Tejvi and Ishkara- Journey Through Their Lives – part 16-Last part

TEJVI & ISHKARA : JOURNEY THROUGH THEIR LIVES
[LAST PART] {By Renima Ishqie]
Ishqies, am presenting the last part of this ff. Actually I can’t portray Omkara’s character as a forgiving son since omkara always favor truth only and he is an ideal man. And as per serial Tejvi have united and I just tried to convey it in my ff’s previous part. Hope all liked it.
So in this part am going to end my ff …..Please support me with your comments and suggestions. And silent readers also…..Please break the silence and comment guys. Wether you like it or not, doesn’t matter….just express what you feel….
Last part
{Time has changed…..Jhanvi was able to give a second chance to her marital relationship and her love….And Tej has also decided to be honest and sincere with Jhanvi…..So when Tej was discharged from the hospital Shivaay, Dadi, Pinky,Prinku and Rudra welcomed Tejvi to Oberoi Mansion….For Omkara it was really impossible….But he didn’t reacted as he find a rare feel of happiness, security and glow in his mother’s face…}
Jhanvi : Omkara…..Thanks beta….
Omkara : Mom….Am sorry….
Jhanvi : Omkara…..why are you saying sorry ?
Omkara : Every one are happy……I mean to be honest I can’t call Mr. Oberoi as paapa….But I wish I could…..
Jhanvi : I know….Omkara……But I just want to say Tej has changed…..
Omkara : May be……Mom….But I believe in truth and….
Tej : Omkara……We don’t force you beta…..But I will wait my whole life for the precious day when you will come and call me Paapa…..Jhanvi….you know I want that moment in my life….And I don’t know when it will happen…..But ….{emotional}
Jhanvi : Tej….Am also waiting for that moment….and trust me….One day Omkara will call you paapa…..And Tej…..May be it will take long time….but am sure it will happen….
Tej : Do you think so ?
Jhanvi : Yes…..
{Tejvi share an emotional eyelock}
Omkara : I just hope your dream may come true…..
{Omkara stares tejvi with teary eyes}
Shivaay : Om….people may have faults….And when one person identifies his faults and change himself he should deserve a second chance…..And for you to call bade paapa as paapa is really a big deal…..But trust me it can be possible…..
Priyanka : Om bhaiya…..you are elder than me and rudra bhaiya….You have really suffered the pain and when shivaay bhaiya always stood as the great wall for me and rudra bhaiya @ childhood itself . May be that’s why we are able to call paapa as paapa only……
Rudra : What is right, what is wrong ? I don’t know any thing…..Mom is happy with paapa and am also happy….
Dadi : Give Omkara some time…..We don’t know what destiny had written in our lives…..We have to wait…
Pinky : Oh My Maata !! Absolutely rights, Maaji…Jethaniji……Jethji……. If the love and support of Oberois always remains as strong……we can any impossibilities to possibilities……
Omkara : Let us hope for the best….Choti Maa….maa… I have to go ….
Rudra : Art hub, right Om?{laughs}
Omkara : Exactly, but why are you laughing ?
Rudra : Om…..I know…..Today you are going with Ishana for a date…..
Omkara : What rubbish ?
Priyanka : Om bhaiya…..we know every thing…..
Shivaay : Oh! Come on Om….We know that you like Ishana…..
Omkara : Shivaay,…..Of course I like Ishana….but guys…
Not the way you think…
Prinku : By the way….we know that you as an artist only…..Not a psychartist….Then how you can know what we think…..
Pinky : Enough….Oh My Maata !!! Don’t tease my Omkara ……You just go beta……
Omkara : Am…..Just leaving….{Omkara smiles and about to leave……Every one stares @ him with smile}
Dadi : Omkara…..I don’t know what is going on with you and Ishana….but today if you both can realize it then just tell it…..
Jhanvi : When we miss whom we find as a special person who can always be with us….who can find what we are….then we won’t let that person to go from our life….
Tej : Omkara…..If we didn’t realize that person….we will regret…..I mean it…..
{Tejvi share an eyelock and stares Omkara with a smile}
Pinky : Oh My Maata !!!Omkara is getting late….Let him go……
{Omkara stares every one …… He smiles and leaves}

