Tashan e aashiqui (Episode 49 & 50)

Hey today I am going to complete my half century … hope you like it

Episode 49 and 50

Yuvi = Aryan can you please book a room in a hotel for me ..

Aryan = offcourse sir . For how many days ?

Yuvi = days … I don’t know for how many days you just book and you can leavee for Punjab.

Aryan = but sir how can I leave you alone ( yuvi gives him confusing look ) I mean I should be with you all time .

Yuvi = okey I will give you two option choose one . Either go back or else do all the work without questioning . And if you chose second do book a room for yourself in same hotel .

Aryan left in thinking and he came with onclusion was about to utter to yuvi but when He looked at his side he don’t found him. .

Yuvi was driving a car. He was deeply immersed in the thought of twinkle …… Just then an idea striked in his mind . He. stopped stopped the car at side and call his mum Leela.

Leela = hello

Yuvi = hello Mom I want to tell you something about Twinkle she is alive you know I have met her in the flight which I have taken to reach Goa I’m still in Goa

Leela = yuvi have you gone mad she is dead she is no more that’s why I am saying to you don’t take so much stress just take some rest you keep doing work at late hours that’s why you are imagining Twinkle around you .

Scene 2

Just then lights got off. And a spotlight got on. And then a girl entered . All turned their heads towards her . And kunj noticed her it was none other than twinkle . He was completely mesmerized to see her beauty .

She was wearing a white colour floral length gown . And her hairs were put in a bun . And she was wearing a pearl bracelet in her left wrist . She was completely looking like an angel .

Kunj was unable to take off his eyes from her .
Kunj ( thinks ) =you are really an angel . Not from looks but also from heart …

But he came in sense with a push from someone . Then he took over the Mike .
There twinkle was feeling nervous to see so much crowd . Her eyes were searching someone . Just then she hear a voice . And she felt relax after listening it .

Kunj = so ladies and gentleman please welcome my company’s new vice president Ms . Twinkle ….

And he tells twinkle from eyes to come on stage . She came

Kunj = so here is my new vice president . We all welcome you for becoming the part of our group i.e. Sarna industry’s. …

Just then again light goes of . And spotlight goes to boy . When twinj saw him they got shocked. It was arnav ….

Kunj’s manager speaks in his ears = sir he is newly appointed vice president of our second branch in Delhi .

Kunj got very much anger . He tightens his fist . Twinkle raw that and holds his fist and tells him not to do any thing here .

Kunj = so here is our new vice-president of another branch . Let’s welcome him also …. His name is Arnav …

All people felt something weird … twinkle saw that …. she immediately took Mike from kunj .

Twinkle = thank you so much sir … I promise you i will never let you down … and now I think it’s enough of introduction part . Let’s have some entertainment. ..

She tells entertainer to come and show his performance . …

And they started their performance …. twinj came down from the stage . … twinkle looked at kunj who was busy in arguing with manager about the arnav

Kunj (to manager ) = who has appointed him without my knowledge. …. (he was shouting but due to the music of performer people were unable to listen … so this matter doesn’t got spread )

Manager = Sir I also don’t know …

Kunj = leave it … I want this boy to leave this place now …

Twinkle felt bad. …… kunj left from there . He sat on the seat … but he was not able to concentrate on anything … but something got his concentration ….. that was a voice …

It was of twinkle she was going to sing a song …..

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main

Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
Hoon piya bas teri main
Ho chhu le toh khari main

(Toh khari main khari main…)

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan

Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun ri

Tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
Dariya ye tar jaaun jee
Ishq ye paake main tera
Nikhar jaaun ri…

Piya bas teri main
Ho.. chhu le toh khari main
toh khari main khari main…

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan

Song ends …

All clapped for her . Kunj was lost in her beautiful voice. … …. he felt extremely peace in her voice. … he got relax after listening her voice …..

Event got overed …

Twinj came to the parking area …. They saw arnav there who was busy on a call … kunj unable to control his anger … he went to him … and hit him on his face … his phone fall down …. in front of twinkle’s feet … kunj again start beating him …

Kunj = what you want ha …. tell me directly … stop playing games with me ….

Twinkle pick up the phone … she was about to cut the call … when she heard a familiar voice. ….. she put the mobile with her ear …. and got shocked when … she heard it. …

It was of mahi

Menu on call = hey arnav … well done now bro will get possessive for twinkle. .. and they will obviously tell their feelings to each other ….. hey you are not speaking any thing … I know your entry would have left them in shock …. thank you buddy …. you are my best friend ….

Twinkle for shocked … kunj was about to punch arnav … she throw mobile .. and ran towards him. … she held kunjs fist …

Kunj looked at her . She tell no with her expression. …

Kunj = leave me twinkle ….

Twinkle = kunj leave him .. it was all mahi’s plan ..

