Tashan-e-Ishq: Intense Love (Episode 5)


You can read the previous parts of this fan-fiction by this link:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tashan-e-ishq-intense-love-introduction/Episode 1:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tashan-e-ishq-intense-love-episode-1/Episode 2:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tashan-e-ishq-intense-love-episode-2/Episode 3:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tashan-e-ishq-intense-love-episode-3/Episode 4:

Here Twinkle and Kunj wakes up where they share some cute moments and also some nok-jhok.
Kunj wakes up and sees Twinkle.
Kunj: (in his mind) Twinkle, my Siyappa Queen you always look beautiful, even when you are sleeping. I really love you a lot. I really wanted to say this to you for quite a long time, but I fear to lose you. I can’t even think of me being without you. I love you.
Here the sunshine disturbs Twinkle, and Kunj covers Twinkle face with his hand to avoid sunshine and Saajna music plays.

Twinkle wakes up and sees Kunj and they share an eyelock.
Twinkle: (in her mind) Kunj, I am in love with you. I have never expected that this day will come, I want to confess my love for you but I have this strange feeling to lose you. I can’t even imagine about it. I love you.
Here as Kunj and Twinkle comes closer to kiss each other suddenly Kunj’s phone rings.
Kunj: Hello? Okay, I will come to the office soon.
Kunj keeps the phone.
Twinkle: So, you are going to the office?
Kunj: Yes, they told me to come early today.
Kunj gets ready and suddenly he breaks the button of his shirt.
Kunj takes out the button and needle and thinks how to sew it.
Twinkle: Never mind, I will help you.
Kunj: It’s okay

Twinkle: Let me sew it.
Kunj: I am not stupid that I will kill myself, by letting you sew the button, who knows you may kill me with this needle. I will do it by myself.
As Kunj was about to do so, Twinkle snatches it and sews his shirt, Kunj looks at Twinkle, and Saajna music plays, and as Twinkle continues sewing she accidentally pricks Kunj.
Kunj: Ouch!
Twinkle: I am so sorry; actually it’s my first time, that’s why.
Kunj: Then who told you to do so, Siyappa Queen?
Twinkle: I am sorry na,
As Twinkle finishes sewing and as Kunj moves suddenly the needle pricks Twinkle’s finger and blood comes out.
Twinkle: Ouch!
Kunj rushes and makes her sit down.
Kunj: Who told you to do so?
Kunj sucks blood from Twinkle’s finger, Twinkle looks at Kunj.
Twinkle: (in her mind) you care so much about me, Kunj?
Kunj: You think what you are an expert in sewing.
Twinkle: At least I have successfully sewed the buttons on your shirt and how about you; you just spoiled the entire food and almost made me have food poisoning.
Kunj: Oh no!

Twinkle: What?
Kunj: I forgot about the kitchen.
Twinkle: That means I have to clean the kitchen now?
Kunj: How is your foot?
Twinkle: My foot is fine now, but what about the kitchen?
Kunj: That’s what I am thinking.
Aliya: Don’t worry Bhaia, kitchen is clean now.
Kunj: Aliya?
Aliya: Yesterday when I went to the kitchen after I returned home with mom and Babe, we were shocked to see the kitchen.
Then mom, I and Babe cleaned the kitchen.
Twinkle: What? You could have called me.
Usha: Kunj called me and told that you were injured. So we didn’t call you, and Kunj also went out for some work.
Twinkle: I am so sorry, Sasu ma.
Usha: No sorry, at least Kunj have understood how difficult it is to cook.
Kunj: Yes mom, I understood.
Usha: How was the food?
Twinkle tries to laugh and Kunj doesn’t reply.
Babe: From your expression and looking at the condition of the kitchen I can say how good the food was.
Kunj: Mom, I have to leave for office now.
Usha: Yes, you can go but eat something.
Kunj: Never mind, I will eat something at the office, I am already late.
Kunj leaves.
Twinkle: I go and call Chinki I wonder why she didn’t come yesterday?
Anita is shocked to see Aliya.
Anita: (in her mind) what is Aliya doing here? That means Yuvi lied to me.
Here Yuvraj wakes up in the morning and sees Chinki sleeping.
Yuvraj goes and someone calls him.

