TEI- i swear…prologue

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Hello everyone …
Myself sarind….
I m a silent reader…
Sorry sorry I was….
But

Ria,Baht,Angel20,Kruti,Chiku,Ayu,Affa,,Kritika14,Ramya,Presha,Sidmin,Avantika,Maggi,Purvi,Priya,Arohi…
Sorry if I missed anyone…but really I read all the ffs and touchwood guys…I m writing just because of u all..u all r the driving force behind me …
So here I m with my first piece of writing…A Five Shot..based on twinj..
Actually guys I m 11 standard student and my exams r starting by 4 march..so I m just giving a character intro…and a prologue of my 5 shot…
I will start posting my 5 shot by 17 march..
Hope u all understand
So here is d character intro..hope u all like it..

Character intro
Raminder shrinivasan…a pakka wala south Indian…a very strict person with his own principles…he wants a well educated and qualified groom for his daughter…twinkle ..
Leela shrinivasan..wife of raminder shrinivasan and mother of twinkle and Mahi shrinivasan..
Twinkle shrinivasan…a person with a golden heart…loves her family a lot…respects her father…works at a well known library of Mumbai…she is a simple and sweet girl…
Mahi shrinivasan….younger sister of twinkle…she is beautiful..she loves karan..and wants to get married to him …

And the last…
Kunj a Casanova… As considered by all…he is a son of the biggest lawyer in mumbai.he was sent to jail when he was 13 years old and after 8 years he gets released and presently lives in the same apartment in which the shrinivasan family lives..
So here was d brief intro of d characters of my 5 shot…
Now the prologue…
Twinkle a salwar suit wearing girl…with a round spectacles and a vibhuti teeka on her forehead is rejected by the grooms who came to see her…her Sister also troubles her as she wants to get married to her boy friend karan..but as twinkle is elder raminder shrinivsan wants twinkle to get married first…

After facing rejection for a no.of times..she decides to have a makeover…by a famous makeover specialist who is coincidentally the girl friend of Kunj..neighbour of twinkle…
Twinkle decides to ask Kunj for help …
But due to some misunderstandings raminder disowns twinkle.
Twinkle starts living in a house given to her by him..they become Frnds….
And…..

To be continued .

Toh here was d end of my character intro and prologue..
Hope u all liked it…
Pls comment ..either positive or negative …
Both r welcome…
Because r a motivation fr the writers…
So thank u all fr reading …
Hope i didn’t bore u all…
Keep smiling ?
I will try to post the first part asap…
Till tthen..stay happy…
Bye…
Love u all..
And haan would u all be my Frnd….
I hope I get lots of Frnds…..

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23 Comments
  1. Purnima.agrawal30

    Amazing interesting….n ye padhne k baad mujhe esa lga k ye movie sanam teri kasam se bhot milti h…..

    1. Paavu

      I too agree

    2. Paavu

      Bt it ll be interesting to read

  2. Paavu

    Toh frat of all hi sarind lemme introduce myself as u must nt be knwing me
    I m paavu
    I currently wrote 5ffs on twinj one onkaira and shivika and u can call me ishu cos my real name is ishika…….. and u r mist welcome here and d prologue u penned was really awsumm really awsummm and waiting fr17 march which o think cant read den cos my exams at dat pnt of time bt I ll give it a try and ya last bt nt d least u need any help pm me or msg me on my insta accnts
    Mohsin_ki_shivangi
    mohsin_ki_chahat
    Mohsin_obsessedd
    des are my fanpages for kaira
    Bt I only run dem so u can msg me der or email id if u want or hangouts den pm me or insta msg me ok
    frnds????
    And ya des days sm nloddy bashers sia and shilpa are cmmmting bad on everyones post so dun be sad if dey ll we r wid u by the way dey will nt cmmnt cos we have shown dem der place

    1. Paavu

      Srry not wrote its write I Currently wriye 5 ffs on twinj

  3. Sohi

    Looking forward for the fs

  4. Fatimaa.

    Heyy sarind….it was nice dear…
    Yeah i too think that its like the movie sanam teri kasam……
    But i really love that movie….so i m looking forwrd to ur fs…..nd i know it wud be amazing….
    Post soon dear….nd yeah…
    All the very best for ur exams…..