ISHKARA-LOVE & PROMISE [@ ART HUB]
{Ishana was already present @ Art hub and was waiting for Omkara…..Omkara arrives there and both share an eyelock}
Omkara : Ishana…..
Ishana : Omkara …..
Omkara : So…the project ….I mean we have not finished it….
Ishana : Yeah….So let us start…..
Omkara : Actually I want to say…..
Ishana : What ?
Omkara : Its nothing…..Just you dance and….we have to finish it soon…
Ishana : Yeah {In mind she was thinking “Finish ? That means as soon as the project will be over I have to go…..But…}
Omkara : Ishana….Ishana….
Ishana : {regained her conscious mind} Yes….Omkara
Omkara : Shall we…
Ishana : Yeah…
{Ishana wore the anklet and Omkara also pick the brush….The rhythm and sketch were enriched with passion and feelings and both of them involved it too long and finally when it was over both of them took a deep breath and smiled each other}
Omkara : Ishana……
{Ishana came closer to Omkara and just looked @ canvas….She was mesmerized with Omkara’s talent}
Ishana : I look very beautiful in these frames….
Omkara : No….You are more beautiful than these frames…..
Ishana : Really ?
Omkara : Ishana…..you said that you can see my heart…Then can you tell me now what my heart says?
Ishana : Omkara…..Your heart says……I mean….how should I know….{She is unable to stare @ Omkara’s eyes}….I think I should leave now….{She turns back…But Omkara holded her hand….Ishana is surprised…..}
Omkara : Ishana….Please….
{Ishana just stared his face….She saw tears in his eyes…}
Ishana : Omkara…..I can’t see your tears…{She wipe out his tears with her hands…..}
Omkara : Ishana…..don’t leave me….Please…..I really need you…..I mean……
Ishana : Omkara…..am here…..and am just going to my house only…..
Omkara : Ishana…..In the past one year we undergone so many changes in our life….@ my home…..every one cares me….and today every one are asking me to call Mr. Oberoi as paapa…..But…..i can’t do that….
Ishana : I know Omkara…..May be they are expecting a lot from you….
Omkara : But…..Ishana……I am confused……As you know my heart always stand with truth and I always listen to that…..
Ishana : But….@ heart’s corner I can see a son who is crying for his father’s love….who want to call him as paapa……who want to be happy with his mom and paapa…..but amidst of all his heart is injured and no one can find that wounds….no one is able to heal that wounds…..{emotional}
Omakra : Ishana…..can you show me the path ?
Ishana : Me……Omkara……
Omkara : Ishana…..you suffered a lot….And before your pain my pain is nothing…..
Ishana : Omkara…. Life rewards pain….But we have to overcome it….When one pain is gone…another will come and after that another…..Pain…..But we can’t offer pain to our beloved ones……
Omkara : I don’t know…..Ishana….May be….. time will change and I….{burst into tears}
Ishana : Omkara…..am with you…..
Omkara {stares her with teary eyes} : What ?Please say it once more…..
Ishana : I am with you….Omkara….
Omkara : Then promise me….you are always with me…
Ishana : Omkara….before that I have a wish…..
Omkara : What ?
Ishana : I want to go to that temple where we met @ first….
Omkara : Sure…lets go….
{They arrives @ temple…Ishana and Omkara rang the bell and stares each other….}
Ishana : Omkara…do you remember what you said me here?
Omkara : Of Course….I think this idol is not able to weep out your tears…..
Ishana : Before this idol I promise you Omkara ….no matter whether life can only offer pain…whether truth is bitter….whether you are confused…..whether your idol is not capable of ending sorrows….Ishana can see her Omkara….And she can read his heart and his heart tells Am his….And…….am with you Omkara….{she gets emotional}
Omkara : Ishana {hold her hands}….i promise you am also with you…..And I can’t live with out you Ishana….
Ishana : Me also….Omkara…..{cries}
Omkara : So our journey begins here….
Ishana {shake her head} : yes….A new journey of our lives….And we have to travel a lot….Omkara…..
Omkara : Your rhythm and my canvas….our art…..our passion …..seems they can convey what we feel better than we….. {Ishana burst into tears….Omkara is not able to see her tears….}
Ishana….please…no more tears….this eyes which are able to see my heart…which are filled with my colours ….I can’t see them in tears….{he wipe out her tears and kisses on her two eyes}…..I love you….Ishana….
Ishana : Omkara…..I love you too….And I can’t see my Omkara in pain….
Omkara : My{smiles}
Ishana : You are mine….And now I will only say My omkara….….My…My……{she shouts with excitement….}
Omkara : Sh!!!{Omkara covers her mouth with his hand…..}My Ishana….. I know that am yours as I can feel it…{He slowly removed his hand from her mouth}
{Both of them smile and hug each other…}

So….here begins the journey of Ishkara…their unique love….their relationship on the base of promise….their passionate love overwhelmed with the flavor of art and emotions.Their concern to each other and their bond of pain and truth which has added a divine touch @ the temple as they met there for the first time….Their lives and their love was not the usual one….But the pain… the incidents which made them to fall for each other can be described as a miracle….
Guys….I hope you all love this part…Especially those who miss ishkara may have re-collected the onscreen moments of Ishkara with this part…..I hope so…..If not also…then please express it with your comments…..
And those who are in true love in real life…I wish them that they may get success in their love life as every one in this world deserves true love……So Renima is signing off from this ff….Love is beautiful …..Beyond of all love can do wonders. Believe in true love…..

