‘Tears from your eyes, are ‘The blood from my heart’ Last part-2

HELLO ALL…… This is Moonlight_luver back with the next part!..Thank you soooo much for all the likes silent readers.. can’t express my gratitude to you all!!.. I’m not stretching with my speech.. hope you’ve read the previous part!… let’s off to reading!..

Guys, whoever reading this part firstly can go to the previous part touching here… Again credit goes to Nandu, my buddy…

‘Tears from your eyes, are ‘The blood from my heart’ Last part-1

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Shivaay had promised that nothing will happen to him but his appearance was killing her.. Shivaay understood what was bothering Anika.. Shivaay raised his hands and slowly held his ears pleadingly so as to ask forgiveness…. Anika smiled between her gasp seeing him and ran to him from slow to speedily.. Shivaay ran to her and both hugged TIGHTER then TIGHT!!!….. Shivaay pulled her up hugging while she crossed her arms round his neck and clinched on to his shirt tightly… Everyone smiled witnessing both of them together!… they moved out so as to give them private space… Shivika were lost in their own world… Anika was crying so badly which was so intolerable for Shivaay.. he pulled her more close by her waist while Anika was busy in brushing his hair..

“ I love you Anika.. I love you so much!!…. love you!!!.. “ Shivaay was chanting them kissing the crook of her neck.. Anika smiled but more she cried pulling him more closely… Anika pulled him so close that there weren’t a single space between them… both souls were getting their propitiation back feeling each-others touch…. Their hug lasted long but they weren’t aware of it.. finally they slowly parted while Shivaay looked into her eyes deeply..

“ Anika I lov….” Just then the sudden slap over his cheek made him surprise…

“ AOuuu… that hurts..! “ complained Shivaay..

“ how many times I told you..huh? how many times I told you to leave me…. How many times I told you… why didn’t you go? Why didn’t you leave me? “ Anika hit his chest and moved forth while he took steps back accordingly.. “Have you looked into the mirror? You…you are injured Shivaay!… what were you saying? Nothing will happen to me! Right? Are you any superhero or something that you won’t get hurt? “ she again hit his chest moving forth.. “ why are you so stubborn Shivaay? Why couldn’t you just leave me?.. couldn’t you just let go off me… why you did all those Shivaay! Why!.. “ her anger soon turned into cry!.. she kept hitting him while Shivaay was witnessing the cutest Anika ever.. he held her hands over his chest lovingly… Anika was looking down crying..

“hey..hey..hey… don’t cry!.. if I had let you gone, then what about me? I can’t see you with anyone else… you know that I can’t live without you… “ he cupped her face while she still was facing down.. she hugged him again crying out loud… Shivaay held her tight and caressed her hair loving..

“ Sh..Shivaay.. I..I was scared!… I was so scared!.. HE.. HE was beating you and..and I..I couldn’t do anything… and..and In hospital..you weren’t talking to me.. you were..were so still and.. and injured.. I..I was broken Shivaay!!… I.. I’m sorry Shivaay!… bcoz of me..bcoz of me, you are hurt.. I’m… sorry Shivaay… “

“ Anika stop it… stop… I’m ok now… and everything is okay… it’s fine.. “ Shivaay whispered kissing her hair… Anika broke the hug and looked him unbelievably…

“ Ok? It’s not Ok Shivaay! It’s not.. you were in Ventilator… you know what that thing is? That’s..that’s just a machine.. that’s such a machine where you can hold your life.. depending on a machine to live is not OK!… “ Anika was complaining while Shivaay was trying to stop her talks..

Shivaay “ Ok..Ok I agree It’s not Okay.. but see I’m in front of you now.. Ok? I’m good and I’m fine.. “ Anika gently touched his head which was injured.. Shivaay closed his eyes feeling pain but didn’t utter anything..

“ is it hurting? “ Anika lowered her voice.. Shivaay held her hand tight nodding negatively.. just then Anika winced in pain feeling strange…

“ what? What happened? “ Shivaay opened her palm and saw burn inside… Shivaay was shocked to see such a spot…

“ how did this happen? Anika answer me.. how did this happen? “ Shivaay held her shoulder and with that move, she felt more pain… Shivaay understood that she’s not fine… he tried to open up the sleeve but Anika didn’t allow..

