problem..
Soha: ok to aapko mere saath nahi rehna hai to mai Jatin uncle ke saath rahungi..
Dev n Sona: Ok fine.. I agree
Sona asks Jatin to make Soha sleep..

In Soha’s room
Jatin: kaha tha na idea kaam karega..
Soha: thank you so much joti uncle
Jatin: Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Soha is such a good actor..
And Soha giggles..

Outside Bose house
Sona: ab kya kare? Soha to maan nahi rahi hai..
Dev: Neha Ko shaadi me gift dene ke liye jo ghar Liya tha vaha koi nahi hai.. vaha shift ho jaye ??
Sona: Vo bada wala ghar? Yellow colour wala?
Dev: haa vahi…
Sona: thik hai..Kal subah shift ho jate hai..
Dev: thik hai.. I will pick you up tomorrow morning..
Sona: ok..Bye..GN
Dev: GN
Sona: tum bye bolna kab sikhoge?
Dev: tumhe bye kehna shayad mai kabhi sikh nahi paunga..
And Dev left..
Dev’s POV
When Soha said that Papa aap yaha nahi aaoge..It was so painful.. I know mai Soha se kabhi alag nahi ho paunga.. hamara rishta hamesha atut rahega..She will always be my daughter no matter what is situation. Soha ne jab vaisa kaha to mujhe Soha Ko khone ka dar nahi laga.. it was Sona.. I felt like I am losing her once again. I have lost her when I was her boyfriend..Then her husband..Now I am no one to her..For her, I am just father of her daughter..And drop of tear made its way..
Aankhon mein tere saye,
chahu to ho na paye
Yaadon se tere fasla..
Ja ke bhi tu na jaye..Thehra tu Dil mein haye hasrat SA ban ke kyu bhala..
Kyu yad krta hu mitata hu banata hu…
Mujhko tu laya ye kaha…
Benam rishta vo.. Bechain krta jo..Ho na sake jo bayan darmeeya..
Darmeeya.. Darmeeya..Kuch to tha tere mere darmeeya..

I came to home.. told everything to ma n everyone. Next morning I picked up Sona and Soha..No one was happy except me n Soha..
We reached..Soha was very happy. We settled down..
Dev’s POV ends here******
Sona’s POV
I was keeping things at proper places.. I need to prepare food for us. Soha was jumping here n there. She was so happy..
I was busy for whole day..
At night..Me n Soha slept on bed n Dev slept on the sofa.
I was in dark sleep.. I heard someone.. “Sona please don’t leave me..” ..Same sentence again n again. It’s a familiar voice..It’s Dev.. I felt like a dream n I got up..But I was surprised to know that it wasn’t a dream..Dev was actually blabbering in his sleep.
I went near him. He was panting badly. I tried to wake him up.
Sona: Dev.. Dev.. utho.. It’s just a dream…
Soha also got up..
Soha: Mumma Papa Ko kya hua??
Sona: Kuch nahi beta.. Bring some water..
Soha ran to bring water.
Sona: Dev..Dev..Mai yahi hu..

I kept telling him..N he got up.. Blabbering the same sentence..And as soon as he saw me..He hugged me tightly. I was so worried about him. I never saw him like this. We broke the hug when Soha came in..After breaking the hug, Dev drank water but he held my hand tightly..His grip on my hand was telling me that he was hell disturbed. I took him with me to sleep with us. Soha was little scared after this. I decided that I will sleep in between Soha n Dev.. I was moving my fingers through his hair. He was still holding my hand. I don’t know when I slept..
When I got up I found myself facing to roof. Both soha and Dev hugged me from either sides. And a broad smile appeared on my face. I got up went to the hall. And I thought to meet Elena. I called Elena and asked her to come here. Ofcourse without informing anyone..

