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Tejvi and Ishkara- Journey Through Their Lives – part 2

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TEJVI & ISHKARA : Journey through Their Lives
[Part-2]
[ By Renima Ishqie]
Hey ishqies…Am posting the second part of my ff. Please support me with your valuable comments and suggestions. About this part I will not say much…Guys just read it and comment.
[Scene-4 @ Oberoi Mansion]
Omkara : {Hugs Shivaay tightly as he was crying} Shivaay …..I can’t see this…..
Shivaay { much shocked} : What happened, Om?
Omkara : Mr. Oberoi and that lady ……
Shivaay : Relax….Rudra, bring some water…..
Rudra : What happened Bhaiya?
Shivaay : Listen,….Rudra……let him relax…..
Omkara : If Mr. Oberoi was alone with that Swethlana….Then pain would have less….But….
Shivaay :What do you mean?
Omkara : Shivaay, Mom…..{Unable to complete words}
Rudra : Om..you saw mom with them ?
Omkara : I don’t understand why mom was with them……Shivaay…..I need ….
Shivaay : No…Omkara….I know it is really very difficult for you ….but don’t be so upset…And strictly you will not get pills……
Rudra : Om…..Why our dad did so ? Am worried for Mom….. As mom …….{unable to speak}
Shivaay {hugs om and rudra, gets much emotional}: Omru…..
Don’t take these things very serious…..
Omkara : Really ? Shivaay …..This is not serious ?
Priyanka : Shivaay bhaiya……{emotional}Mom…..she has not come yet…..Paapa has reached……..Am just scared bhaiya…..Do something…..
Shivaay : Prinku ….don’t get panic….Ok….Om….where you saw Badi Maa ?
Omkara : Near Worli….I don’t remember the exact location….
Shivaay : Ok…That’s enough…..Rudra….Take care off Om and Prinku….I will be back with Badi Maa……
Omkara : Shivaay…You can’t go alone…..
Rudra : Exactly….Bhaiya….
Omru : We are One for All and All for One……{Three brothers hold their hands together and leaves}
Scene-5
{ Three brothers in much worry search for Jhanvi……And they find her in road….She was faint on the road as she had consumed too much alcohol and besides her they saw bottles also……Three of them are shocked and Shivaay soon take her in his arms and get into the car. On the way Omkara was much worried.}
Shivaay : Omkara….please don’t cry….You know bade paapa
Omkara : No, shivaay….I really don’t know him…And don’t want to know much as I hate him…..
Shivaay : Om….I can understand….But om he is…
Omkara : Part of our family ? Isn’t it ? But shivaay he never consider our family and neither consider mom…..I feel shame to say that am his son……As today he proved ith….He is a bastard….
Shivaay { gets much anger and stop the car}: Omkara….Mind your language…You really know what you are saying?
Omkara :Am speaking truth shivaay….Truth….
Shivaay : Omkara….You are really a senseless person….You know this is not the time to blame our family…..What happen to your so called “idealism and principles”?
Omkara: I never tried to show that am Ideal Shivaay….I just said it because today Mr. Oberoi has crossed his limits….
Shivaay : Omkara….I know…But….{Rudra interrupts their conversation}
Rudra : Bhaiya, Om…..Stop arguing each other….Mom really need our support…Please { emotional}….And we have reached home …..Please …..Behave yourselves…..
{The car stops @ Oberoi mansion….Pinky, Priyanka and Dadi are shocked to see Jhanvi in a pathetic state….}
Dadi : I never expect this day…Where is Tej ?
Priyanka : I think Paapa is on study room
Dadi : Go and tell him to meet me now.{Prinku goes inside}
Pinky : Oh My Mata! Jethani ji is….
Dadi : Pinky….{stares her in anger}Shivaay, Omkara, Rudra….. go 2 your rooms….Jhanvi will sleep in my room today……
{Dadi is much tensed and shocked. She just pray to God in mind” Please take care off my family”}

[Scene-5 Ishana’s House]
Ishana : Mona…I asked you to bring water….not milk…..
Mona : But di…you asked for water only…..
Ishana:{ tensed} Just leave me alone…
Mona : But di..what happened?
Ishana: I said you to leave me…..Please….{emotional}
Mona : But di…..
{Ishana leaves the house in tension and anger. Mona tries to stop her. But she ignores her and walks…}
Precap : Ishkara meeting
Actually I want to write more in this part. Due to lack of time I ended this one here.Hope you all don’t mind.

14 Comments
  1. Yazhu

    Awesome renima di…loved it…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks dear

  2. Soo good d….waiting for ishkara meet again…..lv u d….the way how u manage to contact with us soooo sweet d….n also i want to ask one thing to u..?shall l ..??

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks…And what u want to ask ishqie ?….Just ask it here

  3. Shaza

    It’s awesome di …exited for the next one ….thnq soooooo much for this ff ….😄😘😘

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks dear….next part i will submit tonight

  4. Jazz1

    Really good. Loved it

    1. Renimarenju

      Thannk u jazz

  5. Loved it di and yaa will be trying to comment on all parts ……
    Wow u understand emotions so deeply… Maybe due to life experience..

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks dear…..

  6. Priya15

    Full of suspense!!!!

    In that part i felt om words strange..
    Here i feel ishu so….

    Suspense ki ghaadi chalte rahi….

    Mr.oberoi is so bad..how could he do so..shivay is expecting om to love papa???

    1. Renimarenju

      Suspense…Well…i will post my next part by 2night…..read it…Thanks priya

  7. Sat

    Very nice di, sorry for commenting late as I just now woke up. And your ff is full of suspense you know . Please update ASAP

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u dear…..hope u are fine now….And i will post next one by tonight itself

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