“ it’s nothing Shivaay.. there’s nothing… “ but Shivaay didn’t hear her a one… he opened up her sleeve and saw iron box printed on to her arm… it had become red due to the pain.. Shivaay looked Anika with disbelief and slowly touched it which made Anika skip a breath…

“ how did this happen Anika? I asked how did this happen? “ Shivaay sharpened his voice angrily…

“ Shivaay..it was… it’s just… “

“ did HE hurt you? HE did this to you? “ Anika didn’t answer but looked down giving an assurance to Shivaay… he moved out but Anika held his hand tight..

“ No Shivaay please don’t do anything…

“ Anika just let me go…. “

“ Shivaay please…please… it’s enough… please Shivaay…

“ Anika how can you…how can you say this? You’re…you’re hiding HIS sins…don’t know what all things you’re hiding from me.. I won’t spare HIM today… “ he moves forth but Anika stood in front..

“ Shivaay please.. for me.. let HIM go..please… for me!!… I don’t care what HE did to me…I don’t want to remember those incidents…. What counts is that you’re with me.. that’s enough for me.. just let HIM go.. I only want you!!.. “ Anika’s those lines were far enough to melt down Shivaay’s anger… he took her hands in his and touched them gently..

“ Is it hurting? “ Shivaay lowered his voice.. Anika nodded negatively smiling.. Shivaay caressed her face a kissed her hands lovingly.. he kissed her fingers and palm passionately while Anika kept looking him with full love…

“ I’m sorry Anikaa… “

“ why are you saying sorry?  “ Anika inquired…

“ I couldn’t keep my promise.. I said that nothing will ever happen to you I had promised to keep you safe but..but.. but you had to live with HIM… I’m.. I’m so sorry!… “ Shivaay looked down with guilt..

“Now you’re hurting me with these lines…. Don’t say sorry!.. it’s only bcoz of you that I’m..I’m alive.. I must thank you!.. “

“ and it’s bcoz of you that I’m alive… if you hadn’t called Omru then I don’t know what would have happened… I must thank you!.. “ they both smiled with filled eyes and rested each other’s forehead over other’s…

“ I love you Anika.. “

“ Hmmm….. “ Shivaay looked her with disbelief..

“ uh, hello.. I said ‘I love you’ and you’re just humming! Hope you know when one guy says I love you so what should the other one say?”

‘ Oh!!… So Shivaay didn’t hear what I said in hospital.. Means he doesn’t know that I’ve already confessed my love to him.. ‘ thought Anika..

“Oyye..where are you lost? “Shivaay snapped before her..

“ Uh? Nothing.. I…I was just thinking what I must answer… “

“ what?? You..you don’t know what to say? “ Shivaay was shocked.. Anika just gave a smile as reply..  Oh God! Whom I have chosen as my life.. “

“ huh? Did you say something? “ asked Anika giggling…

“ kuch nehi meri maaa….God, don’t give this fate to anyone else.. Instead of hearing this I could have die…….. “  the very moment Anika slapped him hard… Shivaay saw Anika with tear-filled eyes…

“ don’t you..don’t you ever say that!…not in front of me… If..If you say that again then… then I..I myself will kill you and… and I’ll also die…u..understand? “ she said in a fully cracked voice with index finger pointing at him… Shivaay was shocked with her response… she took back her finger and moved closer regretfully.. she caressed his cheek where she slapped with her fingers and placed her thumb over his lips…

“I’m..I’m sorry.. I..I just I.. couldn’t control… I’m sorry.. “ Anika cried stammering blaming herself.. Shivaay held her hand while his other hand wiped off her tears…

“ Anika..Anika relax.. I was just joking… “ Shivaay said in his airy tone..

