TEENAGE CRUSH OS

Hi friends ur friend divya is back with os dis is my 7th os so I came with different concept tat which I heard in fm long back prg called love guru…

Those who bash or bush my work as like ur giving salary for my work especially in fb pls try to understand if one girl writing means if u can u appreciate or else u keep quite bec wat can I do with ur bad comments with ur criticism or with bad feedback wheather I. M taking master degree with so much efforts I. M bringing new concepts ideas even i.m so much busy I. M spending my whole day for u u keep ur tat dis with u moreover I m sensitive girl and I. M angry bird if u make me angry I will turn has 100 watt blub ..πŸ’‘πŸ’‘πŸ’‘

So bashers beware of me.

And dis os is dedicated to one who crazy about actors and one who die for them like jubra fan..

And specially I think to dedicate to anup and joyti for Thier birthday but I can’t write bec due to my busy work sorry once again and read and tel ur opinion..

Copyright right issue from my brain and radio city 91.1 fm.

Let’s begin

A girl of age 13 knocking d door mumma mumma wat u doing can’t u open d door wait shona y ur shouting like dis as u keep something in house( s dis our shona Shekhar godia d only child of her parents sumi and Shekhar
Shona: how much time I want to tell u don’t close d door while I. M returning from school
Sumi: shona y ur angry I. M preparing lunch for my little daughter go and fresh up I hv make ur fav dish ur fav kheer..
Shona: oh mom kheer ah( she thinks in mind he too like kheer know) wow I want now only she runs to kitchen and pour kheer to bowl and moves to her room and bolt d door and on d TV swaragini swaragini song plays in bg..oh sanskar if one sec late I would hv miss u darli, do u know sanskar today my mom means ur future MIL made u kheer..so today I feed u k she came near to TV screen and give one bite to sanskar and another bite to her like wise she finish off..sanskar how many days I shd keep my love within me only i want to do something something something wat something ya I will search u in fb she took her mobile and search has sanskar she didn’t find sanskar name later she think oh I want to put his real name Wats his real name oh varun kapoor k now let search and send request to him she send friend request if he doesn’t accept my request wat to do let msg him in advance, she types hi sanskar I. M shona I. M biggest fan in d world I may skip my food but I want skip swaragini serial in tat ur my fav actor ur acting is superb especially u look cute and when u cry I also cry when u smile I also smile ur just sweetest actor I told my friends to watch dis serial they also following ur serial without missing I like u so much if u accept my friend request I. M d luckiest girl pls accept my friend request..later she went to washroom and fresh up and comes and took her book to do home work as she has to finish her work and study before 9.30 bec her sanskar coming on TV at tat time only know so..later she finish her work and take her note book to study but she can’t study she keep on thinking tat wheather sanskar receives her msg wheather he accept her req or wat later she watch serial and finish her dinner soon she goes to room and bolt d door took her mobile and open her fb I’d she gets notification as varun kapoor accept ur friend request she gets immense happy her dearest actor her love accept his friend request soon she send msg to him hi sanskar I. M so so happy u accept my friend request thank u sanskar thank u so much ur so sweet sanskar now also I. M seeing ur serial only without seeing ur face I can’t get sleep sanskar once again thank u so much and says gn and sleep well bec tomorrow u hv to go to shooting u sleep well bye tc

Here varun place( here varun is unmarried boy age 21 years )
His mobile beeps he sees msg from shona gododia
By seeing her msg he thinks oh another crazy fan and reply to her msg thanks for ur love and affection keep supporting me and gn tc too..

