TEI Competition: Crush Wala Love (One Shot)

Tashan-E-Ishq: The Author Recognition Competition
Crush wala Love….

A beautiful garden is shown with a calm peaceful atmosphere and a lake is also there. A girl of around 20 is sitting there on a bench. She is wearing a maxi dress off white colour with floral print on it and also wearing pump heels of cream colour she have long silky hair and is having a beautiful hand paper diary as if its very special to it…. She is waiting for someone impatienly..the camera now reaches the airport a handsome dashing boy is seen coming out of the airport he sat in his audi and the car stops in front of this garden…he enters the garden n sees twinkle and shouts for her twinkle sees him and runs towards him and they both hug eachother as tightly as they could….kunj finally you are here twinkle said..(so the boy is kunj and the girl is twinkle vaise I think you all must have guessed it)kunj complements twinkle that she was looking beautiful and s*xy…..twinkle blushes and says you are no less hehe…..2 years twinkle I missed you soo much said kunj mee too kunj.
Now should we sit in our favourite place twinkle the lake twinkle smiled they both sat in the lake keeping there legs in it and started to discuss how these two years were for them while they were talking kunj saw the diary in twinkles hands so he asked her whats in that she didn’t spoke a word and just said after few seconds were three small and cute words(”I love you “ab yeh batana zaroor who all thot this) she said”its you kunj” kunj was stunned and surprised by her reply to this….they both looked into eachother eyes and smile formed on there pink lips…
Kunj said her to show it o him but she said no you see it when I will…befor she could complete kunj placed his…..(suspense mein hi rahrn kripya karke ke shanti banaye rakhen hahahahahahahahaaa)
Flashback
Sooo my sistos we are going in the flashback and we are in twinkles diary soo
It would be twinkle’s pov I hope you all don’t get confused……..
4th class
Kunj you remember well maybe not it was the class when I met you I saw you for the frst time although we were innocent kids hehehee but because of that stupid reva I hurt your thumb I closed the door on it and it was bleeding I didn’t knw what I exactly did but I took his thumb and sucked the blood because once I got hurt soo momsiiee did the same with me.. siyappa kar dia tha mene…kunj didn’t told the teacher he went to medical room and got medicated but that reva she told mam the lie that twinkle did it intentionally kunj came to know that it was reva who did it with twinkle he was hurt a bit..twinkle for the first time stood out of the class she felt guilty of hurting kunj and angry because of that reva….
One day I was sitting alone in the class kunj came and sat beside me as I saw him I started to cry I was guilty I told sry to him he told me it was fine and said friends we became good friends….
Days passed by and now twinj became good friends…. He use to call me siyappa queen….
PRESENT
A tear escaped my eyes as he said siyappa queen bilkul chup rhe kuch nhi bolegi tu or yaa he placed his hand on my mouth kis ksi naughty head ne kya kya socha batana zaroor……hahhahaaa..
Back to diary
6th class
There was annual day in our school our class got the rajhasthani dance theme all girls were wearing beautiful ghagra’s boys were playing games kunj was passing byme suddenly he stopped and complemented me that I was looking pretty I smiled and told him thanks and he was no less…………
I always use to help him in his work I don’t know why he had a habit of writing songs he was dictating me the song and I was writing but one day I came to know he use to like maya my classmate my best friend chinki told me I was hurt but didn’t show I was a kid I myself didn’t knew it……i could not speak up anything on this topic….kunj also stopped talking to me..
7th class
Kunj proposed maya but she told him that she likes someone else and could not accept his proposal I was happy inside hehehee but didn’t show it obvious how could I but kunj was a bit hurt…after sometme he was ohk we both started to play and now everything was normal accept one person who was me yup I fell in love of say it was my crush on kunj….
This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Been so long I forgot how to turn it up, up, up, up all night long Oh up, up all night long You, where the hell did you come from? You’re a different, different kind of fun And I’m so used to feeling numb Now, I’ve got pins and needles on my tongue Anticipating what’s to come Like a finger on a loaded gun I can feel it rising Temperature inside me Haven’t felt it for a lifetime This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Been so long I forgot how to turn it up, up, up, up all night long Oh up, up all night long This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Turned it on But I know you can take it up, up, up, up all night long Oh up, up all night long (all night long)