“ I..I know.. Shivaay don’t say such things.. even if it’s joke just don’t say… I’m not that strong to hear all that…I’m..I’m sorry Shivaay… did that hurt? I’m… I.. I sorry! Forgive me.. I couldn’t stop.. I’m sorry……ss..sorry Sh..Shivaay…. “ she moved more close crying..

“Anika hey….hey hey..stop..stop.. it’s ok.. even your slap has a sweetness… don’t cry.. your cry is hurting me..” he cupped her face kissing her eyes.. she kissed his cheek where she slapped saying sorry.. she kissed many times and finally turned into a tight hug…. They both hugged for long opening their hearts out… it was the time when other family members entered back and they were quite surprised to see them still hugging… both Shivika were enjoying that moment and they wished this could never end.. others smiled at each other while Pinky cleared her throats in order to bring them back.. but Shivika didn’t move a bit..

“ lagtha hai ki bhayya aur bhabhi ab kabhi waapas nehi aayegi… “ Rudhr teased making Om to pat his head…

“ chotti maa, I’ll try… “ Om said and he roughly cleared his throat but still Shivika weren’t aware of their arrival.. just then Shivaay opened his eyes and was shocked to see them glaring at them… Shivaay slowly took his hands back but Anika didn’t…

“ Anikaa… leave…. “ he whispered…

“ why? I’m hugging my husband!!… “ Anika answered hugging him more tightly..

“ Oh My Mata Anikaa… “ this sound was the biggest shock for Anika… she swiftly moved back and stood as if she’s a stranger….

“ Mom… when did you come? “

“ I’m always here Shivaay.. seems like you just arrived!.. “ Pinky teased while everyone joined in laugh…

“ Now.. every problems are solved.. Thank God that everything went perfect.. “ Dadi exclaimed happily.. Anika neared the Oberoi’s and held Pinky’s hand emotionally..

“ Thank you for trusting me aunty ji.. Thank you… “

“ hmm… sorry se tho better thank you hi hai.. and one more correction.. aunty nehi, Moms.. “ Pinky hugged Anika while Jhanvi caressed her hair..Dadi too joined the hug along with Jhanvi….

“ Now who’s gonna hug me? “ Shivaay asked confused…

“ bhayya, these women have become one team.. I think it’s only us left.. “ Rudhr said and hugged Shivaay lovingly…

“ huh? O bro moment without me.. “ soon Om too joined them..

“ We’re so happy that you’re back Shivaay!.. “ Om added hugging Shivru… Gauri was so happy seeing Om happy..Anika was also loving this brothers love.. she saw Gayathri and Raja standing few steps far.. she neared Gayathri and recollected all her love to everyone…

“you were a great mother.. but I wasn’t a good daughter… I always wondered why my Appa married you!.. I always had a thought that how Gauri became your daughter… and today, I got the answers of all that whys and How’s… Even though I wasn’t your daughter, you gave me all the love and respect which you gave to Gauri…you never showed any difference between me and her!.. Thank you Ammaa…. “ Anika completed making Gayathri fill with joy.. her last word was only required to make Gayathri the happiest one ever!…

“hope I can call you Amma.. “ Anika asked but as answer Gayathri pulled her into an emotional hug!… Shivaay smiled witnessing them both… Anika hugged Raja soon and cried thinking everything he has done for her..

“ thank you Apppa…. For everything… “ Anika spelled hugging him like his princess….

“ you’re always my little girl Anu!.. “ Raja hugged her back lovingly… This time he wasn’t afraid of loosing her but showered all the love upon her for whicc he was waiting…. Gauri too joined the family hug soon!.. Aniri moved back and took their blessings happily… Shivaay was witnessing the true love of a family.. for years Anika was craving for this moment and finally she got it… Shivaay moved forward but stopped seeing them happy with each other… Om understood what he was thinking.. He supported Shivaay and signaled him to go for it… Shivaay stood in front of Raja looking down..

