A Tale of Hatred into Love – Chapter 5

Hiii friends,…I hope you all will like this update,…As usual ignore my grammatical errors in this update,..Sorry for making you all wait,…Ready to go,….

Chapter 5:

It became true in Arjun’s life today that Remorse for his past deeds has became a violent Dyspepsia of his mind,…He dunno how to get relieve from this,…In fact, it is very difficult to treat as it cant even be defined,..Because everything which he saw was not gold that glisters and everything which he not seen so far is not a tear that glistens,…But,Still Arjun dinn realize that his remorse has now became Radz’s haunting reminiscence,…He was trying hard to justify his deeds,.. His intuition of He was wrong somewhere in this Revenge game overtook his justification,… So, every time his trials end up in a grand failure,..Now this time,His hounded thoughts were disturbed by Sam,…

Sam:Arjun,..Why are you standing here alone?,…You din like the Dinner,…Pa wants to talk with you,…He is in line,…Hold up man,…

Saying so,Sam handovers her mobile to Arjun,…

Telephonic convo,…

Arjun:Yes,…I’m fine uncle,…Ya,…Nandhu too enjoying this dinner,…How’s people there in Australia?

Samrat:Ya,…I’m fine with these Aussies,My boy…Just enjoying without your Aunt Piyali’s torture,…And Arjun,I heard you asked Radhika to direct your Ad by staying in your mansion,…

Arjun:Yes,,..Why,any problem?

Samrat:No,..No,…In fact,I personally wanna thank you my boy,..She is like Sam for me,..First I din like Radhika staying at our mansion but,after few days,..slowly, I adopted her as my another daughter,Arjun,…She deserves it,man…Piyali told me that she was upset these days,..So,it will be a nice change for her mood swing off,…So,please take care of my girl and my grandkid Arjun,…

Hearing this,Arjun don’t have any words to utter in reply,…

Samrat:Arjun,..Are you hearing me?,…

Arjun:Yes,..I do,…

Samrat:Good,..and thank you my boy,… Enjoy your dinner with Nandhini,..And take care of her too,…

Arjun:Ofcourse,…

Saying so,Samrat ends the call,…

Arjun gave the mobile back to sam and he wondered how Radhika got everyone’s love here,..He din get what makes Sam’s family to love Radz this much,…Sam shakes his arms and began,

Sam:Arjun,..Where were you?,…What pa said yaar?,..And you like my surprise gift na,…

Arjun:Nothing important sam,…Yes,..Nice watch,..Thank you sam,..And Sam,..If you don’t mind,..Tell me one thing,…Why you people care for Radhika so much?,…

Sam smiled at Arjun’s question and began,

Sam:Arjun,…Yes,We all care for Radhika,…Our Relationship with chasni is more than Blood Relationship yaar,…Friendship Arjun,…I also somewhere responsible for her miseries arjun,…

Arjun: You???,…How sam?,..How you held responsible for her miseries?,…

Sam:Yes Arjun,…I’m not directly responsible,…But,some guilty conscience makes me to think like that,…Three years back,If I din ask chasni to do her research about tourism alone in Goa,She would never end up her life in misery na,…We know,..she was laughing for us,..still she din came out of her dark past,Arjun…

Arjun:Means,..You knew Radhika earlier,…But,She din say any about you to me?,..

Sam: What?,…You talked with chasni earlier,…

Arjun:No,…I mean,..You din say any about her to me right?,..

Sam:Oh!!!,…It’s a big story Arjun,..Leave it yaar,…

Saying so sam tries to move,..Arjun stopped her and continued,…

Arjun:Sam,…Wait a minute,..I’m your friend right,..Then Tell me,..How do you know Radhika?,..What about her Dad?,…

Sam:Arjun,…Chasni is my friend,…Me and Neil care for her a lot,…We will do anything to bring smile on her face,…Neil’s only desire is to see chasni achieving her dreams and living happily with the one whom she loves,..But,God fulfilled his one dream at the cost of crushing the other one,…And Arjun, Remembering some bad memories will hurt us only yaar,…You came for dinner after a long time,..And,I don’t wanna share unwanted things in this sweet occasion,…, So,Please leave it yaar,…

Arjun:Sam,…I’m your friend,..your problem will be mine,…

Sam:Thanx Arjun,..If it so,please take care of chasni and Ansh,…We are sending her with you against her wish for the first time cox of your insistence,..I knew about you well,…So,I think,..I no need to say any about this again,…

Arjun nodded yes,…and hugged sam in assurance friendly,…He felt an incurable pain running over his nerves after hearing Neil’s bond with Radz from sam,…

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In Piyali’s Room,..

