A tale of OBSTINANCE and LOVE..(Chapter 6)


A Tale of OBSTINANCE and LOVE ….

Recap- Kunj decided to cook for Twinkle as she was not feeling well..but found it really difficult…later they ended up making the breakfast together.. They roam around ernakulam tha day long.. And at night.. Twinkle had a horrific nightmare …a girl trying to kill her by slitting her throat with wire and she tried to save her..

[And yes please LET ME MAKE IT CLEAR that whatever romance I showed you was not my work I have taken scenes & words from other ffs eg. Saby di, Ritzi, pali di, Sweetie di, Ridhi di…etc… So its their work..Maine kuch nahi kiya..I had to show romantic part and I wasn’t able to do that properly ..I have already told in my ffs that rings of romance are too loud for my bells..guys All the lovely credits for the intense and Hot Romance that you all liked..(I feel so)..goes to Priyanjali di.. She is my friend’s elder sis when I told her my problem with romantic scenes she asked me to provide her with the links of some romantic episodes written by you all..I sent her links of the above mentioned writers..she took some scenes from those and prepared Two scenes and sent them to me..I have already used both of them..so guys..no more intense kind of romance in my ff..]

Chapter 6

The lovely day arrived after the mysterious night with the pomp and show of the musical birds..to wake the divinely wonderful pair..
Even After the baffling night.. Twinj were sleeping peacefully in each other’s love embrace.. Its truely said that true love never gets affected by any mishappenings..it always becomes stronger and deeper at hence.

Kunj woke up and saw His Twinkle sleeping peacefully ..a cute smile seized his lips.. He adored her but all that happened last night blazed into his mind..which somewhere horrified him..he looked at her tensed

Kunj’s POV

Yesterday.. You were crying for help in front of me..and I wasn’t able to help you…I feel to curse myself for not being helpful to you…I am sorry Twinkle.. I felt so helpless at that moment.. I really worry what’s happening with you from last 2 nights.. I’ll die but will not let anything happen to you.. That’s my promise… Thinking this I kissed her forehead to wake my girl up…
“Good morning ..” I said..
“Good morning Kunj”.. She replied stretching her arms and getting up..and then looking at me
“.. Are you fine?..I asked sitting and got a curve on her lips as my answer..I cupped her head ..


Next scene

At night …9:30p.m.

A barbarous stormy night…with thunders and lightening with drizzling

Kunj is talking on mobile in the garden..he finishes his talks and go back to the hall…
” Twinkle… “..he calls as he isn’t able to find her …
“…Twinkle Twinkle little star….eheheh”… He heard a voice.. Umm..or actually a combined voice… Which somewhere made him quite restless.. He went to the direction of the voice…
He went to their room and was shocked… Walls and the roof were scribbled with red crayon…with only one thing written…

” Twinkle Twinkle Little star… Ehe” ..again he heard and rushed being super tensed.

He reached the Terrace and the sight terrified his soul..
Twinkle who was wearing a green top and denim shorts was walking on the railing of the terrace without any support
..she was walking like a maniac with rough open hair..singing
“Twinkle Twinkle Little star…”.. Her voice.. No..its wasn’t her voice… Yes..she was speaking in a heavy voice which seemed to be of two..while walking her foot slipped.. She was about to fall …but balances herself
” TWINKLE”…Kunj Shouted rushing to save her…
His voice made Twinkle stopped..she turned towards scaring Kunj’s spirits.. Her blood red eyes.. Scratches on white face with blood strains…Kunj was glued at his place.. A bit away from her…

“Heheheheheeh…”… Twinkle started laughing turning on the railing..
“.. I am not Twinkle…heh he he he..”.. She said laughing bending her shoulders.. Her smile was horrible due to her black – yellow teeth and extremely dried lips..

Kunj had tears in his eyes.. He wasn’t able to see his Love’s condition…
She bend towards his face..very close and stretching her eyes and aired
” I am going to take your Twinkle to the stars…”..
“..nooo..no please..please leave Twinkle..”.. Kunj pleaded to save Twinkle because right now nothing else could help him out..
” awww…baby gonna miss Twinkle.. “..she sang like a crazy..

” leave her…”…he said looking into her eyes with tiny pupils….a tear fell from his burning eyes…
She looked at him with anger…inhaled heavy raising her chest… She started stretching her upper lip….everything started shaking around..
She bend towards his chest and smelled him inhaling a lonnnnnng breath bending back…
“…I SAID LEAVE HER…LEAVE MY TWINKLE”.. he yelled holding her shoulders…

She laughed and ran taking small steps with the noises of thunders…
” Twinkle… “..Kunj followed her…
and to His horror he found her lying on the corridor’s floor… She was there as if someone threw her body there… He hotfooted towards her…kept her head on his lap…patted her cheeks to wake her up..
” Twinkle… Twinkle wake up…wake up Twinkle “..
checked her breath with woeful eyes…she was breathing but very slowly…
He hugged her tight for sometime… Lifted her…he took her out of the house.. Made her sit on the front seat ..cupped her face…looked at the villa…

Kunj’s POV-
I bought this for you…but what’s the use when you can’t get even a single night’s peacefull sleep ..and what just happened.. (Looks at her with tears)… I’ll not let you be here even for a more second I can not believe.. That you were possessed!!! I know we live in 21st century.. But I’m not able to oppose what I saw..you ain’t sick..and this was drastic…
I drove towards Yuvraaj’s house..my friend who resides in Kochi…I informed him about that..I knew right now no doctor could treat Twinkle ..the only one is Yuvraaj’s father…
I’ll not let anything happen to you..I looked at her..cleared my tears.. Covered Twinkle with my blazer to let her sleep..I cupped her forehead.. And continued to drive..
POV- ends

The villa is shown and his car passing by..the same girl in black suit is standing in the balcony holding the curtain..