“ Uncle.. I.. had promised that I’ll protect Anika but I’m.. I’m sorry I couldn’t.. but please just do let that go from your mind!.. Uncle, I know Anika and my marriage happened in such a situation that nobody can agree that..I never loved Anika but I don’t know when I started to… Uncle I still remember why you took Anika away from us… but trust me Uncle, there’s no such relation between me and Ragni… She’s just my friend.. nothing more… it was just a misunderstanding… Now Anika has become my life.. my everything!..our marriage happened without the presence of any priest, rituals, family nothing and no one was there..that’s why I wish to marry Anika again… with all your permission!… “ Anika was completely melted by Shivaay’s words.. “ Uncle, if I and Anika became together, then that might be love.. but marriage is a togetherness of both families… If you won’t agree then this marriage will not happen!.. but if you accept this then that would be best thing happening in my life… if you don’t wish to then nothing will happen!.. coz I not only want Anika but her everything!… Everything!!.. you also Uncle… “ Shivaay said with lot many expectations in his eyes… Raja looked Gayathri who nodded her head happily.. he changed his eyes to Anika..

“ Please Appa… “ Anika lowered her voice in a pleading tone… Raja looked Shivaay and let go of a weak smile.. he held Shivaay’s shoulder..

“ whatever you did for us cannot be atoned by anything… I think it’s for the first time that a man is proposing bride’s father instead of the bride… “

“huh? “ Shivaay was confused..

“ Go and propose your Dulhaniya..!!.. “ Raja smiled Patting his shoulder…Everyone’s face glowed up with happiness.. Anika was so happy so as Shivaay.. Gauri hugged Anika and moved back to Oberoi’s…. Shivaay slowly neared Anika smiling while Anika looked him with equal love.. he slowly held Anika’s hand and sat on his one leg in a perfect proposing position….Shivaay looked into her eyes deeply and gathered courage to say……

Anikaaa…. Will you marry me?

Anika was completely happy hearing that line… her eyes reflected the emotions Shivaay had..they both stood there for minutes recollected all their loving times…

“uh, bhabhi.. Bhayya can’t stay like that for too long… “ Rudhr informed smiling..

“just shut up Rudy “ said Shivaay looking him.. “ Anika, please say yes.. “ Shivaay only wanted to hear that single word from her!…

“ Akka, say it na!… “ pleaded Gauri..Anika looked Shivaay who was at the peak to hear her answer… Anika opened her mouth to answer for which Shivaay was dying..

“uh… NO!!.. “ said Anika….

“wait…what?? “ Shivaay stood up confused as well everyone… “ why you said NO? “

“ what question is that? You asked me will I marry you, and I said NO.. that’s it.. “ Anika said smiling… everyone understood her prank..

“ but why? “ Shivaay wasn’t ready to give up…

“ uh, bcoz I didn’t like the way you proposed.. I like loud and crazy proposes.. “ informed Anika…

“Achhaaa…. “ Shivaay sighed looking her with his sharp and craze eyes.. Anika raised her eye-brows challenging him… others were enjoying their nok-jokes laughingly.. Shivaay took few steps back and took a deep breath…

“ ANIKAAAAAA……. ANIKAAAA I LOVE YOUU….. ANIKAAAA WILL YOU MARRY MEE!!!!ANIKAAAAAAAA…… I LOVE YOU…….WILL YOU MARRRRRY ME ANIKAAAAA.A…… “ Shivaay walked like a lunatic around everyone shouting and screaming these lines…. Anika was completely shocked seeing Shivaay like that…

“ANIKAAAA…. I LOVE YOU…I LOVE YOU SO MUCH ANIKAAAAAAAA….. WILL YOU MARRY ME!!!! ANNNIKKAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!….

“ Shivaaay….stop it.. “ Anika ran behind him.. Shivaay held Rudhr’s collar and started pushing in back and forth… everyone were enjoying each moment…

“ ANIKAAAA I LOVE YOU….PLEASE MARRY MEEE….ANIKAAAAA…. “

“ Arrey bhayyaaaaa….. mai bhabhi nehi hoon.. “ Rudy cried feeling faint…

“ Shivaay, leave him… Shivaay…. “ Anika broke his hands on Rudhr and hugged Shivaay tightly… Shivaay smiled and hugged her back…

“ So, Will you marry me? “ Shivaay husked his voice into her ears… Anika slowly broke the hug and joined her forehead with his…

“ Anytime… “ she replied smiling…

“ah..ah..ah.. not so easy.. “ Pinky came and stood in between Shivika.. “ before marriage, bride and groom should never touch each other.. “

“ what?? “ Shivika looked each other shockingly..