Kunj (got shocked ) = are you mad … she is in Delhi …. and what will she get from this …

Twinkle = kunj …… arnav is best friend of mahi and she have … only send him …

Kunj = what ? ( shocked )

Kunj eye’s arnav …

Arnav = ya she have only send me …. that day mahi has called me and told to do acting ….. and on the road … mahi told me that twinkle have lost … so I also want to search her ….. when I found you twinkle. .. then you was not trying to understand that I want to help you …. and in this you fell down on road …. when I saw kunj came … I left thinking you are safe ….. that day at the house attack was all planned by mahi … so you tell your feelings to each other …. and today also she sent me …

Kunj = what (shocked )

Arnav = yup buddy .. now confess your feelings …. I have got beaten up a lot …. now pls do complete my work ….

Twinj was unable to understand what to do …

Kunj = hey I am sorry to beat you . I don’t have any feelings for her she is my best friend only …

Arnav = bro … just look in your heart at then tell me don’t you have any feelings more than friendship …. I can’t tell from your faces and actions … you have feelings for each other …

Twinj blushed … arnav leaves .

Twinj looked at each other …. and was not able to understand anything ….

Kunj = come let’s leave for hotel …

Twinkle nods ….

In car …

Kunj was driving car …. Twinkle was looking outside window ….. she saw a hotel …

Twinkle = partner stop the car ….

Kunj applied brakes ….

Twinkle = partner see that ….. I am feeling hungry … we can go to that hotel ….

Kunj nods ….

They entered in to the hotel … as they were wearing occasional and matching clothes . So everyone mistook … them as a couple ….

A waiter offered them a bouque …. thinking them as a couple …. and our innocent twinj took it as a welcome gift ….

And he made sit them … there performance was going to entertain visitors …. that was a couple dance ….

Twinj start watching it ….. but after few seconds they saw themselves dancing with each other rather than that dancers …. They got shocked and looked at each other. .. and saw their partner’s sitting infront of themselves …..

They passed a slight smile to each other … and again started watching performance …. but again they saw each other. …. and again looked at each other. ..

Twinkle (thinks ) = what is happening to me why I am seeing I with kunj in that couple …

Kunj (thinks )= what is happening to me why i am seeing I with twinkle in that couple .. .

Just then waiter arrives and offers them for a couple dance … Firstly they resist but finally agree …

They wearing white … and the setup was all white .. and folwers was of white colour so everything was there to make this day special …

Song plays …

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
(Kunj placed hand on twinkle’s waist … Twinkle feels his touch and closer her eyes …. kunj saw twinkle with close eyes and himself took her hand and places on his shoulder. Twinkle opens her eyes … kunj took her another hand and put in his hand )

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
( kunj make twinkle dance in that position and now he revolves twinkle )

Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
(Kunj make twinkle fall in his arms and they start getting straight but with the slow motion )

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
( twinkle tries to leave but kunj holds her hand )

Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane
Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla….
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota…..
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo
(And he pulled her towards him … with sudden jerk she got hit by the kunj’s chest … and her hand placed on his chest … she looked at kunj awekwardly … kunj made her face up … by placing a finger under her chin … )

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
( kunj looked at twinkle who was closing her eyes … he plucked her hairs behind her ear. .. Twinkle looked at him … kunj again held her wrist and she put her hand on his shoulder . … and they again did a same step )

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane
Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha
Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera
(Kunj wraps twinkle in his arms … twinkle’s head lying on his chest. …..)

Teri Yaado Main Rahoo
Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main Milu
(Kunj placed his hand on twinkle’s waist … feeling his touch .. Twinkle turned towards him … kunj sensously touches her cheek .. and then moved his hand in her hairs … which was silky )

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo
Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
(And now with a jerk kunj make twinkle falls in his arms … Twinkle unable understand what happen closed her eyes and clutched kunj’s shirt in fear ..)

Song ends ….

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How was that …. pls do tell me …. here my 50 got completed……

Thank you all my commentator for supporting me till here

Here are the name of commentator …. who have even commented even once …. till 48 … so I wholeheartedly thanks to them I really want to thank you for supporting me till my 50th journey thank you thank you so much

Shreya , aamu , saya , baby , Purnima aggarwal , baby , Angita , Rashiverma2199 , jasmin , Kruti , Sidmin ,Shatakshi , Shreya098 , sidmin damini, Aisha jha , romaisha , zayb zikra, ayesha khanum, sayeeda , mahira Khan , sidmin love , misha , sidhant fan , fan , Nithika , srija , shreya , lovely , Fatima, sonali05 , sidhanshi, dreamer … arundhati, meeta , adit , Shona, chehak , lover , maggi , ritzi , anushka , amal, fatarajo , ria , Shona, apporwa, sidmin lover , sameera , yashasvi , Arshifan , harshita , zarmin Shah, poorvi, adina Khan , sonali …. , directioner91 , dolly , shiny, , die hard fan of sidmin, jasmine wani , callmenazu, SMC, sidmin , LG ( Kunj ) , twinj fan tamanna, krystal kryssie , keerthana , krystal , sam , vebi , your fan , Fiona , anushka , panchi , sadaf khan , rashi , hima , twinju bhavika , Mariah, Hima s , jaya , ruchi, sonal , jaya , jazz , cutie pie , amy , naina, roshini, alof, Tara , sana crazy , sanam , rupam , mitali, loveleen , Lara, sonal , Grace, sweetie , aakanksha ,…….
Sorry if I forgot anyone …

If there is any silent reader …. Then pls today comment even if it is one word …. .

