Tashan-e-Ishq: Intense Story of Our Love Episode 7

**Season 2 for Intense Love**
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Hi all I am back. I am overwhelmed with the response you all gave in my previous episode. I didn’t know I will get good response. And thanks for waiting for my fan fiction patiently. Well, this is episode 7. And I am happy to inform that my fair have been successful, managed to sell everything. And thanks to all of your support I have managed to write this fan fiction till date despite my busy schedule. I was too busy last week over projects and I spend my weekends over the project. I got some free time now so i decided to upload this episode.
Here is the link for the intro, episodes and promos.
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Intense+Story+of+Our+Love

Scene 1: Kunj’s room
(From now on story will be after leap, which means currently, flashback part is over.) (Now Kunj’s brother brought him for treatment in Singapore, and then this doctor reads Kunj’s diary- Kunj’s past(epi 1 (second half) -6) and now story will show what happened after that means after 6 years from what it was in episode 6)
The episode begins with Dr.Jaya reading the diary and she gets sad.
And she flips to the last page.
Diary: And this is my story. I lost my Siyappa Queen forever, I used Siyappa Queen to describe her as this name only I gave her and I can call her so only. I was scared what if she found this diary and I use her name. I don’t want her to know this from anywhere else. I myself want to tell her the truth. Only me. She is mine only, but she left me… forever. Why? I loved her a lot. Now there is no use. I lost her. I lost.
Jaya closes the diary and tears drop from her eyes.
Jaya: This guy’s intense love story made me cry. He must have loved her a lot. Poor Kunj.
Just then Kunj comes in the room and he gets angry seeing the diary in Jaya’s hand. And he snatches it from her.
Kunj: How dare you touch my stuffs? No one have right to touch my things without my permission, understand? Especially when I don’t know that person!
Jaya is silent.
Kunj keeps the diary in the drawer and he looks at Jaya.
Kunj: What are you doing here? Get out from my room.
Jaya leaves.
Jaya: (in her mind) I wonder who must be his Siyappa Queen?
As Jaya goes out of the room, Kunj’s brother Jaidev comes and apologizes to her.
Jai: I am sorry, Dr.Jaya Kunj must have misbehaved with you.
Jaya: It’s okay I understand.
Jai: What to do? It’s not his fault also. I wonder what happened with him 5 years ago. After that Kunj entirely changed. He was not that previous Kunj anymore. He is always lost.
Jaya: He lost something precious.
Jai: Yes?
Jaya: You don’t know what happened to him 5 years ago?
Jai: Well, no. But I remember?
Jaya: What?
Jai: 5 years ago, he was kind of changed but very weird. And one day,
Flashback,
Jai comes out of the car and is shocked to see Kunj.
Jai: Kunj! What are you doing here?
Kunj is quiet.
Jai: You are completely drenched. Let me take you home.
Jaidev brings Kunj home.
Out of flashback,
Jai: That day, was when Kunj changed. We tried to speak to him several times but he will never say much. He just talked about work. Sometimes my sister Aliya was there to cheer him up.
Jaya: He must be suffering from depression.
Jai: We also thought so, but it’s not like that at all.
Jaya: Meaning?
Jaidev remembers and tells Jaya what Kunj did?
Jai: One day, I found Kunj walking near the end of the terrace and he was just standing there as he was about to take another step he would have fall down from there, I saved him, and then he hugged me and said what just happened, as if he was clueless what was happening to him?
Jaya is surprised.
Jai: Not only that, one day he was fixing computer something which he loves to do. Aliya brought him to the computer room, as it was something which could made him feel better. Everything was going fine, like Kunj he was doing it as per normal but then suddenly, he saw something and then he started pressing the keyboard so hardly and that to one key that he spoiled it.
Jaya is shocked.
Jai: Dr.Jaya, I think it’s something more than depression. I really don’t know what’s wrong with him.
Jaya: Did he meet with any accident any thing?
Jai: I don’t think so.
Jaya: (in her mind) I have to speak to her soon. Maybe she can speak. This case seems different. I thought it was depression over Kunj’s girlfriend demise, but what he did, I don’t think this is the case. Something is more into this. This case is very complicated.
Jai: Will my brother be cured? What’s wrong with him? We checked out with doctors in India, but they don’t say much. They told me to do a check in overseas, so that’s why I brought him here.
Jaya: I know what to do..
Jai: What is it?
Jaya: My sister is a specialist in all these. Maybe she can do something.
Jai: Thank you so much.
Jaya: No problem.