Piyali:Nandhini,…Have you seen this album,…

A lady with broad eyes turned towards piyali,…

Nandhu:Yes,..I saw,..And piyali, you din tell me who is that kid Ansh still,…

Piyali sat beside Nandhu and began,…

Piyali:Nandhini,..He is Radhika’s son,…

Nandhu remembered the same name from Arjun yesterday,…

Nandhu:What?,..Radhika,…Who is she?,…Why she staying here?,..Who is her husband?,…

Piyali:NAndhini,…She is Neil and Sam’s friend,…And she is unmarried,…

NAndhu:What,…She is Unmarried???,…Then,who is Ansh’s real father?,..

Piyali:We dunno Nandhini,…She din utter who betrayed her and crushed her life to anyone,…Even her dad abandoned her but still she was not ready to disclose that person’s name,…First,We gave shelter to her cox of Sam’s insistence but later We adopted her as our own daughter like sam,…

Nandhini was shocked hearing this,..

Nandhu:Piyali,..When it happened?,…

Piyali:Three years back in Goa,…Why,..You know anything about Ansh’s real father?,…

Nandhu:What,… In Goa?,…Nooo,…

Nandhini s head starts spinning lightly,…

Piyali:Nandhini,..What happened?,…

Nandhu’s innervoice:No,never,..It cant be my Arjun,… Why I’m thinking like this?,…

Piyali:Nandhini,..First,Have some water,…

Nandhu drank the water and began,

Nandhini:Piyali,I want to meet Radhika now,..Where is she?,…

Piyali:I think,she is in her room,…She was not feeling well,..So,she din attend the dinner with us,…Now,you are feeling better right,..

Nandhini:Yes,..I forgot to take my tablets,..Now,I’m alright,…Nothing to worry,..And you said,she is not willing to direct our Ad na,…I wanna talk with her,Piyali..Where is her room?,…

Piyali:Sure,..You can talk with her,…Radhika’s room is upstairs,…Left side,…

Nandhu:Thank you piyali,…

Piyali:Shall I accompany you?,…

Nandhu:No thanks,..I will go alone,…After all, its our mansion right,…

Piyali:Billkul,…

After ending her chat with piyali, Nandhini walked towards Radz room,…

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Meanwhile In balcony,…

Sam:Ansh,..See,today what your aunt has?…

Saying so,sam gave ansh a food item which made Ansh smile,..

Ansh:Wow,…Spinach cheese ball,…Mumma made it for me,..Hmmm,..Yummmy,…

Saying so,Ansh enjoyed eating,…

Sam:No,…My friend,..

Ansh:Who?,…

Sam showed Arjun,…Seeing Arjun,Ansh stopped eating,…

Ansh:I din like this,…

Sam:I dunno ,..I’m going,…You ate my friend’s food,…Now,It’s between you and your Arjun uncle,…Don’t take me into this,…

Ansh:Sam Aunt,…Ruko,…I’m also coming,…If you left me here alone,I will complain to dad,…

Sam:Do whatever you want,…I’m not afraid,…

Saying so, Sam left Arjun and Ansh alone,…Ansh turned left facing the wall and bent down slowly to watch what Arjun doing,…Arjun pretends to look outside,…Then,Ansh ate the remaining leftover snacks hiding from arjun,…Arjun loves his son’s antics which brought a huge smile on his face along with some unknown tears of joy,…After a while,…

Ansh:Thank you,..

Saying so,Ansh hides his face with hands,..Arjun smilingly took ansh in his arms and kissed him lovingly,…,

Arjun:Do you like these Cheese balls,..

Ansh:Hmmm,…Yummy,…How do you know that it’s my favorite,…It’s like mumma’s preparation,…

Arjun hiding his tears began,

Arjun:It’s my favorite too,…I only taught this dish to your mumma,…

Ansh:But mumma din say about you to me na,…

Arjun:Your mumma hided many things from you ansh,…

Right then radz in sky blue kurti,who was searching for Ansh was shocked seeing arjun holding Ansh in his arms,…Anger occupied her heart and mind completely,…She yelled Ansh’s name loudly,…

Radz:Ansh,…Ansh,..come here,…

Saying so Radz grabbed ansh from arjun furiously and took him to her room ignoring ansh and arjun’s repeated calling,..

Ansh:Mumma,..Mumma,What happened?,…Why are you angry mumma?,…Mumma,..That uncle is nice,…He told me that He wont scold you mumma,…Mumma,…Please,don’t cry na,…

Radz:Ansh,…You don’t want mumma to cry na,..