Yuvi: Hello?
Anita: Hello Yuvi, where are you?
Yuvi: Mom!
Yuvi: (in his mind) what to tell mom?
Anita: How is Aliya?
Yuvi: (in his mind) by now, mom must have known that I have not kidnapped Aliya.
Yuvi: Sorry mom, actually I couldn’t kidnap Aliya.
Anita: I know, I saw Aliya just now, by the way where are you?
Yuvraj looks at Chinki.
Yuvi: I have went out to Goa with my friends, I got a call that Aliya didn’t get kidnapped from the goons, I got so angry but?
Anita: You only know how to hang out. Keep the phone.
Yuvraj keeps the phone.
Yuvi: I just hope mom doesn’t gets to know that Chinki is kidnapped instead of Aliya. How will I tell Aliya the truth, she would have helped me?
Yuvraj leaves, Chinki overhears Yuvraj.
Chinki: Truth? What truth is Yuvi hiding? I must find it out.

Here, Twinkle is worried as she is getting any calls from Chinki.
Babe: What has happen Twinkle puttar, you look so worried?
Twinkle: Yes Babe, I am trying to call Chinki since yesterday but she is not responding.
Babe: She must be busy.
Twinkle: She was supposed to come here yesterday, she even said that she is on the way, but she never reached or call me back. I thought maybe she may be stuck due to some work, but today also and no messages also.
Babe: There maybe some problems with the network, that’s why she couldn’t call you, back.
Twinkle: But she should have called me back at least once, she always calls me but what’s wrong with her now?

Here Anita comes, and listens. Just then someone calls her.
Anita: Hello?
Goon: Madam one of your members are arrested.
Anita: What? You guys didn’t kidnap Aliya, so how did he get arrested?
Goon: Because of Yuvraj sir.
Anita: Yuvi? But he is in Goa now.
Goon: That I don’t know, but he arrested him yesterday.
Anita: What? This boy is too much.
Anita keeps the phone.
Anita: I admit the goon did some mistakes, but it was his fault. Arrest! I must talk to Yuvi as soon as possible.
Anita tries to call Yuvi.
Anita: Now why this Yuvi’s call is is unavailable?
She leaves from there.
Here Babe tells Twinkle something.
Babe: Today you must go to Kunj’s office and bring lunch for him.
Twinkle: Babe? Me?
Babe: Yes you. I admit you got injured but the driver will drop you to the office and you just have to go to Kunj’s cabin.
Twinkle: My foot is absolutely ok now, that’s not a big problem but still?
Babe: Then there is no problem at all, you just take the lunchbox and also have lunch along with Kunj. Understand?

Babe leaves.
Twinkle: Now I have no other option but to give this lunchbox to Twinkle.
Twinkle leaves.

Here Twinkle brings the lunchbox to Kunj’s office.
Kunj: Twinkle, you?
Twinkle: I have brought lunch for you.
Kunj: I hope you didn’t cook today’s meal.
Twinkle: I can at least cook better than you.
Twinkle serves food to Kunj.
Kunj: You also have some?
Twinkle: No, no it’s okay.
Kunj: You will never listen to me.
Kunj feeds Twinkle. Twinkle looks on.
Twinkle: Kunj?
Kunj smiles.
Twinkle: Your turn?
Kunj: I will have it later.
Twinkle: I didn’t cook today’s food.
Kunj: Then who?
Twinkle: Sasu ma.
Kunj: Ma?
As Kunj opens his mouth, Twinkle also feeds him.
Kunj: What was that?
Twinkle: Tit for tat.

