Tashan aur twists (episode 24)

Hey guys… haan haan.. i know m late.. par maine thursday tak ka time maanga tha na.. so… m on time.. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.. hehe.. ok ok u wanna read d episode.. ok then here we go…

Scene 1.. hospital

Next day..
Uv is sitting in his cabin busy wid sme files..lets go closer.. wat is he reading.. aah… his phone started ringing.. n widout hving a look at it he picked it up.. hey wait.. let us see who it is… oh but he started talkin.. lets hear.. oh no.. bt d voice is muted.. bt he seems so happy n xcited.. ohhh wat happened.. his face fell off.. hey uv wat happened dear… bt b4 he answers scene shifts.. offo..

Nxt scene..
Hmm.. mall.. yea yea.. d girls r enjoying der shopping.. n yea hving icecreams in der hands.. hey sme1 tell dem dat if dey eat icecreams in dis rainy season dey may fall ill..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ n yea see.. chinki started sneezing.. haha.. see i told to take care.. ohh lets leave dem.. m interested to know wat happened wid uv.. bt wait.. wers r handsome hunk.. yea i m talking of him only.. yea kunj(sid only).. lets go to SM.. n find out..

Nxt scene..
Hey we reached kunjs room.. ohh.. he is busy wid his laptop.. lets peep in it… hes typing smething.. wats it.. lets read.. aahh.. he is typing- best wedding decorations for destination wedding in jaipur.. oh woww.. dats grt.. so means our groom is going to do his own wedding planning.. ohh he seems really happy.. wat is saying.. ohh he found d bst design.. good good.. let him cont wid his work.. so umm.. yea.. i still wanna know y is uv tensed.. lets go to his hosp cabin.. umm bt he wont b der.. its already late.. no worries.. lets go to Luthra Mansion..

Nxt scene..
Ting tong.. ohh nisha opened d door.. so she is come home.. bt y did she open door 4 us.. v cn directly go in.. umm so its uv.. he comes inside tensed n tired.. nisha is asking him y he seems so tensed.. wat is he thinking.. uv- arre yaar ab di jaan ko kaise batau k mai dilemma me aa gya hu.. unhe kaise samjhau.. lekin batana to padega na.. bt wat batana padega.. sy smething na.. so he is jst abt to say n… uffff time up… now in d nxt episode….
To b cont…

So kaisa laga.. sme new style of writing… did u like it or i was wasting ur time.. or shld I cont d way I write usually?? Plzzzz do tell haa.. coz i want ur comments.. as i dont want to leave it half way.. fir se naaraz to nhi kroge na.. so do comment.. byee..
Love u all..

Credit to: Aliza


  1. nisha

    plz is not good
    sooo sorry for this but reaaly
    i know that you tried it by your heart and you would be very disheart to know thta th efirst commenet is against this
    but seriosly sorry i dont like this and it was short
    love you

  2. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Amazing epi Aliza ……….but I want u to write it in d normal way this looks a bit confusing
    And one more thing I guess there’s new rule on TU that only registered members can post an article from 1st August so get urself registered

  3. Aamu

    hey sorry if u feel bad after reading my negative cmnt
    i dint like urwriring like dis
    n i dint like dis epi tooo
    coz i loved both of dem
    hey shoc lagaa tha kya?
    jab maie bola i dont like it do tell me
    n sorscaring u-sana(aamu)

  4. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Aliza dear u r a superb writer nd whatever way u choose to write will always be awesome ….for me reading ur ff is most important..

    Episode was too good ….kunj going to plan his wedding …amazing ..can’t wait for it ….
    love u dear ….

  5. Baby

    |Registered Member

    amazing dear aliza i luv ur ff bt wt cn i say i dont wanna dishearten u or anything bt wuld lyk 2 tell d truth u cntinue d way u use 2 rite bcz its being a bit cnfusing bt u r ff ws luvly n is n i luvd d episode also n pls post nxt asap n pls ifg posibl so dont take dis cmnt negatively pls bcz i luv u n ur ff vry mch

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