Ansh:Hmmm,..

Radz:Then go to your dad now,…And don’t talk with that uncle without my permission,…You dunno,..He is a Rakshas Ansh,…

Ansh:But,He din look like Rakshas hai na mumma,…

Radz:No Ansh,…Some Rakshas looks like Angel but they are not real angel ansh,…If we are friendlier with them,Then one day, they will eat you alive ansh,…

Ansh wiped radz tears and began,…

Ansh:Ok Mumma,… Hereafter, I wont talk with that uncle,…I love you mumma,…Please don’t cry mumma,..smile karo na,…

Hearing this Radz kissed Ansh on his cheeks lovingly,…Arjun,who listens everything from the window fumes in anger hearing Radz introducing him as Rakshas to Ansh,…His eyes reddened in anger,…

After Ansh left,Radz wiped her tears and about to go out was stopped by Arjun,…Arjun holds her arms tightly and pulled her inside the room,…

Radz:Arjun,…Everything has a limit,…Stop your misbehavior,…

Arjun:Misbehavior?,..Ok,..I’m here right before you,…Do whatever you want,…It’s between us,…But,How dare you say me Rakshas to Ansh,Radhika…He is our child Radhika,…

Radz:What! our child???,…No arjun,..Ansh is my child,…And listen,…Whatever I said to ansh is true,…

Arjun:Ok,…Then,tell him,..who I am to you,…and who is his real father, Radhika?,…

Radz:I know what to tell and what not?,..You don’t preach me Arjun,..Ansh is my son,…you hear me na,..Ansh is my son,…

Arjun:Stop it Radhika,…I’m tired of hearing this,…How could you forgot, what happened between us so easily,…If I din touch you that night, today you wont shout like this before me,…Understand,…

Hearing this,Radz was annoyed seeing arjun’s face,…she ignored him and tried to go out of the room,…

Arjun:Radhika,…I’m talking with you only,..Listen,..Radhikaa,…

Saying so,Arjun tried to stop Radz,..But,By mistake,..He tore Radz left hand sleeve exposing her neck , forearm and her back,…Her dupatta too fell down in this,…Radz was shocked by this sudden encounter,…Her anger was ready to burst out anytime,…Now,she couldn’t bottle up her anger anymore,…Whereas Arjun was also shocked seeing Radz like this,…He falter for a second and began,

Arjun:Radhika,..Sorry,…I,..I din,..

Before Arjun completing his phrase,…Radz slapped him hard on his face,…Arjun din expect this from Radz,…He was literally frowning in an extreme anger,..Radz too breathed heavily after extending her arm on his face while letting out her anger on him,…

Right then Nandhini,who entered Radz room was extremely shocked seeing arjun getting slap from Radz and Radz in that condition with her tore dress as well,…

P.S.:Friends,..thanks for liking and taking your time to comment on my both FF,which really means a lot for me to write next update,…I recently fell down from a Hillside road accidentally yaar,..By God’s grace,Nothing big happened to me,..I escaped with minor injuries,…So,now mom is not allowing me to come online,..Please excuse me friends,…I hope you all will enjoy this update,…Miss you all buddies,…

Credit to: Renu

35 comments

  1. Advaita

    Missed u too di !! Hope u r fine and recover soon . Tysm for the update. But plzzz look after urself and take care . Love you loads. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  2. Shree

    Hi renu!! How are you?! Please e careful di.. Thank God nothing big happened… Take rest…. Take care..

    Coming to the episode… It was awesome… Sam-arjun convo… Arjun-sarat convo… They were all filled with so much love and care that Arjun couldn’t understand… Does Nandini know anything about Radhika? Why was she reacting like that? Sam and ansh are so cute… Cheese ball scene… Chhoooo cute.. ??…. My cute little Ansh knows how to hide and eat …. An lol.. Radz calling him rakshas …. He deserves it… A that slap too… How dare he…

    Please do take care… Meduva update pannu… No worries…

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  3. Vivi

    Oh my goodness.. R u feeling better…plz do take care of urself…praying 4 ur fast recovery….today’s episode was really good…waiting to knw wot nandini will do…. Love you…tc

  4. aastha

    renu plz take care…y r u being soo careless?????????

    arjun deserved te slap…..thumps up frm me rads…..ll nandu b able 2 realize tat ansh’s dad s arjun????????plz let hr understand….n i want hr 2 make arju realize hs mistake…….ansh s sooo cute……….arjun dot try 2 take ansh away frm rads………u love hr dnt u???????????ten y cant u stop justifying ur cruel shameless act to hr?????????????i likd rads intro arjun to ansh as rakshas………….so 1st piyali n samrat din lke rads…bt ten tey accepted hr as their oqn daugh…i lvd it…..sooo r tey all in arjun’s mansion???????????n 1 more ting…..arjun u shuud b tankful 2 rads tat she din spit out ur name…..she din spoil ur repu also…so be tanful n stay away frm hr…………i also likd sam-rads-niel bnd…………….