39 comments

  1. namrata

    Really a wonderful part and story by u.
    It was very very….. Nice
    the last 2 episodes really made me emotional
    Hope u come with a new ff again

    • Renimarenju

      |Author

      Thanks dear….namratha……to come up with new one is really very hard 4 me …..
      Because this ff is much attatched to my emotions….and another thing is am working so….not getting time dear….but will try……

  2. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    Hey loved it a lot renima sorrycouldnt comment on the earlier parts dear because my semester just began so that’s why 😅

  3. shilpasraja

    What a wonderful episode !!! No words to express. U really are an amazing writer. Thank u so much for the beautiful ff. The journey of ishkara is just has been portrayed well. Waiting ur next ff.

  4. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    What a description u made me cry even though I am sick but when I saw its last so I can’t stop myself di…
    You express emotions Better than everyone….
    Totally magical…. Ur inspiration for emotion …
    My emotional Queen

  5. Shaza

    |Registered Member

    Di ..its was really touching and awestruck ff …
    .coudnt comment on the pre ep cuz u know my exams …
    just red ur all pre ep and this one…got me emotional …
    the proposal was completely awesome….
    ….thnq so much for these awesome ff , writing
    it even after hectic schedule for ishkara fans , means a lot 😊
    …..and how’s ur leg now , everything fine ? ….actually couldn’t ask before cuz just now came to into abt ur leg ….hope u get well soon
    Really felt like u was watching this all and this don’t happend in all ff’s and ur one is a unique one ..hope to see ur more ff’s , try to write of u have time and take care of ur Health …have a good day 😊😊😊😊

    • Renimarenju

      |Author

      Thanks for the inspiring comment…dear…shaza…and am glad that you feel it well….that means
      a lot for me…..and leg pain has increased …. as initially it was swelling only ….but my bad luck…my leg slipped again in office’s washroom…. just 3 days before it happened……to be honest like om…. it’s pain…..but its ok yaar…once diwali is over ….i can take leave….and will take care of my health…..

  6. Renimarenju

    |Author

    Thanks to all people who supported me with your valuable comments and thanks to all people who liked and thanks to all people who disliked this also…..And sorry for the inconvenience as may be you didn’t felt it as good….But i tried my level best and just request you all to comment your opinions in this part….

  7. Aarya

    |Registered Member

    Really nyc story nd episode…. Emotional one. ….U written it very well👍👌…hope u vl b coming again with yet another beautiful story…. Stay happy….

  8. sso

    di amazing episode i can’t express my feeling that how much i love this episode ishkara relationship with promise

  9. Rosu 25

    So you have successfully completed your second ff….hats off dear……you are a wonderful writer…I know you are busy with your works…..but plz don’t stop writing…… waiting for your new ff….

  10. Luna

    |Registered Member

    Oh God!!!!!! ur lines are so beautiful, I just love it….the dialogues are simply heart touching….the emotional touch u give in ur ff is mindblowing…. I’m happy that u made the ending seem realistic which makes it relatable…Do write ur next ff whenever u get time….best of luck for ur love life too.

  11. Lijince

    Hi Renimarenju….I have not read all the parts….only a few of them…..but whatever I read was so beautiful!! Especially the Tej and Jhanvi part….its difficult to portray them…..and Ishkara’s lovestory was like reliving the onscreen Ishkara moments….keep it up!!

  12. Sat

    |Registered Member

    Renima di your last part really is heart touching and pinched my heart to the core. Even though I am too small, I wish I could get true love in future. Usually I have no interest in love, but i am really getting influenced with all your emotional stories. Just loved it to the core.
    I just can’t express it.
    Arrey yar the way omkara and ishana expressed their love it was very very very nice.
    Di I really want you come up with an other ff or is but with all couples.i am just counting numbers for it.😍😍😍

    • Renimarenju

      |Author

      Will try actually am not feeling well as my leg pain got increased and now am not able 2 walk properly…..also work pressure and other tensions…..so will try …..that’s all…..thanks dear……

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