Tashan E Ishq (Tashan vs Love) Episode 59


Next day Usha and Twinkle are sitting in sofa.
Usha: We all are fond of you and treat you like our daughter.
Twinkle: I very well know that Aunty…
Usha: Twinkle, I want to talk to you about something important. Please be serious.
Twinkle: Okay

Usha: I know you have a bitter past. But you can’t get stuck over past. You have to move on…Some idiot didn’t value you, doesn’t mean that you stop enjoying your life. You should start your life fresh.
Twinkle: Aunty…We have talked it so many times…
Usha: Listen to me first. I and Manohar consider you as my daughter. Now I want you to be my Kunj’s life partner…He is also going through the same pain. I have told you what all happened in his life. I think you both can be pillars to each other and move on in life… Everyone deserves a second chance…Think about it.
Twinkle: Are you sure you want me to be your daughter in law?
Usha: I am sure..Not I, We are..I have discussed it with Manohar and he also likes you. I know you and Kunj are good friends and the kind of past you both had…I think you can very well understand each other’s pain and help each other to get out of it…Think of it…
Twinkle: What about Kunj? Does he know about this proposal?

Usha: Not yet. I thought first I will get your response and if at all it is positive, then I will inform Kunj.
Twinkle is just listening to her and not giving any response.
Usha: Twinkle…What do you think? I mean if you want, you can take time…
Twinkle: Okay. Let me think. But I will tell you the decision in front of family…I mean especially in front of Kunj. It is a matter concerning Kunj and Me. I think he should also be aware of it. Let’s talk about it in the evening when Uncle and Kunj are also with us…
Usha: Atleast give me a hint..Is it a yes or no?
Twinkle (with a smile): I have got some urgent work at office. I have to finish it right now. Let’s talk in evening.
Usha is puzzled to see her response. She thought Twinkle is lying to escape from situation. Just to check that, Usha come and check through window what Twinkle is doing? Twinkle was working on her laptop. So she understood that she was genuinely busy.

At bed room
Manohar: What’s her response?
Usha: She said she will tell infront of every one at the tea time.
Manohar: She didn’t ask you for sometime to think on it…That means I am sure she is gonna say no…
Usha: I don’t know. I thought the same. I was closely noticing her expressions during the talks. But when I talked to her about the marriage proposal, I could see a spark of joy in her eyes…As if this is what she wanted for a long time. She had a naughty smile on her face even though she was trying to hide it. I think she will say yes. Let’s see.

Evening tea time
Usha is eagerly waiting for Twinkle’s response. Kunj is not bothered about anything going around.
Twinkle: Okay…I promised Aunty that I will give my decision here.
Kunj looks at Twinkle with a look of what’s the matter.
Twinkle: Before that, I need to make it clear to Kunj. Aunty and Uncle have come to me with a marriage proposal of me and you today and asked for my decision.
Kunj (with a weird look): Mom..How could you? Papa, you know everything…What I am going through…
Twinkle: That’s okay Kunj…
Twinkle sips tea and turns towards Manohar.

Twinkle: Uncle, Why do you think I can be your daughter in law? Do you think I have all the qualities you want in your DIL?
Manohar: Of course…you are…You are well mannered, cultured, well brought up girl. I am sure I can’t find a better partner for my Kunj. I know Kunj had found one..But just because of my mistake, we lost that girl…
Twinkle: Bus ek sawaal hai…Ek ladki jo characterless, cultureless or money minded thi vo ek din achanak well mannered, cultured and well brought up kaise ho sakti hai?
(One question…How can the same girl be well mannered, cultured and well brought up and at the same time characterless, cultureless and money minded…)
Kunj: Twinkle…please…

Twinkle: Aaj nahi Kunj….Aaj mera din hai…. (Don’t stop me today..Kunj…It is my day.)
Manohar: Kisne kaha tum aisi ho? Humare friend circle me hi kisine kaha hoga? Naam batao uska…Muh todke aa jaunga jisne tumare bare me yun bola… (Who said this non sense? I am sure someone from our friend circle told you this. Tell me who he is…I am gonna smash his face.)
Twinkle (weird smile): Aap hi ne kaha hai..Uncle…Ek saal pehle…Me vahi cultureless, characterless ladki hu jo ladko ko paise ke liye phasati hai…
(It was your opinion. One year before…I am that cultureless, characterless girl who will do anything for money.)

