Tashan-e-ishq (TWINJ forever) episode 15

Scene 1: sarna mansion
All are sitting happily and gossiping. Leela, RT, usha, manohar, surjeet, anita, bebe, raman, pinni, anand, nikki, mahi,chinki, uv,cherry, bubbly, ishaan and kunj are sitting.
B: hey vahe guruji,aapki meher se mera parivaar pura ho gaya…..[oh god,my family is reunited with ur blessings]
S: jee bebe,ye to apne lakh pate ki baat kahi aur ye sirf twinkle ki vajah se mumkin hua….[yes bebe, you have really said a correct fact and this has been only possible through twinkle’s efforts]
Usha: ji bebe, though i do not like her, she has done a worthy job by reuniting our family……
B: exactly…… she has united a husband wife and a mother to her daughter[ referring to leela,rt,mahi and chinki],she has united four brothers[ referring to manohar- surjeet and kunj-cherry] and united a father son [referring to surjeet-cherry] and has cleared all misunderstandings…..
K:[in his mind] not all ……

Meanwhile twinkle comes with tea and snacks for everyone……
T: ye lijiye bebe,tauji aur papaji aap sab ki sugar-free chai aur low-sugar biscuits. She serves them and smiles.they all look at her and smile.
T: ma, mummy ji, and dear nikki bhabhi and for u i have brought low sugar tea and shallow fried snacks with limited calories……they all smile while yuhi[yuvi-mahi] , chenky[cherry-chinky] and rayra[rishi-kayra] and bubbly laugh…..
T[coming towards kunj and anand] : for u both i have ur spcl black coffee…..
A: btw thanks twinkle….. u know how i missed ur black coffee nd kunj too…. we had to drink some other drinkwhich ur bhabhi made [whispering] i was confused whether it was drink or poison…… she laughs…..
K: i am not hungry…..[ignoring] i amgoing tomy room,bebe
T: ab isse kya ho gaya[now what happened to him??]

Twinkle, heading towards youngsters….
T: guys for u i have brought juice and fruits…..so have it….nd for u ishaan…..there are some chocolates…. ishaan gets happy nd hugs her….all of the family smiles….
Bebe: now everybody please listen to me….. today i ,manohar, usha ,anita and surjeet are going out for one week……. and leela ji and rt ji too are going out of town with raman and pinni so u children are alone for one week so take care and twinkle u have to take care of this house.
T: ji bebe
B[dragging her aside]: go and be with kunj he is angry with u na….
T: ohk bebe….. but…..
B: no if and buts…..do as i say….
She complies and everyone leaves….. as they leave storm occurs and weather becomes dark….. all are in hall. But she goes to her room…

Scene 2: twinj room
Kunj is standing by window…..rain drops are hitting him…. he cries silently…..
Twinkle comes and places her hand on his shoulder …..he starts crying bitterly and jerks her hand away
K: mujhse door reh tu samjhi……
T: mai samajh sakti hun par plss….
K: bas twinkle…….we are…….
Someone knocks the door twinkle opens it. Its mahi and chinki .
M: twinkle di …..chalona sab antakshari khel rahein h……aap bhi aayo na….
C: haan aur jiju aapbhi chaliye na……
T: par chinki,mahi….
K: chalo hum aayenge…..[and he leaves]
Twinkle eyes him sadly……[ jag soona soona lage plays]
Scene 3: sarna mansion hall
Uv: ohk now we are going to play antakshari….

Ri: and there is two teams –boys and girls…but as girls are more……we have one more member here- meet him RAGHAV…[ guys this role is played by harshad chopra]
Raghav enters and wishes anyone…..antakshari begins…..
Rishi sings: janam janam……while kayra sings gerua…..
Uv sings: sanam re ………..while mahi sings sanam teri kasam
Raghav sings: manchala……while bubbly sings agar tum saath ho
Cherry sings: allah waariyan ………while chinki sings matargashti
Kunj and Twinkle are lost in one another….. all others shake them and they come into senses……atearrolefrom twinkle’s eye she wipes it…..
Kunj sings:……….while twinkle sadly sings mujhse ho gayi galti mai jaanta hun…..
Suddenly twinkle notices five passes and she calls out: ramu kaka what are these passes for??
Ramu kaka: madam,usha mam has given these passes for u all…… these are for some night out party……

T: u all go…..nd enjoy…. not me…..
C: but di…jiju u tell her….
K: your di is right….u go and enjoy…
Uv:guys if u dont mind can we all go to my house after party…..actually u will get disturbed na….
T: ohk uv….nd kayra take care of all of them….
Kayra complies and all leave……!!! kunj was about to leave when twinkle holds his hand and he closes his eyes….
T: plss mujhe maaf kar do…..
K: mera haath chod de…..
T: kunj plss…..
K[shouts]: no i cant…..

