hi guys i am back with the last part of my os…hope u will lyk it…thnks 4 commenting and giving ua lyks and dislyks…it really means a lottt…this epi is dedicated to u jinny…sirf tere kehne pe mai aaj likh rahi hun priyu umeed hai tjhe pasand aayega.

let’s start the story

sanchi went to home happily unaware of the fact that her sister knws everything…naina(sanchi’s sis) was waiting in hall 4 sanchi…soon sanchi arrived and she quickly hugged her sis…naina jerked her away…sanchi was not able to understand anything…she asked naina

s:kya huwa di…aap aise ku behave kr rahe ho.

n:to aur kya kru..tu hi bata mama papa ke jaane k baad maine tjhe kbhi unki kami mehsoos hone di hai kya…to phr tu mere saath aisa ku kr rahi hai.

s:maine kya kiya di

n:jb tu jaanti thi ki mai teenage lv pr vishwaas nhi krti phr b tu relation mai rhi aakhhr ku…tjhe abi ye sb kch bohat acha lage ga sanchi pr ye rb galagt hai….vo ladka tjhe ek do hafton tk ghumaye ga ar phr tkhe chod dega

s:kabir aisa nhi hai di vo mjhse pyaar krta hai vo mjhe dhoka nahi dega

n:thk hai agr vo tjhre sacha pyaar krta hai to usse bol ki vo teri pdhai puri hone tktera intezaar kare…kr payega vo tera intezaar

s:thk hai di…kabir mjhse sacha pyaar krta hai vo 13 saal kya mera puri zindagi intezaar krega

n:vo to waqt hi batayega sanchi lelin inn 13 saal tjhe usse dur rhna hoga

s:agr ye mere pyaar ka imtihaan hai to mai vada krti hun di mai iss imtihaan mai pass hokr dikhavugi

nxt day sanchi tld everything to kabir…kabir decided to wait 4 sanchi as his lv 4 sanchi was true and pure…bth kanchi left 4m there to different paths..bth cried a lot dat nght…sanchi wrote everything in he diary..


13 years passed…bth kanchi had completed their studies…bth were eager to meet eachother…it was 14 feb and their was party in a cafe….kabir was present there with his frnds…ishgya brought sanchi there … they were aware of kabir’s presence so they took sanchi there(guys sanchi was nt in contact with kabir bt ishgya were still in touch with kabir)…they went to the cafe…cafe was decorated with hrt shaped balloons nd in the middle there was a big hrt in which happy valentines day was writen…ishgya went to dance and sanchi went to other side suddenly she collided with a tall handsome man nd they bth fell on the ground with the man on top of her…the man is none other than my kabir…they shared a deep intense eyelock…bth were in tears nd were lost in eo eyes(pehli hi nazar mai pehchaan liya sacha pyaar)bth were reminsing their moments…suddenly sme1 4m back whistled and bringed our kanchi bck 4m their dreamland…bth went out and talked 4 whole day…sanchi phn beeped in which was naina’s msge informing her to come bck home soon..its urgent…sanchi read the msge nd tld kabir that she will inform di abt u and than they will be 2gthr 4 eva…sanchi reached her home and much to her surprise their was a lady,an old man and a handsome man sitting in the middle

n:ye lo aagayi sanchi…sanchi ye hai savitri aunty anand uncle ar ye hai veer…vo actually na ye mama ar papa k frnds hai

sv:kitni badi hogayi hai sanchi ar dekho to kitni sundar lag rahi hai..ab mjhse intezaar nahi ho raha hai jldi se shaadi ki date nikalwate hai

s:shaadi kis ki shaadi hai di

sv:are kiski shaadi kya tmhari ar veer ki shaadi.

s:dii…mjhe aap se akele mai kch baat krni hai(bth went to side)ye sb kya hai di aap jbnti hai ki mai kabir se pyaar krti hu…phr b…aapko pata hai di kabir ne mera pure 13 saal intezaar kiya hai ar aaj to mai usse ye keh kr aayi hu ki ab aap hamari shaadi krvadogi ar hm hamesha k liye ek saath rahenge

n:bhul ja usse sanchi veer se behtar tereliye koi nhi ar khabardaar jo tune iss shaadi se inkaar kiya…ag2r7tund kch aisa kiya to tu mera mara huva muh dekhegi


