The Talking Mirror : destroyer of all … IKRS… Episode 1

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Hi guys ..sorry for this very late post ..sorry .. So in this episode I try to add some fun ..this is first episode so nothing scary but hope you will enjoy it …..
So the episode starts ….come with me and read
It is 7o’clock of morning… Alarm clock is ringing on a desk ,side of bed … Look who is sleeping. ..come ..come ..omg this is our heroine, Dhani πŸ˜› ..(bohot late uthti hae ) ..hearing the noise ..in drowsiness she just throw the alarm clock and again sleeps πŸ˜› ( don’t think her ghost πŸ˜› ) … After some time some one call in her phone ..she picks the call saying hellooo …and hears Dhani beti utho jaldi … Papaji arahe hae tere room mae ..jaldi re uth ( this is our sweet mammiji , kavitha) ..hearing this Dhani hurriedly wake up from bed and go to washroom to clean her face to look fresh in front dad …. Papaji come and knock the door and says ..uth jaldi ..aur kitna soyegi …der rat tak FB pe dosto ke sath chat karegi aur der se soyegi …. Dhani opens the door and says ‘ kya papaji ..subah subah mat dato ..kabka uth gayi ..sirf nahane ja rahi thi'( says lovingly ) … Papaji says OK OK ..come fast for breakfast .. Dhani says OK and hugs him ..he hugs also and says good girl πŸ™‚ …..
Then after bath Dhani come out of her room and go for breakfast … And says here I come ..let’s start …avi, younger brother of Dhani says ..agayi ranisahiba ..ao πŸ˜› … She says shut up chotte .. Everyone smiles and start eating ..avi making ghost faces and teasing Dhani …she says stop chotte ..marungi jyada daraya to ..he says marke to dikhao darpok and make a funny face … Papaji stops them says you are not kids now ..behave well ..they say sorry together and smiles ..he says OK ..let’s go for a trip ..all have vacation this time and I have little work now also ..avi hurriedly says let’s go to Jaipur ..there is our ancestral house too na …Dhani also says yes papaji ..let’s go there ..you never take us there … Papaji stops for few second remembering the accident and says no no ..choose another place .. But avi and Dhani say .no we want to go Jaipur and yells .. Papaji is thinking ..but mammiji keep her hand on his shoulder and says nothing will happen .. Past is past … Don’t think much ..papaji smiles and says okay okay we will go Jaipur ..happy now .. Dhani and avi scream yippeeee …. πŸ™‚
Episode end …

Precap : Dhani packing her luggage and avi is doing masti …papaji is in a room …and thinking the old incident .. A voice is heard ” hahaha … Nahi bachoge tum log ..haha” ..

So how is this .. I hope all like it … Stay happy stay young .. And do whatever you want to do but don’t trouble your mother πŸ˜›

Credit to: AM

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33 Comments
  1. Hahaha?? it was good !!
    Precap is awesome..scary????

    1. thank u ..arshdeep … but precap is not scary at All πŸ˜› πŸ˜› … but next part will be better … so ready ..ana jarur

    2. Han han sure ayenge ??

  2. Hahahah.chhote.u r too funny. The episode too.it seems lyk we all acting der.gud move.continue. ur fb wala conversation is so true.n when u said ‘marungi’ I just remembering GRP chat.chhote marungi.hahaha

    1. ya ..I use our grp chat convo ..thank u

  3. Very good waiting for the next part

    1. thank u πŸ˜€

  4. Chottee….At last it get posted. ..wow..how cute is dhanni…well narrated. …
    Waiting for next episode. ..
    Post it soon ….

  5. Areh vah Chotte awesome Chotta packet bara dhaamaka awesome blockbuster episode I salute you love ur writing skills Chotte main toh tumhara jabra fan ban gayi πŸ˜›

    1. areh ..thank u thank u … next part will be better ..so ana jarur

  6. Bhai….precap is scary…… love this word chhottey…… πŸ™‚

  7. Bhai….precap is scary…… love this word chhottey…… πŸ™‚ and too good…keep going ….

    1. precap is not scary … scary to bad me ayega … wait for it

  8. now I know why cover pic is not coming …don’t worry ..next episode se a jayega

  9. Wah wah Avijit bhai aapne toh kamaal kar daala. Bahut accha hai aapka first part. Next episode jaldi post kijiyega. Dhaani ki tarah late mat hona.

    1. areh thank u Louella … tumhara ff kaha hae ..complete ho gaya kya … mene abtak para nahi ..sorry πŸ˜›

  10. Wow chotte kya baat hain Bhai bahut different ff ye… The way of expressing dhani n all scenes too gud…
    I liked the dialogue shut up chotte most…

  11. Awesome epi am

    1. thank u πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  12. Fabulous avijit nice start anxiously waiting for next.

    1. thank u ..next episode will be better … so stay tuned πŸ™‚

  13. Haha. Good start! ?

    1. thank you πŸ™‚

  14. AM bhai, episode toh bahoot achcha hai…n precap is so scary.

    1. precap is not scary … but I will scare you all with my ff soon ..be ready …thank u for commenting

  15. Bhia aap ka cover photo change nahi kiya kya… Ye lelo behan ke tarafh se prasham sa?
    Neatly presented… Nice one… Go ahead

    1. cover pic next part se ayega ..definitely … thank u πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

  16. Lol Avi ur ssk awsom

    1. haha ..better than ssk πŸ˜› ..thank u

  17. accha accha lekin beta dont write too much thriller things coz our patient needs mor medicines to recover again and our hospital also hn’t sufficient facilities haina????

  18. hahaha .. yeah I will try

  19. AM plz jaldi ghost track par aao

  20. Hi avi track tho acha hi per dekthe kaisa darane wali ho humko.superb. n sry for late com.

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