A tale of OBSTINANCE and LOVE..(Chapter 10) [Last Chapter]



Chapter 10 (last chapter)

“Its me…”

“..What?”.. Vijay turned and saw Kantama’s eyes swollen due to continuous flow of tears..
“ It’s me behind all this I am the reason..reason behind all the sorrows..I am keeping her here..I am sure tha tshe is connected with me to be here on earth ..”..she cried with a knife on her wrist.. She was about to slit her wrist when Kunj stopped her from doing so…
”its not you..”..he was breathing heavily

All looked on ..he showed a wooden locket and a notepad…


ts 10p.m. at night..
Kunj was working in study..he completed his work and came to hall..and found Twinkle sitting gathering her legs on sofa..with open hair ..her head was hanging… With some hair strands edging her face..she was holding a writing pad and was slowly scribbling on it..[*]

Kunj was surprised a bit to see her like that..
” Twinkle.. “..he said
“.. Hmmmm”.. She hummed ..
“..I am feeling very sleepy..I am going to sleep..”.. She continued getting up rubbing her palm on her neck….and going..
Kunj gave a WHAT-HAPPENED-TO-HER-? wala look..after sometime he also went to room.

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“She is so connected to this that she did a mistake..”.. Kunj said in a victorious gesture…[*Disha drew that necklace…when she was scribbling]

Vijay took out a lighter..and lit it to burn the locket..just then the flame went off…

All of a sudden Twinkle came in b/w Kunj and Vijay..due to sudden action.. Vijay got hit by a side table on his temple and fell unconscious…Kunj was pushed so hard that he got bumped into the wall with his back…he fell down..the locket fell from his hands…Kantama was so scared that Yuvraaj took her out of the basement ….she was sobbing..


Kunj tried hard to open his eyes…He saw Twinkle laughing hard looking at the ceiling.. She was rotating segregating her arms…

“Heh..he”.. She looked at Kunj stretching her own lips upwards..

Kunj with difficulties got up..and secretly grabbed the locket…she started motioning towards Kunj…

“Twinkle Twinkle little star..she’s not gonna live in this war”…she laughed.

Kunj closed his eyes…Twinkle’s smiling face flashed before his eyes..
He tightened his grip on the locket and opened his eyes.. She (I’ll use she for Twinkle possessed by Disha) was standing near him with a evil grin and dark wide eyes…
She kept her forefinger on her teeth..and was arching her neck left and right like a maniac….(try this when u r sitting alone and someone is about to pass by….I bet its fun!?)
“He”.. She let out a short laugh…she went nearer and started smelling Kunj…

Kunj felt disgusted… He took the locket and secretly took it over a candle flame to let it catch fire…he wasn’t looking at it so that she cannot make out what he was doing.. he stood still in front of her….but slowly he realized that he wants able to feel any heat…he looked at it with d corner of his eyes.. and found that the candle wasn’t burning…

“Chu chu chu….aww…it isn’t working “..he heard the same airy voice… And then all glasses started getting cracked and breaking..and shattered… some hit Kunj and caused some cute on his arms as he saved him..he fell down as a glass piece caused a cut on his calf..the locket fell too..far from him..

“..I am…I am so sorry…I din wanted to hurt you…this Twinkle is very bad…so bad..she hit my Kunj…now…punishment…”..saying she lifted a glass piece…

“Noooo”.. Kunj exclaimed…

“Aaaaaaahhhhh..Aah Ku…unj…”..Twinkle screamed in pain as Disha (monopolizing her) made her cut her skin on her arms..blood was oozing out..


Kunj tried to get up..his eyes fell on a bulb..and the locket.. He took the wire out of the attachments and threw that lightened up bulb on the locket and it started burning…

as the locket caught fire..she started shaking..she was shouting and screaming.. and went a bit in the air and suddenly she was pulled out…Kunj ran behind.. near the main stairs..he caught hold of Twinkle’s waist…and she lifted herself a bit up and arched back as if something was going out of her…and then..she lighten.. and fell unconscious in Kunj’s arms…

Kunj’s eyes teared up…but his lips formed a curve…he hugged her tightly… The new morning rays kissed their newly born happiness… and celebrated the victory of LOVE over the OBSTINATE EVIL….


Phew!…finally done with one!

Soooooo…did u liked my chotu sa ff?..I know It took so long to end..but still…10 chappies only naa…??

If anything..even a single thing ..is there that u liked about my way of writing… This story…anything in this ff…

Do comment pllzzzzzzzzzz…at least today I want Silent readers too (if any) to open up…

yehi hai ISHQ will b posted on Sunday?

thannks to everyone who commented till date..thank you thank you thank you sooooooooooon much…..I just…

love you guys….?