n:bs kr ar chal yahan se…



n:hame ye rishta manzoor hai…bs shaadi isi hafte mai hojaye to acha tha

sv:ye to bohat khushi ki baat hai…to bs agli somvaar shaadi kr dete hai inki

n:mai mithai lati hu

veer saw sanchi in tears bt didn’t said anything to her…sanchi went to her room and criead a lot…she called pragya nd tld her evrything…after few days she called kabir nd tld him that she wants to meet him tonyt at xyz cafe

xyz cafe

kabir was waiting 4 sanchi…sanchi came there and tld kabir evrythng…kabir who was listening dis was in tears…he was nt able to understand hw to react

s:kl meri haldi hai kabir mjhe khushi hogi agr tm meri shaadi mai shaamil hogai…ye raha meri shaadi ka card agr tm ne mjhse pyaar kiya hai to aajana

sanchi left 4m there….kabir who was in shock also left the place nd cried a lot at his home…all functions went gud…

it was marriage day evry1 was happy except kanchi and ishgya…veer saw sanchi sad so he went to her room to ask her abt the reason behind her sadness…bt sanchi was not there…veer striked with the dressing table and a diary fell 4m there…veer took the diary in his hands he was going to put the diary bck bt he saw a photo in diary(it was kabir’s childhood pic)he took the pic in his hands and started reading the diary…he was in tears reading dis..he put the diary bck and left the place….tym reached to wedding…veer was sitting on his place…ishgya brought sanchi to pandap…she was looking damn gorgeous in red lehanga…kabir’s eyes were stuck on her…sanchi sitted on her place….pandit was reciting the mantars suddenly veer went up 4m there…and tld evry1 that he can’t marry sanchi as he lvs another girl evry1 was in shock…kabir went to veer and grabbed his color and tld him

k:aisa tm kaisa krskte ho sanchi k saath

v:aisa kya kiya maine bs mai isse shaadi nhi krskta..agr itna hi hai to khud ku nhi krte ho isse shaadi

kabir who was angry grabbed sanchi’s hand and took her to the mandap and applied sindoor and made her wear mangalsutra

k:aaj se ye meri biwi hai…kisi ko kch kehna hai

sanchi was in tears…after that sanchi’s sis accepted kabir…kanchi lived happily and after 2 years they were blessed with a baby boy whom they named aryan kapoor


finally it is completed…guys pls gve ua comments as it was the last part of my os..its a humble request to silent reades and to u guys…guys i want to write my fs in urdu only if u say i will translate the difficult words in urdu…btΒ  if u want me 2 write dis in english i will bt urdu will suit…do tell me guys what shld i do…will come bck with my fs after seeing ua comments…till than by…tc..i forget to ask hope u all will be fyn.



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  1. Dhruti

    wow wow superb…….mind blowing story………………tc………………love you and post next one asap………..

  2. It’s amazing, nice end, please come with another os

  3. Dimple457

    Mind blowing superb amazing😍😍😘 luved itπŸ’–πŸ’–……..now plz post ur ff I am eagerly waiting for itπŸ€—πŸ€—…..bye tc luv u

  4. Priyanshipp

    Maza aa gya jinny ko. …dil khush kar diya.. or ye zaalim Naina ki bachi kitni badmash h… but tune sab thik kar diya.. luv u meri pyaari behena … ab jldi se naya ff suru kar πŸ˜œπŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™β€β€

  5. Mind blowing…….

  6. Aafiya


  7. Amazing….. Loved it very much

  8. Swethaa

    awesome dear..

  9. Niyaaa

    Amaz os yaar finally sab thik ho gya per mera mann kar raha tha naina ki band baja dunπŸ˜…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚..btw ff k liye urdu m kuch nahi kah skti kyunki mujhe koi knowledge nhi h ki mujhe urdu kaisi hoti h samjh aayega yaa nahi teri marzi h..bye ab jldi se ffpost kar..lovv u😘😘😘milte h ig pπŸ˜€πŸ˜€

  10. Anu88

    Awesome,fantastic,mindbloeing,outstanding os yaar…….end is superb yaar……love and like it so so much dear……. please yaar post your ff soon dear……love u dear…..see you soon yaar…….tc dear

  11. Anee

    ohh sana luv you dear for amazing ending…..sorry for late commenting on it btw dear it was super se abhi zyada zyada uuuper tha dear….and plzz write dear write in Urdu dear it’s my humble request koi aur kuch bhi kahe tu likh rahi hai suna …yeh main keh rahi…coz Urdu is my national language dear plz write on it.

  12. It is beautiful ending dear …..loved it really …..I know both Urdu & English ….So, it’s ur choice …..Love u

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