Scene 2: NUH Hospital
Jaya comes in the cabin and she sits down.
Jaya: How are you?
A girl is shown and her eyes are shown. And she is going through files.
Girl: What made you come here?
Jaya: What to do, the case is like that?
Girl: What is it?
Jaya: What happened you sound different?
Girl: No, nothing.
Jaya: I wanted to say that your sister is sick. She needs an injection.
Just then the girl gets shocked and she gets up, and her face is shown, she is none other than Mahi.
Mahi: No!
Jaya: I knew it was you, Mahi. I recognised from your voice.
Mahi: So finally, you caught me.
Jaya: How would I know not your voice, you are my sweetest youngest sister.
Mahi: Will I really need injections? What happened to me?
Jaya: Nothing happened. I was kidding.
Mahi: What?
Jaya: If you can play prank with me, why not?
Mahi: That’s true
Jaya: Where is she?
Just then Mahi looks and smiles.
Mahi: So finally you are here?
The person is none other than Twinkle who is dressed in a traditional costume and she is wearing a bindi and braided her hair.
Jaya: Great Twinkle.
Twinkle: Jaya Dii, what made you come here?
Twinkle comes and sits down. Mahi opens the doctor coat and she makes Twinkle wear the coat.
Mahi: Now, you can speak to Dr.Twinkle Taneja, Jaya Dii.
Jaya smiles.
Twinkle: Mahi, you are my assistant for now, I want you to do something.
Mahi: Nah, its boring. I am fine with this.
Twinkle: Nothing will happen about you.
Mahi gets a call and she smiles.
Mahi: Will speak to you later bye kakaks? (kakak means sister in Singapore)
Mahi leaves.
Twinkle: This girl.
Twinkle: What brings you here Jaya dii?
Jaya: The thing is like that.
Twinkle: Why what happened?
Jaya: There is this patient I met yesterday. It’s a different case.
Twinkle: What about it?
Jaya: His tactics. Family thought he is suffering from depression, he lost his girlfriend in an accident, but is not that.
Twinkle listens as Jaya tells about what weird things Kunj did.
Twinkle: What is his name?
Jaya: Kunj, Kunj Sarna.
Twinkle is shocked.
Twinkle: Kunj?
Jaya: You know him.
Twinkle nods no.
Jaya: Here is his personal and medical reports.
Jaya passes it to Twinkle. Twinkle is surprised.
Jaya: Twinkle?
Twinkle: Yes
Jaya: Have a look at it?
Jaya leaves.
Twinkle gets sad as she hears the name “Kunj”.
She gets into flashback.

Scene 3: Flashback
Twinkle comes home from shopping.
Twinkle: After 2 days, I will be going away from India and then I will miss this place and I will miss my Kunj the most.
Just then Leela comes to Twinkle,
Leela: Twinkle, pack up now.
Twinkle: There is still time.
Leela: You have to leave for Singapore right now, luckily Yuvi managed to get tickets online.
Twinkle: Why now?
Leela: See this.
Leela passes the letter to Twinkle. Twinkle is shocked.
Twinkle: What? The last day of admission is tomorrow?
Leela: Yes, and if you miss this date, you have to waste a year.
Twinkle: No way, I am leaving for now.
Just then Yuvraj comes,
Leela: Yuvi beta, you got the tickets?
Yuvi: Yes aunty, but there is a problem.
Leela: What is it?
Yuvi: I only got 2 tickets that too with difficulty.
Twinkle: Oh god.
Leela: Twinkle you do one thing, you and Mahi leave for Singapore right now, I would have go but I can’t leave Mahi alone but you can at least take care of her.
Twinkle: Yuvi cancel the ticket I am not going without Maa, and only one year will be waste so no need.
Leela: Have you gone crazy Twinkle? And its fine I will be coming after 2 days.
Twinkle: But Maa?
Leela: You and Mahi stay without me 2 days. I can manage. Yuvi is here, Kunj also, no need to worry.
Twinkle hugs Leela, and she and Mahi leaves for Singapore.
They share some emotional moment.