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  1. Roshini125

    Awesome……I was scared smetimes but it was soo interesting that I couldn’t stop myself in reading it again n again. …thanks fr such a nice piece of writting..

  2. SidMin23

    Beautiful ????

  3. Awesome……. the way u explained everything is just cammendable☺☺☺
    It was seriously an awesome ff??

  4. Komal123

    This was amazing! I love it lovely!( cant disclose real name)
    I actually love obstinance stories!
    Waiting more from your side!

  5. Chiku

    Hey lovely
    Woaaaah its just amazing ?????i just loved it girl. It’s amazing.
    Lovely story
    Waiting for ur other ffs
    Post soon
    Love u?

  6. Ramya

    Lovely it was awesome amazing ending loved it n I’ll miss ur ff it’s made a lovely journey dear

  7. Kanchi

    Lovely u promised me that u will post the episode on 1st u know how eagerly I was waiting for this but no worries today u posted i read also
    I loved this journey of a tale of obstinance
    Hope to see more work from ur side very soon
    I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next ff or is by u
    Love u dear

    1. Jiya_Ani

      I know I promised and its a funny story behind posting it today…vo actually.. I copied it from doc after typing and forgot to paste on article submission form!??…I checked in early morning and was surprised!..bohot dwr take sochti rahi…’abhi tak post kyu nahi hua?..Maine toh kal 5baje hi submit kar diya tha!…’..after a long remenicising session the stupid silly me realized that main toh submission form khola hi nahi toh post kahaan se hoga??????????????

      I was laughing at myself and then submitted.. I know abhi tumhe mujhpe has I aa rahi hogi…has lo has lo..aakhir Maine tumhe unjaane main wait karaya???

      And thanks for comment.. I will surely post Yehi hai ISHQ on Sunday.. Is baat confirm..post hi karungi ??

      Love ya❤

      1. Kanchi

        Awwww my cute n buddhu friend I will be eagerly waiting for ur ff n ya this time don’t forget to paste it on submission form otherwise otherwise
        Is bar bat no karungi :-);-)

    2. Jiya_Ani

      Yes Sir!?

      No more complains from now…(at least try karungi?)

  8. Adya

    Well di….
    U r just awesome…I’m speechless…well I like all the way u write…just all the ways… everything..
    The episode was outstanding ….Nd wonderful..I’m eagerly waiting for more of these…
    Waiting for the ff…..
    Love u…

  9. it was terrific reading ur bful ff…???
    loved it….???

  10. Shreya098

    Looved this tale of obstinance and love..

  11. Hlwwww……loveyyy….sach may u r sooo lovely……i m silent reader of ur all ff…..I read ur all ff and i love this twinj very much because they r very swtt and romantic couple in this ff from the beginning…..well it is very awesome,,,emotional,,, and to Scarry episode….I m speechless…… Luv it very much…. I m waiting 4 ur all ff desperately my swtttuuu sister ok do u mind if i call u my chotu sis because u r soo swttt and lovely and ur talks to…..and post ur other ff also…m waitingggggg……luv u very much…Tc…byyyyy…,,,,,,

  12. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous marvelous epi

  13. Aanya_pandey

    This ws d last chapter.. can’t believe it..
    U know this ff ws something very different from others.. this is y i loved it so much… N ya today’s chapter.. this ws jst fab..?

  14. Vipul

    Hi Lovely, firstly sorry for late comment actually this week I was not active on TU bcz of hectic shedule so couldn’t read it n today read from 6 chap in one go…. n I think for the first time I’m cmnting on ur ff….. well my name is Shalini you can call me Neha also…. a new ff writer of twinj…. I was waiting for ur ff since a long time but look jab tumne post kiya to main hi gayab thi….

    By the way I love ur ff so much n I love ur writing skill in all way…. n this one was superb fabulous n mindblowing….. the way you discribed horror scenes it was outstanding….. loved it to the core….

    Lots of love….


  15. Awesome lovely… But last… Why??? I’ll miss this very much… The journey of love over obstinance was remarkable… Loved it… Sorry for the late comment.. Actually i was lil busy…

  16. Purvi128

    Hey Lovely.. yrr awesome dear … sorry for late cmmnt

  17. Fan

    Hey lovely!!..i loved this ff a lot!!!!!…it was awesome…it is thebest suspense thriller ff that i have ever read!!..plz come up with another ff like this one..
    PS. sorry for the late comment..

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