A Tale of Hatred into Love – Chapter 4

Hiii friends,…I got some free time,..So,Decided to update next chapter,…First,My heart felt appologies to you all for not replying to your comments,….And Thank you sooooooooo much for taking out your time to read and comment,…So,This time I updated this FF instead of Missing pieces,….I hope you all will like this chapter,….

Chapter 4:

Some unknown Pain gulped Radz throat, which made her realize that Forgiving Arjun never meant that her pain is gone and there is no use of her forgiveness,…There Arjun found the medicine for his pain but here Radz was clueless about her medicine and even Arjun increased her temper to another level,..She came to a conclusion that Arjun became a Real Rakshas and his act will definitely hurt her Ansh, ignoring her inner intuition about him,…This is the result of her inner emotional turmoil as She couldn’t answer the questions raised by her conscience,..

Radz’ conscience:Superb Radhika,.. Now, what you gonna do?,…You knew only one thing na,..Crying,..Start doing it,…,You will soon get habituated to it,..You remember his choices na,…So, you gonna let Mr.Arjun Mehra near you again,..

Radz innervoice:No,Never,…I wont let his breathe to touch me again,…I hate him,…My Arjun,whom I loved is no more,..Now he is a Rakshas,…

Radz’conscience:Oh!!!,..Ya,… You already let him to steal yourself in goa na,…Now,What you did for all his deeds?…you forgive him so easily,..When I asked, you said Its for Ansh and some useless philosophy about forgiveness that forgiving him and showing him that you moved on in your life itself a big punishment for him,..But, what happened?,… Now,he is asking your ansh itself,…What,You will let him take your Ansh from you?,…

Radz innervoice:Nooo,…My ansh is my soul,…I wont let his shadow to reach my ansh,…

Radz conscience:But,How it’s possible now?,..You knew about Arjun well na,… If you remain silent even now, He will definitely do something,..,…Once He took advantage of your silence by crushing yourself in Goa three years back and now he again gonna take advantage of your silence by crushing your son’s life and your’s,…

Radz innervoice: Listen, I will never let him near me or my ansh how hard he tries,…He may do anything he can by spreading his dark shades again in my life ,…But, I never let my light fade in me,..My light will definitely blind his eyes this time,…You gonna see that too,…

With that, Radz wiped her tears with a new spirit,…

Whereas Arjun remembered Radz true words that In hurting her,He is hurting himself,… Arjun doesn’t realize that his guilty sense has slowly turns out to be his hangman now,…He wanna cry his heart out not because of his sins or his deeds but feeling radz tear droplets on his hand,…He dunno why her tears affecting him much,..It looks like a pair of pearls on his hand,…He is the one, who wants to enjoy her destruction and also wanna kill her by the same hands, the moment he saw her with someone,..But, the one truth of his own blood Ansh turns everything upside down,…He even din like to remind himself that his Radhika and his own child Ansh is now someone else’s,…His flooded thoughts were interrupted by piyali’s call,…He pretends to be normal,…

Piyali:Arjun,…Arjun,..

Arjun:Yes Piyali,…Everything ready?,…

Piyali:Haan Arjun,..what happened to your hand?,…

Arjun:Nothing,..Little bruises on knuckles while doing workout in morning,…

Piyali:Oh!!,…Take care man,..Or else your sister will start crying for this too,…

Arjun smiled hearing this,…Right then,Ansh ran towards piyali and piyali took him in her arms affectionately,…

Ansh:nani,..nani,…

Piyali: Ansh,..you wake up so early today?,..Where is mumma and Dad?,…

Ansh ,who was about to talk was stopped seeing smiling Arjun there,…

Sam,who came after ansh and piyali noticed this,…

Piyali:Ansh,..This is Arjun uncle,..Say hi’ to him,…

Ansh:No,…Leave me down,..I din like this uncle,..He is bad,…

Sam:Ansh,..What’s this?,…Say hello to Arjun uncle,…

Arjun:Sam,..Leave it,..He is child,…No problem,…

Piyali gets him down and asked Ansh reason for disliking Arjun,…

Piyali: Ansh, Why you din like Arjun uncle?,…bolo,..

Ansh:Nani,..Mumma scolded me today cox of this uncle only?,…

Sam:Why mumma scolded you?,…

Ansh started screaming loudly,…

Ansh:Leave me nani,…I’m going to dad,..Leave me,…Mumma,…Mumma,…Leave me,…

Saying so,Ansh ran out from there,…Sam followed him excusing herself from them,…

Piyali:Sorry Arjun,…Don’t take kid’s words seriously,…He was like this from his birth,…We felt really difficult to stop his non stop crying,..Radhika too helpless,…Then,one fine day Neil started saying some jokes which made Radhika to smile,…On our gosh, Ansh also stopped crying,…After that whenever he cries,We all will make Radhika to laugh,…Infact, sam will pinch him voluntarily to make Radhika smile,…Morning you were bit stubborn na,..So,He might mistaken that you are scolding his mom only,…