8th class
One day I was sitting on my seat in the classroom uvi came yeah first let me introduce uvi my good friend and kunj and uvi both sit behind me because of uvi I turn back and use to take glances of kunj….
Soo uvi came and he held my chin suddenly I didn’t knew what to do he held my chin and made me face him he was staring me wieredly I just stood up from there and ran from there I remember kunj saw this I was running and my foot tremebeld and I out of fear closed my eyes but realising nothing happened when I opened my eyes I saw kunj holding me tight……..i thanked him he saw the tears in my eyes and was angry at uvi …yup I came to know kunj that you cared for me because he was abusing me but you didn’t let him do that you always saved me from that person….
I, I wasn’t even gonna go out But I never would have had a doubt If I’d have known where I’d be now Your hands on my hips And my kiss on your lips Oh, I could do this for a lifetime This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Been so long I forgot how to turn it up, up, up, up all night long Oh, up, up all night long This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Turned it on But I know you can take it up, up, up, up all night long Oh up, up all night long

9th class
Finally I was out of that class I was now not in 8th and uvi was also not there………. Hate that person he was a good friend to me but had bad eye ….well leave him..
Sooo it was my library period that day when I was searching a book for myself in a corner shelf kunj came and showed me something by which we laughed like maniacs…first he told me hi pretty I was like what thehell shutapp we are in a library and then he kept his finger onmouth wala expression then he said me siyappa queen I said now what happended to this sadu saran he showed me rahul pointing to himself and then pointing to maya and making a heart we both seriously at that time bursted out into laugh whole class was seeing us we both said sorry and were going to settle down when he stopped me I was like what happened now soo kunj acted to take his heart and give it to me I was shocked and was like are you serious wala look and walked away we both use to steel glances of eachother but I don’t think soo that he use to like me…
10th class
And yes I was correct he didn’t use to like me that day I was sitting in class when he came and said listen siyappo ki maharani I was like kya hua tell me fast he said I like someone I was like what he was like yeah she is in our class I was like ohk soo who is she he told me it was mahi I was like mahi my sister and then I had to be like good kunj that’s great go propose her then he asked me will it be ohk with me if he tells me that mahi proposed him I was shocked I said great go enjoy and don’t talk to me and also that you are a big flirt maaannnnn…..he showed his 33 visbles to me now don’t ask 33 because one was me naa who was always with him he use to say this… I shooed him away at that time and then I again talked to him how could I stay away from him..
PRESNT
Good girl that’s like my queen I was like bas bas ohk and then he showed me his 33 visibles.
Back to diary
I was broken but was happy for my sister. But they both didn’t stayed in relationship till long and we were always best friends and use to chat with eachother even in exam days till 1 hour . Now our exams were gonna start one day he asked me for my notebook and everyone was like kunj you don’t need to ask from her yeh toh tuje de hi degi apni notebook..and all…by listening to this kunj became a bit red and I was like I think I should leave I didn’t lend my notebook to him that day when he came behind me to ask me for the notebook when I left from there I was like ofcourse how could I deny him now exams were over we chose different streams..it was our 11th and 12th and in different classes I don’t know how I spend dese two years of mine….
Until tonight I only dreamed about you I can’t believe I ever breathed without you Baby, you make me feel alive and brand new Bring it one more time, one more time This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Been so long I forgot how to turn it up, up, up, up all night long Oh, up, up all night long This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Turned it on But I know you can take it up, up, up, up all night long Oh, up, up all night long This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Been so long I forgot how to turn it up, up, up, up all night long Oh, up, up all night long This is my heartbeat song and I’m gonna play it Turned it on But I know you can take it up, up, up, up all night long Oh, up, up all night long