Manohar and Usha are a bit confused and look at each other…
Twinkle: Chalo…thoda aur clearly bata deti hun…Me vahi ladki hun jisko ek saal pehle aapne reject kiya tha apni bahu banne se…Jisse bina dekhe, bina jaane, ye sab titles se nawazaa gaya tha…Me wahi hun, jisse aap ka beta aaj bhi tut ke pyaar kerta hai….
(You forgot…Okay…Let me remind you…I am the same girl whom you rejected a year before. You gifted me with these titles without even meeting me once or atleast knowing me. I am the same girl, with whom your son is still deeply in love with.)
Manohar and Usha are hell shocked and they both look at Kunj. Kunj gives a yes sign.
Twinkle: Ji…Me wahi hun…Aap ke bete ko paison ke liye phasane wali…
(Exactly…I am the same girl who was after your money and..)
Kunj: Twinkle, please stop it…
Twinkle: Aaj muje mat rokhna Kunj…Iss din ke liye pichle ek saal se maine intezaar kiya hai…
(Don’t stop me today Kunj…I have waited for this day….I have worked hard for the entire year for this day…)
Twinkle: Aur kya keha tha aapne…Haan…Muj jaise ladkiyaan ladkon ko apne maa baap se cheenke le jaana chahti hai…Agar me chahti to, ye bohut aasani se ho jaata…Bus ek baar…Bus ek baar…apna dil ka haal suna deti, Kunj ko…Vo bhagta hua aata…Aaj bhi aayega….Utna pyaar kerta hai mera Kunj mujse…
(And what did you say that day…Ohh yes…I am that kind of a girl who separates the boy from his parents and take him away…I could have easily done that…Uncle…I just needed to cry my heart out once in front of Kunj. He would have come leaving everything behind…I am 100% sure about that…I know my Kunj loves me to that extent.)
Twinkle wipes the tear drop which is coming out… Kunj is also choked up and in tears.
Twinkle: Bus yehin galti thi hamari ki humne aap sabki permission ke saath ek hona chaha… Aur ye baat humne pehle din hi decide ker liya tha ki aap charon me se kisiki bhi na ho toh hum shadi nahi karenge…Alag ho jaayenge ek dusre se…Chahe fir zindagi bar ke liye ek dusre ke yaad me jeena pade…
(We both wanted to get married with the permission of our parents…And we have decided it earlier itself that if any of you don’t agree to this relationship, we will never get married. We will get separated… Even though we will be grieving for the rest of our life.)
Usha is stunned to see Twinkle like this.
Twinkle: I left my home to be with Kunj and then Kunj called me and said that Papa had rejected our relationship. I was shattered completely… I thought it is the end of my life… I never thought of a life without him. But my parents stood by me and took me home back. They gave me strength to face the reality…Though I expected Kunj’s calls initially to explain what exactly has happened…Later I also decided to move on…because that’s what we both had decided if at all our parents deny to our love.

