Tejvi and Ishkara- Journey Through Their Lives – part 7

TEJVI & ISHKARA : JOURNEY THROUGH THEIR LIVES [PART 7]

[By Renima Ishqie]
Hello ishqies….am presenting 7th part of my ff. Well about this part I will not say much. And on previous parts I got so many comments and suggestions. And many ishqies guessed and some of them get confused also.Due to lack of time my ffs are very short and guys please try to understand my situation.

Scene-12{@ art hub- continuation from part 6}

Omkara : Ishana….. I think you are upset…..
Ishana : No….I mean…..am ok now…… And I just want to say that we should start today itself….i mean …… omkara your project?
Omkara : Are you Comfortable ?
Ishana : Yes….and Omkara am here for your project only…Its better you say me something related to it……I hope you don’t mind….
Omkara : I can understand Ishana……Well…I have thoroughly studied about the hand gestures {mudraas}of kathak …and…..{Ishana was unable to focus on what Omkara was saying to her……Seems her mind was just wandering some where else. But some how she managed to gain conscious mind back…..}

Ishana : Omkara….shall we start ?
Omkara : Are you sure ?
Ishana : Yeah….Omkara….tell me what I have to do…..
Omkara : You have to dance only…..
Ishana : But you told me about dance postures and you want to….{she stopped her words as see show a pic behind him….. she stared @ Omkara in wonder} Omkara…..This is…..
Omkara : Ishana…..a passionate dancer…..
{They share an eyelock}
Ishana : So…I have to dance ……and am ready……{smiles}
Omkara : Then…let’s start…..
{Omkara picked his brushes….Ishana tied the dupatta and wore the anklet. Both of them smile each other and Omkara pressed the button of the tape and song was played……
Ishana and Omkara were fully dedicated in their art since it was a unique combination of beat and brush. Their moves were so natural and free as their art depicted their feelings.

The moment lasted for some time and when Ishana stopped her dance as soon as the song ended Omkara also had finished his work….Ishana made a glance @ that….Each frame just resembled her dance steps…..Omkara and ishana smiled each other}
Omkara : Ishana……you really love to dance ?
Ishana : Of course…..Omkara…why you asked so ?
Omkara : Ishana your dance conveyed a lot…..

Ishana : Is it ? Omkara …..why you are an artist ?
Omkara : Some time words are not capable to convey our feelings….. I think my canvas and my brushes are able to portray it ……And when I pour colours on it I feel through my art am capable to find colours……
Ishana : But life is not filled with colours……I mean it is a mixture of certain colours ….like a rainbow……and when you really have a look on it…you will not be able to realize which is red, which is blue and which is green….{she gets emotional}
Omkara : When you will find the real colour……you will feel you are in darkness only……{Omkara gets emotional}

{They share an emotional eyelock }
Ishana : I think, I should leave now…….
Omkara : Ishana…..I don’t know what is your problem……..
I don’t think that am able to solve your issues….. please don’t pretend that you are ok….If you want you can share it with me…….It’s your wish……
Ishana : Omkara…..I thought you are able to sketch the person …..But I was wrong…….You are…..I mean I will think about what you said now…….See you tomorrow…….
Omkara : Bye, Ishana……
{Ishana leaves….Omkara stares @ her…..}
Scene- 13 ( @ Tej’s guest house)
Swethlana : Welcome….Mr. shivay singh oberoi and saasu mom…..
Dadi : Where is Priyanka ?
Swethlana : Relax saasu maa, she is alright…..
Shivaay : And bade paapa….
Tej : Am here….swethlana you may please…..
Swethlana : Ok…Tej …..take time….am sure you can convince them…{swethlana leaves}
Tej : Maa, Shivaay……please take your seats.
Dadi : Tej…..Jhanvi
Tej : Maa…please….she is mad….I lost every thing just because of her…..
Dadi : Tej…..what are you saying?
Tej : Am telling fact…..{Their conversation was interrupted as
They heard some body was screaming…. ….help..help…..)
{Every one rushed there and all was shocked to see Priyanka
holding a knife in her hand.Swethlana holded tej’s hand}
Tej : Priyanka…..beta…..calm down
Priyanka : Paapa….@ chowki you just pushed me and I didn’t say any thing….But now if you will not allow me to go with Shivaay bhaiya….i swear….i will ……{she burst into tears}
Dadi : Tej…..leave priyanka now….

