tashan e aashiqui (Episode 11)


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Saya , yashu , twinju, zikra , fatarajo , fiona ,sadaf khan , anushka , baby ,alof , tara , roshini , amy , mahi ,mitali , srija , purnima , rupam ,mariah ,sam , jaya , panchi , sana crazy,sanam and all silent readers ………..

A whole heartedly thanks for commenting and supporting my ff .

Episode 10

They all come back home .

Twinkle was remembering that priest’s words . Suddenly he saw un clear flashes . And due to which she stood at door only . Usha called her but she didn’t listened . (She was remembering flashback when after marriage she was sitting at gurudwarh and what priest told her . )

All feel something fishy . Then mahi shake her . Twinkle came came in senses .

T = ( unable to speak properly ) yyyyy………..aaaaaaa….mahi

M = where have u lost .

T = actually I saw a priest told me ……. ( and she tells them whole story ) . I m unable to understand anything .

All were not finding words .

U = lets have breakfast .

At break fast table

M = twinkle will u come with me .

T = where ?

M = to meet my friends . So will u come .

T = ya i will come .

M = okey then change and come , we will go .

T = change………….

M = ya wear something modern plz

T = but I don’t have any modern clothes .

U = so what’s the problem today we will go to mall and buy it . As I have to buy many things for home also . And for kunj I have to buy some shirts . So we all will go .

K = not me mom . (he stands up from table ) As I m going to office as its presentation . ( he leaves )

M = mom now what ?

U = we will go tomorrow , ok twinkle .( she nods )

Mahi leaves . As she also have to go for modeling .

In evening .

Usha and twinkle were working in kitchen . They were sharing a great bond . Just then mahi enters .
U = came my doll .

M = twinkle see what I have brought for u .

T = ya empty box ( funny tune plays )

M = no my that prank is over . U see this . ( she shows her a costly mobile set )

Twinkle was shocked to see that .

T = what is this ?

Kunj enters but no one noticed .

M = idiot , its mobile phone (giggling) . (funny tune plays )

T – that I know but I cant take this .

M = why

T = actually mahi this family have many favors on me . ( she became silent for sometime ) . I want to earn all my necessities , plz try to understand don’t take me wrong .

M (confused ) = but twinkle its just a gift . Ok I will not force u . (after sometime )
wel twinkle who will give you job …. (before she can complete )

T = I know what are u talking about ………….. But I think , there will be any company who will judge me with qualities . Not with papers . ( she is not having any degrees in hand ) .

Kunj make some noise to gain attention .

U = u came my son .

K = mom today u know any body have made my presentation in our house , yesterday . ( In angry but still low voice )

Twinkle become tensed . Kunj notice this .


precap =

T (thinks ) = again a new siyappa .

U = kunj tell ……….. What happened about the contract .

M = bhai tell na what happened ……. ( tensedly ) u …. Did not got contract


how was the epi plz do comment

and i thing i forgot to tell u all that my exams are postponed that,s why i am able to pst .but once it started i dont know i will get time or not .

pardon me if i wouldn’t be able 2

luv u loads

Credit to: Mannat

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  1. Hey nice storyline. Is this twinj fan fiction? X

    1. Thanks jazz . And ya this is twinj ff

  2. Sidmin(twinj)

    nice ff mannat…its unique…I too hv doubt is dis twinj ff r nt…plz make it twinj ff n show sm scenes of twinj…can’t wait to read further plz post asap

    1. Thanks sidmin

  3. Awesome hope twinj are united fast

    1. Thanks sam

  4. nice…. gud going on……

    1. Thanks yashu

  5. I love your ff!! Its going on really well 🙂 Eagerly waiting for the next part. In the meantime, all the best for your exams!

    1. ThAnks Jaya

  6. Hi mannat. A really nice epi and don’t worry we can wait.

    1. Thanks saya

  7. It’s really has a vry gud storyline …n plz make it twinj ff n plz a bit longer episodes they r jus awesome waiting fr next post asap

    1. Thanks cutepie

  8. keep your superb work going on
    episode was fantastic

    best of luck for exams

    1. Thanks fiona

  9. Nyc one ….. wtng fr d nxt epi …..

    1. Thanks panchi

  10. I like your ff and tq so much for write my name….

    1. Thankew amy

  11. wow mannat…… fab!

    1. Thankew ritzi

  12. Mannat amazing epi dear loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz eagerly waiting for d nxt update plzzzzz update soon

    1. Thanks zikra

  13. amazing episode mannat jst luvd it

    1. Thanks baby

  14. l
    and dear u still not answered why did usha and kunj dont know twinkle plzzz tell and i think that kunj would be happy about presentation as it would be good and he will take her in company
    sorry if u feelbad that i yold it and again sorry if i am wrong

    1. Thanks twinju

      Anf ur ques was answered in epi 7 , in which its told that for usha ‘s family manohar sarna has been died years ago in accident . So they don’t know about twinkle .

  15. Hmmmm interesting

    1. Thanks fatarajo .

  16. Marvelous episode mannat

    1. Thanks anushka

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