The Talking Mirror : destroyer of all…. IKRS…Episode 4

So I come again ..sorry for the late update because of TU’s server down .. but I am back … so something is revealing ..some murder case …haha ..ya story will reveal soon …wait ….so all are enjoying this na ? .. now come with me guys ..let’s see together ….

In the last episode you saw that Dhani and her family reach to their ancestral house …they enter in the house ..
so today will something happens
.so be ready ..come with me ..don’t scare when I am here 😛 …

Dhani seeing all arts …sculpture paintings …avi is stunned by seeing the big jhumar ( chandelier) ..and says how big it is dad … papaji is watching the house .. and see the closed room on the first floor … a drop of sweat goes down from his head …avi says dad …dad …papaji come out of it and says yes beta ..what happened …. avi asks who made this jhumar … papaji says how can I know ? your great grandpa made this house … ask him na ….avi says ap bhi na dad 🙁 🙁 …Dhani smiles hearing this ( I know that is not funny but kuch to chahiye tha isliye diya 😛 ) … papaji says now keep your luggage to the first two rooms of the first floor … me and your mammiji are in the ground floor ..so jarurat pare to bula lena … avi and Dhani yells .. yesssss ….papaji … and smiles …mammiji also smiles ( cute family na 🙂 🙂 )

( so guys I am your guide na …so let’s explore the house ..come with me …here is a big royal sofa … sit …. ooo ..how soft na ..areh don’t sleep in sofa ..come … it is an old house but it is cleaned …papaji called the care taker, Prachi di to clean the house … very hard working lady. .. she cleaned the house fully ..hope so she did not cleaned the closed room ..mystery is there na 😛 😛 .. on your left side there is a big knight armor holding a big sword ..side of that ..there is an abstract painting .. nice but scary little … ” gumnam hae koiiii ..anjan hae koiiiii… kon hae wo ” .. is anyone hearing this song ..from where it is coming ….oh sorry this is coming from my pocket ..it is my mobile ringtone ..hahaha 😛 ….. hello … bewakuf phone kyu kiya kam ke wact ..phone rakh .. I am guiding my readers to a ghost house ..bye … 😛 sorry ..guys I will visit this house next time ..now see the story )

so Dhani and avi unpacking their luggage in their separate rooms … Dhani unpacked her luggage .. and keeping all in almirah … ( this is a small room … old type of bed … mosquito net ..an old type’s of fan with light ….nothing scary now ..but wait little ) ..
( now see what avi is doing …come with me )
avi is styling his hair in front of a mirror ( this is not the talking mirror ..it is a simple mirror) .. and says oh ..how handsome I am !!! ( avi think too much :-/ :-/ ) he come out of his room and call Dhani … di come out fast .. let’s see the house …Dhani replies ya ..I am coming … she comes out of the room and says let’s go .. ( guys let’s go with them ..) ..avi and Dhani are roaming ..Dhani plays a song in her mobile … ” gumnam hae koiiii ..anjan hae koiiii ….kon hae WO .. kisko khabar ..anjannnn haeeeeee koiii …gumnam hae, koiiiii ” ( 1920 London wala song .. so she also like my choice .. good girl 😛 😛 😛 ) .. they come to bathroom ..avi smilingly say let’s go to bathroom ..may be there will be “mayush meena” of harry potter movie ( seems avi also a harry potter fan like me ..haha 😛 ) …Dhani says you go chotte ..sayad wo terahi wait kar rahi hogi ..aur tu ja ..tujhse pyaar bhi hojayega sayad ..go go ..hahaha 😛 ..avi says ha ..ha ..very .funny .. let’s go from there ..Dhani smiles ( Dhani ne bhi hisab barabar kar liya 😛 ) then they come to the closed room.. it is the last room of the floor .. a cold mild breeze blows .. cat’s scary sound … avi says ohooo ..cool .. let’s go inside ..Dhani says no ..he says dar gayi kya darpok .. and laughs .. from the ground floor mammiji is calling them …avi …Dhani ..come for dinner..
( chalo let’s see the dinner )

They go for dinner ..they come from the upstairs and sit for dinner ..it is big royal dinning table .. many plates with tasty food is ready …chicken tikka masala … panner pasinda .. Punjabi style pindi chole aur bhature ..fried rice ..dum aloo .. gulab jamun .. payasam ( muh se pani nikalna bandh karo……. we are invisible viewers only . ..so can’t eat ..just can watch them eating ..badme mae khana de dunga episode end ke bad ) ..

they start eating … avi takes all things and starts eating fastly ..Dhani says slow down chotte ..I am not snatching your food .. avi says agar khana itna tasty ho to kyse ruke 😛 . you are great mammiji .. mammiji says thank u beta ..khao tum 🙂 .. Dhani ask dad ..what is in the last closed room of first floor ..papaji stops and angrily says don’t dare to go there .. never think of that .. aspas bhi nahi jana uske .. Dhani says ok dad ..don’t get angry .. 🙁 .. ( avi ko koii farak nahi padta iss bat ka ) ..he thinks I will go there tonight definitely 😛