“ haha.. ab aayega maza.. “ Said Gauri giving a hi-fi to Om.. then they realized that they both were too close.. Gauri moved a step back so as Om did..

“ don’t think that we don’t know anything.. we have decided everything.. After Shivika’s marriage, you both will soon get married… “ Said Tej placing his hand above Raja’s shoulder..

“ we have decided everything… and we know you both love each other.. So don’t hesitate to tell your wish just like your sister and brother did… “ Raja said teasing Omri.. they looked each other and blushed thinking of the fact…

“Ok then… we’ll check a perfect Muhurath for our Shivika’s marriage..   is that ok? “ Gayathri said to which everyone agreed happily.. but hearing that Shivaay’s smile vanished soon..

“ this marriage will not happen.. “ announced Shivaay making everyone surprise especially Anika..

Dadi “yeh thu kya keh raha hai billu? “

“ I mean this marriage won’t happen now..but later!.. “ cleared Shivaay..

“ what happened Shivaay? Is there any problem? “ Anika asked bit scared…

“ big problem hai Anika.. “ Shivaay said which made everyone confused.. just then Khanna arrived with a paper in his hand and he handed it over to Shivaay.. he neared Anika and stretched it to her…

“ yeh kya hai Shivaay? “ her voice showed how much feared she was..

“ c’mon just open it… you’ll understand.. “

“Shivaay.. what is it? Please say..if there’s any problem, then..then say it Shivaay!!.. “

“ Anika will you open it? “ Shivaay sharpened his voice and Anika obeyed it as per.. Anika took the paper and unfolded it praying that it won’t be any problem… she read the paper and was surprised as well shocked seeing it…

“ Shivaay..yeh..yeh tho… “ she couldn’t gather words to tell… Shivaay’s anger face slowly turned into smile.. Anika looked Shivaay with tear filled eyes..Gauri came forward and took the paper from her…gauri was so happy reading the lines… soon, Om too joined Gauri and read the paper..

“ OMM.. Om, thu batha.. kya hai voh? “ Pinky inquired..

“ chotti maa, this is..this is bhabhi’s admission papers in the most prominent Medical college in Mumbai… that means..means bhabhi’s gonna be a doctor soon… “ Om laughed happily so as the others.. everyone were so happy hearing the new news… specially Raja and Gayathri..

“but Shivaay, becoming a doctor will take a lot many time… you mean to say that the marriage will happen after Anika completes her studies? “ Gayathri opened her doubt..

“ yeah.. that’s what I meant.. “ smiled Shivaay.. Anika was dazed by his response..

Anika “Shivaay? It will take years.. may be 4 or 5 years… “

“ so what Anika? I’ll wait for you… yeah, it’ll be difficult but I can wait my life long for you… “ tears grew bigger in Anika’s eyes..

“ Shivaay.. don’t be so nice.. I..I don’t deserve this… “Anika cried with cracked voice.. Shivaay moved more close and cupped her face lovingly..

“hey..you deserve more than this..don’t cry now.. stop…stop…stop crying!.. “ Anika smiled at Shivaay’s care.. “ why are you doing this Shivaay?..”

“coz, you’re my life Anika… and this was my responsibility otherwise Amma would have killed me… Amma ka sapna poora karna hai na? “ Shivaay smiled at her but Anika was getting more melted with his love.. tears were coming out continuously..