Manohar has a guilty face.
Twinkle: Two months later, Alisha came to my house before leaving from Mumbai after her resignation…She told me what all happened that night. And the titles which you have given me and my family… I am the only child to my parents. They had complete trust in me that I will never let them down. They allowed me to pursue my dreams. They always told me that I am their pride.
Twinkle gets choked up and remains silent for a while.
Twinkle: But that day when Alisha told what all you have talked about me… For the first time in my life, I saw my parents head down… I could see the pain in their eyes. I knew it was because of me and the words you used for me without even knowing me. You pointed finger at my parents for the upbringing they have done…That day I decided to come to Amritsar and show you what kind of upbringing they have given me and what I am. I came to Amritsar and stayed back here for these many months only to gain it back. Today I won…I have shown you what I am and what my parents are and which type of family I come from…

Manohar is tensed and can’t look at Twinkle.Twinkle smirks…
Twinkle: This marriage proposal proves that I have proved you the kind of culture which my parents have taught. Otherwise you won’t wish me to be your DIL.
Manohar: I am sorry…Beta…
Twinkle: You should be…Uncle…Aapne bina dekhe, bina jaane..ye kaise samaj liya ki me characterless ladki hun… Jo paise wale ladkon ko phasatey hain…Aur kya kaha tha…Aise maa baap apne betiyon ko yehi sab sikhate hai… taki ache paise wale ladke dekhte hi pyaar ka natak kere aur unhe jaal me phasade…Aur dheere dheere ladkon ko apne gharwalon se alag kero aur pura paisa apna bana le…Aur…
(You should be…Uncle…How can you judge that I am a characterless girl without even meeting once or knowing me. You thought I am a girl who traps boys for money…And what did you say about my parents? They train me how to trap well settled boys…And once that boy has fallen in love, I will separate him from parents and then get his money…And ..)
Manohar: Twinkle…Please…
Twinkle: Dard ho reha hai na Uncle? Muje bhi hua tha…Isse hazaar guna zyada…Aur vo bhi tab, jab tume ye sab apne maa baap ke saamne sunna pade jo tume apna gurur samaj ta ho… Jo maine apne parents ke aankhon me uss din dekha tha…Usse bura feeling kuch bhi nahi ho sakta ek beti ke liye…
(It hurts…Right? I too got hurt…1000 times more than what you feel right now. Because I was hearing these words infront of my parents, who considers me as their pride. What I felt or sensed that day in their eyes was the worst feeling any daughter could have gone through…)
Manohar looks down.
Twinkle: Abhi toh jo aapne kaha ta uska aadha hi bola hoga…Itni jaldi thak gaye…muj jaise ladkiyan sirf ghar tod sakti hai…ghar ko jodna toh aata hi nahi…Me bus yehi dikhane aayi thi ki muj jaise ladkiyaan kya kerna jaanti hai…Aap ne ek general opinion leke muje aur mere family ko judge kiya…Jiska nateeja aaj me aur Kunj bhugat rehe hai…Khair…Me bus yehi samjaane aayi thi Amritsar…Aaj mera yahaan aane ka maksat pura hua…
(I have not even said half of the things which you have said that day. You are tired by hearing this much…You said girls like me don’t know how to keep a home intact…Girls like me only knows to break houses… I came here to show you that what girls like me can do and what are we upto…You judged me and my family with a generic opinion, which was so wrong…Me and Kunj will be suffering the pain for the rest of our life for your wrong judgement…I came here to make you realize your mistakes. I have made it and I have achieved what I wanted to.)
Twinkle composes herself for a sec.

Twinkle: Jaanti hun Aaj umru ka lihaaz na kerte huye bohut kuch keh diya hain maine..Muje maaf kerna Uncle, Aunty…Magar aaj ye na kehti to, phir zindagi me kabhi apne maa papa se nazrey milakey baat nahi ker paati…

(I know I have talked a lot forgetting the fact that you both are elder to me and I am sorry for that…But this was needed..If I don’t talk at least this much, I would never be able to look into my parent’s eyes for the rest of my life…)
Twinkle turning to Usha who is literally stunned to see Twinkle in this way…
Twinkle: Sorry Aunty, I know you will be the most hurt and shocked to hear all this. But I had to do this for my respect and for my parents. I just wanted to prove my point and I am done with it. The moment I got your proposal, I realized that I have reached my destination. The official work which I had done was sending my resignation to office. You all will have to bear me for one more month…I mean till my notice period ends. If you are not comfortable, I am ready to move to any ladies hostel.
Twinkle is about to leave and gets up. Manohar and Usha are shocked to hear that she will be leaving.
Manohar: Beta, Me tumare maa papa se milna chahta hun aur unse mafi maangna chahta hun… Muje bhi pata hai maine bohut galat kiya hai, tumare saath, tumare parents ke saath aur sabse zyada mere kunj ke saath…
(I want to meet your parents and apologise to them…I know I have done a huge mistake…)
Twinkle sits back.