Later shona used to msg vk daily morning afternoon in class Evening night etc she told her classmates tat vk is her fb frnd he msg me daily I like him so much her frnds thought she is crazy about him she may saying like dis days goes on daily shona send edits to varun..varun says thanks and all..and her parents daily gives 10 rs pocket money she daily go to cyber and take print out of sanskar image and paste in sheets and make book with full sanskar image and send to sanskar adress sanskar receives it..πŸ‘¦πŸ»πŸ‘² has he not object to his fans ..tat too she is crazy fan later one day shona asks sanskar number tat she want to hear his voice and want to say something in phone and gives her no I. M waiting for ur reply..Sanskar thinks so much but one think echo in his hear I. M ur true fan..as a fans wish he give her phone no she says thank u so much she daily keeps on talking in free time sometime he is busy in shooting and all and she calls she used to say today in pink blazer u looks so beautiful most of all dress u look pretty but when swara kiss u on cheek I can’t tolerate bec I should only hv right to kiss on ur cheek ..he gets shocked and thinks as she is kidding like crazy fan…daily she change what’s app images she put sanskar images with caption and writing status like ur my sweetheart ur my breath u lies inside me I love u so much sanskar…sanskar with or without notice he won’t take it as serious ….one day she thinks to confess his love she calls to him and he didn’t receive after sometime he receives her call she asks y ur not picking my call he says I hv some work she says more than recieving my call u hv other work ah k now r u free I want to say something he says tell me she says I love u sanskar I love u so much I can’t leave without u if u won’t love me means I don’t know wat I do I will become mad I even won’t love my parents as like u..I like u tat much sanskar pls love me back i love u sanskar ur my love everything…sanskar says wat r u crazy now u go and take rest I will call u in morning and he cuts d call she goes on msging I love u I love u I love u I love u I love u love u so much he gets 100 msg he doesnt bother morning she gets up again calls to sanskar no but it was not going somewat like not reachable type after tat she goes to school she dont hv intrest to listen class she keep on thinking y he is not recieving my call or msg y is not going y he avoiding me..and her friends asks y she is dull today she says nothing, in dis days she avoid talking with Thier classmates bec she involved in sanskar world…later she came to home her mother told to had lunch she disagree and take her mobile call his no but its not connecting she got angry she thought he has block his msg and call then to his fb I’d she message ur blocking my no ah now its 4 exact 10: 0 clock u shd call me and u shd say i love u and u shd accept my proposal or else I don’t know wat I will do.. even I m ready to die !!!😲😲

Later 8:0 clock finished 9 also finished swaragini finished at exact 10. She comes to room she took her mobile call to his no again not reachable then open her fb I’d msg also not delivered she thinks he neglecting me I love him so much but he won’t love me for whom sake I want to leave >> then she opens d door and moves to father mother bedroom They r sleeping peacefully and she says sorry papa ma I. M going I can’t leave without sanskar then she goes to bathroom she cries whole heartedly and says I m going away from u..u didn’t won’t my love know u be happy i will go and she took acid bottle kept in bathroom and start drinking!!!!!!

Here sanskar busy in day and night as he is busy in shooting he inactive all his account….at exact 11 he finish his shooting and open his cell he get 100 missed call and many msges like I love u and all lastly he c even i.m ready to die !! Then he calls to her no she is not picking later he receives call and screames shona!!!!!

Friends do u want know what happen to our shona read below

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All 3 standing outside doctor Icu ward doctor comes and says she is out of danger they enter d room. Sanskar comes to swara and asks r u alright she says sorry sir today I made a big mistake if i died i would loss my parents, they hv given so much to me they didn’t object anything but due to attraction I thinks has love i make big mistake sorry sir then he says it’s k dis is d age one who do mistake but v should rectify it..c shona v r serial actor v too hv our own life family etc v love u as a fan of mine i can love u as my friend but I can’t love u other than tat ur so small in dis age attraction happen tats common in love but u shd take suggestions from frnds family u shd share with them and take solution from them. death only is not solution for ur prb today v r Thier tomorrow v will go but ur parents will stay with u long time they made u dis much big do u think once about ur parents if u die means they only shd cry not v we may feel papachi tats it not more than tat so pls rectify ur mistake don’t fall in dis attraction of love..after some days u will grow up u stand on ur own feet u love some one or marry a person show by ur parents now forget all dis be happy and talk to ur parents she says papa ma sorry I won’t repeat dis mistake I love u pls forgive me….later
Shekhar sumi thanks sanskar for saving my daughter life she is d only child for us if something happens to her v would hv died ur not only reel hero ur real hero for my daughter life thank u then he left from Thier

Lastly do u know how sanskar come to hospital whom told him how shona survive here d answer…

Shona drank acid ( but it’s not powerful as real acid it’s diluted means 3/4th water+1/4 th acid = diluted acid ) She falls down..and Shekhar heard d voice they get up and comes outside d room and c door was open they rush to outside and c washroom light is on and knock d door no response and soon breaks d door and c d scenario tat her child lying on bathroom side bottle is empty shona mother screams shona wat u hv done Shekhar call ambulance immediately later Shekhar came to know shona made sucide bec of sanskar he calls to him and told about shona..later he arrive hospital…