Dev got up. Soha was still sleeping. I was reading newspaper.
Dev: Sonakshi.. vo..Kal raat..
Sona: Dev it’s ok..Aaj tum Soha Ko leke Kahi ghumne kyu nahi jate.. though it’s Sunday I have some work to do..You can take her out..
Dev: ohk.. I will happily do that..
And after an hour they were ready..
Sona: Soha.. Papa ka haath mat chhodna..Zid mat krna..
Soha: Ok Mumma..
Sona: Mumma ka phone number bolo
Soha: 9623******
Sona: Papa ka
Soha: 9850******
Dev: aapko mera number kaise..
Soha: Mumma ne sikhaya tha jab mai bahot chhoti thi..Aur mere pas hamesha aap dono ka number and address likha hua rehta hai..
Sona: Soha chalo tum log late ho jaoge..
And they left..After some time Elena came..We had a good time..
Elena: bahot baate ki ab sach bata baat kya hai?
Sona: Eli.. (and I narrated yesterday incident.. Blabbering of Dev n all..) Elena i am so worried about him. How to help him?
Elena gave a fake smile..
Elena: he is a lost man..Ek hara hua insaan jisne apna sab kuch khoya hai. Jiju kabhi move on kar hi nahi paye Sona.. Shayad vo kabhi move on krna chahate hi nahi the..Aur ye kal raat tune jo dekha vo pichhale 7 saal se chal raha hai.. unhone buaji se baat karna band kiya.. tumhe khone ke guilt ne unhe kamjor bana diya hai.. kabhi kabhi to vo diwar pe latke huye tere photo se baate karte hai..
Sona: Mere photos abhi bhi hai us ghar me?
Elena: Tumhari har cheej hai ghar me.. Tere kapde, tere bangles, tere perfumes..Har baat vaise ki vaisi hai..Aur tera vo jhula..Vo firse tumhare kamare me shift kaeavaya gaya..
Sona: Aur Dev ki maa? Unhone oppose nahi kiya?
Elena: vo to teri har cheej fek dena chahati thi pr jiju ne kaha “meri Sona Ko to tum meri jindagi se nikal chuki ho..Kam se Kam uske yaadon me to mujhe jeene do”
Just then someone knocked the door..It was Jatin.
Jatin: Surprise…
Sona: I am not surprised.. Come in..
Jatin: itna sannata kyu hai? Where is Soha?
Sona: Soha Dev ke saath bahar gayi hai..
Jatin: Hello Elena…Now that’s pleasant surprise..
Elena: Hello Jatin Da..
Then we spent our whole day remembering our childhood days n all..
Elena: I should leave Now..It’s getting late..Soha aur jiju se mai baad me milungi..
Just then someone knocked the door
It was Dev n Soha..
Sona’s POV ends here****

Dev’s POV
We came inside..And to my surprise Elena n Jatin were there.. Elena greeted us n left coz she was getting late.. but Jatin.. ise ghar nahi jana hota hai kya?? I hate this guy.
It’s evening..Sona cooked dinner..But me n Soha had enough food in the evening so we decided that we will have dinner after some time. Sona and Jatin had there dinner. Sona told me that she n Jatin are going to terrace. I wish I could punch him hard.
I was sitting there like a fool. I have no rights to interfere in her life. After some time I realised Soha has slept on sofa.. I picked her up and went to bedroom..Made her sleep properly.. I have no mood to have food. I thought to sleep..And I went to terrace to let Sona know that Soha is already slept n I m going to do the same. I came to terrace.. I was about to open the door but then I thought not to disturb them.. I should respect her decision.. If she wants to be with Jatin..And I felt so bad that I turned to leave..And I hurt heard Sona’s voice..
Sona: Soha…Dev ki ikloti cheej jo mere pas hai.. jise mai grow hote dekh sakti hu… Pichhale 6 saal main Soha me Dev Ko dhund rahi hu.. Soha jab paida hui thi tab mai kitna royi thi na..
Jatin: haa… Maa Beti ek dusre Ko competition lagi rehti thi…
Sona: us time mera saath dene ke liye thank you so much..Varna Baba to gusse me bachche Ko abort karana chahte the. Meri dusari shaadi karana chahte the.. Soha Ko is duniya me lane ke liye kya kya karna pada…Baba ka gussa, mere mood swings, food cravings.. raat raat bhar jagna…
Jatin: you are a fighter Sona..Meri ek baat manegi..Dev aur tumhare rishte Ko ek chance de..7 saal jiske vapas aane ka tune intejar Kiya hai vo tere sath hai. Ek baar try kr Sona..
Sona: Dev mere liye nahi Soha ke vajah se yaha hai.. agr Soha nahi Hoti to Dev kabhi vapas nahi aata..Aur in 7 saal ki tarah mai meri puri jindagi gujar leti.. he didn’t fight when we were together..Aur ab to hamare beech koi rishta hi nahi raha to vo kya fight karega.. agr use mere pas aana hota to vo kab ka aa Chuka hota.. It’s too late now..We can’t be together..
Jatin: pr Sona ek Baar try…
Sona: mai mere pyar Ko bar bar harte huye nahi dekh sakti..
And I heard her sobbing..And I came to bedroom.

