A TALE TO REMEMBER…. ROOM NO. 422… IKRS FIRST EPISODE

A Tale To Remember…….Room No.422….. ISHQ KA RANG SAFED….. First Episode…..

Hello guys …. I am back with the brand new fan fiction…..
Hope that you would like it…. First I would like to make few things clear…Recently I finished Few shots of Mohe Rang Do Laal…and said I need time to concentrate on my studies…. But before that I wanted you guys to be assured that I won’t go from here forever… I might be absent for days or weeks… but living without you people is impossible….
Now let’s begin the episode…..

Place:City Hospital…. Psychiatric Ward…
Doctors and nurses are there…. Talking about a case probably…One middle aged man is there…. Saying that girl should not be out of here at any cost… do anything…but never let her escape… The doctor asks how could he do so ?? The man asks that doctor to shut up…and boasts about being god of the city… his respect is much important for him… and he can do anything for it…. Never let that girl escape from here…. The man is shown…you can imagine any devil or villain of any serial…. He goes….

Time passes….a girl is shown in the room…alone….ROOM No. 422… Her feet is tied in chains to the side of bed… She is mumbling…Someone enters and keeps the plate of food on her bed…. The girl looks at the plate…and throws it away…She cries vigorously….

Next day….The doctors are discussing… One says they cannot treat her like this… She has to get away from here to get better….If she remains here she cannot be treated…. Other doctor says what about that man?? The doctor says if he had any mercy for the girl…toh he would not have left her here… he comes here to check if that girl die or not…. How can someone be so cruel… The nurses then discuss…suna hai ki this girl got abused physically by her fiancé … and the marriage halted… She was left here by her own father who thinks his respect got ruined…. One of the senior nurses hears them..and asks them if they don’t have any other work…They go… the nurse thinks hope this girl gets what she deserves… definitely this place is not safe for her… Someone should come to her rescue… and goes….

There ..in room 422…the girl is seen scribbling her name.. DHAANI…… That senior nurse comes inside….Dhaani gets scared…. The nurse then tries to calm her down… Dhaani feels scared..and hides her face like a kid does …. The nurse asks toh you are Dhaani… Dhaani looks at her and says Haan…like a kid… On talking for few minutes… She then goes seeing Dhaani sleeping…When Dhaani wakes up,she sees the other nurse injecting her something…and screams… She cries to leave her… not to touch her….there comes the man who left her there….. The nurses hold her and inject… They go..The man laughs …The nurses go feeling miserable…

Dhaani gets scared…and asks him to leave…The man then says Beta… tune kya kiya…you could have married that man….but you broke the alliance..He was your would be husband…and he had the right …koi galti thodi ki usne… he was just asking for something…with his would be wife…de deti toh kya jaata tera… Dhaani gets afraid..and is restless..The man then shouts…who gave you the right….who gave you this right…bol na??? Dhaani stays mum and is freaked out…She does not say anything and is afraid of her own father….. The man then asks her to die there…as he will never take her back home….now if she dies also…he will not have any problem……. Dhaani hides here face behind the pillow…. The man then slams the door and goes….
Dhaani pulls her own hair and screams…. She then feels drowsy by the effect of medicine and goes to sleep….

PRECAP: New doctor in City Hospital…
Will someone come to Dhaani’s rescue… will someone hold her hand with pride…and be her humsafar???

So guys…how was the episode…sad na… But I promise… I would bring good episodes in future…. I would be posting another episode of this one after my exam gets over…and I am working on soulmates…so before being away for sometime…I want to assure you guys that HAMESHA KE LIYE NAHI JAA RAHI HOON….okay… hope you will keep loving and supporting….