After two days,
In Singapore,
Mahi is watching TV.
Twinkle: Finally the admission is done. And Mahi yours is next week.
Mahi: No problem.
Twinkle: Mom is coming later, Mahi get ready we have to go to the airport to pick her up.
Mahi was about to switch off TV, they see the news and gets shocked.
Mahi: Maa!
Twinkle tries to call Yuvraj but fails.
Mahi: I am scared dii!
Mahi hugs Twinkle.
Twinkle: Nothing will happen to Maa,
Mahi and Twinkle cries.
Twinkle gets a call
Twinkle: Yuvi’s call, mom is fine
Twinkle holds and she gets shocked and she drops the phone.
Mahi: Dii? How is Maa?
Twinkle cries and she hugs Mahi.

Twinkle gets out of the flashback.
Twinkle: I wish I also brought Maa along that day. If I did so she would have been with us today.
Tears drop from Twinkle’s eyes.
Twinkle: But Kunj!

Twinkle gets into flashback,
Final rites of Leela is celebrated, Twinkle and Mahi are dressed in white and they are weeping. Yuvraj and other people are also there.
Mahi is crying very badly.
Twinkle: Get up Mahi. Let’s go.
Twinkle gets Mahi up and as she, Mahi and Yuvraj is about to go, Twinkle sees Kunj passing by.
Twinkle: Kunj!
Twinkle: Yuvi, you take care of Mahi, I will be back in a while.
Twinkle runs and she goes and runs to Kunj.
Twinkle: Kunj!
Twinkle tries to call Kunj’s name but he doesn’t listen and she runs. Later, Twinkle shouts loudly.
Twinkle: Kunj!
Kunj finally sees Twinkle and he is shocked as he sees a car passing towards Twinkle. He runs and saves Twinkle, they roll over the ground and Sajna plays. They share an eyelock.
Kunj: Get up.
Twinkle gets up and she hugs Kunj tightly and cries. Kunj is surprised and he is about to touch her,
Twinkle: Kunj.
Twinkle is crying, and Kunj breaks the hug.
Kunj: Excuse me, what are you doing?
Twinkle is surprised, to see Kunj who is irked.
Twinkle: Kunj?
Kunj: How do you know me?
Twinkle: I am Twinkle, your Twinkle.
Kunj: Who is Twinkle?
Twinkle is stunned.
Twinkle: Twinkle, your Siyappa Queen.
Kunj: Oh please, I don’t know any Twinkle, there must be some misunderstanding.
Twinkle: Kunj, what are you saying?
Kunj: Please madam ji, you must have some misunderstanding I am not the one who you are thinking.
Twinkle is stunned.
Twinkle: Kunj, please stop joking. This is serious. You don’t know about Maa,
Kunj: Look I have said so many times I don’t know you at all, you must have a big understanding.
Twinkle: So, you forgot all our moments. How we met, how you confessed love to me, and all those. Kunj, I am Twinkle, your love.
Kunj: Get away from me, what nonsense are you blabbaring.
Twinkle: Kunj, please don’t do like this I have lost Maa, I can’t afford to lose you.
Kunj is silent.
Twinkle: Yes, Kunj Maa died in the plane crash. Me and Mahi we survived as we went earlier.
Kunj is looking at Twinkle.
Twinkle: Kunj, please don’t say like this.
As Twinkle was about to hug Kunj, Kunj pushes Twinkle hard and Yuvraj holds Twinkle.
Yuvi: Bro, have you lost it!
Kunj: You take care of her, she seems to be in deep state of shock. That’s why she is blabbaring.
Twinkle: Kunj, please don’t say this, I am your Twinkle, your Siyappa Queen.
Kunj: If you did so again, I may call the police again.
Yuvi: Kunj, you have lost it. I never expected you can stoop so low. Instead of staying with Twinkle at this bad time, you are troubling her? What kind of love is this?
Kunj: Excuse me, you also? What do you want? Some money?
Kunj takes out his wallet and takes out some money and gives to Yuvraj.
Kunj: Okay, you take it. And get lost, and don’t beg.
Yuvraj nods.
Yuvi: I thought you were a gem of a person and you truly loved Twinkle, but I was wrong. I should have never encouraged you to do so. You are so stone hearted. God will punish you for breaking a girl’s heart.
Yuvraj takes Twinkle and leaves.
Twinkle: Kunj!
Kunj leaves. And Twinkle runs to Kunj.
Yuvi: Twinkle!
Twinkle runs and suddenly she feels dizzy and she faints and Yuvraj holds her.
Yuvi: Twinkle!