Twinkle: Ji…me phone pe aapki baat kera dungi… (Sure..I will call them and you can talk to them on phone.)
Manohar: Agar vo muje maaf ker sake to kya hum iss rishtey ke bare me aage soch saktey hai?
(If at all they can forgive me, can we think of this proposal?)
Twinkle (with a smile): Muje nahi pata vo mere aur Kunj ker relationship ke bare me kya sochte hai…Per itna zaroor janti hun ki vo aapko maaf ker denge…Jab me yahaan ke liye aa rehi thi to mere parents ne sirf yahi kaha tha ki unhe yeh prove ker ke aana ki tum ghar todne wali ladki nahi ho…Jab me yahaan aayi thi to, Kunj iss ghar me ya Amritsar aane ko taiyaar nahi tha… Aap ko apna beta lauta ker jaa rehi hun Uncle. Aapki family ko jodke jaa rehi hun…Apna vada pura kerke jaa rehi hun…

(I really don’t know what they think of our relationship. But I am sure that they will forgive you. When I was leaving to Amritsar, my parents asked me to promise them that I will prove you guys that I am not a girl who breaks house, instead I am one who makes a house to home. When I came here, Kunj was not ready to come home or to Amritsar…Today I have made your relations as it was earlier. I have completed your family..I am returning your son back…I have kept my promise..)
Manohar: Betaa…

Twinkle: Rehi baat hamare relationship ki toh…Me khud hi nahi chahti ki ab yeh rishta ho…isliye nahi ki pyaar kam hua hai…Me bhi janti hun ki hum donon ek dusre se aaj bhi utna hi pyaar kerte hai..Aur shayad uss se kahin zyada pyaar kerte hai…Bus itni yaadein hi kafi hai mere liye, baki ke zindagi kaatne ke liye…
(And about our relationship…I don’t want to continue this relationship.Not because we are out of love…In fact I know that we still love each other deeply…But this much memories are enough for me to live the rest of my life.)
Manohar: Per kyu? Ab sab tikh hai…Phir kya problem hai? (But why? What is the issue? Everything is solved now…)

Twinkle (with a sad smile): Hain kuch…Bus vo mere aur Kunj ke beech me hain…Jo me kissi se bhi discuss kerna nahi chahungi…Me ne Kunj ko bata diya hai…Aur vo samaj gaya hai…
(There are some…Which is between me and Kunj…I don’t want to discuss it…I have told it to Kunj and he has understood it.)
Twinkle leaves from there.

Precap:- Surprise…Surprise…

Jisha 🙂

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  1. Very different story can’t wait for next ep

    1. Jisha

      Thanks amy

  2. Priya_

    The episode was just too good..I loved it to the core…
    The dialogues were kya batau… Wonderful…
    I could just read this chapter all day long..
    The emotions, pain, guilt.. are potrayed so so well
    Waiting for the next part…

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Priya..next episode submitted

  3. Awesome

    1. Jisha

      Thanks anshika

  4. Ranabulbul

    Main kya karoon
    Main kya karoon
    Koi btao mujhe
    Ek to kitne aache ff likhte ho or kitne aache dialogues
    Main to bas pgl ho jaengi
    Kya feel thi main to emotion me hi behne gayi
    Or tw kya dialogues hain uff mar dala
    Or precap ke do words ne suspense me dal diya hai
    Bas Ab post kar do and take care love u bbye

    1. Jisha

      Thanks bulbul…

  5. I loved it dii!! I am literally crying…even i am a girl and will always stand up for my parents….i understand n i am really pleased to be reading such a wonderful piece of writing! Simply amazing!!