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MORAL : FRNDS do u know y i hv wrote dis os bec many girls like dis only they like hero and heroine so much they love them they become mad about them they dream about them many love actors more than Thier parents friends do u know wat they too hv Thier own life they hv Thier own imagination in serial they show them has hero but real life many is zero..many suffers a lot for simply to get fandom they came to acting field but many comes like passion many comes to fullfill Thier stomach hungryness due to acting.. frnds dont blindly falls for them if u like Thier acting u tel them appreciate them don’t love too much as thier ur life, today serial is Thier tomorrow it may go off it wont come through out ur journey… Here sanskar/ varun is genuine man so he doesn’t misuse her but no one is like him many misuse like fake I’d phone no..if u like it tel him tat I like u so much tat dis if u feel u can’t leave without him u meet tat actor and tell i’m sinciar fan my like converts into love if u agree v can marry tat dis etc if disagree or if he has any relationship or he doesn’t like u means leave him freely bec his life his choice..when u hv life means he too hv his own life then too much sweet his injurious to health like loose motion..if u die for unknown person or for any actor he won’t cry he will be happy u only loss dr think about ur parents leave for them sake not for unknown sake u may get 100 people like tat actor but u won’t get 1 caring parents one who feel for ur tears..many use our love and they misuse it so pls aware of it…lastly I want to say one thing in our language one serial is coming and end in 2014 it’s remake of is pyar ko kya nam dena tat serial hero showed in high business tycoon very stylish very but real life he is nothing recently he died his age 26 when he was doing another serial he getting stomach pain later they told has appendix he went to his village to arrange money later it’s turn high he admitted to government hospital then he died friends no one comes to funeral his parents only with him till last..v fans c in TV and feels papachi tats it.. nothing in acting anyone can do acting only thing v doesn’t get suitable platform or v hide within urself tats it..so acting u take as acting..film u take has film singing u take as singing only nothing more than tat everything has some limit v die for them care for them..but they didn’t bother for us they r happy with Thier life family etc only v r dieing fighting tat dis etc..pls some girls pls stop dis especially teenage girls be careful it’s d time ur mind not on ur control so v called has transition period many stress storm is Thier if ur in dis type prb call love guru and take suggestion or else call me u know my no knw it’s simple u dail 1001001001… thank u

Sorry for mistakes bye tc

42 comments

  1. Mica

    |Registered Member

    waaa’….. i love this OS, Divya! you always bring moral value to your story !
    good job dear!
    about the story, somehow i put the blame on the parent, as parent they should put all of attention to their children (here shona just 13 years old, she need parent guidance to watch TV or any entertainment),

    in my house, under 13 years old just allowed to watch disney channel, nat geo (if it’s eligible for children), animal planet, we even didn’t allowed to watch cartoon network.

    another thing i hate the most.. the story about suicide the shown as the TRUE LOVE..
    uuggghh… in the other side, the parent forget to teach their children about the value of life…. soo… that is…whenever they broken heart, they will commit suicide to prove their true love…oohh KID!

    • Divyashankar

      |Author

      But now days 5 th std girl using what’s app fb twitter etc because parents give so much freedom because they want to use as thier frnd use it tats it Dr then some parents won’t know tat thier childrens do dis type..moreover most of them parents r free oriented they leave freely as they can’t enjoy atleast thier child can enjoy it..due to u know one thing recently one girl trying to marry 67 old man bec their parents won’t giving any love so..

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        hahaha yups Dear! that why i said it is parent mistakes
        most parent giving freedom to their children as love.. but somehow it’s wrong, we can’t deny about technology, just simply monitoring them..
        my sister always remind my niece/nephew about their korean fav actors, asked about them and simply tell them that their fav just a human bla bla bla…
        just like my mom told me.. huh! πŸ˜€

  2. Radhika..

    |Registered Member

    what to say its out of words to describe not getting the words to describe a simple story of attraction give so much morals its true many people do this but what will they get in return nothing even the actor or actress today on heights if their next film or serial didnot work out in some years noone even remember their names and in teenage everyone mind says onething and heart something as the ag is like that but by thinking about everyone family friends our life carrier everything just one or two time may we got to know what is right is wrong a simple attraction may take our life even today generation are like this especially teenage they do suciside for small small things if they can commit suciside than they can live their life also because there is how much difficulities inlife facing them is much easier than facing suciside if we have guts to die than we will surely have guts to li: ur os give a great moral with many small small morals love the way u describe and write on a topic like this loved it and whoever do bashing and all what will they get by this….. nothing just ingnore them because if we ignore than one day they got to know that we don’t have a effevt on it or give answer with postive comment like thanku for ur comment and words and i love ur writting very very much and the topic too and a happy birthday to ur friends jyoti and anup may god fullfill they every wish and bless and thanku for giving such a beatifull os there are so many tings to tell about this but no words to describe them its just out of words loved it keep writting πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

    • Divyashankar

      |Author

      ThX Dr I usaually bring good story only dr I wrote 6 Os with different concept tat till today no one has written but u c only few commented really pupil won’t accept real value stories I don’t know y pupil like dis ThX for commenting..