I felt so guilty..She always loved me. She had a choice of moving on but she didn’t. And I couldn’t even stand for her.. our love.. I didn’t care about her..She faced everything alone.. I am sorry Sonakshi…

33 comments

  1. Vaishaali

    Oh awesomeeee…..wonderful episode…i was really wanting somebody to write such thing…thank you foe starting this few shorts…πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

    • Richa144

      Richa144

      |Author

      I always wanted the writers to show their feelings but I guess they are more focused on Soha..L know Soha is important but yaar Dev Ko Sona ke liye feelings hai ya nahi pata nahi. He only gets jealous when Jatin is around..After that no feelings .. errr…It hurts

      • Vaishaali

        What i feel is…leap ke pehle bhi he used to be like this a little bit…many times and for many things he ignored sona…aur ab toh alag ho gaye hain….toh woh dev ka talent nikhar ke aa raha hai…πŸ˜‚
        Makers ko pata nai kya hai…yaa toh wo devakshi delay kar rahe hain jaanke yaa fir khud ki hi story mein ulajh gaye hain…
        Anyways…you wrote this fs…and that sooooo cool…!!😎😎

  2. Ritika

    awesome like always. aap atsh kab post kar rahi hai. i am waiting. aab toh 2 ffs k liye wait karna padega. soch k hi daar lag raha hai. love u. take care. bye…

  3. Manya

    Manya

    |Registered Member

    Hey Richa Di😘😘
    This was AwesomeeeeπŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜­πŸ˜­β£β£β£πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
    Inn makers Ko kuch nhi aataπŸ˜’πŸ˜’
    U r the best😘😘😘
    Post soon
    Love uβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’žπŸ’ž

  4. Akshita

    Akshita

    |Registered Member

    😭😭😭😭you made me cryyy
    it was soo touching 😭😭. …..plzzz post next part soon❀
    lots of love

  5. ShrutiP

    ShrutiP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Richa..glad you are going to write to instead of one now…I always eagerly wait for your ff… Loved it as always..please post soon…😊😊😊

  6. Riti1107

    Riti1107

    |Registered Member

    Wow
    I am waiting for such a thing to happen in the serial
    But makers hai ki maante nahi
    Liked this one
    Post Soo

  7. Sgatik

    Amazing richa. Its really was we were expecting in serial to happen. Both need to open up about their feeling. Thanks for writing this. Pls post ur both writing soon.

  8. Darshana

    Darshana

    |Registered Member

    It was so awesome and it u just nailed it…
    I am feeling short of words…!!
    so just one thing..post soon!😊
    loads of love😘😘

  9. SamayraRaghavKashyap

    SamayraRaghavKashyap

    |Registered Member

    This was beautiful…. Truly amazing….. That one line..
    ‘ Tumhe bye kehna shayad main kabhi seekh nahi paunga…” Gave me feels…
    😘😘😘
    Loved it…every bit of it….you r truly a very good writer…Richa….keep up your good work
    Best wishes😊

  10. Aamu

    Aamu

    |Registered Member

    Hey..it was amazing one…
    I jz loved it…
    D concept is sooo different..
    Kaash aisa hi hota real serial me bhi.
    Anyway post next soon

  11. Ritika

    post soon. waise hi aarohi di ka wait karte karte mera head gol gol ghum raha hai. aab aap intezae maat karwao…

    • Richa144

      Richa144

      |Author

      OMG..So sorry dear.. I have submitted next episode of tere bin. But next episode of agar tum sath ho will take time.. Sorry for not replying on time

  12. Yvonne Codner

    I would have enjoyed it better if I understood the language especially when Dev went to the terrace and heard Sonakshi crying and talking to Jatin..I missed all of that.

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