TEI: Love beyond age limits OS – Part 1


Hello everyone TARA here…well for many days a story was roaming in my mind, bt i thought to write it later, i.e. after finishing my current ff. But then i thought it may take a long time, so couldn’t resist myself from writing. So here it goes.
Twinkle Taneja, a young, charming and beautiful girl of 21 yrs is born to a rich family. She aspires to become an I.P.S officer. Not that she was to brave or something…but three years back her father who was also a renowned officer died in a terror attack. Since then twinkle aims at becoming I.P.S officer as she wants her father to be proud of her. She is admitted to the academy and her training period starts.
In the academy twinkle meets Mahi (age 22), who also aspires to become an I.P.S officer. Both of them become friends. They are also roommates. They share everything with each other and become kinda besties. Mahi has a crush on yuvraj (age25) , who is a senior officer in the academy. Mahi tells this to twinkle. Twinkle was very talented in these cases. She instantly went to yuvi nd asked if he liked mahi . (actually yuvi used to secretly look at mahi,during the training and our twinkle had noticed this. When she came to know about mahi’s feelings she couldn’t resist herself but told yuvi)
Y: actually…kya bolu….
T: see, no one is forcing u..bt don’t lie at least…
Y: okk..yes i like her.
So amidst the tough, and tiring training, yuhi’s love start. Initially they were dating, but soon they started loving each other.
One day, before the training an announcement was made for the approach of a new officer to train the students. And there he entered with a bang!! One could understand trough his expression that he was a man of experience. He had a strict look. He was none other than Kunj Sarna . at the moment he entered yuvi whispered… “ u ppl are gone..!!”
T: y??
Y: he is damn strict….during our training we had him..nd he made our life hell…
M: ur traing?? Is he so experienced??
Y: pta nhi yaar..
T: job hi ho..banda hot hain.. (smiles)
Kunj notices her.
K: u…girl…
T: me??
K: yes u..can u plzz tell us whats so funny??
Twinkle gets ashamed..

K: listen..its not a joking class… nd anybody who feels they are here to laugh nd joke can leave the academy… dismiss!!
Twinkle to herself “ khadoos!!” kunj hears this… “wait..we need to talk”
Mahi and yuvi made a weird face.
After a few minutes, twinkle comes rushing to the room. Mahi asks her what happened. She told that kunj gave her last warning..!! she was very angry so yuhi decided to lighten up her mood.
Many days passed since kunj undertook the training session. And as yuvi said their life was made hell. Kunj (age 29) was a quiet guy , who loved to concentrate on his work. He hated if anyone broke rules. He worked hard and expected others to do so. Twinkle hated him for being so rude, but she loved his determination. One day twinkle was late for the training. Kunj was furious. And as we know punishments for breaking rules are harsh, so it happened in twinkle’s case. She was told to take 20 rounds of the field bare footed. Yuhi were helpless. There was no one except kunj on the ground. Twinkle ran with a lot of difficulty as she had fever. It was also the reason that she was late. After taking few rounds twinkle collapsed!! Kunj went to her thinking that she is acting. But when he touched her body he could feel the heat. He lifted her up and took her to the sick room. When twinkle regained consciousness she found kunj sitting beside her.
K: u okay now?? Are u mad?? If u had fever u should have told…..
T: i was scared..
K: what?? M not a ghost that u would be scared…do i look so scary??
T: (without thinking) no u look hot!!!!!
Kunj was shocked…. “what??”
T: ah..I mean u look temped always….so i didn’t say anything.
Kunj leaves the room smiling.
Twinkle to herself “ tu na ek no. ki idiot hain..ab pta nehi kya hoga”
Few days later when twinkle recovered, she came back to training.
She went to kunj… “ah.. can i speak to u… actually m”
K: i haven’t said yes….
T: sorry??
K: u asked me if we can talk …
T: ooo…can we plzzzzz
K: say..
T: actually m sorry….for what i said that day..didnt mean to tell u that….
K: so u mean m not hot??
Twinkle was shocked!!
K: what happened?? M I not hot??
Twinkle gulped….she didn’t knew what to say. She found it better to leave.
Again few days passed. Twinkle and kunj now had become friends. Kunj began to spent more time with twinkle, teaching her the tactics of fighting etc. Twinkle had started to love this caring side of kunj. She had started to love kunj indeed. But she didn’t knew if kunj felt the same. So one day she decided to confess her love for him.
It was night time and no one else was there in the hall. Twinkle took a deep breath a started.. “u know what i hated u for being so rude, i would have killed u for the way u behaved with me…but slowly i came to know u well, and saw ur real face….the sensitive Kunj Sarna ….nd before i realised..I Had fallen for u…” she stopped. Kunj looked at her. She then said “ yes Mr. Khadoos Sarna…..I LOVE U!!” There was pin drop silence for the next few minutes. The kunj came towards her…” i have never seen a crazy girl such as u….u r unpredictable..and its more unpredictable to fall for such a girl….I LOVE U TOO….!!” twinkle was more than happy…she ran to him and hug him tight…
Everything seemed perfect now. They seemed to be just perfect. Twinkle continued with her mazaks…and she expected kunj to accompany her, which was next to impossible. One day kunj scolded twinkle in front of everyone. Twinkle got very angry. Later kunj came to tell her sorry but she wont listen. She was ad as well. Kunj tried to make her understand that rules are the same for everyone and if twinkle makes a mistake he cant leave her just becoz u r my…. (kunj stopped)…..twinkle interrupted “ just becoz….m ur??” she smiled teasingly . kunj said “ becoz u r m y girl brined things can’t be changed”
T: aww…kitna achha lag raha hain..mr. sadu ke mu se yeh sunna..”
K: m not joking twinkle… (before he could finish twinkle leaned forward and kissed him) he could feel the soft lips upon his. They kissed passionately for next few seconds….
Only one month was left for the training period to end. Twinkle was sad to depart from kunj. But kunj ensured her her it doesn’t matters if they are far away as their heart and souls will be connected always by the chain of love.