  5. Mia12

    Hey sarind…
    Well 1st a warm welcome of our Twinj world and swtttt TU family??….well we all are friends so u don need to ask OK??…but ur girl ya boy..????
    OK plot mai ate hai..This is just awesome Yarr,,☺☺☺ I Love it,,??? and feeling like sanam teri kasam movie,,? but agar hai to plzzzz don kill twinkle in the end,,?? plzz its a humble rqst,,?? and now I will waiting for 17 march,,??
    And yeah u forgot…
    My jaan Aamna,,
    My hot coffee Purvi,,
    My Baby doll,,
    My inncnt quen Paavu,,
    My swttpaiii Presha,,
    My jantus Ramya,,
    My chutki Adeeba,,
    My kit kat Neha di,,
    U forgot all this FAMOUS writer…??
    .
    With lots of love,,❤❤
    Priya,,,??

    1. Baby

      hahhaaa my angel aapko bhi toh bhool gyi vo……..
      currently writing an fs wid aamna her jaan……..
      u also forgot my angel mia23 😛
      sry priya babes srsly m ur culprit for dis name hahhaaa……..
      n me d famous writer bas chod hi de……..

    2. Ramya

      PRIYA u remember everyone
      Jaan u r just unique n amazing
      But srsly am I a famous writer I don’t think but
      Love u

    3. Ramya

      Hey sarind
      Firstly a warm welcome to tu
      N
      My name is ramya
      N I’m also a writer present writing a ss name an accident I met my soulmate
      N will u be my frnd

      N I’m frm south India dear

      Awesome amazing prologue
      Love u keep smiling

  6. Presha

    Hey its awesome just loved it.. Do cont

  7. Seems Interesting…:):):):):):*:*

  8. SidMin

    Welcome to our TU family ….
    Interesting plot … do continue soon ?

  9. SidMin23

    It was beautiful and welcome to tu twinj family’s and hope u will post it soon.

  10. Yaaa… Its sanam teri kasam….. Stk… One of my fav movie…. Yrr.. Loved it so much

  11. Interesting plot do continue

  12. Chiku

    Helllo!!
    Welcome to our crazy family dude???. Okay so i am chiku here. I am glad i am one of those who is making u write.
    Plot is very interesting. Will kove to see twinkle as a south indian girl. Lovely❤️❤️
    Try posting soon.
    All the best for ur exams????
    Biee.
    Loads of love❤️

  13. Kruti

    I wont reveal your identity though i know kaun ho tum….nd its to an extent a fact that u are a silent reader
    Hoping to see march 17th soon

  14. Aamna_2690

    Hey Sarind!
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    First of all a warm welcome to our crazy n sunky Family of TWINJ WORLD?????
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    Ok so Aamna here?loved ur prologue ❤❤seems very interesting ??I know it is like Sanam Teri Kasam but I am sure u r with something more interesting n better than it ??u surely must have a big twist n suspense in it☺☺
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    Well will love to be ur Friend??will u accept this crazy chatterbox as ur Friend??
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    I know u must be thinking that how could she speak to much… Then dear i am a whole chatter box??
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    Best of luck for ur exams ???
    N
    Plz post soon?
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    Loads of love ??
    Keep Smiling
    Regard’s Aamna

  15. Baby

    hiii dear welcome to our family…….
    well srsly luvd it soooo mch♥
    it was too cute intro…..
    n if in sanam teri kasam twinki will die i mean in ur ff…so plss dont……☺
    love u………..♥

  16. Baby

    well friends?☺
    all d best for ur exams……….
    n i havent watched STK sooo if its like dat i dont care bas twinki ko mat marna or m tooo very excited ofr ur ff……….
    love u…….♥

  17. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Hey sarind,
    It’s too amazing , superb lovely start….
    I too feel it’s like Sanam Teri kasam movie… if it is soo then it’s a request please don’t give sad ending like killing twinkle at end…
    Looking forward for it….
    Nd about freindship i wouldn’t like to be your friend ,….
    I would love to be your best friend if u want….
    Loveee uuuuuu
    Keep smiling ….
    Best of luck for your exams…

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