( ae avi nahi sunega …. but ae agar sunega papaji ki batt to story age kaise badega ..so he is needed …)

Episode end

Precap: Dhani and her family is in someone’s house ..an old woman is shown ..they all are very scared … so why are they there ..why scared … Jan ne ke liye padte rahe “the talking mirror: destroyer of all ”

so that’s it for today .. ap sab log khana kha lo ..food is ready … so bye guys ..next episode will be 1st may .. meet in comment box 🙂 🙂

Credit to: AM

41 comments

  1. Sujie

    Bhai…. its getting interesting day by day….. and one thing HERO KI ENTRY KAB HOGI???
    Anyways keep going….all the best …… 🙂

  2. AM

    yessss ..jab entry hoga tab pura dhuwe se bhar dunga 😛 😛 pataka bhi phorunga …hogaya dhuwadhar ..dhamakedar entry 😛 😛 ..haha

  3. saranya

    Kitna hasaungi yaar tumne.hahaha.liku and care taker.i can imagine.how would it be if she is coming riding on a broom to clean the house.hahaha.liku,u are great.
    Where is that food treat u offered,tumne tho kaha baad mae de dunga,tho phir kaham hai?
    Dhani and Avi combo is awesome.yeh avi bhi na bilkul tumara tarah naughty hai.hahahaha.anyways make our hero’s entry stylish and epic.just waiting for that.bye bye chotte.

    • AM

      hahaha ..prachi dadi ko.caretaker bana diya …. yes avi is similar to me ..nice character na 😛 ..

  4. Maria

    Are waah avi, prachi di the cleaner haha. But I thoroughly loved it and especially your narration, keep going…

  5. Louella

    Avijit bhai episode super duper hit tha. Aapne jo menu likha haina usse mere muh mein pani aa gaya. Khana kha liya tha lekin phirse bhook lag gayi. Ab aap jaldi se khaana de do. Pet mein chuhe doud rahe hai.

    • AM

      haha ..areh bohot sara khana hae .. I cooked for all … last episode me party dunga ..don’t tensed …keep reading 😉

  6. Meghs

    Wow kya bath hein chotte.. Its awesome .. With lots of fun n scary too… Avi is too naughty ha… I liked dhani avi convo most … Day by day more Interesting yaar .. Description was too awesome .. Ur writing style is amazing..
    Nxt prt seems to be scary …
    But pls it post soon

    • AM

      thank u …keep reading ..next episode will be on 1st may … so be ready to thrill ..next episode will be rocking 🙂

  7. Fatarajo

    I can’t wait for next episode Chotte It’s so creepy love horror ab Dhaani ka kya hoga loving ur ff

    • AM

      thank you joyee ..keep reading ..study pressure hae so ak din gap se hi post kar sakta hu …next episode will be superb ..wait and watch

    • AM

      ap to meri pyari dadi ho to ae to kuch nahi ..apka role to baki hae bohot ..aur bhi tang karunga 😛

  8. Day by day u r writing gud n narrating gud also
    N story seems to b intrsting.keep it up.aur bandar mujhe caretaker banaya bhaga k marungi Tumhe.hahahh

  9. SARAS

    loved your narration. . story to aage bad nahee rahihai.shuru huyi nahee episode khatam. I m too eager to know.. may 1st tak to wait nahi karsakti.. everyday post kardo please. .

  10. Mahira

    Haha.. feeling pity for you, kaam k waqt disturbance face karni parhi apko. ? Tbh, story sy zayada interest mujhy apki narration me hota h! ?

    And coincidentally, I had Gullab Jamuns today after my lunch ! Happy tummy! ?

    Yay!! ? One more to go! After that Mishal’s entry! ?

  11. Swara

    Hahah.chotte ….u r too funny yarr…tht sifa scene too …I can feel all the scenes in front of my eyes good work chotte….
    Nd prachi nd caretaker. .wht an revenge. .hahahha….
    Keep going ….

  12. SARAS

    You saying sofe pev so mat jaana was like saying to me only. . I was mentally relaxing there -:)) you r indeed a very good writer. ..

  13. Nima

    WOW! AM bhai, what a lovely n interesting episode…story start to end mai v dhani n avi k sath pure ? ko dekh rahi thi…majeki baat tab aayi jb Gumnaam hai koi… song aaya i thought usi closed room se aa rahi hai bt nahi ??? very nice keep it up.

  14. pethu sri

    i am really happy to see your ff avijit, its really awesome, good narration, thriller story and lovely comments……..keep rocking bro

  15. VIPLAV

    avi bhai omg
    ur narration, story, comedy.etc,,,,,,, no words to say
    awesome fantastic great beautiful fabulous…….. baki tum poori karlo 🙂 🙂

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