Later, Yuvraj gets Twinkle home and she gets into consciousness,
Mahi: Dii.
Mahi hugs Twinkle.
Mahi:I only have you in this world. Never leave me.
Twinkle cries.
Twinkle: I also have only you in this world. I will never leave you.
And they hug.
Yuvi: I just can’t imagine how can this Kunj stoop so low.
Mahi: I still can’t believe that Kunj did like this with dii.
Twinkle: No one will take Kunj’s name infront of me from now on,
Mahi and Yuvraj agrees.
Twinkle: I have taken a decision.
Mahi: What is it Dii?
Twinkle: We will sell everything here and go back to Singapore forever. What’s the use of staying here we have nobody here now?
Mahi is sad.
Yuvi: I am with you, Twinkle. Our friends are also with you at this bad times.
Twinkle: Yuvi, I will always inherited of your favour and being with us in our bad times, but there is really no use of staying here. But do visit us at Singapore if you can, as we will never come to India.
Twinkle gets determined.

Scene 4: NUH Hospital
Twinkle is crying after remembering how Kunj refused to know her.
Twinkle remembers all her moments with Kunj.
Twinkle: (in her mind) Kunj, I will never forget what you did with us. I hate you, I hate you Kunj Malhotra.
Twinkle wipes her tears.
Later, a lady comes.
Lady: Mam, there is this patient coming for checkup. I have prepared everything.
Twinkle: Okay, you may leave. I am coming.
Twinkle leaves.
Twinkle gets into the lift and also Kunj comes there, and he gets into the lift.

Scene 5: Lift
Kunj and Twinkle are in the lift and the lift breaks down. The lights go off. Twinkle and Kunj are shocked. Kunj is scared. They fail to see each other.
Kunj: I am scared!
Twinkle comes and holds Kunj’s hand.
Twinkle: Are you an Indian?
Kunj nods.
Twinkle is about to go, Kunj holds her hand.
Kunj: Please don’t leave me and go.
Twinkle is surprised.
Twinkle: (in her mind) This voice sounds so familiar.
Kunj: No! Not fair.
Twinkle: Okay cool down.
Kunj panics.
Twinkle: Let me tell you a story.
Twinkle says some jokes which makes Kunj laugh and Twinkle smiles.
Just then the light comes back, and the repair guy rushes.
Guy: I am sorry sir and mam for this inconvenience this was due to the breakdown. We are so sorry.
Twinkle: It’s fine. But be more careful next time.
Guy: Okay Mam.
The guy leaves.
Kunj and Twinkle is about to see each other’s face, Twinkle gets a call and she leaves. Her duppatta falls on Kunj’s face.
Kunj: (in his mind) I don’t know why I have this feeling, I know her.

Scene 6: Cabin
Twinkle comes in the cabin.
Nurse: Mam, the patient is here already, Kunj Sarna.
Twinkle: (in her mind) Twinkle, why are you thinking so much about that guy. There are so many other Kunj, and he was Malhotra this is Kunj Sarna. No, I can’t work like this.
Twinkle: I would love some other doctor to check this patient.
Nurse: I am afraid we may not be able to do so, until or unless any other doctor agrees for it.
Twinkle: Okay fine, by then I will check this patient.
Nurse: Let me bring him to you.
Twinkle comes to the room and is shocked to find Kunj who is sleeping.
The episode ends.

