TEI Competition: Our Love is Too Late (One Shot)

Tashan-E-Ishq: The Author Recognition Competition
Our Love is Too Late

There was two 16 year old boy and a girl they met online after time they had grew to become the best of friends. The girl lives in new York and the boy lives in England.  There always turn to eo for help. Any how they would make eo feel so much better ( they r none other than twinj) both of them have trouble lives but they always had eo one night they were talking online
Tw- if I tell that I like u would u take it as a joke?
Ku-yes I would

Ku- because I know you don’t like me u love me 
Tw- how do u know
Ku- I don’t know but I know u love me and I love u too my sweet of friend
Tw-no u don’t love u as a friend
Lung went offline and tw cried and thought she had spoiled everything but later that night kunj rang her mobile she answered
Ku- hey its me

Tw-hello listen I am sor
Ku-no don’t be sry I love u too
Tw- really but? We won’t be able to see eo my parents would never let me go at this time I have all my exams
Ku-no know me too and my parents would never let me go to new York never
Tw- we…we could wait a few more years and we will be together 
Ku- I can wait…..UGH…..I have got to go now….I love u 
Tw- I love u too
For the next few years they had stayed together and there love grew. One day they were speaking online
Tw-  i have finish all of my exams and I have enough money
Ku-oh my God are u serious?
Tw-yes!!! When we r meeting?

They both planned the flight and a few days later kunj went to the airport. Tw’s plane was due to arrive and the breaking news came to the airport TV. The plane from new York  to England has crash landing leaving thousands of dead kunj broke into tears.
He went home and got a knife that night kunj was found dead in his bedroom when his parents found him they also found a pic of a girl in his hand and a small note. OUR LOVE IS TOO LATE

Tw’s parents were clearing her room they found her diary inside it they found a pic of a boy and a note underneath it. I WILL SEE HIM….EVEN IT KILLS ME


Hello, everyone. So, here was my One Shot. How was it? Drop down your comments below as I’d be waiting to know your views about it. Keep guessing me and do go through all the other updates being updated for this competition and guess those authors too. Kruti and Ria would be updating you all with the author names and their respective stories soon after the competition ends.

Best regards,
Ria, Kruti and the author

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  1. Ramya

    Amazing bt bit emotional
    N I think dis is roshini
    N I’m so sry if i m wrong

  2. too much imotional . i guess roshini di

  3. Roshni and no one else. Short and emotional.

  4. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous emotional sad os

  5. Baby

    ittttttt was too emotional and cute and short loved it….
    roshini di is it u or siddhi
    i cant guess anymore but it was amaizng emotional n cute story loved it….
    love u sis……. 😀

  6. Affaa

    Anarkali yes I’m correct… Really I don’t know… But os is outstanding… Keep it up..

  7. Nice and emotional i have a strong feeling that its roshni

  8. Zuha Fatima

    Awwwww….so sweet ♡♡♡ Loved it!! But I am not able to guess who has written it 🙁

  9. Maggi

    Very NYC…
    I think its Rosh

  10. Siddhi

    I guess it’s paavu

  11. I said earlier also in other os that the author is roshni but i guess this is rosh…

  12. I think its Roshni…sorry if I am wrong…awesom… fab.

  13. SidMin

    Loved it 🙂 It was so emotional I feel its written by Roshni 🙂 I hope I am right 🙂

  14. Chiku

    Very cute os❤️❤️️
    Really loved it

  15. Paavu

    i am nt so crrect at guesse bt i fell its rosh is it???????? bt os was vry emotional itn arulana omg nicc

  16. Amazing os.. i think it’s Roshini.. I’m sorry if I’m wrong!

  17. Ayu

    Rula diya naaa?? Ye shot Roshini ki lag rhi hai…yaar sorry if i’m wrong par te sab tu hi lag rahi hai…
    Anyways it was heart touching❤️

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