“Oh God! When will you stop crying Anika? You know I can’t see you crying it..it pains my heart.. ok? Rrrey Amma, you don’t have any idea what your Anu is doing with me… thank your fate that you are gone otherwise you will have to spend your whole life wiping your daughter’s tears… she doesn’t know anything.. Always cry..cry..cry!!.. she slapped me and she is crying not me.. I got injured, then she cries.. when somebody else get injured, your daughter cries.. “ Shivaay was continuously blabbering while Anika kept looking at him.. “ when I said that I love her still she doesn’t know what to say..isn’t that rare? She doesn’t know what to say.. Oh my Ammaa.. please don’t give this fate to anyone else.. it’s a wonder that I got this fate.. if it was someone else then……………….. “ Shivaay’s words died in his throat as he felt his lips being captured… God Anika’s kissing him…their first KISS!!… Shivaay was dazed with the sudden move but soon he closed his eyes and reciprocated the kiss with equal love passionately… Anika stood above his feet and locked his head around her arm still kissing.. Shivaay pulled her more close by her waist and snaked his hands over her belly… Anika was feeling the smoothness of his hair while her lips were busy in licking Shivaay’s lips…. Shivaay pulled her more close and sucked her lips in crazily.. Anika clinched on to his collar and tightened her grip making first few buttons to break.. Shivaay’s hands were tucking back her hair to get her face more… they both were lost in their own world of love.. the love for which they both struggled a lot.. they kissed each other passionately after each second and they never wanted this moment to end.. EVER….. soon they both slowly stopped kissing and parted only to hear how much their heart beats have increased… Anika opened her eyes to see Shivaay still with closed eyes… she rubbed her cheek against his and neared his ears slowly… she stood over his feet and moved closer to him.. she could hear his throat craving for more.. She gently kissed his ear and said…….

I love you Shivaay…… “

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Their love story began with misunderstandings and ended in love.. Anika started her studies in the well-known Medical college in Mumbai while Shivaay continued with his business.. lot many works were there for Shivaay as he wasn’t there for a long… Rajarai shifted their home to Mumbai at the Mansion as it has become their…… Everything went perfect.. everyday Shivaay goes to meet Anika without other’s knowledge.. their love only increased after days.. Shivaay was jealous as other students especially boys were always behind Anika.. but she promised him that her heart only belongs to him… Evening Shivaay goes to pick Anika and they spent lot many times with each other… even Anika was jealous as many girls in her college always dream about Shivaay Singh Oberoi… Om and Gauri’s love also went perfect.. both families join together every Sunday and enjoy their weekends… Days were so difficult to move.. Anika was so happy with her new Amma and old Appa.. both Shivika dreamed about their married life every night.. And On and On and On… Shivika’s love longed till end…

*♥*——— THE END———-*♥*

The story is done my friends…. This was my first ff and I’ve got lot many love from you buddies.. Thank you so much for all the support and love…

Silent reader, I really wish you all could drop your comments down.. this is my personal favorite part…

Nandu, I had promised you that I’ll reveal my name, and this Moon never break her promises… So Myself Sneha… Sneha Sajeev.. but call me Moon itself! I love that more…

This Moon will come again with another story…

Till then this is Moonlight_luver bidding a happy farewell…

Take care and stay blessed….

Thaaaataaaa……

 

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  1. Banita

    Amazinggg… Lovly ending Sneha….
    Well i commented only on some parts of it , but i was a regular reader of ur ff… I really love this ff… This was Mind blowing…
    Hope U will come back soon… Waiting to read ur nxt creation…
    Till then TC my dr MOON…

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Hay Banita.. I do remember you.. Thank you so much for commenting dear! happy to know that you loved the part.. definitely will be back with something new..
      Thank you for all the words.. you too take care friend..

  2. Hi dear it’s amazing update loved it totally..
    With happy ending …waiting for ur next story …
    And post the another Story update also …
    All the best and take care dear…

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Haiii Chaithu… good to see your comment buddy! Thank you so much for loving dear… I mean it!.. so hope i gladdened you with the end!..
      Next story will soon hit the page.. you were really a good support for me Chaithu..
      Thanks for all the love… take care buddy..

  3. It was one of the most amazing dear…
    I am really sry i couldn’t cooment but trust me I read all parts…Even I cried when Shvaay was beaten badlyand annika was crying…
    Their intense romantic scene..
    In everything you nailed it..
    I wish yiu will back with another ff pr os or whatever..
    It was amazing..writting journey was mindblowing…
    I really love it..
    Good luck my frnd..????