Pls do tell me how was this episode …

76 comments

    • Mannat

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      Hey kiara . Saw you after long time . .Thank you …. dear … Thank s for commenting …. it was my duty to mention your name and pls do comment in next episodes ….

  1. jasmin

    Omg..!!!!! Di m soooooo happy….u completed ur half century..n di episode was awesome..loved it…plzz post next epi ssap..love u loads..muah!!

    • Mannat

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      Thank you dear thanks a lot I will post as soon as possible .completion of 50th episodes is due to love of you people …. Thank s a lot … pls keep commenting and supporting like this….

      • Mannat

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  2. Srija

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    wow soo lovely 😍😍😍😍😍
    twinj dance amazing👏👏😘😊😍😍
    and congrats for ur 50th episode
    u are an amazing writer
    continue soon

    • Mannat

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      thanks srija .. its an amzing feeling for a writer when her work is liked by all . i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end …..
      love u loads
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  3. Sonali05

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    Awesome epi Mannat… Really romantic…
    Hope twinj will confess their feeling soon…
    Eagerly waiting for ur next epi…
    And ya congratulation for compleating half century…

    • Mannat

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      thanks sonali 05 . …. thanks for being a part of my 50 journey … thank s a lot . thanks for even commenting today .. the comments of you readers means a lot to me . pls keep commenting and supporting me like this .. great to know you are liking and waiting for my episode … means a lot to me..
      love you loads
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  4. Supriya

    At first congrats …..It was just fab…specially dance part….. I think TwiNj k beech some thing something..
    I also write FF on Fb…..for TwiNj…… my page is Fan Fiction and One Shot of TwiNj…..plz see it…..
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    • Mannat

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      thanks supriya …. thanks for commenting … my completion of 50th episoddes is due to you readers …. thanks for commenting .. that means a lot to me … pls keep commenting and supporting like this till the end of my journey…..
      i will try to read it … but i cant promise you .. because i have shortage of time … but i will try to read it….
      love you loads
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    • Mannat

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      thanks fan ………. thanks for copmmenting ….. hope you will like my further episodes ……. pls keep commenting and supporting . like this till the end of my journey . and once again thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 episode journey
      love you loads

    • Mannat

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    • Mannat

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      thanks purnima ….. its an amzing feeling for a writer when her work is liked by all . i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end …..
      love u loads

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    • Mannat

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      thanks rashi verma ………. thanks for commenting that means a lot ……… i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. ….
      and for party i think i have given you through long update + romantic scenes of twinjj …….. anyway if you want anything else then pls do tell me …
      love you loads
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    • Mannat

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  5. Romaisha

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    Hiiiii congrats on ur 50th anniversary yaar!! And btw today’s episode was a bliss reading… Enjoyed it to the core 👌👌👌

    • Mannat

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      thanks romiasha … you know when you people tell me that you like my episode it s really an amazing feeling for me … that i cant describe in words … and thanks for being a part of my 50th journey … pls keep commeting and supporting like this .. til the end of my journey ..
      love you loads …

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    • Mannat

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      thanks shreya ………… thanks for commenting that means a lot ……… i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. …. its an amzing feeling for a writer when her work is liked by all …
      love you loads

    • Mannat

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    • Mannat

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      thanks angita … thanks for being a party of my 50th journey …. pls keep commenting and supporting like this …. till end of my journey of this ff ..

    • Mannat

      |Author

      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍

  6. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Congratulations fr ur 50th episode 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
    It’s awesome 😘😘😘😘😘
    But its a humble request plz tell whether it is a twinj or twiraj ff🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks chiku …… thanks for commenting …… my new commentator …….. its an amzing feeling for a writer when her work is liked by all . i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      and about twinj or twiraj …. i cant tell you sorrry …. because its major twist of my story …….. .
      sorry if i had hurt you …..