Tej : Not possible….she is my daughter….
Priyanka : Paapa….i never disobeyed you…..What all you have done with mom….i never raised my voice…..i never called you Mr. Oberoi like om bhaiya……but paapa…….why you take me with you forcefully…..i never said that my paapa is right or wrong…..But paapa….
Tej : Priyanka…..{he hold her hands}
Priyanka : Paapa….am also a human being……and I have to live….it is really impossible for me to call this lady as my mom….and paapa …..if you really love your daughter then allow me to go with dadi and bhaiya……
Swethlana : No..this is not possible…I won’t let you go…

Priyanka {anger}: Who are you to say this ? Remember you are only his fiancee….not his wife….and don’t think that I will accept ….
Tej : Priyanka……how can you talk like this
Swethlana : Let her talk….Tej…..she is my daughter…And prinku…..soon you will be able to see me as Mrs. Oberoi
Priyanka : Shut up…..Am not your daughter…and who are you to call me prinku ? Only my choti maa and shivaay bhaiya can call me as prinku…….And ……I will not allow you to enter oberoi mansion as Mrs. Oberoi……Its my challenge
Swethlana : Challenge….Accepted…..Tej….

Tej : Well, I think priyanka need some time ……Isn’t it priyanka ?
Priyanka : Wow! Great Mr. Tej Singh Oberoi…..I wish I call you as paapa…..but now I will not call you paapa….for this lady my paapa…..is losing every one…..every one…..
Tej : Priyanka….
Priyanka: Please don’t take my name with that dirty mouth
Dadi, bhaiya….lets go….
{Priyanka,dadi and shivaay are about to leave…}
Tej : Shivaay…..
Shivaay : Bade paapa……sorry to say….I feel sympathy on you…..This lady is playing pranks with you ….but unfortunately you are not able to realize it…..I mean it…..
{shivaay, dadi and priyanka leaves}

PRECAP : Ishana’s dad in trouble……

24 comments

  1. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Di really at present I am in search of words to paper down but I guess it is waste because it will not express my happiness and your skills at a same time..
    I am not like Om an artist or like u a poet.. That I can satisfy by u with comments or poems…
    Hum kisiki zindagi ek safar hoti hai,
    Us safar mein her rang hota hai ,
    Aur joh un rango ko behat mohabbat aur shidat say pesh ker ,
    Woh aap jissa hi koi khaas hota ..
    Sorry for this bakwaas own poem …

  2. Vismaya

    For the first time someone is portraying Prinku as a strong character. Wish she was like this in original and I loved today’s episode to the core of my heart.

  3. Chetna

    Woowwwww di what an episode.
    I always love ishkara but priyanka killed .l love her words her feelings and specially Mr. Tej Singh oberoi.
    Fantastic di

  4. Shilpa S raja

    good episode. I have been a silent reader of the page all time. I just love your ff very much. I am one among those fans who was disappointed when the writers decided to end the ishkara track. But good to see it portrayed well through your ff. Thank you so much and keep up the good work always. You are an amazing writer.

  5. Roz

    |Registered Member

    wow,,,,,Priyanaka rocked,,,,She is the weakest character in real serial bt here u made her character sooo strong that I just loved her part,,,,

  6. Sat

    |Registered Member

    Di, I a very sorry for the late comment as I have school everyday. And coming to the episode really Priyanka was daring and showed her guys to tej and really tej is a stupid. I don’t have words to say about your ff, really loving it. It was simply superb, awesome , amazing, wonderful and lovely😍😍😍and please update the next epi ASAP😃😃😃

  7. Luna

    One thing I will like to say Renima, that the first and foremost rule of ffs is it should be loyal to characters and setting of the show if u r showing the plot related to the story of the show…. So if u r showing some changes in the character of Priyanku then there should be a valid reason….I know that the reason is Tej marrying Shwetlana but u should show it more properly to make it seem reasonable.

    • Renimarenju

      |Author

      Luna dear agree with ur point….but i actually made a change on prinku ….will be revealed on next part and about ishkara….less scenes…..just because i want to maintain a suspense only…..
      and dear due to lack of time ffs are short and dear to include all things are really very hard ….and dear……reasons will be disclosed on up coming parts……i mean your doubts …….actually precap i will not disclose any thing which is connected with episode…..because……my presentation style is to keep a suspense…..Ok…..Ishqie….i understood your point of view and suggestion …….luna……Thanks

  8. Yazhu

    |Registered Member

    You rocked again renima di…sry for the late comment…really loved this part very much…Ishkara’s convo is nice…and I’m so happy to see prinku in this bold avatar…loved that part so much…she really gave a slap to Tej and Swetlana by her words…sooooooo amazing…

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