They finish lunch as Twinkle feeds Kunj. Kunj looks at Twinkle.
Kunj: (in his mind) I think I should confess love to Twinkle now.
Kunj: Twinkle, I have something to say.
Twinkle: What?
Kunj: It is something very important. It is the most important thing in our life.
Twinkle: Tell me.
Kunj: Actually, Twinkle, I…..
Just then Kunj’s boss come in.
Boss: Kunj?
Kunj: Hello sir.
Boss: Oh so this is your wife?
Kunj: Yes, she is my wife Twinkle and Twinkle this is my boss.
Twinkle greets Kunj’s boss.
Boss: Kunj actually I have something to say.
Kunj: Sure sir
Twinkle: I think I should go from here.
Boss: Mrs Sarna you can stay here? This decision may also be related to you.
Twinkle: Me?
Kunj: Twinkle?
Boss: Actually Kunj, you have done a very good job and also being very standard so we have decided to promote you.
Twinkle and Kunj are happy.

Kunj: Thank you so much sir.
Twinkle: Thank you.
Boss: But there is a problem?
Kunj: Problem? What problem sir?
Boss: Actually for this promotion, your posting will be done somewhere else, at Bangalore.
Kunj: Bangalore?
Boss: I know this may be a shocker as your entire family stays here so maybe you may love to reconsider your decision.
Twinkle is sad from inside but pretends to be happy.
Twinkle: That’s not a big problem
Kunj: Twinkle? Can you go out of here for a while?
Boss: No, no it’s okay
Twinkle: Never mind, sir it’s not a big problem.
She looks at Kunj angrily and leaves.

Here Kunj’s boss is discussing with Kunj. Twinkle tries to overhear, and she finally manages to listen to the conversation.
Kunj: Sir, I have no problem, I am fine with my posting in Bangalore.
Twinkle gets sad and she leaves from there without listening to the entire conversation.
Boss: Then, I will give you promotion.
Kunj: But sir, I have something to say, I have come here for my family and I am doing this job only for my family so that we can stay together happily. I no need promotion, my family matters the most, and I can’t stay away for my responsibilities. I am sorry, it will be better if you give someone else this job.
Boss: Okay, fine. But I am really proud that you cared about your family. It is not easy to find someone like you who is good both professionally and personally.
Kunj smiles. The boss leaves.
Kunj: Now I can confess my love to Twinkle.
As Kunj comes he is surprised to see Twinkle not there.
Kunj: I think I was slightly mean to her, maybe that’s why she left? Oh god, why are you making it more difficult for me to confess my love for Twinkle.

Here Chinki follows behind Yuvraj and decides to confront him. Here Anita calls Yuvraj.
Anita: Where are you Yuvi?
Yuvi: I already told you mom, I am at Goa.
Anita: Why did you arrest the goon?

Yuvi: (in his mind) Now, I am gone.
Yuvi: Good that I arrested him. He does not even use his brains. Can’t he even kidnap a girl?
Anita: But Yuvi for that he shouldn’t arrest you.
Yuvi: Arrest? After what he did even you yourself will say Yuvi have done the good thing by arresting him?
Anita: Why? What did he do?
Yuvi is surprised and doesn’t know what to reply.
Yuvi: He threatened me. He threatened Yuvraj Luthra.
Anita: Okay, Yuvi, I understand, how dare he threaten you?
Yuvi: No use of talking about this. Now I have to think of some other plans. This time my plan won’t fail.
Anita: Your plans?
Yuvi: I mean your plans mom; I have always considered your mission as mine.
Anita: Okay beta, come home as soon as possible, I am already missing you a lot.
Yuvi: Okay mom, bye.
Anita: Bye mom.
Yuvraj keeps the phone as he looks behind is shocked.

Here Kunj returns home and everyone is having dinner, and Twinkle is angry with Kunj. While having dinner, Twinkle whispers to Kunj.
Twinkle: Kunj, when will you tell others about the promotion?
Kunj: Promotion?
Twinkle: Won’t you tell others about your promotion and posting.
Kunj: (in his mind) Looks like Twinkle doesn’t know that I have rejected the promotion. Let me play a prank with her.
Kunj: I will give everyone a surprise.