  5. Renu dear!!!! Pls take care , god grace noting will happened, pls try sometime update take rest pa, otherwise episode awesome dear !!!!and again takecare bye renu…..

  6. Supriya

    Plzzz take care of urself renu get well soon dear nd today epi z just perfect……sam arj convo nd radz arj convo …..cheese ball scene z really gd nd radz clling arj as rakshas z awsme as he deserves it radz shd nt forgive him early he shd repent for his deeds,.,,,,,once again plz take care of urself dear

  7. Hey renu first just take care Dear…..
    Was a silent reader till now from mmz starting but Ur’s n gauri’s story make me so crazy that I didn’t silent anymore.in forum too.i loved ur dedication towards mmz….ur expression of words excellent….i wish I should take some writing tips from both of u….with due much pleasure in my heart ….even cudn’t express my feelings…..just wait for ur reply…n pls take care urself

  8. Guys will u pls let me know how to post fan fic n pic to tellyupdate….actually there are not much new stories coming on mmz now a days….n something crazy poped up in ma lil brain…so let me know….plzzzx

  9. subha

    Hi renu .. Thank god u r safe .Take rest &take care ..as usual u r rocking … This epi super ..god alwayds with u.. U have wonderful talent …..

  10. manha

    Renu dear hw r u now. plzz be careful. N dont take any stress. Hope everything is fine now. Hav u recovered completely. we can wait for ur stories renu. plzzz take care. Hope uncle is fine too.

    so gud to see ansh n arjun’s scene. Everything was his own fault else he could hav got peaceful life now. Fav food n all. Wah kya scene hain. i loved it. Arjun’s eagerness to know why everyone is taking special care of radz n what is her relation with them. gud. Arjun’s jealousy by listening neil’s closeness with radz. Kya scene hain. Radz tell ansh that he is rakshas n don’t go near him. Was superb. oops itna gussa kyun arjun.

    Nandu knows arjun has changed from 3 years when he returned from goa. But she needs some clarity. renu ur dialogue writing is too gud girl. I loved them all. Sam is guilty for getting radz into trouble. now what she do when she gets to know that trouble is arjun?? lol. what will nandu do when she comes to know the truth abt radz n ansh?? wow so many twists n so many ques. Waiting to see what will happen next. update soon. Take care. Lots of loveeeee.

  11. Naaga

    Renu how is ur health now? R u ok? & be careful & take care. Health seyri aana pinna update pannu ma.
    And 2day story supero super. Ansh really soooo sweet kid. Ansh pannadhu ingey ennoda facelum smile vandhadhu.
    Hahaha thavalai thann vaaiyaar kedum nu solluvaa ingey samarj convo arj nallavey maatindu iruppan, great escape. Come to ardhika convo, unnakku(arjun) enn idheylam, nee yedhu pannalum wrong poai muduiyum podhu kojam careful irukkavendiyadhu thaaney ada po pa, arai vanganadhu thaan ippo mijam. And radhu unnoda side irrundhu partha aravitadhu 100 percent correct ma. nandhukku already radhuva theriyumma? Ennakku theriyala. But thambi(arj) 3yrs back goa poi thappu pannirrukkanradhu theyriyum pola.
    Ok ma bye . Nxt update porumaiyaavey update pannalam.

  12. naomi

    Actually, Naaga yaarnnu ninaykkalam. Adhu thaan ennoda real name. Naomi is fictious name. Inni vara cmt sectionala ennoda real nameley send pannuven.

  13. first of all renu hows u dear?? how was the accident happened??? take care n take rest…actually i waited much for ur update…n wonder that u didn’t took this much long time for update usually…nw got the reason… take medicine properly deat…
    n update was awsome…actually i can feel therir heat of anget yar…u r amazing… in this part i realise that nandu is good in this story?? really??waiting for nxt epi egerly yarr..love u dear

  14. priya

    Hi renu today only I first read ur ff tat was awesome and can you put link of original story line which ur friend had written ,I want to read those past episode ,I searched in telly updates abt “Against all the odds” episode bt i can’t find it so please give the link to read that

  15. Lakshmi

    Renu how r u now?take care dear. Don’t worry about updates,get well soon. Asusal superb episode dear. Arjun n ansh scenes were amazing. Arjun’s jealousy is superb. So Nandu got some doubt about ardhika. What happens when everyone got to know about arjun’s betrayal. Luv u..tc..