Precap: Twinkle is checking Kunj, and Kunj holds her hand and Twinkle looks at Kunj. Sajna plays. Twinkle says that I am the doctor and you are just the patient. Kunj is surprised. Later, the nurse comes and passes Kunj’s report. Nurse says this Mr.Sarna’s report, Twinkle sees the report and is shocked.

What do you think happened to Kunj?

I know you all maybe confused with what is happening. But I did so purposely as the story is like that. And well done all for guessing I know it was easy 😛 and this one is hard maybe. And in next episode itself you all will know what actually happened to Kunj? Let’s see who can guess it correctly. And sorry for less Twinj scenes next episode onwards there will be more.
I am sorry, but I may be late in publishing the next episode that is Episode 8, which I will be publish only after 11 August. My last lesson for my first semester is on 6 August, but after that I would be going to Indonesia for holidays and family outing during my small break till 10 August. And my Physics test is on 11 August. So, my plan is to study even in my free time this week and also the work load in last week of lessons is less, but I need to study as I will not do so during my trip. So instead of writing fan fiction, I will be studying. I hope you all understand. Thanks for understanding. But please don’t stop reading my fan fiction. I will try my best to upload the next episode before going to Indonesia for holiday, if not I will publish a promo if I can. And the next episode will be published most likely on 12 or 13 August. Thank you 

And whoever read my season 1 which is Intense Love. Be honest did you like season 1 more or season 2 more. Please do say. And I am planning
to end this fan fiction before September as I will be going to Bangladesh for Eid. And when I was writing season 1, due to internet issues couldn’t publish the episodes properly. I don’t want the same to happen in season 2 so that’s why I may wrap this fan fiction up in first week of September and maybe start a combo fan fiction like Strange and Full of Krazyness after eid. So this may end before 15 episodes. I am not sure yet.

And please do feel free to express your opinions and drop your comments. Criticism is open. Thank you 

33 comments

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey angita thanks for commenting and no worries u will get to know in the next episode itself and I read ur ff intro its awesome was busy thats why couldnt comment today m free thats why read some ffs 🙂

  1. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Fatarajo….Stupid wala FF…Sorry Sorry Stupendous wala FF😛😛😜😜 Fattuuuuu ❤❤❤ I am out of words to appreciate your writing skills, you are just awesome! Like mind blowing! Bechaari Leela Aunty 😮😮😮 But happy to know that our Sayappa queen is safe and sound 😊 Keep going!
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    Well I am back with the season 2 of my AsYa FF but yeah the name is changing, “Broken Relations Are Delicate (AsYa FF : Time to go back! )
    I hope you will read it!
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    Keep smiling..Keep Writing..Stay blessed…TC!
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    Loads of Love Fattu💞💞💞
    -Zuha

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey rashi thanks for commenting happy u liked it and well thanks for expressing ur opinions the first season I write based on what I want the track to shape up like and second season the story was in my mind for quite a long time 🙂

  2. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    This was amazing…. Loved it and sincerely I like the second season
    But pls don’t end it no problem if u don’t post for a few days but don’t end it

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey kruti thanks for commenting and thanks for your opinion, in season 1 i related to the show and season 2 is a fresh storyline and I will extend this ff no worries but maybe it will be a 17 epi ff and next epi I will publish on 12 or 13 aug and from 24 aug I will be more frequent in publishing ffs 🙂

  3. Zakiyah

    |Registered Member

    Second season is amazing!!!…..Diya na aur ek jhatka…….yei sochtei sochtei ki Kunj ko kya hogaya mai matna mar Javo ghi Jaldi post Karna plz😔😰🤔🤔

    • Zakiyah

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      Joyce Mujhe Lagta hai Kunj Pagal hai ya he hates twinkle….mai itna DiMag padhAi par lagati hun 😂😂😂Tu hi bole na nxt epi pei usko kya hova 😅

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey zaku thanks for commenting yaar and I loved ur dp 🙂 mera cutie pie pikachu and hahah abhi toh aur jhatka hain (there are more shocks upcoming) m i right 😛 well yaar I cant publish b4 12 or 13 aug busy hoon aur 7th mein holiday paar indonesia jaa rahin hoon 😛