      • Radhika..

        |Registered Member

        don’t worry one day everyone got to know the value of morals and the stories u write and the thing is not about more or less comments don’t think about it one day may be there are so much comments that u can just see the numbers and read but can’t reply to that much don’t worry and can u give me the link of ur previous one shot i wanna read them alsoπŸ˜ƒ

    • Divyashankar

      |Author

      Dr I wrote 1) she left me
      2) naughtNess madness
      3) blind love
      4) wedding night
      5) only for ur friendship
      6) I. M not pr*stitute but still I have a past
      7) teenage crush

      But telly del my os because I updated long back but she left me I have updated in haya page as it’s my first os related to mangal mukki please read tat one soon I will post in my timeline and I will inform you Dr. .I don’t know how to give link if u in fb I can send u my profile name is divya shankar..thx for commenting I agree with ur points..I won’t bother for other thing

      • Radhika..

        |Registered Member

        Thanks for the names I will search them and haya page name : A SAGA OF SWASAN AND HAYA yes I am in fb I will search for ur profile if I get thannsend u request my I’d is radhika puri hmmm never bother for the things take care and keep smiling ☺

    • Divyashankar

      |Author

      Dr I wrote 1) she left me
      2) naughtNess madness
      3) blind love
      4) wedding night
      5) only for ur friendship
      6) I. M not pr*stitute but still I have a past
      7) teenage crush

      But telly del my os because I updated long back but she left me I have updated in haya page as it’s my first os related to mangal mukki please read tat one soon I will post in my timeline and I will inform you Dr. .I don’t know how to give link if u in fb I can send u my profile name is divya shankar..thx for commenting I agree with ur points..I won’t bother for other thing
      Bye tc

  3. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    I totally agree with ur all words n thoughts… all thus incidents are happening that too rapidly among us n in our society… they love their fav that muchh ki they can goo to any extent too prove their love or u can say their madness…
    Few months ago i alsoo witnessed a same scene but the difference is she cut her wrist to prove her friends dat she loved her fav singer d most then others..

    Hopee they never doo loke that… but honestly speaking i alsoo got dreams about only SWASAN….*WINK

    …thnk u Divya for sharing ur motivational view regarding this kinda topic…

  4. Maryam

    |Registered Member

    It was a perfect message to the fans like me….
    I am a die hard fan of ATIF ASLAM…previously I used to cry all night thinking that I love him so much N he didn’t even know that I exist or not….he was like my breath…actually not was but is my breath my life..,I love him more than anything in this world….I am just attached to my IPaid day n night surfing Internet for Atif aslam….my Ipaid is full of his pics/songs/videos/…actually my friends consider me crazy bcz in school I always talk about him…whenever his new release is here I force my friends to listen to it or else I will end my friendship with them….
    I just can’t control myself….the more I try to divert my mind from him..the more I am attached to him….

    • Maryam

      |Registered Member

      But now I get to know that nothing is more important than your life..your family….
      ya I like him…but that doesn’t mean that I would cross my limits…,my parents haven’t taught me this so how can I do these cheap things like suicide/running from home..n so on..
      My parents even didn’t let me wear any type of clothes other than our cultural clothes…I am in 10th standard n after so much of begging I got a Ipaid n the permission to use my mum phone in 2 hours max for 2 days…

    • Divyashankar

      |Author

      Ur just like me I too same I always speaks about serial and film matter only now also I won’t leave tat habit I too love actors but not so much like suicide and all I like has my dream boy and a lover boy type not more than my parents my mom now also scold if I c any serial without missing mom say u want to c dis boy I don’t know how much u wl c u will become mad or loss iron eye

      • Maryam

        |Registered Member

        Actually my mum is a bit strict..so I always watch tv/use tab secretly..she even didn’t know that I am a member of this site…
        But she never gave me this much freedom that I could perform these stupid activities….u can check my profile it’s full of Atif aslam pics….
        my gallery is full of his pics too..hehe

    • Divyashankar

      |Author

      Ur dito same I too watch serial in YouTube I didn’t miss one episode also but due to voot now you tube won’t uploading so voot only then my frnds scold me in ur mobile full serial actor photo only del it but I won’t del from 7 years I. M anant means navya serial hero shaheer sheikh fan even i like most of d serial actors one one time I dislike but again I continue same format..

  5. Bresh

    This is so true…I think people should understand the difference between love nd attraction specially at young age…hats of to u for writing this nd I don’t know y people bash u for ur work…ur amazing nd ignor the basher

  6. shiksha

    Awesome,well its true there r some crazy fans not only girls or boys but from every categories but majority is the teenagers,youngsters more specifically immature adolescents.
    Good message divya.

  7. Anniya

    |Registered Member

    Awsm yr, truly you always come with diff ideas. I too think you right we should not mad behind someone. Moreover suicide is not any option….
    Keep writing , I will wait for another amazing concept from you…

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