Twinkle: Okay,
Aliya: What are you whispering Bhaia and Bhabi?
Twinkle: Nothing.
Aliya: Must be something very romantic.
Usha gestures Aliya
Aliya: Okay, I am eating.
Anita: (in her mind) Drama in this house will never end.

Here Yuvraj looks behind and sees nothing. Chinki is hiding.
Yuvraj takes his mom’s picture out.
Yuvi: Mom, I know you will be angry when you will get to know about my plans. It is totally different from your plans and I have a reason for it. I really need to prove you this mom, and that is,
As Yuvraj looks in front Chinki runs away.
Yuvi: I feel someone is listening to me. Anyways, mom actually I am doing all these for your benefits and when all the truth will be out, you will be proud of me, you will be proud of your Yuvi.
Chinki comes and Yuvraj is shocked.
Yuvi: Chinki!

Here Kunj and Twinkle is talking about the promotion.
Twinkle: Kunj, I need to ask you something?
Kunj: Yes, ask me.
Twinkle: Kunj, actually is it ok if you don’t go to Bangalore?
Kunj is surprised.
Twinkle: I know this promotion is very important for you, especially for your family.
Kunj looks on.
Kunj: So?
Twinkle: Kunj, please don’t leave me.
Kunj: Why? Why you don’t want me to leave.
Twinkle: Actually, Kunj I….
Kunj: Just say whatever you want to say.
Twinkle: Just don’t go as I am very scared to stay in this room alone.
Kunj gets up.
Kunj: Seriously, Twinkle?
Twinkle is surprised.
Kunj: I thought you don’t want me to go, because you consider me something else but I was wrong. Now I will definitely go.

Twinkle: Kunj, why are you reacting like this?
Kunj: You forced me, Twinkle. Now it’s final I am leaving from here and leaving you forever. Don’t stop me.
Twinkle: Kunj, please don’t go, please.
It is Twinkle’s nightmare and she continues saying.
Twinkle: Kunj, please don’t leave me, please.
Kunj is surprised as he wakes up.
Kunj: Twinkle? Twinkle?
Twinkle wakes up and hugs Kunj. Saajna music plays.
Twinkle: Please don’t leave me Kunj.
Kunj: I will also never leave you. You also don’t leave me.
Just then Kunj remembers,
Kunj: Okay, relax. Drink wate.
Kunj makes Twinkle drink water.
Kunj: Twinkle, are you ok?
Twinkle remembers about his promotion and becomes angry.
Twinkle: Yes, I am fine. Now let me sleep. You also sleep as you got work tomorrow.
Kunj: Okay, fine. Twinkle why did you tell me not to leave you? What have you seen in your dreams?
Twinkle gets surprised.
Twinkle: Actually Kunj I saw in my dream that I was drowning in the water, and you left my hand and then I got drowned.
Kunj laughs.
Twinkle looks at the opposite side.
Kunj: I wish I could really do that.
Twinkle: You are always good for nothing.
Twinkle sleeps.

Kunj: (in his mind) for a moment, I thought that you care about me and you don’t want me to leave. I thought you also love me, but I was wrong. I think I should reconsider about my decision for going to Bangalore.
Twinkle: (in her mind) I thought you were really concerned about me, and you also won’t leave me, if that was true you won’t have left me alone and go to Bangalore. I thought you also love me, but this time also my love is one-sided.
Kunj and Twinkle sleeps at the opposite direction. Bin Tere from I Hate Luv Stories plays. And Twinkle and Kunj remembers their moments with each other. They both have tears on their eyes.

Here Chinki tries to make Yuvraj confess about his plans.
Chinki: I have listened to everything.
Yuvraj is surprised.
Yuvi: Listen, Chinki whatever you just heard was not true.
Chinki: Okay, I admit nothing is true, but I would call Anita Aunty.
Yuvraj smirks.
Yuvi: Do you have a phone at the first place?
Chinki shows him a phone. Yuvraj is surprised
Yuvi: How did you get that?
Chinki: It was here, I tried its working, I even called Twinkle by using this phone, and I can call Anita aunty and then tell her that you have kidnapped me instead of Aliya and that you are here not in Goa.