T: so u wont right …..
K: no….
T: fyn i willstand in rain till u forgive me….
K:oh ya….whom are u fooling me….i m not gonna be fooled now…[ and he turns back]but doesnot finds twinkle………he goes outside and sees twinkle getting drenched….twinkle paagal hai kya….andar aaja…..[twinkle are u mad come inside]
T: nahi kunj…..mai tab tak nahi aaungi jab tum mujhe maaf kardoge….[no kunj, now i won’t come inside until and unless you forgive me]
K:to tu nahi aayegi right….[ so u won’t come right]
T: nahi…bilkul nahi [no certainly not]

K: thik hai fir…..reh puri raat barish mai……vaise bhi mujhe bhi thodi shanti aur relaxation ki zaroorat hai….. idon’t care…..[fine then…..be here in rain for whole night…..after all i also need peace and relaxation] and he leaves…..
T: by god babaji…he is such a khadoos and moreover i am feeling cold but i will stand here until he comes and forgives me even if i die…. if he doesnot care abt me why should i care???
Kunj comes to his room and drinks coffee. He tries to read his bookbut his all attention is drawn by rain and thoughts of twinkle…… atlast he closes his book with a thup…..
K:[to himself] why am i so concerned about her but still she is my wife……whatif she catches cold……no no she wont be able to stand whole night and come inside….. he calls one of his servant and gives him towel and shawl and directs him to give it to twinkle if she returns. The servant complies……

Kunj lies and thinks about all his moments with twinkle and says to himself “pura tashan hai…….uss syappa queen mai……sab kuch karegi mujhe manane k liye…..nd he smiles…….but then his smile vanishes remembering how she was standing. He was about to leave when he says: let her be she should know how i felt without her……[manchala plays in bg]
Scene 4: next day, twinj room
Kunj gets up and sees that weather had bcome more dark………and he calls out for twinkle…
K:twinkle..twinkle….my blac…[as he says like this he remembers how twinkle told that she would stand outside till he forgives her]….no twinkle would have come by now…she would be downstairs i m sure……

Kunj calls out for same servant he had given shawl toand on enquiring he gets shocked knowing that really twinkle hadn’t returned. He worries and rushes downstairs and sees twinkle unconscious on floor….. he shouts TWINKLE. He turns her and taps her cheek…..twinkle get up please….see i am here…..

T: [with opening her eyes little bit] kunj u…..have u forgiven me,,,???
K: tu zid mat kar ……andar chal……and he picks her in his arm and starts leaving [ donot be stubborn and come inside]

But twinkle keeps her hand on his and signals him to stop…..ruk jao….kya tumne mujhe…mujhe….maaf….[stop, did u forgive…]…..and she gets unconscious again…..
K: twinkle pls get up…..yes i have forgiven…..nd in fact how could i be angry with u…..u …u are my syappa queen!![Agar tum saath ho plays] he takes her to room and makes her lie on bed and cries bitterly……. he calls doctor but finds that doctor is busy so he requests the doctor to tell how to treat her burning fever……the doctor tells him to first keep some cold patti on twinkle’s forehead and then make her some vegetable soup. He complies. He brings chilled water and does cold patti of twinkle….. and he wipes his tears and pretends to smile…… and starts to talk to twinkle : twinkle tujhe pata hai tu nahi thi tab koi syappa nahi tha aur tu aayi nhi ki apne sang syappa le aayi….[twinkle, u know when u were not there there was no syappa and as u came u brought a new syappa along with you] and he tries to laugh but ends up crying….why did u leave me twinkle and moreover, i left u alone for one whole day after knowing that you are the biggest syappa queen of the universe…..[ agar tum saath ho plays in bg]. Twinkle opens her eyes andkeepher hand on his hand. He looks up and finds twinkle conscious andgets glad
K:twinkle…..[twinkle signals him to stop]

T: yes kunj u should not have left me but i also left you na…..you were punishing me for that right??
K: pls do not say like this…..i was so angry at that instant that i did not thought of you….
T: but kunj…
K: ohk now we will talk later first take this soup…..
T:[shocked] soup…that too with veggies and me…no ways….
K:drink it fast for me…..plss….

T: ohk but not for you but for us…ohk???[she smiles and drinks soup]
He makes her lie down and while covering with her blanket accidentally falls on her. They share a very lovely eye-lock.[sajna ve plays in bg] kunj gets up and apologises. Kunj goes on couch and lies but after sometimes come and checks twinkle’s temperature. Again he sleeps and twinkle sees it and eyes him lovingly. Twinkle gets up and goes near kunj and he wakes.
K: what happened twinkle?