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Haha dont think too much I dont wanna make u crazy n yes sab tera twinj os is written by me 🙂 n aft exams will write two more os on twinj

  4. Baby

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    hey fatarjo pls dont end it so soon d episode ws nyc i thnk kunj aftr nowinj about twinkles death which was actually nt hers bt her mdrs smthing hv hpnd to him he may b in shck n trauma sooo he is doing soooooooooo d episode was luvly ii luvd it 2 d core pls cntinue asap as cnt w8 its being full off suspense

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey baby thanks for commenting well my policy is to end my ff within 20 episodes as I dont like to drag this was suppose to be a 15 epi ff but will extend it to 17 and well what actually happened that u will know soon and well I cant publish b4 12 or 13 as I will be on vacation and 11 I have a physics test also 😛

  5. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Wwoooowwwwwww …..Fatarajo u always steal my heart nd a great smile through ur ff …
    I loved ur ff soooooo much yrr …amazing …awesome episode ..

    About ur question …so I say I loved both the season nd believe me I’m saying true ….u know when I read ur first season I was a silent reader …nd I started to read ur ff after the episode where kunj is declared dead though he was alive nd then in one of the upcoming episode u posted the link from episode 1 till that episode which I mentioned ….

    Nd after seeing the links I was sooo happy nd I read all the previous episode within 1 hr as I was so excited to read it ….
    U r among one of them who made me crazy for twinj ff …thank u so much for giving me the best gift …

    Love u …

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey sayeeda thanks for commenting and ur ff is too good and it makes me so happy when one of my fav writers comment so well about me 🙂 and happy u liked both my ffs well season 1 i related it more to the story season 2 is a fresh story n hahah happy u could read my season 1 all episodes too and wow so sweet of u dear really made my day and love u too 🙂

  6. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Fatarajo,
    As usual I’m late. But, what to do! Same problem as yours. College and studies takes up most of the time of the day. Anyways, forget it. The episode was splendid! I loved it so much. Haww..what happened to Kunj? Why did he fail to recognise Twinkle? I don’t know. It isn’t memory loss I guess. It’s something else may be some rare disease. Anyways, I’m really for the next episode. Will be eagerly waiting for it and take your time as I totally understand your problem. Even I can post my ff once or max twince a week these days. Okay. Enough now.
    Back to your question, I loved both the seasons you know. Season one because it was very cute and I feel the second season has an interesting storyline. Don’t think the previous one didn’t. It did but, it’s just that there are lot of curiosities in this track.
    Also, are you a Muslim? I hope it’s not offensive. Im just asking in my interest. If you don’t feel like you can ignore the question, I won’t mind.
    Loads of love.😘

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey ria more than punctuality I m just happy with the fact that u at least commented and its okay I understand I also have the same problem. You know last few days I was too busy, b4 yesterday last 3 days I stayed awake till 3am to complete my projects 🙁 well I will say ur answer is kinda close and well next episode I will publish on 12 or 13 aug and well I will start reading ur ff once u publish it as tomorrow I m free also but for a while and haha thanks for liking both my season 😛 n yes i m a muslim and nah its okay u can ask me as much questions as u want to I love to talk a lot and nah I wont ignore u love u too dear 🙂

  7. Sidhantfan

    Wow….amazing episode
    I think kunj pagal ho gaya hai or something like memory loss…i know i know that i am being stupid 😂😂😂😂 but yaar ab tum hi bata dena

  8. sujina

    oh my god….this is so perceptional….
    how emotional story is dis…
    really its an intense luv story…
    plz plz plz i hope d misunderstanding gets cleared i loved it 2 d core…jaya plz tell…
    twinkle n kunj plz get united…
    n yes my eyes got teary reading ur ff…
    u have made it so so emotional…
    plz post asap….

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey sujina thanks for commenting and yeah I made it emotional is like that one and dont worry all will be fine at the end of the day so no worries and oh no I m sorry and will publish the next epi on 12 or 13 aug

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