Yuvi: Listen Chinki, you won’t do anything like that. If not?
Chinki: If not what? You will call your gang. Okay, call them. Twinkle is already on the way, I will see what you can do.
Yuvi: Listen Chinki, it’s still not too late call Twinkle and make sure she doesn’t reach here and give me back the phone.
Chinki: Okay, I am calling Anita aunty.
Yuvi: Okay, I will tell you the truth. Just don’t call mom.

Here Twinkle wakes up and she is surprised to see the bed empty.
Twinkle: Kunj? Where is he?
Twinkle comes downstairs freshen up.
Twinkle: Babe has you seen Kunj anywhere?
Babe: Yes, he has already left for his new office in the morning?
Twinkle: New office.
Babe: Yes, he said he will be at the station and the train is at 10.
Twinkle sees the watch and its 9.30
Twinkle rushes to stop Kunj.
Babe: Twinkle puttar, where are you going?
Here Twinkle is on the way, and she sees Kunj.
Twinkle: Kunj?
She alights from the auto and stops Kunj. Kunj sees Twinkle, and as Twinkle is running a car approaches to Twinkle, Kunj saves Twinkle. They both share an eyelock and Saajna plays.
Kunj: Twinkle are you okay?
Twinkle: Yes, now leave me.

Twinkle leaves angrily. Kunj is sad.
The episode ends.

The next episode Tashan-e-Ishq: Intense Love will be published by next Sunday, 7 Feb Night, so please stay tuned. Sorry readers, I know it’s quite a long time, but I would be busy in these days. So, Episode 6 of Tashan-e-Ishq: Intense Love would be a maha episode, longer than the usual episodes.

Precap: Here Kunj stops Twinkle, Twinkle asks me you don’t even care about me, and they fight where Kunj confesses his love. Twinkle is surprised. On the other hand, Yuvraj reveals the actual truth of his plan which shocks Chinki a lot.

How will Twinkle react with Kunj’s love confession? Will she also confess her love? What will happen next in Twinkle and Kunj’s love story? What is the truth that Yuvi has been hiding from Anita? What made Chinki shocked?

For that do watch out for the maha episode.

And yes do feel free to express ur opinions, as the fate of this ff and no.of episodes will depend on the no. Of comments so comment if possible and comment as much as u can 
And please kindly recommend any track that you would love to see in this ff. I will try to add that track in my fan-fiction episodes later.

The inital days for the fan-fiction of Tashan-e-Ishq: Intense Love was to be published was supposed to be every Wednesday and Sunday. If you want changes in these days, you can recommend any other day you want.
And yes do remember to check out the maha episode of Tashan-e-Ishq: Intense Love on next Sunday, 7th Feb. Thank you 

Credit to: RANDOMFAN


  1. Ritzi

    Yeah the ff was extremely awesome but at the same time it was extremely big try to make it a little small …. If you want

  2. Wao superb….its amazing ..m speechless ..no words to appreciate….hats off to u man… But its really long till 7 Feb..i ‘ll be eagerly waiting

  3. kna786

    In the maha episode i think you should make her confess her love and they have romantic evening together and tell each other how much they love each and that would be good

  4. Fatarajo

    I will try I m actually busy these days that’s why I can’t promise so to make u all happy m gonna do a Maha episode on that day

  5. Cutie pie

    Plllllz let twinj confess deir lov 4 eachother n lot offff romantic scenes plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    N plzzzzz post on all weekdays

    • Fatarajo

      I will post it on 7th feb sorry, actually I would be out of town so I m preparing for that but in 7th feb there would be a Maha episode so do read it 🙂

  6. Cutie pie

    Wat time r u going to post d nxt maha part plzzz post it fst cnt wake v hav waited a lot nw plxxx post fst let twinj cnfess to each other n rontic scenes plzzz try to post 4 parts a weeek mondy wednesdy friday n sundy plzzzzz

  7. Fatarajo

    I have just submitted it now I m so sorry I was super busy hopefully all of u will get to read it tomorrow, sorry for the inconvience

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