      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍

  7. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Congrats mannat for d amazing journey of 50 epi
    The epi was soooooo good…..dil ibadaat is one of my fav songs
    Loved d epi

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks thanks kruti …. thanks for commenting ……. thanks for being a part of my 50 episodes … my completion of 50 episodes is due to you readers ………..pls keep commenting and supporting like this till the end of this journey .. ….
      dil ibadat is also one of the most romantic and fav song . i started liking it from the serial pyaar ki yeh ek kahaani … which was played on abhay and piya couple ….
      love you loads

      • Mannat

        |Author

        😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍

  8. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Mannat di !!!!!!!!!!!
    Congratulations for completing 50 episodes
    🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎉🎉😘😘😘😘
    Golden jubilee
    N episode was so romantic
    Loved it
    TWINJ scenes were Awsome
    Loved u 😚😚😚

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks sidmin daamini …… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks sidmin daamini …… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks franciee…. thanks for commenting …pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Mannat

      |Author

      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍🤗🤗😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍🤗🤗😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍🤗🤗😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks sidhanshi …… …… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍🤗🤗😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍🤗🤗😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚

    • Mannat

      |Author

      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍🤗🤗😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍🤗🤗😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚….

  9. Loveleen

    |Registered Member

    hey mannat congo fr ur half century….ur ff is nyc..bt i wud lyk to suggest u dat plz make twinj confession soon cz its already late ( i feel)…or if its twiraj then do make dem meet soon…..according to ur stry i feel its twinj…i wl b glad if it wl b twinj….or else i dnt hav ny complains..awesm ff…

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks loveleen………. i will try to move on your request ……. thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks shreya098…… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

  10. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    heyyy diii hope u remember me………………… soo sorry diii i cmnted earlier also bt it’s nt showing koi nhi dubara kr deti hu

    diiiii pehle toh apni iss pgl sis ko maaf kr do i didnt comment from a long time…………………………….
    congo diii !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for half century 🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉

    u r one of the best writer……………………… HATS OFF TO U !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

    love u soooooo much……………….. 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 isse bhi bahut zyada pyaar krti hu apni mannat dii ko……………………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    ALL R FOR MY MANNAT DII !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks yashu . thanks for commenting ….. who is daring to call my such a lovely sis mad… i am not going to forgive easily ….. and about being a best writer … i dont think so … yashu … because there are many more good writer than me ……. …… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

  11. Meeta

    Heyy, bub.
    DW, Imma not an imposter.
    Actually, dad took the tab so I’m not able to comment n post.
    But soon, i will.
    I’m using Laptop right now.
    well, the epi was beautiful.
    I want Yuvi to meet Twinkle soon.
    please update soon.
    Please.
    Love you.
    Biee

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks meeta .. thanks for commenting … hope you will comment …. now onwards …. feeling haaapy that you liked my episode ………. i will try to work on your suggestion ….. pls keep commenting and supporting like this ..
      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks sidvee …… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks maggi …… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode. …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks twinj fan tamanna …… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

  12. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it Mannat di congo for 50 epiosdes
    The epiosde was too good Mahi’s plan just loved it and waiting for the next epiosde 😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘

    • Mannat

      |Author

      Hey sidmin . Thank you very much for commenting …. completion of 50 episodes is due to you readers …
      Mahi …. is portraying a role of younger sister … And according to me younger siblings are much smart than elder one . So i tried to portray that…..
      Pls keep supporting and commenting like this.

      • Mannat

        |Author

        And in return of your kisses 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Mannat

      |Author

      Hey saya thank you . You have supported me from very beginning… Thank you me from commenting . You know I keep on waiting your comment . Because I know you will comment even if it is one word or if got late but you will still comment ….
      Thanks dear …
      Thank you so much..

  13. Baby

    |Registered Member

    omgggggggggggggg mannat di mera naam dodo baar
    baar baar dekho hehe hazar baar dekho
    osm di first of alll
    congratul;ations fr cmplting 50 episodes di
    happy golden jublieee
    di amazing n adorable episode
    romantic dance luvd it 2 d core bt di wts d precap
    luv u di thnks a lot to mention my name
    it means a lot to me
    luv u di n post nxt asap di

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks baby … hahahahhahha for the name commemnt …. any way i have found two baby name i checked it and found it pattern different .. so thought to mention two times … well thanks for being a partner of my journey
      i will try posting asap… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

      • Baby

        |Registered Member

        ohhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooo sry mene socha mein hun dododo baar heheehehe jst joking di voh toh mene mazak mein bt di srsly luv u n u rck srsly luving ur ff

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks mahira khan …… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      love you loads

  14. dreamer....arundhati

    Mannat dear i m so sorry for late comment.. Congo.. Big wla.. Luv u sista.. OsuOsum epi.. Plz ctd soon

    • Mannat

      |Author

      thanks dreamer arundhati…… thanks for commenting ….happy to know you liked my episode …. i must thanks you again because completeion of my 50 th episodes is all because of the love of you readers . thanks a lot for being a part of my 50 journey . …. pls keep commenting and supporting in all my journey till its end ….. .
      I will try to continue asap…
      love you loads

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