The Talking Mirror : destroyer of all … IKRS… Episode 1

Hi guys ..sorry for this very late post ..sorry .. So in this episode I try to add some fun ..this is first episode so nothing scary but hope you will enjoy it …..
So the episode starts ….come with me and read
It is 7o’clock of morning… Alarm clock is ringing on a desk ,side of bed … Look who is sleeping. ..come ..come ..omg this is our heroine, Dhani 😛 ..(bohot late uthti hae ) ..hearing the noise drowsiness she just throw the alarm clock and again sleeps 😛 ( don’t think her ghost 😛 ) … After some time some one call in her phone ..she picks the call saying hellooo …and hears Dhani beti utho jaldi … Papaji arahe hae tere room mae ..jaldi re uth ( this is our sweet mammiji , kavitha) ..hearing this Dhani hurriedly wake up from bed and go to washroom to clean her face to look fresh in front dad …. Papaji come and knock the door and says ..uth jaldi ..aur kitna soyegi …der rat tak FB pe dosto ke sath chat karegi aur der se soyegi …. Dhani opens the door and says ‘ kya papaji ..subah subah mat dato ..kabka uth gayi ..sirf nahane ja rahi thi'( says lovingly ) … Papaji says OK OK ..come fast for breakfast .. Dhani says OK and hugs him ..he hugs also and says good girl 🙂 …..
Then after bath Dhani come out of her room and go for breakfast … And says here I come ..let’s start …avi, younger brother of Dhani says ..agayi ranisahiba 😛 … She says shut up chotte .. Everyone smiles and start eating ..avi making ghost faces and teasing Dhani …she says stop chotte ..marungi jyada daraya to ..he says marke to dikhao darpok and make a funny face … Papaji stops them says you are not kids now ..behave well ..they say sorry together and smiles ..he says OK ..let’s go for a trip ..all have vacation this time and I have little work now also ..avi hurriedly says let’s go to Jaipur ..there is our ancestral house too na …Dhani also says yes papaji ..let’s go there never take us there … Papaji stops for few second remembering the accident and says no no ..choose another place .. But avi and Dhani say .no we want to go Jaipur and yells .. Papaji is thinking ..but mammiji keep her hand on his shoulder and says nothing will happen .. Past is past … Don’t think much ..papaji smiles and says okay okay we will go Jaipur ..happy now .. Dhani and avi scream yippeeee …. 🙂
Episode end …

Precap : Dhani packing her luggage and avi is doing masti …papaji is in a room …and thinking the old incident .. A voice is heard ” hahaha … Nahi bachoge tum log ..haha” ..

So how is this .. I hope all like it … Stay happy stay young .. And do whatever you want to do but don’t trouble your mother 😛

Credit to: AM


  1. Hahahah.chhote.u r too funny. The episode seems lyk we all acting der.gud move.continue. ur fb wala conversation is so true.n when u said ‘marungi’ I just remembering GRP chat.chhote marungi.hahaha

  2. Swara

    Chottee….At last it get posted. cute is dhanni…well narrated. …
    Waiting for next episode. ..
    Post it soon ….

  3. Fatarajo

    Areh vah Chotte awesome Chotta packet bara dhaamaka awesome blockbuster episode I salute you love ur writing skills Chotte main toh tumhara jabra fan ban gayi 😛

  4. Sujie

    Bhai….precap is scary…… love this word chhottey…… 🙂 and too good…keep going ….

  5. Louella

    Wah wah Avijit bhai aapne toh kamaal kar daala. Bahut accha hai aapka first part. Next episode jaldi post kijiyega. Dhaani ki tarah late mat hona.

    • AM

      areh thank u Louella … tumhara ff kaha hae ..complete ho gaya kya … mene abtak para nahi ..sorry 😛

  6. Meghs

    Wow chotte kya baat hain Bhai bahut different ff ye… The way of expressing dhani n all scenes too gud…
    I liked the dialogue shut up chotte most…

    • AM

      precap is not scary … but I will scare you all with my ff soon ready …thank u for commenting

  7. shanitics

    Bhia aap ka cover photo change nahi kiya kya… Ye lelo behan ke tarafh se prasham sa?
    Neatly presented… Nice one… Go ahead

  8. Dr.Sweety

    accha accha lekin beta dont write too much thriller things coz our patient needs mor medicines to recover again and our hospital also hn’t sufficient facilities haina????

Before submitting a comment, please be sure it meets our comment guidelines.

Before submitting a comment, please be sure it meets our comment guidelines.