I got verry sad after the response if u guys are not liking my ff plz tell me i will stop writing but plzz do comment
And about the ff its twinj ff
thanks all the readers who comment on my previous episode
so here,s episode 3
Yuvraj comes to twinkle’s room . She was busy in cleaning her cupboard , so she doesn’t noticed her . He clears his throat to gain her attraction .
T = ya u want something
U = nope actually I want to give u something .
He offers her a packet .
U = its sari . We forgot to tell u that today is our reception . So I want u 2 wear this in it . Be ready before 8 I will come 2 take u .
Twinkle nods. And took the packet from his hands.
He turned back 2 leave.
t = thanks uv
Uv = its ok
He leaves .
Twinkle in her mind = I feel uv is not a bad guy And he is hiding something from me .
At 8 pm
Uv knocked the door of twinkle’s room. And she opened the door . He was mesmerized to see her beauty . She was wearing baby pink colored sari which is having silver colored heavy embroidery , her hairs was curled up and put to side .
T = ya m ready.
Uv come s out of thoughts and says = ha then we shud leave , come
At reception venue
Twiraj was standing and receiving gifts . Anita was busy in attending guests .
A lady comes to anita
Anita = hello Mrs. Negi .
M N = hello Mrs. Luthra . Does I heard correct that twinkle is the daughter of leela taneja ur biggest rival .so how u accepted her daughter . I think u bowed ur head towards her. As may be u thought it will be not easy to win from her.
Anita feels ashamed . A voice come from behind its leela
Leela = its not about winning or loose its about our children happiness .that’s why we decided to not to mix personal and professional life . I hope u got the answer of ur question now we may leave
She took anita with her and comes to stage .
She gives the blessings to the couple . And hugs twinkle .
T ( in her mind ) = I cant tell to mom the truth of my and uv’s relationship .
L ( in her mind ) = I know now u feels that I was right . But I want u to become mature and make this marriage successful . As marriage is very pure relation .
L = u okey
T nods = ya . Why u got late
L = u always says ladies need extra time . So how can u forget that ur mother is also a lady .
T = ya I forgot that my mother is equal to 10 ladies.
They both laugh
Leela then offers them a gift .
T = thank u mom
Uv = thank u mom .
L = no need for thanks just keep my daughter happy .
Uv = I promise u mom I will keep her safe.
Leela and twinkle was left in shock . As they never expected this from him . Leela nods .
Anita who was listening all this starts fuming .
She thinks = uv I will teach u how to make promise without ur mothers permission .
At 12 am
Function ended . Anita and leela have already gone in their respective cars , leaving twiraj to come by their own .
Twiraj was in a way and in the same car . Uv was driving . Then suddenly car break’s down .
Uv come out of the car and started checking the fault . Twinkle was sitting in car . She feels suffocated and decided to go out . As already 10 mins was passed .
Twinkle comes out of car and looks at uv . He noticed her .
U = I cant understand the fault if you don’ t mind we can go to home by walk as it is only at the distance of 20 mins.
T = ya sure
They both start walking . there was silence for few mins.
Then twinkle herself broke the silence .
T = why u made fake promise wid mom .
Uv = that wasn’t fake
T = uv we both know the truth of this marriage .
U = ya I know but still u r my responsibility . I know I married u just from my mother’s insistence but if I cant give u happiness, still I should keep u safe .
TWINKLE looks at uv in astonishment . So without noticing accidently , she kept her foot on banana peel .
Soooooooo she was going to fall .after sometime she opened her eyes and found herself in the arms of uv . (ya u r right uv hold her on time).
Uv who was completely lost in her started bending towards her . Then he realized something and composes himself .
Twinkle also composes herself .
U (shouts) = I haven’t done with my wish . That was all mom ‘s plan . And I have to bow down because …………. ……………….
He becomes quite and start walking in anger .
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