A tale of OBSTINANCE and LOVE..(Chapter 1)

Helloooooooooooo lovely people…. I am here with a surprise for u all..a beautiful tale of obstinance and love..I will not reveal my identity so soon…but I request u all to plz comment …no problem if they r positive or negative.. and guess who I am and plz write ur guess…who knows u r ri8…!..and ya one more thing.. I am not at all new here..most of u know me and love me …so here we start…..1st chapter of this few slots….

A big white-grey bungalow is shown… A lavish one in Ernakulam..in Kerala..the camera moves inside the entrance and shows a big and beautiful hall ………the camera moves further on the stairs… And reaches a beautiful room…where a couple is shown hugging each other tightly… So tight that no one can seperate them….all the powers on this Earth is weak in front of this feel…the feeling of LOVE…. It wasn’t a happy hug….it was a hug to console… an inseparable hug…a hug of intense love……

After sometime they break the hug…the face of the girl is shown… A gorgeous girl in a pink-blue anarkali suit…her beautiful’deeper than the ocean ‘…,teary eyes are shown.. tears roll down on her pink-rosy cheeks… the guy clears them with his thumb…
G:..shhh..hey twinkle.. Plz don’t cry..u know naa I don’t like tears in my wife’s eyes…

So the girl is Twinkle kunj sarna…wife of Kunj sarna..(sidhant gupta …ONLY… Khabardaar Jo kisi aur KO imagine kiya..)…

He caresses her forehead she closes her eyes…
T:..but Kunj…
he keeps fingers on her soft lip and smoothly rub his fingers on her lips… then her face…and slowly on her neck…she keeps her hands on his chest… he takes her right hand and they interlocked their fingers… Soon ..their lips met they had an immense , smooth and long liplock…..after some times their lips parted…twinkle rested her head on his chest…

T:..why r u leaving me here..Kunj… I want to b with u only…
K:..Even I want to b with u only.. But the work for which I am going is not safe….if u will b there then u will b the most unsafe…ur safety is my priority… I just want to keep u away from that house….
T:..but why..
K:..leave it..
T:..I love u …Kunj..
K:..I love u tooo …twinkle.. I love u….OK…I have to go now…she stands straight…. B here with mahi and Yuvraj.. And plz take care…
K:..now may I see my lovely wife’s beautiful smile..
T:..ya..u r going and asking me to smile… u r the reason for my smile …kunj…and gets a curve on her lips…
T:..kunj plz..don’t say bye..just say..see u soon…
K:..okay…c u soon..cups her face and turns to leave but twinkle catches his elbow..
T:..why r u not telling me the whole truth…
K:..which truth Twinkle..?
T:..Kunj …I know u r hiding something from me..tell me naa..plz..
Kunj turns and cups her face..
K:..I love u..only u..

He turns and leaves…

Twinkle follows him…
Kunj’s POV-

I am sorry twinkle.. But to keep u safe is my priority… Even if I die…I will not let anything happen to u…in this war..either we will b together for always.. Or I will never meet u again….but I can’t lie to u …u should know about this…

.she sobs..but feels warm hands on her shoulder …she recognized the touch and hugs the person tightly…
T:..kunj…(yes ..Kunj returned..)
K:..twinkle.. I can’t lie to u ..listen..
He makes her sit on the house swing… surrounded by greenery…(after all they are in the God owned city…Kerala)


This chapter ends here… I hope it was not boring.. and sorry for wasting ur time but trust me ..its a very beautiful story.. Do read..and comment..
I know ..many of u must b a bit confused… but soon all the confusions will b cleared… And yes its not a common luvstory…

All kinds are accepted here..roses..thorns …rotten tomatoes.. And yes kisi ka man kare toh Lillie’s bhi throw kar Dena…coz I love them a lot…
Now a hint -..I am a girl with a 6lettered name…issue zyaada ..no hint at all..only guesses..
Plz comment and keep loving me…

Credit to: Shreya


  1. dreamer

    Osum start…good one….ctd asap.
    I really can’t guess who u r….but I will try and try…lol
    May be shreya..,.

  2. RiaA MendeZz

    I’m seeing here that credit goes to shreya.
    Anyway, I love the starting and I can’t wait to see what you have in store for your readers. Oh and please, if u plan on writing Hindi lines please translate in english for me okay.

  3. dreamer

    Lol I guess I m right and I assure u I didn’t looked at the credit wala thing I just directly scrolled dowm and commented and guessed.
    Luv u dear.good start
    Ctd asap

  4. Shakti

    When u asked to guess who u are-the name that came to my mind was Crazy the writer of story Love strategy. ….
    But it’s written cedit -Shreya….
    Anyway….great start….update soon…

  5. Shreya

    Hey guys…. Its not me..I think she any other Shreya…but still…an awesome track.. and an fabulous story.. seems interesting.. waiting ….??

  6. chandra

    wow . amazing start . first i thought roshni di . lol . but u r a very good writer . no need to say . continue . and i will give u white , pink roses . my favourite

  7. Sayeeda

    Amazing start yrr….loved it….in the first slot only I felt so emotional then what will happen in upcoming chapters …..nd yes I won’t be throwing thorns but lilies as ur story is awesome…. waiting for next one..

  8. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Shreya..
    The episode was soooo intense
    The feelings were expressed so beautifully..
    Loved it
    N sorry dear for the late comment..
    I hope u forgive me????????????????

  9. Ammu

    Hi sorry I can’t guess you bit story seems more interesting I enjoyed a lot while reading plz continue and I want to know will u update daily or once or twice in a week plz let me know hope u don’t mind and u r took gud ur thoughts r amazing I just luv it ????? eagerly waiting for next update☺☺☺☺☺

  10. sana

    its amazing ,, i think u r roshni rockstar
    its just a guess
    do tell me in next epi dat who is dis chupe rustam writer
    n if u r not roshni den giv another hint in anoder epi plzplzplz
    can i tell u d hint also plz tell us dat how many ff u have write
    plz plz
    waiting for ur reply

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