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Aayu

  6. Rashiverma2199

    Wow….jisha Di….episode was lovely….finally twinkle proved her point….

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Rashi…

  7. Ria

    Hey Jisha di,
    Chura Liya hai tumne Jo Dil Ko, kahin Badal na Jaana Jisha di…
    Haha..really, you just sole away my heart but, I’ll let you keep it with yourself. Twinkle ke character pe toh ham fida hogaye. I loved her. The episode was superb. Eagerly waiting for the surprise.. hehe..
    Loads of love.?
    Keep taking care.?

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Ria…next episode submitted…I think it is gonna get posted late..I have a feeling like dat

  8. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Omg jisha di
    it was written so beautifully
    N voh baatein jo twinkle ne manohar se kahin vo itni is achhi tarike se likhi hui thii
    Mera dil toh baag baag ho gaya Aapkaa ff padh kr n Precap SURPRISE
    yeh bataaoo kab surprise nahi hota …..har episode mein kuchh na kuchh interesting sa laati ho di
    N twinkle was fab in her role
    U r just amazing
    Love u ?????
    Take care

    1. Jisha

      Thanks daamini…next episode submitted

  9. Aamu

    No words ?
    In short…

    Awwww…it was so well written do??????
    ??????Loved it??
    ?Loved d dialogues….it’s wow..???
    Feel pain yaar ???
    Emotional 1?
    Do do cont
    In short to long hogya???

    1. Aamu

      n yaa surprise ke liye wait kar rahi hu di..jldi post karna…pls….its killing me…

    2. Jisha

      Thanks aamu..next episode posted

  10. Meeta

    I have never read something like this before.
    this was the best of yours. i just loved it.
    thank you so much for keeping us entertained.
    the dialogues :*
    you r one of the best writers on TU.
    post soon.

    1. Jisha

      Thanks meeta…it means a lot dear…next episode posted

  11. Uffffff wat an part seriously awsme amzing lovely fantastic lov u di cnt wait 4 d nzt suprise part tc

    1. Jisha

      Thanks cutie pie… next episode submitted

  12. Jisha di uh nailed it….u know wt i wz holding ma breathe while reading ds epi….i just loved d way twinkle proved herself……m now spellbound seriously…..

    1. Jisha

      Thanks xavia…I feel so blessed to hear that..next episode posted

  13. dreamer..arundhati

    Jisha di u rocked it…

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Aaru..next episode posted

  14. Jiya_Ani

    Amaaaaaazzzzzziiiinnng di…I must say. I love this twinkle …I love the way you potray her and Kunj’s character… And waiting for surprise..subah se padh rahi hoon..aur aaj surf apka epi padhungi..Kyunki kal Mathematics ka pre-exam hai..aur duniya janti hai meri maths kitni strong hai????..I mean maths acchi hai..not that bad..bad interest kam hai naa..toh last main uthati hoon….
    Chalo..back to studies…thanks for posting such a nice epi…
    Love you??

    1. Jisha

      Thanks lovely… I hope your exams went well… replying too late

      1. Jiya_Ani

        Its fine..and mera exaaammmmmm!!..
        Haaye aaj tak itna acha maths exam nahi gya kitna is baar gya!!..imagine I was fastest in class out of 31 questions I completed 29 in just 1.5 .and was given 3 hrs time..I was astonished to see my speed of solving questions… Oouuuufff????

    2. Jisha

      Wow…u r so fast… keep it up…

  15. Fan

    Super epi di!!!..i knew twinkle will reject..finally twinkles truth it out..i wonder what happens next..eagerly waiting for the nxt part..

    1. Jisha

      Thanks fan..u guessed it right…next episode submitted

  16. Awesome epi… Superb… Di u r really a amazing writer… U discribed twinkle’s pov really very well… Loved it diii… Love u sooooo much….