Heyyy..hellloooo guys..
So how was it???
I really donno IF I was able to do this properly or not..I donno if I portrayed the feelings & situations correctly or not…so I hope you’ll tell me that so that I can improve..
I know you may not find my ff that so very scary because I have scary scenes but I feel I am not able to potray them properly..

I’ll post this ff only once a week ..on weekends.. Hope you all are okay with that..so set up your alarms for weekend shows by Shreya..

And yes I’ve posted my other two ffs too along with this…do read them if you wish

Do comment please…

thanks to alllllll those who commented..I don’t reply to unregistered members because I don’t know naa that they see it or not..if any of you do…then do tell so that I may reply…

Love you ???

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  1. Hey lovely
    payal here episode was scary….good one

  2. Ria

    Hey Shreya,
    It was amazing. Gosh! What’s happening? I’m quite shocked. Hope this week gets over quicker.

    Loads of love.?

  3. Kritika14

    It was amazing! Loved it. Post the next one soon. Loves xx

  4. Ranabulbul

    Aammammamamamammzzzzziiinnngg meri shreyu
    Maja aayaga ..ops sorry horror aagya
    Tw with white skin and yellow teeth’s ewwwww….

    Ab jaldi post akrna ok

  5. Anam_sidhant

    It was fabulous?

  6. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Omg shreya …….. it was like……. I’m speechless ……. great ……… sooooo scary ….. loved it ……..???????????

  7. Ayu

    Shreya!!! Dara diya yaar! Ab raat ko kaise soun? I will come to haunt ur dreams if i cannot sleep…joking yaar…
    But it felt so real!!! I am having goosebumps all over my body!!! Amazingly written!! Bravo❤️❤️

  8. Fan

    Omg the epi was superb!!..iam having goosebumps all over my body..i can’t wait to know the reason behind this paranormal activity..plz post post the nest part soon!!

  9. Fan

    Omg the epi was superb!!..iam having goosebumps all over my body..i can’t wait to know the reason behind this paranormal activity..plz post the next part soon!!

  10. R.S.H.H.P

    Shreyaaa I love horror stories this episode was awesome just loved it ☺
    Riya ko tera ff pasand
    Story alag ho toh pasand hai
    Riya ko tera ff pasand hai
    I know it’s lame next time i’ll try a better one love you dear ☺☺??

  11. Nice one dear

    Loved it.
    Bt feeling bad fr kunj
    Pls asap

  12. Sayeeda

    Amazing episode….awesome one ….Shreyoooo…..u nailed it girl….. wonderful…..

    Love you???

  13. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing shocking suspense full horror…loved it

  14. Amaxing epi.. n was lil bit scary too.. poor twinkle.. do cont soon ?

  15. Scared me………..really u scared me a lot….. ….but very nicely………I could really feel it………very nice

  16. Shreya098

    Awesome shreya…
    U nailed it..

  17. Sujina

    its scary yaar…
    is that house really haunted…
    n yes i know…its a fb…
    love u…???

  18. Romaisha

    Hmm okay..m I’ll be honest here… I’m not a fan of horror stuff but… Gahh your ff is piercing its way through my heart! You know… I was reading this epi in pitch dark? Yah i was.. Terrible mistake ?? but really writers that manage to scare me like u are seriously awesome!
    To be honest i have a very wild imagination when it comes to reading horror but i have alot of respect for you people… So yaar .. Hats off to you!????
    You managed to scare me and thats why i adore your ff!!
    Please post then next episode soon
    Please please please!!!
    Love you! ??

    (P.S i loved how u ended the epi… With him driving and the woman standing holding the blind… *shivers* ??)

  19. Baby

    Yr shreyooo tune toh sch mein dara dia I mean I was shivering nt dat mch bt sch mein dar lag rha tha bura wala dar lag rha tha kunki mene conjurent 2 dekhi thi abhi abhi or den yeh episode uff….meri toh halat tight thi hehhehehehehehehehee luvd it hmmm…..no romance no wris…bt luvd it pr ab kunj nhi khe rha kya ki usse uaki biwi ke sath romance krna hai hahhahahahahahahaaa no yr srsly u nailed it I was joking. …….beautiful horror hhahahaaa……

    1. Jiya_Ani

      Are are are…jaan…pehle toh I am jumping yaar seeing ur comment… Thanks a Lott..and yaar Kunj toh bada zid kar raha tha ki bas do epi aur romance karde do plzzzzz..but Maine mana kar diya..had hoti hai yaar ab aap hi batao main story aage bhadaun..ya in dono ki family planning karti rahoon???…toh Maine bola naa koi baat nahi thoda bohot aage dedungi moments and baaki do ffs bhi toh hain..and kuch abhi baaki hai naa apne pitaare main?…
      Hahaha..sorry yaar itna Dara Diya Maine tumhe …sacchi main kya?…


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