Tashan e trust (Episode 4)

Hi everyone
Also I don’t know what the website is doing because I did reply to everybody’s comment then it all got deleted. Oh well never mind. And to everyone who liked crazy’s idea I acc had the same plan going in on my head so after this episode you can see some nok jhoks.
Early one today because last time when I submitted it, it isn’t upload ( annoying !!! ) so I decided to give you an early one πŸ™‚

Episode 4
Twinkle goes towards them. Kunj doesn’t see but ananya does.
A – Mumma!
She runs to her and gives her a tight hug. Kunj turns to look at her and gets shocked seeing twinkle. His vision gets blurry and he feels like he is going to faint but he composes himself.
K – twinkle?
A – papa you know my Mumma?

T – ananya! Why are you calling him Papa?
K – twinkle please tell me the truth.
Twinkle couldn’t do it anymore. She couldn’t hide her biggest secret to the person she loves the most
T – kunj I’ll tell you everyone but not here.
She takes a deep breath
T – come to my house and we will talk
K – okay

The car journey was very awkward. Kunj and twinkle kept looking at each other.
A – Mumma how do you know each other?
K – princess we …..
T – we were once friends ananya
Those words hit kunj like bullets. ‘Once friends’ that one short sentence killed him

They finally reached home. Mahi and ananya left twinkle and kunj to talk.
A – goodnight Mumma
T – goodnight baby
A – goodnight papa
Then she goes and gives him a kiss on the cheeks
K – goodnight princess
She left

Awkward silence filled the room. Twinkle didn’t know where to start.
K – twinkle. Ananya? Is she my child? Have I been a father for 10 years and never known? Why didn’t you tell me?
T – because you never gave me a chance god dammit.
Kunj remembered. She was right. It was all his fault
T – that day I was supposed to marry you but somehow yuvi got there. I was going to tell you the best news ever after our wedding but I never got married to you. You blamed me for that. Tell me why?
K – oh come on. If you never let yuvi out this all would have never happened
T – I did it for you.
Tears spill down her cheeks.
T – What was my fault? That I loved you? That I didn’t want you to be ill? That I didn’t want the love of my life to go away from me?
Kunj suddenly feels the pain. He made a mistake and he knows it. He knows how twinkle must have felt. Having to go through that herself without any support.
T – after you left me, I tried contacting you but in vain. I divorced yuvi and came here.
K – ananya?

T – yes you are the biological father of ananya. But you probably won’t believe me so do you want to do a DNA test?
K – what are you saying twinkle? I can’t believe I am a father. I can’t believe that I have a child ….
T – no mr kunj Sarna. You do not have a child. Ananya is my child and mine only. You have no right over her.
K – but twinkle why? Please don’t say this
T – I had to go through all this by myself. I had no one. After ananya came I had support but most importantly I had someone who would never break my trust and leave me. I had a reason to live
K – please don’t say this I can’t live without you and her
T – are you crazy? 10 years you have survived without me I’m sure you’ll survive another few decades. And as for ananya you barely know her. You met her today so again in sure you will survive. Now leave my house.
K – no no

T – I said leave before I call the police and believe me I will.
Kunj knows there is no point fighting and he left.

Episode 4 ends here
So guys how was it? Do you like the storyline or should I change it? Do you think it’s too emotional? Is there too much suspense? Please comment and tell me xx

Credit to: Jazz

41 comments

  1. Purnima

    It’s just awesome…Amazing yr…..& u don’t need to change the storyline…..It’s nice……

  2. zikra

    It ws amazing fab osm superb epi dear n d story line is jus perfect n amazing jus do cont soon plzzzzz luv u…..

  3. Ria

    Don’t change the story line..it’s going on amazing.. Just continue with the track.. The epi was amazing.

  4. Jaya

    I loved it jazz!!! Amazing episode. Your ff is one of my favourites. So excited to see how the story builds up πŸ™‚

  5. Rashi

    Awesome…..yes twinkle should not forgive kunj so easily…..she has suffered a lot … Superb …..keep it up…….????

  6. Fatarajo

    Loved ur ff jazz it’s too good and I m reading part 3 and 4 together πŸ™‚

    • Jazz

      Thank you. I read your fan fiction too! I love it. Mine doesn’t even compare to yours πŸ™‚

  7. Its really good luv 8t:Dβ™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯Β·

  8. fiona

    hey! today i read all yours ff episodes
    i have opened them first but can’t get time so for all episode i comment today

    for first epi-

    awesome starting awesome episode and brilliant writer πŸ™‚

    for 2nd epi –

    superb……….. πŸ™‚

    for 3rd epi –

    exellent…….. πŸ™‚

    for 4th epi-

    it was incomparable πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯☻☻☻☻☻☻☻☺☺☺☺☺

    and u know how many comments u got 70 in only 3 episode and in upcoming it will reach 500 comment per episode
    so, u should write more more more more longer episodes β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

    • Jazz

      Aww this is so cute. I can’t believe you counted the comments. Thank youuuu so much πŸ™‚

  9. tra

    Hey jazz chill ur work is great I just hate suspense but keep up the good work when are you posting the next epi??v

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