To be continued….

Guys its a one shot only but id ivied it into parts for ur convenience and mine as well.. 😛 so please comment and let me know if u like the story… i will try to post is asap, the story will end in nxt part only..so plzzzzz comment….its my first OS so m pretty nervous….

Credit to: TaraTwinjfan

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  1. Isn’t this an unique story…
    Yup it is,with no doubt…????

  2. Amazing….. I loved it…….

  3. nice try Tara want to read more os waiting for next episode plss post asap .

  4. amazing Tara want to read more os waiting for next episode plss post asap .

  5. Osm I jus loved it so so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much do cont soon plzzzzz luv u

  6. U r jst amazing dr..
    writing is not my cup of tea.
    but i’m so happy 2 encourage u guys..
    update the nxt part soon..

  7. awesm i jus loved it…..it jus so different…

  8. Tara ur os is just like ur name
    Loved it and plz post the next epi as soon as possible

  9. Awsum Os “Ta”.… U nailed it…
    post the nxt part asap…

  10. u r jst outstanding tara ……. woooooowwwww…… i loved it so much …… pls continue soon …….

  11. interstng concept…totally freshh stry

  12. omg..im really so eager for ur next ff..please update asap asap asap!!!

  13. loved it . waiting for the next

  14. Ohhhh tara….it’s SPLENDID as usual yaar

  15. ta omg Ur one shot I just have no words really very well done , keep it up 🙂 and update next part soon

  16. it was too gud

  17. very nice one dear waiting for the next

  18. Awesome nice loved it

  19. Amazing …… Waiting for the next part

  20. Tara its just ummmmm mind blowing, fantastic, marvelous, now I m lacking words so????????????????????????????????????????????? plz post next part asap

  21. wonderful concept

  22. nice i loved kunj to b so strict… actually m also very strict wen it comes to rules…. so… simply luved itttt….

  23. […] This is gonna be the last part…so plzzz read and comment. The link of last epi is as follows: http://www.tellyupdates.com/tei-love-beyond-age-limits-os-part-1/ Recap: twinkle a 21 yr girl is aspired to become an I.P.S officer. She joins the academy for […]

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