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Hey Arpitaaa… I totally remember you.. Thank you so much for commenting my friend!..
      Naah.. don’t say sorry! I’m happy that you do read my story… Even I was so emotional typing all those scenes..
      Thank you for all the lines buddy!..
      Definitely I’ll back.. hope you’ll support me in that story too!!.. your support really conduced me buddy.. Thanks a lot for the support till date my friend… I really mean it..
      TAKE CARE friend…

  4. Nithu

    I think i had never given a comment on your ff….i ssly do love ua ff sooo much…..it was a very great ending MOON…

  5. Moonlight_luver

    Hey Nithuu… that’s a new name.. Naah, although you never commented your support was far enough for me.. Thank you soo much for the support my friend.. Really mean it.. hope I made the ending good!!..
    take care my friend, and again thank you for commenting…

  6. It was amazing
    Congratulations on an incredible journey
    Hoping to see u soon.

  7. It was just fabulous….. Loved it..

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Haii Arshiii… firstly want to ask forgiveness for being late to reply… Thank you so much for commenting dear!! means a lot!.. definitely we’ll meet soon buddy! thank you reading my story and supporting!!
      Hey Amy!.. Thank you for commenting my friend! I mean it!… I’ll come back with something new!… take care you both..

  8. Niriha

    Awesome fabulous dear…lovely ending ????loved it to the core..This is one of my favourite ff.. I’ll really going to miss this ff dear
    Come back soon with another ff I’ll be waiting.
    Love you ??? Take care and stay safe

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Haiiii Nirihaaa…. So sorry for the delay in replying buddy… I didn’t get time to check the page..
      Thank you sooo much for all the support you’ve given me till date… really means a lot!.. I’ll miss you all badly!!
      Definitely will be back soon…. you too take care and stay always blessed!!… thank you for everything Nirihaa….

  9. ItsmePrabha

    You have a very beautiful name…this part is Universalthod…seriously buddy…when Anu di called gayatri, amma i literally had tears in my eyes at that particular moment…that was such a precious moment …and all the shiviak sceness in this are my fav..Oh my god..Can i get Billuji in real life?…He is so unreal….Loved this epi like anything buddy…I am going to miss this FF sooooooooo much … Will be waiting for your another FF…Till then take care and Love you Buddy…

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Haii Prabhaa!!… Thank you for the adulation buddy! but trust me, I don’t like my name much as how much I like your’s..! Ohho! did I made you cry or anything?. Thank you for all the love and support you have showered on me through likes and valuable comments!… I can’t atone you buddy!.. you will get a better partner than our billuji! I’m sure with that… Thank you for all the lines my friend… Aww….. even I’ll miss you all…. You too take care and be freee… love ya

  10. Hiiiii moon your name Sneha is sooooo sweet n pretty to hear but much more I habituated to moon n I felt you as moon.regarding your last two parts are tremendous n amazingly beautiful to more than that.i really gone through a new ending n definitely different beginning of their lives with love n moves with care upto the heights to reach.shivaay fulfilled his life’s long last desire so that he filled the most precious place in her life.n Anika too received the best love which she wished n missed in her life that it is filled lifestime with the best of best life partner shivaay as her Amma wished to.i immensely attached to one of my favourite FF this shivikas love story.u moon crazily placed n winned the best place through this FF in many of us hearts.but I’m the nearest n may be the finest first of this.you moon finestlyfinished this FF with smashing entry of shivaay that Charlie got effective punishment for his deeds that we wished n lastly shivaays guidance for Anika to do MBBS n mostly shivaays proposing pretty Anika to marry him with the approval of his father.n his green signal to the love birds finally is sooooo sweet n cute.so that means the biggest business man n great wall of shivaay Singh Oberoi remarries Dr Anikashivaay rajarai finally.n the track to rikaras also opened n became fine equal as love birds.n the Anika got the shivaays family as her own family.now rajarai too became one of the richest of Mumbai.sooooo you moon reached this love n family story to the happy ending n opened beautiful journey of love birds amazingly that are rememberable lovable n memorable.how many times I tried to Sneha but I goes to moon frnd.its not my mistake but became habit by you frnd.plz be in contact with much many more FFS like this with us.till then take care n remind me that I’m there n waiting to read yours.