T: kunj u can sleep i am ohk….you need not be tensed……
K:no….i have to. U can go and sleep i am up tonight…… he smiles….
T: ku..kunj…i wanted to say something…..
K: yes say??
T: if u want as u want to take care of me nd i dont want u to disturb ur sleep …..for today…..means…
K: twinkle, honestly, u have not changed…..say clearly……do not form jalebi yaar…..i m not in a mood to solve any riddles….
T: plss understand …yaar i mean u can sleep with me on bed for today……got it???
K:me nd u that too…on same bed right….twinkle i think ur fever has again increased……have u gone mad ……

T: no need to over react it’s just that ur sleep will be disturbed and ma says we should take proper sleep so u can sleep with me…..
He complies very amazingly. He keeps pillows in between and they sleep facing back toward each other. Both feel awkward but smile shyingly.[manchala plays in bg]

PRECAP: twinkle is lying on bed. Kunj comes and notes that she is feeling suffocated and uncomfortable. So an idea strikes his mind. He goes near twinkle. Kunj to twinkle: uhhm….. Dear Mrs Sarna…i kunj sarna Ur officially announced husband asks you if you would come for a date with me [and he bows and brings his one eyebrow up and fitoor plays in bg]. Twinkle smiles but is also amazed……!!!

Guys i hope u would like this as i tried to make it in English. Guys now, will twinkle accept the date offer presented by kunj…..will twinkle-kunj come closer or are their still any hurdles in their TASHAN-E-SHAADI…..!!!

Credit to: Rakshita

38 comments

    • Rakshita

      See guys thank u every body Nd I m really sorry for not able to thank u individually as I m really busy preparing for my exams…..so hope u understand Nd cooperate…..????

  1. Hey Rakshita what should i say, i m tired of writing always the same things awesome o amzing…. Don’t know how to explain how much i loved it!!!!! Yaar u’re wonderful, superb, brilliant,amazing(u canadd all other beautiful words to it) writer…. How do you get these wonderful ideas!!! Really love u nd ur ffs alot yaar! (this time i wrote right name 😛 😀 )…

  2. komal

    Hey rakshita i missed yr ff so much.. loved dis part it was superbly written how can u be an awesome writer.. ohk m waitung for d next part.. love u ?

  3. Chayonika Chakraborty Chandra

    Amazing…… Rakshita di . Btw I m commenting for the first time but I hv read all ur ffs . They r just fav . And I am yonger than u . Thats why calling u di . Can I join ur group ?? And will u be my friend ? And I am thinking that if u all accept my proposal , than can we creat a group of tei fans on fb ?? If yes , than let me know . Love u all .

      • Chayonika

        Oh… great.. Aakanksha di . Thanx for the reply . My name and profile name both is Chayonika Chakraborty Chandra . Waiting to join .

      • Chayonika

        Great.. Aakanksha di . Thanx for the reply . My name and profile name both is Chayonika Chakraborty Chandra . Waiting to join .

    • tara

      are u in fb dear sis?? then tell ur name..there..i ll add u..ihave created a grp already..and thanks aakanksha for informing..

    • Rakshita

      Hey chayonika…..no need to brle formal….to be frank…I m quite social and of course u can call me Di…I. Already have two siblings and manuly cousins all younger than me except one…. And I will b more happy to have one more…..r u my bro or sis.. .Plss let me know….Nd actually I’m not on Fb….I don’t like it….ohk now I m in class 9 so if u r younger than me u can call me Di….otherwise I will call u.. .!!??

      • Aakanksha

        I guess chayonika is the name of a girl…rakshita u are in 9th and u write soo well dude u stole my heart….god bless u

      • Chayonika

        Sry….Sry…. There is a misunderstanding . I am in class 10 . Btw Rakshita I was also like u . I did not like fb before . I m from Bd . My elder sister I mean cousin lives in India . I opened account on her insistence . It is fun to make friend and share feelings if u not get addicted . So u can also open . It will be fun .

    • Rakshita

      Hey Tara …I was waiting for u…..Plss reply yaar me on hangouts I m waiting for u dear…Nd ur cmmnt mean a lot to me….u knw it right??? Love u…..missssss u……hope to meet u soon… ???

  4. Rakshita

    Hey chayonika….will u mind me calling u by ur name actually I feel that two frnds can share their feelings better than sis…..right??? Hope u don’t mind…..Nd I really don’t appreciate Fn though whole of my class told me……but I m determined….u knw…ya as I grow I will ponder upon ur suggestion….!!!????

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