    1. Jisha

      Thanks sidhanshi…next episode submitted

  17. Shatakshi

    Jisha di
    God!!….I have goosebumps all over my hand….seriously di it was something out of the world
    It was so intense
    Love u di
    Take care❤❤❤

    1. Jisha

      Thanks shatakshi.. happy to hear that dear… next episode submitted

  18. Shreya098

    And the “DIALOGUE QUEEN” award goes to……….

    JISHA DI..???

    O my god di….
    What a “dhaaaasu epi”….sorry haa if u didn’t understood “dhaaaasu”….but kya karu I don’t know its english translation…and kuch cheezo ka maja Hindi mein Hi hai????….

    I just looooooooooooooooooved todays epi

    Usha saying : “some idiot didn’t value u”….
    Apne hi bete ko idiot bol rahe hai….??

    twinkles reply…… wow

    and what…….a surprise is there…..

    I am soo curious….. Pata nahi kal tak wait kaise hoga mujhse…

    Chalo ab bye bye…..and sorry I didn’t commented on ur last epi….I was a bit busy…….sorry

    Love u di???
    Take care

    1. Jisha

      Thanks shreya…sahi kaha…kuch cheezo ka
      Mazaa Hindi me Hi aata hai…I understood dhaasu.. next episode submitted

  19. Kritika14

    OMG! it is really proved that twinkle is do dhari talwar. I love her character. I am just so inspired. I never read anything like this before, it was just the best. You truly are one of the best writers i have come across on tu, no doubt. You wrote the episode so beautifully. Eagerly waiting for the next episode. Really curious to know the surprise that you have planned for us. Love you ? and also, keep taking care 🙂

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Monica…u made my day dear… love you.. next episode submitted

  20. Aksa(SidMin's and the ff writers die hard fan...)

    WOW..SUPERB…it was just mind blowing epi…kyaaa sunaya twinkle ne..amazing…the way u expressed twinkles emotions was just fab…I’m speechless…amazing story..can’t wait for the next one… 🙂

    1. Jisha

      Thanks aksa…next episode submitted

  21. SidMin

    Loved it Jisha di Sorry for not commenting on your previous episode But loved today’s episode and the last one too
    Twinkle’s dialogues Just Loved them Each and every word had the impact Just awesome I have no word to describe it Loved it to the core and Hope Twinj unite soon waiting for the next episode (surprise)
    Love you and take care 🙂

    1. Jisha

      Thanks sidmin…twinj union is not possible so soon…a normal wala surprise…next episode submitted

  22. Omg wat a mind-blowing episode….

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Sana..next episode submitted

  23. Thanmy

    Jisha diiii ur great like seriously when twinkle was saying all those dialogues especially about her mom n dad I felt sooooo good because even I react in the same way no one has the right to point out at our parents u wrote it sooooo well that I just loved this diii of all the episodes this one really touched my heart its splendid diiiii I just loved it and baat jab self respect par aayi toh ……twinkles reaction loved it to the core diiii each n every part of it and normal episodes ki precap padh ke hi mujhe intizaar nahi karpati next episode ke liye aur aap ne surprise kaha I can’t wait diii pls post the next one asap I just love this diii
    And take care dii
    Love u

    1. Jisha

      Thanks thanmy…next episode submitted…
      U made me blush…I am so happy to hear these words…

  24. Jisha diiiiiiiiiii Wat shld I say? I’m having words lacking problem.Okay I’ll just say I loved it to the core…love you sooooooo much di…ty tysm di for giving me such a beautiful ff…di I legit wait for your ff whole day and after reading your episodes I feel like my impatientness to read your ff is not waste and is worthy…di your dialogue queen for me I have told you this earlier also and I’m again saying it…your the best writer di you should be awarded with Oscar award…di I’m damn damn excited for next episode…so many guesses are in my mind right now regarding your next episode let me see whether my guesses are right or wrong…try to post soon di…

    Take care di…

    Love you to the core di ??????????????????