  16. renu

    Thank you so much friends,…

    I dont have words to express my gratitude,…I said na just wounds,..no injuries,….

    We went outdoor last week,…Actually,My over imaginative brain was responsible for all these miseries,..I thought my dad might fell down and in that confusion I slipped and rolled over the Hillside road,…But,My dad was standing there tensed,….I just had some bruises on my knees,elbow,bumps on my forehead and swollen on my foot,..I got many scoldings from my mom yaar,…My dad was fine,…..Now,I was perfectly fine cox of my mom’s caring and her food,…Having medicines too,..even next week I gonna have running race with my bro,..lol.,…But,sorry couldnt come online often or give updates sooner cox of mom’s strict rules,…Only I’m taking rest but my mind was hyperactive in thinking about ardhika,….

    Naomi,..I like your name Naga dear,..Infact when I read your comment in mobile,I guessed it was naomi’s before scrolling down further,….Thank you so much deary,….

    Manha,..Dad is fine,…

    Rose,…I’m not a big writer n all dear,..I just scribbling my scattered thoughts,….If it was good then thanks a lot deary,..Ofcourse you can post new story on our ardhika,..If time permits,…I’ll try to read your’s but cant promise deary,..Its hard for me to come online sweetheart,…

    Priya,..Thank you so much,..she dinn post that Ff here in TU dear,…Its in IF,…Its really a wonderful plot yaar,…I’m just riding the horse to travel in that plot,….Hope you will enjoy all the chapters too,…

    Deepika,…I gave answers for you deary,…Miss you a lot,…I’m absolutely fine,….

    Thanks for all your wishes friends,….

    Advaita,liya,shree,aastha,brin,rishi,susi,swara,sundari,dipika,naomi,manha,lakshmi,priya,usha,subha,roshni,dev,supriya,roma,Ramya,Ameena…and all silent readers too,….

    Thank you so much,…Miss you all buddies,…Love u all friends,…

  17. renu

    Hiiiii friends,..since I couldnt come online often,…I just wanna post an analysis or my thots on our famous aRdhika Dori scene,…

    I said already na,..Renu couldnt stop herself from thinking about ardhika,..Result now she decided to share what she feels today after watching Ardhika Dori scene,…And Now she is feeling better,…In fact I cant take rest always yaar,..just knee, Hip and back are slightly paining,…I hope,.I will become alright sooner,…I seriously wanna see ardhika again yaar,…Ok,…you know na,..Sharing is caring,…This is my choti gift to all Crazy ardhikans like me,…

    Warning Note: Kids are restricted to read this post,…LOL,..(If you expect more,then you may get disappointment,..So,Read this post without tuning on all your gutter minds except letting Renu’s gutter mind to switch on,…)

    Here we go,…

    Only Dori scene,…

    Radz:Sir,..

    Arjun:Now what,…

    Radz:Please help me na,..I was stuck in,…

    Arjun:Its ok,…good Be there itself or else dunno whose kushboo you gonna take,…(sth like that,..)

    Radz:Please,..sir ,..Please,..

    Here comes the silent convo btw the two,…Lets start,…

    Arjun’s first deep breathe before Radz please,..

    Arjun:Radhika,..I’m saying for your good only,..please don’t call me near you,…I cant control my hormones always,…

    After her please,.,..

    Arjun:Radhika,..Why are you requesting me,..Its my pleasure to help you,…If someone ask wage for eating honey,then we will say him foolish Radhika,…Helping you also like that for me, Radhika,…I’m already coming near you,…I hope,..I will control myself without breaking your trust on me Radhika,…

    Radhika:Omg,..Sir is coming,…Why It looks something weird in me,..I only asked help na,..Then why some heat prevailing in my body hearing his footsteps,..I know Arjun sir is so genuine,..Asking help from him in this condition is not bad than asking someone for help,…Please calm down Radhika,…

    She dunno how bad our Arjun is,…But we ardhika fans knew that so well,…Ok,Now Arjun started pulling beads from the hole,…Let’s see how he is completing his assigned work,…

