TASHAN – E – ISHQ Twinj I should have loved you from the start OS PART 2


Part 1

Twinkle was making Breakfast but she was lost in Kunj thoughts
Twinkles pov= What has happened to Kunj. After that night he has never touched me. But what happened Yesterday that he has began to come close to me. I have to find out.
Bebe= Twinkle kaha koy hain
Twinkle= kuch nay
Twinkle goes to the dinning room and serves everyone food. Whilst she is serving everyone Parathas Kunj holds her hand. This was notices by everyone who smiles. Twinkle tries to free herself but it doesn’t work.
Kunj= come sit and eat he said freeing her from his grip.
Twinkle= I’m not hungry at the moment I will eat later.
Kunj=sit down and then eat later.
Twinkle= I have to go in the kitchen
Usha= Sit down beta he is asking you so nicely.
She sits down next to him and sips her tea.

Everyone soon finishes their Breakfast and the Manohar,UV,Cherry leave for office. Kunj was about to leave but he sees Twinkle clearing the table. He goes to her and kisses her cheek shocking her.
Kunj= BYE Baby he said shocking her even more. This was noticed by Usha and Bebe who smile.
Bebe= its so good to see them interacting with each other more .
Usha= I know Bebe finally after 4 months of their marriage I can see them coming closer.
It was lunch time and Kunj came home for a change.
Usha= Kunj what are you doing here ?
Kunj= Maa my meeting has finished so I decided to come home…. If you don’t mind can I take Twinkle out for lunch.
Usha= Why are you asking me she is your wife take her wherever you will. She said with a smile.
Kunj goes to the room the was closed without looking.
Kunj= Twinkle get ready were going out for lunch .
Twinkle= ahhhhh (she screams and quickly goes to the washroom)…… Kunj chuckles but was shocked to see her. Twinkle was wearing a pink colored crop top with 3 quarters black leggings she was exercising.
She comes out of the wearing a simple blue salwar kameez that had a simple silver border.
Kunj looked at her and noticed how pretty she was for the first time. He kept going closer to her and she leaned behind the wall having no where to escape from.
Kunj= You look pretty.
Twinkle= thanks now can I go she said trying to go by.
Kunj kept blocking her way. This was frustrating Twinkle.
Twinkle= KUNJ please leave me she said
Kunj= Lets go we are going out for lunch.
They both leave the house .

In the car
Twinkle= Kunj maas house is that way where are you taking me.
Kunj= for lunch
Twinkle= Kunj whenever we tell our family that we are going out you either drop me to maas house or my friends house. Then you go out with Alisha
Kunj parks the car onto the side and hugs twinkle. A tight one. He had tears in his eyes. Twinkle could sense that something was wrong so she reciprocates the hug.
Twinkle= What happened? Is everything ok Kunj?
Kunj= Twinkle you were always right about Alisha. She doesn’t love me. He tells her everything he saw yesterday. I am sorry Twinkle you always did your wife duties so perfectly and I always failed.
Twinkle= Kunj please don’t say sorry . Its ok. I am happy that you finally realised that Alisha don’t love you and I (she stopped and realised what she was going to say)

Kunj smiles as her realised what she was going to say.
Kunj hold her hand and= I promises twinkle from now I will try to fulfil all duties of a husband properly. I am sorry for whatever I have done in the past he said.
Twinkle= its ok Kunj.
Kunj= lets go Gudwara and thank and pray to Babaji for opening my eyes and to fill the rest of our life’s with happiness.
On the way to the Gudwara
Twinkle= Kunj is this the reason why you began to come close to me.
Kunj= yes Twinkle after what Alisha did to me yesterday I was heartbroken. But on my way back home I realised how much you are for me. I know you only did this marriage as Leela maa wanted to see you married but you always would do the duties of a wife with so much care. But I would always ignore you. I then decided to give you all the rights you deserve .
They both have tears in their eyes.

They reach Gudwara and thank Babaji . Kunj then hold twinkles hand and starts to take pheras with her. They both look at each other and smile.
They then leave the Gudwara and go out to eat.
Kunj= Twinkle come lets go have golgappe I’m sure you love it
Twinkle= how do you know?
Kunj= all girls love golgappe
They enjoy their golgappe but were disturbed by a unwanted person.
Alisha= Kunj Baby what are you doing here she said ?
Kunj didn’t reply. She was about to go and hug him but Kunj hugged twinkle instead. This made Alisha furious
Alisha= what the hell are you doing Kunj?
Kunj= can you not see I am with my wife. Please leave me alone you cheat and don’t you dare come in my life again. By saying this he payed money to the golgappe vendor and left by holding Twinkles hand.
Alisha had become scared by hearing Kunj she had never seen him this angry before.
Days passed and Twinkle and Kunj began to come closer and know more things about each other. Alisha never dared to contact Kunj again. Leela was getting treatment in America and was slowly recovering.
I year passed and everyone expected that twinj start their family soon

Twinj bedroom
Twinj were lying down in each others embrace after a intimate encounter,
Twinkle= Kunj what would be the one thing you would like to have changed in your life.
Kunj= I wished I loved you from the start he said and joined his head with hers

The end!