8 comments

  1. Mahaaijaz

    Mahaaijaz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Sujie! Okay so I’m so shocked after reading this first episode which is written by you😘😘
    Suspense filled story, right 🙌 bohat he different concept hai seriously. Nowadays it’s very common, so hats off to you for bringing this unique topic “Physical abusive”.
    That devil hayeee he’s a black spot on father’s title. Abhi hero aiga naa tou us ko sahi wale naani yaad dilai ga😂😂
    Allah- so we’ll imagine viplav as a doctor now, maza ane wala Hai😍😍 he’s always been a protective shelter for her like you’ll show here. Tou after reading my comment you must’ve realized that how excited I’m 💃💃
    So happy to read this story which will have such a unique and sensitive topic 😘😘 hoping to read the episodes which will become a lesson for such devils.
    Keep rocking dear and waiting for SM❤
    By the way when your exams will finish?
    Loads of love ❤
    Take care ❤

    • Sujie

      Sujie

      |Author

      Maha….seriously…. You never miss to make me feel special… Thank you for all the love meri jaan …💖💖💖💖
      Thank you for you lovely come to…i hope you will like it….
      Haan….I thought I should try this one….hope that won’t get wrong 😃 aur haan devil baap Ko toh Naani Daadi Sab yaad aayegi😂😂😂
      It’s fun…to imagine Mishal in doctor’s role….. I mean viplav Ko
      I know you are excited….
      😀😀😀😀😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍
      My finals are after a month…but one more internal exam is left that is gonna be started soon ….
      That’s why dear…. I might get late in posting the episode…but trust me I will not be absent for manyyyyyyyyyy days ..okay….
      Internal one gonna start soon…. Kab hota pata nahi hai yaar …..
      And boards from 23rd May to 24th June ……
      Par mein bich bich mein aaungi …okay …will try to update…chota packets of episode….. Love you dear 💋❤️💋💋😍😍😍😘😘😘
      Loads of love to you too….. 💖💖💖
      You too take care 😃😃

  2. Lalitha

    sujjiee u r too sweet…and have a sweet and clever brain…
    how could u think like these storys…
    i love to read like these stories…
    i know when starting is sad only end gives sweetest result…
    And ha al the best for ur exams…
    i am very glad to know that u r not leaving this page at any cost…
    And i am also does not leave reading ffs or os s in this page forever…
    bye…
    keep writing…

    • Sujie

      Sujie

      |Author

      Thank you Lalitha…for your comment and wish….
      I guess….its the love of readers that gives me the idea….
      Very few comments….but still I am encouraged because you people comment and express your views…then how can I not be ready to give you such stories…. Thank you for all the love and support dear…. tons of love to you for this…..
      you can be sure that I will not go anywhere leaving this page…however I might get late sometimes…okay….
      Thank you for your good words dear………mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaah mwaaaaaaaah….. 🙂 🙂

  3. Shanitics

    Shanitics

    |Registered Member

    Suijiee didiiiii love you.. Happy that u r back and u’ll nt gt disappeared frm this page😊

    When I opnd ths page.. I saw the title.. And I was lke kaun ho saktha hai ue?? And when I read I’m back.. I was like wow! Any old member came back.. Or else who wld b ths!! And Whn I opnd.. It was my pyaari didi … Wth a brand nw ff…

    And ths ff kya bolu?? I’m mum… The way u described…. Made me think these wrds visually in mind 👌

    Superb!! Full of suspense.. Ngry and much mre… Seems lke the new doctor is Viplav😜

    Wth much anxiety looking frwrd and waiting for the nxt epi!

    • Sujie

      Sujie

      |Author

      Thank you Swetu….mwaaaaaaaaaaah mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaah mwaaaaaaaaaaah….lots of love ….thank you for your sweet comment…Dekhti jaao…. i mean… keep imagining…that new doctor has to be Viplav naah….though I spilled the beans now …but I hope I would be able to come to you guys’ expectation and you might get to read something new …. a new concept of ViDhaani… love you dear…. take care ……
      your pyaari didi….

  4. Renimarenju

    Renimarenju

    |Registered Member

    Sujiee…..I loved it to the core…..It’s really amazing and an entirely new concept for vidhani….felt like am watching a movie …..Too gud yaar….update it when u get time dear ….am eagerly waiting 2 read next one

    • Sujie

      Sujie

      |Author

      Thank you so much Reni…. I am happy that you liked it.
      Keep the support and love coming dear 😘😘😘😀

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