    Naughty Arjun,..while pulling beads, He tried to steal some glimpses of Radhika before dressing,…Arjun,You already saw everything a few minutes ago except the hided parts of towel na,..But still you are not satisfied,..Too bad Arjun,…Oh!,…Renu forgot that you said na you din see anything,…Sorry poor memory,.. may be her little wounds affects her memory power too,…But,she knew you saw whatever you can,..Poor Radz,..She only tried to believe your words,…I’m not a fool to believe your words man,… like deer coming voluntarily to tiger’s den,…Radz asking help from you,..Hmmm ,…

    Finally,Arjun,..you finished your task,..There My Radz was relieved and she was busy in tying her Dori too,…When you turned soon to leave that place,..Here A Small fight arises btw Renu’s mind and heart,…LOL,…

    My heart asked,..When Arjun became so good Boy,…My mind started taunting me,…Something wrong Renu,..You are accusing Arjun without any solid proof,…I accept he told lie that “I din see any”,…But,You know why he told that lie,…Cox he wanna make sure that his Radhika feels relieved,..No one can understand her than him na,..He knew it will affect her badly,..That’s why,..But you became so cruel in accusing him,,…Not good,…

    In a battle btw mind and heart,..always heart wins,…Here also Renu’s heart won,..My dear loverboy you only made her win,…

    Arjun,..First,Why you stopped man,..your task was already completed,..Now Radz is busy in dressing too,…What makes you to stop man,…Oh,..I know,..How could you move without having a full vision of your girl in that situation,…If you knew already,you might have seen when the moment you entered the room,..And having little glimpses on your Radz from the barrier is not enough for you na,…She ignites all your hormones and now it starts to burn your muscles too,..I can understand,..It’s all due to Biological effect,..And you also knew,..you cant get such a chance sooner in your life,…Very brilliant man,…

    What happened Arjun,..OMG,…My heart starts beating faster yaar,..Really,you are crossing the barrier and walking towards Radz…And what are you doing man,…Taking small breath at constant intervals,…Couldn’t get,..Oh,…Now I got,..You are controlling your breathe well before seeing your lady love so that you can enjoy this moment,..hmmm,…when you saw her,..you are damn sure that you will lose your breathe completely,..So,you are gaining some breathe now,..Good move man,…

    Ok,..Let’s see,..what Radz doing now,…Oh my sweetheart,…You dunno,how to tie dori,…Sorry,I have no status to talk about that,..Because,I also need my mom or my friend (Girl friend ly yaar,..lol)to tie Dori,…It happens,..I can understand dear,…We all are sailing in the same boat,…So,I forgive you,…

    Arjun,…Seeing your ladylove struggling to tie the dori,..you are so enthusiastic in helping her,…Hmmm,..But,she din ask any help from you na,…

    Arjun to me:How dare you,…I know what to do and you have no rights to question me,…Only Radhika has that rights,…

    Me:Sorry Arjun,..I’m going out,…In over enthusiasm,…I questioned you,..Its your personal space,..Renu cant peep in,…I’m going,..you continue,…

    But,We all knew,..Renu wont go so earlier without seeing what arjun gonna do?…

    Ok,..Arjun,..You directly hold her dori threads and waiting to see the response from Radz,..What you expect man,…Radz to face you or let you to tie that dori,…You knew her well,..she wont face you cox she was semi dressed now,…So,you can easily execute your second wish,..Nothing wrong in your attitude man,…You are just helping,..Why you have to help only when she asks,..NO,..Helping is also caring,..What’s wrong in helping your Radz to tie the dori,when she was struggling..

    Now,.Let’s see,…What Radz’s reaction to you,…

    Radz:Sir,…Youuu,…

    Arjun:Yes Radhika,..ME,…take your hands away radhika,..

    Radz:Yes,..But,…Why my heart is beating faster,..Sir,..please,…go away,…your little tinge inducing some unknown pain to travel all over my body sir,…Please,…

    Arjun:I’m just helping you Radhika,..I only have that rights Radhika,…

    Arjun removing Radz hair strands from her back,…He was completely lost seeing her back,..His little touch on her back while removing the hair strands made him wanting more,…But,He was also a dutiful helper,…His concentration was only in tying the dori,…

    Whereas radz,…

    Radz:Omg,..Omg,..My heart beats racing,…Sir,…I couldn’t hold your touch anymore,..My hear beats are racing,..you can hear the sound of it na,..It can burst out anytime,..This heat,..Omg,..I need some cool air to control my breathe sir,…Please,…

    Arjun:Radhika,..Here,I lost my breath completely,…I cant breath anymore,…

    Radz:But,I’m breathing faster sir,…Even my Breathe rate can win Ussain bolt’s record sir,…