    1. Jisha

      Thanks twinj sidmin…such sweet words…I so happy…next episode posted

  25. Sayeeda

    OMG Jisha di……. ???…. This is my condition right now……. Now u tell me what should I say to u…..
    I’m running out of words!!!…..

    Di DIALOGUE QUEEN… is a very less title to u…. U deserve to be called as the bestest writer in the whole universe….
    Lantern leke bhi dhundhe na toh bhi aap jaisi writer nai milegi….. ???…….

    Amazing episode…. Loved it to the core…..

    Love u ????

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Sayu…u make me blush with ur comments…love you dear… next episode posted

  26. Mind blowing epi di…..loved it…waiting for next one eagerly

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Sidhantfan..next episode submitted

  27. Kruti

    I AM RUNNING SHORT OF WORDS………u nailed d epi Jisha di……..sometimes I think agar ye TEI ki kahani hoti to kitna accha hota…..it would b so unique

    All way long d ff the way u potrayed twinkle…….was just so AMAZING
    and todays epi was bang onn……..i legit loved it

    Love u????……..take care

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Kruti…that is such a huge compliment for me dear.. thank you so much…next episode posted

  28. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous marvelous emotional epi….loved it….rona aa raha h….jo twinkle ne kaha bilkul sahi kaha…..me bhi ek ladki hu toh samjhti hu apne aur apne parents ki respect kya hoti h…aur agr koi kuch bole toh usse kaise jawab dena h…..loved it di….parents ki self respect se badh kr kuch ni h…..eagerly waiting for next part ……..

    1. Jisha

      Thanks purnima…such lovely words…I am so happy…next episode posted

  29. Baby

    oh my my di
    kya khun speechless
    i mean kya sunaya hai twinkle ne manohar sarna ko
    oh god i was crying bt a point came where i laughed a bit
    di amazing oh goness di luvd d episode 2 d core
    n n surprise pls di post nxt asap
    cnt w8 oh god wt ll hpn
    i luvd ur ff di always
    n w8ing fr nxt
    luv u di take care
    n pls uuhhhuu agn post nxt episode asap cant w8

    1. Jisha

      Thanks baby..next episode posted

  30. Wow dii.. you deserve a standing ovation ??????????????????????????????????
    This epi was mind blowing.. the dialogues were up to the mark.. U nailed it.. U r the best writer of this world.. can’t wait for the surprise.. take care and keep smilingg 🙂

    1. Jisha

      Thanks sidvee… that means lot…I am on cloud nine..next episode posted

  31. Romaisha


    Goddddd I’m so speechless right.now .. Like literally… Twinkle… I don’t know wat to say… Shocked and yahh stunned of course!
    Jisha di .. This episode was rocking! Twinkle really spoke well n i could feel Twinj’s pain for some reason .. But damnn real awesome epi!
    Finally another part of the mystery might be solved!! Ooh can’t wait

    Love you di ??

    1. Jisha

      Thanks romaisah…it feels so good to hear that I could make u feel their emotions…love you dear…next part posted

  32. Twinjfan.tamanna

    it was seriously an amazing one di…ur just fabulous…the episode was so emotional ..n dailouges were so amazing….love u…

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Tamanna… love u dear..next episode posted

  33. Jisha Di. ……….????
    Ur epi was damn good,amazing awesome,fabulous, fantastic n full of emotions. Realisation tho hogaya ab bas thoda aur realisation by kunj. Bas uvi ki mystery pata chal jaye.Luv u. Take care

    1. Jisha

      Thanks Rose…. next episode submitted

  34. Jisha di….2day u showed d selfrespect of girls…n stand given by twi….really i read it again n again…wow so beautiful piece of writing….tw voice seems 2 b ur voice…u expressed it so welll….loved it…n im eager 4 d surprise…post asap…n love u n take care di…

    1. Jisha

      Thanks sujina…it means a lot

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