Hearing this, Arjun smiled with some hidden tears in his eyes and began,

Arjun:Oh!,..So,..Nice of him,…But,Piyali Why Ansh is calling you nani?,…How Neil and Radhika related to you?,..I mean,…

Piyali:Arjun,..I said na It’s a big story,…Leave it man,…

Arjun:Sorry,..If you don’t wanna share it with me,I wont ask about this further,…

Piyali:No,..Nothing like that Arjun,..We generally don’t share about Radhika’s Personal in public after last year Sahitya award problem,..But, you Also like sam for me na,… So,come inside,…

Saying so,piyali entered her cabin,…Arjun followed her inquisitively,…

Arjun:Piyali,..What happened last year?,..I dunno any,..Infact you knew na,me and Nandhu were in London that time,…

Piyali:Yes Arjun,…I know,…What you see here is not real,…I’m not Ansh’s real grand ma,Sam Is not Ansh’s Real aunt,..Neil is not Ansh’s Real father,…Only thing which is real is Radhika is Ansh’s mom,…But we all are connected through Radhika,…Last year Radhika got best copywriter award,…In award ceremony, Some reporters asked few unnecessary questions to her,..So,Neil confronted them and end up in a physical fight,…Even Neil was arrested for this,…Samrat only get him out using his political influence,…

Hearing this,Arjun’s guilty conscience started killing him,.. Each words of piyali hits Arjun strong and he understood that Neil was more important to Radz than him,which disturbs him much,…And also it raised an unknown fear in his mind that Radz might love neil,… But, he was clever in hiding it,…

Arjun:But,Why,…I mean,Why you are helping Neil and Radhika?,…

Piyali:Wooh,…Because,We wanna make an alliance for sam with neil three years back Arjun,…And Radhika is Neil’s Best friend,..We knew,He will do anything for his chasni,..Infact,sam started loving him seeing this affection of Neil for his chasni,…

Arjun:But,You din inform us about these right,…And what about Radhika’s dad Mr.Dilip Mishra?

Piyali:How do you know about him?

Arjun:Woooh!,…I ,…I saw her full name as Radhika Mishra in a book,..And came to know that Mr.Dilip mishra is her Dad,…

Piyali:Oh!!,.. And Leave all these Arjun,…Listen,I already talked with nandhini,..So,You both coming for dinner tonight,…Ok,…No excuse this time,…

Arjun:Sure,…

Right then, Sam entered the cabin and began,

Sam:Mom,…Mom,…What you people were so busy in chatting leaving me?,…Arjun,Too bad yaar,…I’m here and you are chatting with mom alone,…

Arjun smiled lightly and began,

Arjun:No sam,…Nothing important,..We are talking about dinner tonight,…

Sam:What dinner mom?,…

Piyali:Yes,I forgot to inform you,…Tonight Arjun and Nandhini were coming to our home for dinner,…

Sam:Wow!,…Superb mom,…I’m eagerly waiting for Nandhini Di,… Arjun…I had some surprise too yaar,…

Right then,Neil and Radhika entered the cabin with Neil holding Radz shoulder with his one hand and Ansh in his another Arms,..Radz gave Arjun, a sweet killer smirk , which literally made him to frown,…As it looks like Neil took all his possessions,…

Neil:What yaar?,..Everyone were busy in gossiping?,…Arjun,You din sign the contract papers still?,..

Arjun:Ya,..I was about to sign,…But,What I personally felt is Who gonna direct this Ad must see my Resort before I sign,…Because,I think the writer might get better ideas than this one,If they supposed to see the location for real…It will also be a great Add on to your original ideas too,…What Piyali,Am I right?

Piyali:Ya,…No problem Arjun,…You may sign the contract now,…Radhika will fulfill your expectation,..She is a much talented girl,…And Radhika,..Ansh is also asking for an outdoor na,..Why cant you ppl stay in Arjun’s mansion till completing this Ad,…you too will feel afresh na,…

Radhika was taken back hearing this,…Now,Arjun returned her Killer smirk back to her,…

Ansh:Wow,..Mumma,.. we all going out?,…

Sam:No,Ansh only mom and you are going,…

Ansh:Then Dad?,…

Radhika:No Ansh,..We are not going anywhere,…Sorry Aunty,…I’m not interested in working on this project any more,…

Saying so,Radz ran out from there ignoring sam and piyali’s call,…

Piyali:Radhika,…radhika

Neil signaled piyali and followed Radz,…

Sam:Arjun,.Dont take it wrong yaar,…In this 3 years,She never left us for a single day too,…Tonight, Nandhini di gonna come to our home na,..If Radhika talks with Di,She will definitely agree to come with you and also Neil went na,..He will made her agree,..you don’t take tension,…

Ansh:I’m standing here,…No one cares about me,…

Sam:woooh,…My poor ansh..come lets play outside and will fire mom and dad with our finger gun,…Ok,…

Saying so, sam took ansh out of the cabin,…

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In Restroom,…

Radz: Neil,..You gonna ask me why I said no to piyali Aunt na?