    Finally Arjun tied the dori by letting his finger impression on her back,…No one can see that except him,…It’s invisible to all the eyes,..But Radhika can feel that impression,..Now,she couldn’t do any,…she needs a support to control this heat prevailing in her body,…She clutched her skirt tightly to get some cool air,…

    Omg,..Arjun,..what you did man,..after tying,..you are waiting for Radz to turn or you want to see her reaction of your touch,…TOoo much desire man,…We knew you are yearning for that,…But,she is not a fool to give that pleasure to you so earlier man,…

    Radhika,..My sweet doll,..We can understand your situation,…You are brilliant,..You stood idle rather turning towards him cox it will worsen the situation further,..Arjun,still trying hard in controlling his nerves,.. at the same time,he was also longing to see your reaction too,…Hence be careful darling,…

    Radz:Sir,..thanks,..Now you can go na,..

    Arjun:No Radhika,..Face me,..

    Radz:Sir,..I want to wear my Dupatta,..Then only I can face you,…Now only my racing of my heart beats reduced a bit,…Please sir,..

    Arjun:Ok,…I’ll take and come your dupatta radhika,…But,you have to face me,…

    Radz:Hmmm,..Ok sir,…

    Now he left to take and come that dupatta for his radz,…Here Radz was tensed,…She dunno,..Why she was tensed,…

    Arjun,..You have dupatta in your hand now,..You can give that directly na,..You naughty,..you badly wants to see her,..So,you are giving the dupatta slowly without releasing your hold on it,…Too bad,…Whereas my Radz was too clever than you,..She wont get trapped in your net so easily,…Arjun,you are waiting for her to touch your hand,..Omg what a miss and little tinge of Radz finger on your fingers,..Not only you,..the Iron woman Radz too felt some butterflies in her stomach yaar,…

    Ok,..Now she had her dupatta,..What are you waiting Arjun,…Oh!,..again Renu’s poor memory,..you wanna see her na,..What Radz doing,..Hmmm,,,She was trying hard to stop the racing in her heart and wearing the dupatta on her asap,…

    If the dupatta din stuck on your face,then only,..Its a big wonder man,…Cox you are standing behind her straight like a statue to have her dharshan,..So,it may happen,,…

    Now her dupatta got stuck on your face,..How do you feel arjun,…Losing Breathe or Racing breathe or both,…But poor Radz felt difficult to drag the dupatta from you,.she guessed it may hit you but not the level of the intensity it creates,…

    Last but not least,..Now Radz was dressed completely,…What happened Arjun,.still waiting for her darshan,..You are wrong Arjun,..She was so clever in forgetting those intimate moments happened btw you both,..Those few seconds were necessary for her in gaining her normal temperature and she was thinking that you helped her as a friend,…Not her heart,..But her mind tells her like that to believe herself by not breaking the trust on you man,…

    She gave a nice surprise to you by facing you with smile,..Here you are facing odd situation and there she facing you with Broad smile and infact expressing her gratitude,..She is such a sweet girl,.she never forget thanking yaar,…she asked one help but you did 3 help for her,..How she cant express her gratitude man,…

    RAdz:Thankyou sir,..

    You are already in a shock and my doll gives you another shock by congratulating you for your engagement Enjoy!,..Arjun,…LOL,…(Renu,How dare you laugh at Arjun,..Here he was literally crying,..You cruel minded heartless girl,..enjoying his sufferings,…)

    Radz:All the best

    Radhika,..you are offering him Handshake,…Poor girl,…He was already electrocuted and now he brought him back to the reality,..how he can tolerate all dear,…The only way for Arjun to get rid is to distance himself from you sweetheart,…He did that only,…You are clueless for his act,..We knew the reason,..But,you are too naive my deary,…

    Arjun resting yourself on the wall outside,…Oh!!,..Now Renu got,..you are regaining your lost breathe outside,..Hmmm,…But,God planned many things to destroy your happiness Arjun,…Really felt bad for you man,…You are Reminiscing those sweet memories again to save it in your memory forever,…But, when you opened your eyes,…The rival Saral gave you darshan,…What a scene yaar,…Renu thoroughly enjoyed,..

    Bye friends,..Hope you all enjoyed this post,…Take care yaar,…

    • Shree

      Ramaaaa… What was that di?! Semma.. Get well soon..

      I loved it ??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • Thank u very much renu….for replying me….actually u n gauri are my inspiration….i would not be here if u n gauri are not here….rather than to be silent always
      N about dori scene it’s awesome….u penned it beautifully as usual…read at forum

  18. Naaga

    OMG….. Renu…..