  11. Finally Anikas got her mother too n she agreed as her mother is fantastic.you moon meant to quality n efficient that you filled the unhope to real one is given the brightest colour to anika n to this FF that made sooo delighted.

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Haiiiii Raji… I’m so so so sorrryy buddy!!.. I didn’t get time to check the page and comments… sorry for that.. how are you? long time right? Ok you can call me Moon itself.. that makes me happy!.. Raji, thank you sooo much for all the love and support you have given me till today.. don’t think that I’m repeating the lines again that I gave to others but genuinely Raji, I really mean it… you words really inspires me.. for an author, readers happiness decides their expression…. reading your comment don’t know how and when but a cute smile rules my face!.. Thank you for that my chunk..
      Did you love this Shivika journey?? Aww..you’re always near my heart… Thank you buddy.. Yeah, it’s like business man weds doctor!! Hahha… you can think the sequel of this story in your mind.. like you know, their love and usual jokes.. I leave it to your imagination.. hey, it’s ok yaar! call me moon itself.. C’mon!!! you don’t have to say that, of course I’ll be in contact.. I’ll be back with new and different stories… My responsibility is over with Anika’s and Shivaay’s life.. now it’s their story…. I don’t want to disturb their marriage and all.. Hhha.. Thank you sooo much for all the lines and loves..
      Take care chunk and stay safe.. love ya buddy! you’ll always remain in my heart!!!

  12. Nikita_jai29

    It is lovely dear…. Beautiful ending

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Hai Nikkii…. I’m so happy to see your comment always in the comment list… you’ve really supported me in this whole journey… thanks buddy!!.. hope you liked the ending.. take care friend!!

  13. Hello sorry 4 not commenting till than but I catched every part of dis story n I swear it was really a creative piece of work which everytime showed ur hardwork from dier cat fights 2 dier marriage den misunderstanding,his visiting her village 2 clear de mess,her father’s helplessness, knowing about de truth, craving 4 luv,sweet-lil moments, doing anything 4 each other, sharing things, confused feelings, bearing each other’s pain, getting hurt 2 protect other one, longing 4 each other,rage on de beast who made dier life hell every relationship ever person everything was so beautiful,unique n awesome day words can’t describe it.Not only dis chappy but every one was amazing.De best n superb thing n scene in chappy was de confession n craziness atleast he confessed it 2 her, Anika’s teasings n care 4 him was worth reading dier hug n nok-jhok was super cute n families teasings also.She called Gayatri Amma was so emotional but now dier n dier families Bond got more stronger Shivaay’s decision of marrying each other after setting her career was so rare n dier wait 4 de most precious day of dier lives.All in all dis journey was fantastic.Come back soon with another heart touching story till den miss u ‘Moon’

    1. Moonlight_luver

      Haiii Sofiaaa…. I love that name.. hey don’t say sorry and all, even look how much sorry I must say for replying long far!… So happy to know that you loved my story.. Thank you for all the loving words my friend… I don’t know how will I thank you for your support!
      I don’t know what all words I’ll use to fill the comment box except THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!… definitely will be back with another different story… miss you too Sofia.. Do take care and stay blessed!!! love yaaa…

  14. i just wrote a verrrryyyy long comment but it did not post 🙁 i feel like crying rn 🙁
    summing up then, i will miss you, this story and thank you for givinng such a dhamakedaar endinhg snehu:)
    1. you should write : there was no space left b/w them nd not a single. 🙂
    2. ypur eng is amazing! your vocab isp profound but just practice and practice more grammar! 🙂 like you do in maths! 🙂

    love yaa

  15. Hi moon Kaha gayi sap why you didn’t reply me.plz reply back I’m waiting for your reply.

  16. Awesome story

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