Tashan aur twists (episode 11)

Hi guys…lets begin wid episode 11….

Scene 1(TH)

Leela is sitting in the hall… she thinks now twinkle n chinki hve grown big enough to marry… haa dr.uv… wo bohut accha ladka h… mujhe uska nature accha laga… lekin use to twinkle k liye nhi pucch sakti.. use twinkle k blood cancer k baare me sab pata h… aakhir usne to tw ko nyi zindagi di h… pr chinki k liye… arre haa uske liye soch sakti hu… pata lagaana hoga dr. uv ka background kya h.. kaha se h.. uski family me kon h…

While she is in her thoughts… chinki comes to her n says – maa wer r u lost..??
L- (still in thoughts) arre shaadi…
C- (interferes) kiski shaadi??
L- (comes to senses) arre kuch nai.. (n thinks) agar isse shaadi ki baat karungi to saaf manaa kr degi.. mai pehle khud hi us munde(boy) k bare me pata lagati hu … agar accha hua to hi chinki se baat krungi…(loudly) arre chinki.. tere paas vo dr. uv ka number hai na.. to mujhe de…
C- haa maa par aapko usse kya kaam h??
L- aisi koi baat nhi h… pr kabhi zaroorat pade to.. isliye…
C- mai to aise hi puch rhi thi.. aapko usse job hi kaam ho… mujhe usse kya?? Lijiye ye rha no…

Scene 2(LH)

Anita is talking to someone on phne…
An- u knw na.. u hve to get the total bg of twinkle taneja.. her family.. n everything…
P- sure ma’am…. U don’t need to worry… I’ll do the work as u say…
An- 1 more thing… uv shld nt get to know anything u r told to do…
P- yes mam I’ll take care of it.. I’ll not let uv know anything n as I said it vl b confidential…
An- arre ha ha… bas dnt giv me lectures…
She ends call..

An- now finally my search is goin to b over for the best bahu… yesssss…. M so happy……

Scene 3(SM)

Manohar usha n bebe r sitting in hall..
M- bebe u remember dat girl.. in sharma’s party… wat was her nameee…
U- yes.. umm.. twi.. yes twinkle.. was her name..
B- haa she looks so pretty na…
M- yess bebe.. I’ve heard abt her dat she is a very nice girl.. vo bohot hi suljhi hui ladki h.. aur haa .. pata h vo new york se aayi h..
U- haa mujhe bhi vo acchi lagi.. modern hai.. par sanskaari bhi h…
M- kahin aap dono bhi to vahi soch rhe h jo mai soch rha hu..
B&U- haa hum bhi vahi soch rhe h..
M- to phir der kis baat ki mai abhi uski maa.. kya naam.. haa leela taneja.. haa mai leelaji se ek meeting fix krta hu…

Manohar gets leela’s number n calls her…
M- hello… leelaji??
L- ji haan.. pr aap kon bol rhe h… maine aapko pehchana nhi…
M- ji mai maonhar saran bol rha hu.. vo..
L- (interrupts) arre sorry mai pehchaan nhi paai.. lekin aapko mujhse kya kaam… koi baat h kyaa…??
M- its ok… actually…
L- jaldi jaldi bataaiye sarnaji… menu tension ho rha h…
M- arre tension ki koi baat nhi h… actually mai aapse aapke ghar pe milna chahta hu… to kab aau..
L- ohho.. ye baat h…mujhe to tension ho rha tha.. aur haa aap aa sakte h.. lekin kis baare me baat krni h…??
M- to thik h.. aur jo baat krni h… vo mai vahi aakar bataaunga… to mai kab aau.. aur haa mai apni wife aur bebe ko bhi saath laau to koi prblm to nhi h naa..
L- accha thik h.. mujhe koi prblm nhi h…. aur aap kal aa jaaiye…
M- ji thik h…
Call ends..
M- usha bebe kal jaana h.. mai to bohut excited hu…
B- ab to kunj ka rishta pakka samjho…
U- haa bebe mera bahu laane ka sapna pura hone wala h… screen freezes on usha manohar n bebe’s excited faces….

Recap- manohar comes to leela’s house wid usha n bebe… anita informs uv dat she has found her DIL n uv is shocked… he thinks ab uv tu to gya… ab hogi teri shadi matlab teri barbaadi…

Hope u guys like it… n yes I know the update is small bt I literally kept it small coz I wanted ull to b xcited so as to wat wld happen next… plzzzz comment…. N make me to write more episode everyday.. due to lack of comments I don’t feel like writing… so plzzzzzz comment also the silent readers….. luv ull… be blessed… hve great days… n yea m extremely sorrrrryyyyyyyyy……… coz dnt knw due to internet prblm d episodes r nt getting posted…. extremely sorry.. forgive meeee…. i’ll try to post next soon coz i dont know if today its possible…..

Credit to: Aliza

9 comments

  1. Alishaa

    Hi Aliza,
    I absolutely love your storyline but I think it’s dragging a bit now so please can you make twinj meet soon?

  2. Aliza

    Thanx everyone for commenting n liking my episode n sorry for nt replying to anyone n yea I know it’s dragging bt don’t u worry..twinj wld meeting soon and I ‘ve planned a very big twist on their meeting… n dat wld b another mahaepisode..plz wait for 2-3 episodes more… I hope you could wait till then..plzzzzzzzzzz….

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