    Idha idha thaan edhirpaarthen naa unnidam irudhu. Episodena adhu episode. Yenna oru explaination chanceilla. Thank u soooo much. Naa ketta dori scene enakku kidachiduthu.
    July 9th 2015,epi la cmt section naa paarthadhu OMG endra letters thaan niraya per andha varthaiya type pannirundhanga. Naa paarkkum podhum 1st sonna varthai OMG thaan.

    Actually naa andha scene paarkkum podhu 1st radhuvey thiteney & my arju gaga paavapaten. Chey yeppdi irudha manishana ippidi aakkitaaley. Arjun andha scenela mundincha alavukku controla thaan iruppapula, andha last bead edukkum podhu thaan parthduvan avaley, adhoda pochu avanoda control.

    Final touch – thank u & all the best sir.
    Andha time la naai kutiya kupiduvaangley chu chu oru sound andha sound thaan ennidam irundhu vandhadhu.
    Ok bye…..

  19. aastha

    its gud renu bt i cud nt enjoy it truly coz firstly wen i started reading i din understad te meaning f dori……..bt after reading through i understood….bt since i ve nt watched it i cud nt enjoy…so te 1st ting im gona do we i gt time s watch it n ten read ur tots…te im sure i cn enjoy it immensely…………….actu i ve nvr see mmz in tv……..i used to read te written updates or my bestie( te sme 1 who s fan f ur story) used to narrate it to me………..only wen te show ws abt to finish i ws able 2 see on hotstar…though i used 2 luk 4 it in u tube..no success……bt i hd seen te title sngs f ardhika n i heard te sound f my heart crashing n craving mre f it…….te 1st epi i watched it hotstar ws 2nd last epi……………

    anyway TAKE CARE…………….n cme here asap…………

  20. aastha

    hiiiiiiiii renu i sw te epi…n ten watched it..my!!!! hw wonderfully ve u writte….u certainly stole my heart………….tis time i ws able 2 ejoy te epi immensely…………i’m nt able 2 explai my hearts feelings at tis moment………good wrk renu………..always tat saral ll b tere 2 destroy a beautiful moment……..i thoughrouly despise hm………….hey renu we ll u b able 2 update…i know i shud nt ask a wounded girl 2 write an ff…..bt shud ask hr 2 take rest or she’ll b reprimanted……….bt i cud nt control my anxiety dearie………..so wen u update c u update “hatred into love” rather tha missing pieces??????????????plz?????????????

  21. Roma

    Omg renuuuuuuu dearyyyyyy plzzzzz be careful out there…tum me hum sabki jaan basti hai…so take a very good care of it for our sake…thank God that it was minor wounds…and you’re recovering…thx aunt for your scolding n making her rest….uncle you too be careful…we love u alllllll, please take care….

    Coming to the story….omg renuuuuuuu my dearrrryyyy, it’s superbbbbb n awesoooooome episode. …rads neil n sam bonding is outstanding….Sam arjun scene was quite interesting. …arjun is very surprised to know the relationship between khannas n rads…he’s so jealous n fuming of neil’s bond with rads…and ansh my cutie pie so lovely boy…his cuteeeee talks n each action so adorable…cheese scene n ardhika convo was really very heart touching. …he’s rakshas …yes for sure…nandu knows ardhika’s past? Or she just know only one part of the story which was told by arjun…mind blowing dialogues. …the slap scene…wowwww. ..rads good job…he deserved it to batrayed you n for rads current situation. …just perfect everything. …renuuuuu you’re the best my sweeeeeetheart. …love you soooooooo muchhhhhh

    the DORI scene….wowwww awesome, marvellous, outstanding, mind blowing analysis…renu my dearyyyy I’m just speechless n overwhelmed after reading this update. …wowwww what a blasting master mind you have…just loved it to the core. …ardhika’s convo n actions and the spice from renu’s lovelyyyyyy narration….just awesoooooome. ….each n every expression of arjun and rads in this intense n sensuous scene was commandable…on top of that renu’s lovelyyyyy comments made it more beautiful ….enjoyed it a lotttttttttt….keep it up my sweeeeeet friend. …take care sweetie n rest until you perfectly fine. …love you soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttttt, muaaaaahhhhhh

  22. Renu dear…i posted my ff ….new dimension.plz hav a look it…n do tell me hows it…whether I continue it or not….n giv me ur views n suggestions….waiting for ur reply
    Once again thanks

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