I know it was really long and most probably boring.
But please comment both negative and positive.

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  1. No it was no at alll boringg… instead i found it really intresting….. i luvd it????? very nice ☺☺

    1. Simiyy

      thanks dear
      i am happy ou liked it

  2. Paavu

    kisne kaga boring tha dis is the best os I have evrr read kunj’s kissing her ob cheeks hugging her a promising hubby every grl wants loved it….

    1. Simiyy

      thank you so much Paavu your comment means alot

  3. Chiku

    Woaaah its really amazing. It is not at all boring. ??????I really loved it
    Plz post ur ff also
    Lots of love?

    1. Simiyy

      thanks Chiku
      i willtry to post my ff in 1or 2 days

  4. Awesome really api u write such a nice os plzzz try to write more like this and it was not boring i have cmnt in ur previous epi but u have already post nxt part

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks i am happy you liked it
      will try to write more

  5. Kritika14

    It was such a sweet os! Don’t call it boring. Hope you post more os’s like this! Lovess! xx

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks Monica
      i will try to post more os xxx

  6. Loved it…..

    1. Simiyy

      thanks sana

  7. Amazing yaar suprb i wish u could continue dis stry loved it u made me comment through ur amazing os i was a silent reader !!

  8. Amazing yaar suprb i wish u could continue dis stry loved it u made me comment through ur amazing os i was a silent reader !! Mashallah

    1. Simiyy

      Jazakallah Uc
      your comment means a lot especially if your a silent reader

  9. Hey simmy it was not at all boring it was very interesting and fab yar

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks Sushmita

  10. Zuha Fatima

    Oh god simmy…It was simply superb and so beautifully described 🙂 I loves it dear 🙂 good effort 🙂

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks for commenting Zuha
      You too smile always xx

    2. Simiyy

      Thanks for commenting Zuha
      i am happy you enjoyed reading
      You too smile always xx

  11. SidMin

    Loved it 🙂 It was so cute and na please don’t call my Simiyy’s work boring 🙂
    Loved it 🙂 Keep writing such stories Loved them 🙂

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks Milli
      will try to write more

  12. Ramya

    Simiyy awesome os loved it
    Bohat hi zyada cute nice one dear
    Loved it N love u

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks Ramya
      love you too

  13. dreamer...arundhati

    Simi….. Gurl u nailed it….. It was superb

    1. Simiyy

      thank you dreamer … arundhati

  14. Pleeeeeeeaaaaase please continue this
    If u agree the reply x

    1. Simiyy

      Twinj fan your comment means a lot
      i will come up with something new just for you

  15. Wow this was soo beautiful ??? i read both parts now and it was so amazing.. really loved it ❤❤

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks SidVee

  16. Hey simily,
    Amazing yaar.Too gud.Pls continue.

    Lots of luv,

    1. Simiyy

      Twinj thank you
      i will try to come up with something new for you
      love xxx

  17. Twinjfan.tamanna

    wowww…. so cute…. simmy ur amazing…. loved it to the infinity square… wish it had never end…

    love you

    1. Simiyy

      Thank you so much Tamanna
      love you too

  18. Ayu

    Wowwww!! Sorry for not commenting on the last one…i read it all in a go and thought to comment together…that was so cute!!!! I loved it! N guys can be such a pain sometimes…insensitive brats! But i loved it sooo much! U made me value ur writing more!!! Love u❤️

    1. Simiyy

      Dont say sorry Ayu.
      i am glad you liked it.
      thanks for valuing my writing more xxx

  19. Adya

    Wooowwww yrrr simiyy.
    Sry for not commenting on the first part….bt yrrr it was awesome…. plsss do write . more……it was really very lovely….nd do post ur ff soon….
    Love u

    1. Simiyy

      Dont be silly and say sorry Adya
      i will write more and will try to post my ff soon

  20. Meeta

    This is so good.
    You must write more of it.

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks Meeta
      I will try to write more

  21. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous…. loved it…..?????

    1. Simiyy

      Thanks di

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