11th class
We both use to get to see eachother and talk sometimes he would come in my class in break or sometimes I would visit his class for some same subject wala chakkar but really I was jelous of him flirting with others…
12th class…………
Well now these two years passed by hook or crook and now it was my farewell………
FAREWELL
Huh………..the most special day of my life… I ever or say never say never thought that my farewell would be this much special for me I was standing in the corner I was enjoying with chinki mili shreyoo aami maya and mahi kunj came there and asked me for a dance I was stunned that even I asked ME?
He said ofcourse you only…I smiled and we both danced really close and my heartbeat was rising each second I was with him sooooooooo close and are bodies were perfectly embraced with eachother and I was on cloud nine……
Hey, I was doing just fine before I met you I drink too much and that’s an issue But I’m OK Hey, you tell your friends it was nice to meet them But I hope I never see them Again I know it breaks your heart Moved to the city in a broke-down car And four years, no calls Now you’re looking pretty in a hotel bar And I, I, I, I, I can’t stop No, I, I, I, I, I can’t stop So, baby, pull me closer In the back seat of your Rover That I know you can’t afford Bite that tattoo on your shoulder Pull the sheets right off the corner Of that mattress that you stole From your roommate back in Boulder We ain’t ever getting older We ain’t ever getting older We ain’t ever getting older

While the dance was going on we both went to a corner and and…..
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KUNJ’S POV
I proposed her she was shocked I said I LOVE YOU TWINKLE..
I don’t know when it happened but I felt like left out after 10th class when we were in different sections although we use to meet but for very less time and twinkle its not fake wala love or nahi ishq wala love but “CRUSH WALA LOVE” twinkle was stunned at the last statement she directly looked into my eyes and hugged me as tight as she could….
You look as good as the day I met you I forget just why I left you, I was insane Stay and play that Blink-182 song That we beat to death in Tucson, OK I know it breaks your heart Moved to the city in a broke-down car And four years, no call Now I’m looking pretty in a hotel bar And I, I, I, I, I can’t stop No, I, I, I, I, I can’t stop So, baby, pull me closer In the back seat of your Rover That I know you can’t afford Bite that tattoo on your shoulder Pull the sheets right off the corner Of that mattress that you stole From your roommate back in Boulder We ain’t ever getting older We ain’t ever getting older We ain’t ever getting older

TWINKLE’S POV
I was not able to believe that kunj proposed me he said he love me and I was not able to believe it but I could not say this time anything else except I LOVE YOU TOO KUNJ..
So, baby, pull me closer In the back seat of your Rover That I know you can’t afford Bite that tattoo on your shoulder Pull the sheets right off the corner Of that mattress that you stole From your roommate back in Boulder We ain’t ever getting older We ain’t ever getting older No, we ain’t ever getting older

Now it was SELFIE TIME
Kunj and me were taking selfie when he kissed me and someone clicked our pick…
N the pics were these…

Sooooooo now we are back in PRESENT
Kunj two years back after farewell you went to Australia and I went to London and now finally we are back and seriously I missed you much both said together I love you again said together now kunj could not stop he pulled twinkle closer and asked for permission with eyes and she nodded and they both kissed eachother very passionately………(guys note this is my os that is why the garden in which they are that is of my dreams and which is empty and twinj are alone…………)

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Hello, everyone. So, here was my One Shot. How was it? Drop down your comments below as I’d be waiting to know your views about it. Keep guessing me and do go through all the other updates being updated for this competition and guess those authors too. Kruti and Ria would be updating you all with the author names and their respective stories soon after the competition ends.

Best regards,
Ria, Kruti and the author

15 comments

  1. Malhotrarochika

    TOOOOO GOOOOD YRRR….TOOO GOOOD …SACH ME…YRRR ITNA ACHA KAISE LIKH LETE HO…MERI TOH DEATH HI HO JAANI HAI….SACH ME…MINDBLOWING OS😍😍😘

  2. SidVee

    Wow this is an amazing os.. really loved it.. umm, well I’m not able to guess this author.. but whoever it is, hats off to you girl.. U rocked it 🙂

  3. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    Sorry…cant guess…but it was awesomee❤️
    I never realised before par yahan par to itne saare wonderful writers hai😍😍

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