Neil smiled hearing this and holds radz chin,…

Neil:No Chasni,…face me yaar,…I knew,.. Sure,there will be some valid reason for your rejection,…So, I never gonna ask what it is?,…And why you are upset?,…whose presence affecting you?,…Because,I don’t want to see you hurt at any point of time because of my questions too yaar,…But Remember, I will be there always beside you,…when you wanna share with me, you can,…If you don’t like to work on this project,..I will never force you yaar,…

Radz:Thanks Neil,…and There are no secrets in this world that time doesn’t reveal itself Neil,…

Neil:I knew chasni,…And Those words which reveals the painful truth are almost like nature yaar,…It will reveal half and remaining half will conceal the soul within,…I don’t need any explanation from you yaar,…I just wanna see your smile chasni,…

Hearing this, radz nodded yes smilingly and also had tears in her eyes seeing the real affection of her Neil ,.. Neil was about to hug his friend to give her the needed strength was stopped by Arjun’s words,…

Arjun:Sorry,…I think,..I should come after few minutes,…

Neil:No need arjun,…Next time,we will lock the door,…Am I right, chasni?,…Come soon yaar,…

Saying so,Neil winked at chasni and excused himself from the rest room,…Radz pretends to be cool and acts like she was busy in washing her hands,…

Arjun:Hmmm,…Seems You are so busy with your neil,…You remember my choices right,…Listen, Now You have little time Radhika,…I want your answer tonight,…

Arjun came near Radz,who pretends to be busy in washing her hands still,…Arjun muttered something slowly near her ear,…

Arjun:I forgot to say another important thing Radhika,…If you are silent like this,…Then, By default I’ll select second option for you,…So,Now Everything is in your hands,…I think you will select wisely,…Goodluck Radhika,…Haan,..And Dont forget to close the tap darling,…

Saying so,Arjun left the restroom leaving baffled Radhika,…

P.S.:Friends,I dinn satisfied with this chapter,….Something hitched my mind,…I dunno what it is,..Still,I updated what I wrote,….Excuse me for all the errors in this chapter,….

Credit to: Renu

47 comments

  1. zayn

    it was really nice dear ….. arjun will choose 2nd option …
    Neil is such a caring n loving frnd
    One more thing 2 yrs kids cant talk properly only broken words 😛 😀
    Thanks for todays update ….
    Waiting for next , till den taje care renu

    • renu

      Thank you so much deary,….

      I just rounded Ansh’s age as 2 years yaar,…His original age may be 2 years 3 or 4 or 5 months,…And a sharp child will start speeking from 10 months,I think so,….

      If I was wrong,…Please take it as writer’s liberty yaar,..

  2. aastha

    I dnt know y bt I feel smeting s missing………

    I dnt understand u Arjun……n in te last epi I lkd u…n nw I ve to change my opinion……evn after understanding rads condition y r u sooo keen on hurting HR??????u very well know hw mch rads lve Ansh……n evn ten u r stiking on to ur stinking plans…..evn u were hurt seeinng rads hurt na…..im all confused…..ill read it once again n ten comment coz otherwise it ll nt mje any sense……i hate u Arjun mehra…..

    • aastha

      im commenting my doubts: im confused with piyali ….ws it only bcoz sam hd a crush niel she ws takg care f rads as she s niels bestie………..she already know hw rads s ….so hw cn she sugest gng 2 arjuns mansion 4 a change f scence????????????????

      rads do speak up…dnt let tat arjun gt te better f u.dnt let hm take away ur ansh……….

      arjun u already know hw mch broke she s ….i know u want evrytig 2 b normal n tat u want 2 spend ur life with hr n ur son..bt first cant u regret ur deeds n seek hr forgiveness n ten invite hr into ur life forever????????????

      • manha

        aasthu aasthu plzzz control yaar. yaa i know he is acting crazy n all idiot types. But when he will know that he cannot live without her. He will fall on knees n beg for forgiveness. N that will happen.

    • renu

      Aastha,…No dear,…Arjun dinn regret for his deeds,…He was trying to justify himself that what he did to Radz was not wrong for his sister,..His stupid revenge,..

      One side,He was loving her and couldnt see her hurt but also want to destroy her,..This is his Present state of mind,..But after knowing Ansh’s truth,His heart wants both ansh and Radz for himself,…He tries to be calm but seeing Radz with Neil made him go crazy and that encourages him to hurt Radz,…He knew that Radz will never give ansh to him,..But,It’s human Psyche,…He triggers her with his options,…He still believes that Radz loving him cox she dinn reveal about him to anyone including Neil,…This intuition gives him some hope,…And he knew that coming closer to a married woman is wrong and radz wont allow him if she was married,…but He dont have another option as he pleases himself that it was all for his revenge,…This gives him little satisfaction,….At the same time,In this update after talking with Piyali his guilty conscience hurts him a lot and also he was afraid whether his intuition of Radz loving him still will go wrong cox what he saw in conference hall that Radz still cant see him hurt while tying Band-aid on his hand,….It gives him a big hope that Radz loved him still,..(Try to read last chappy again)I think,..I was successful in conveying this message there,..If not,…Sorry dear,..Will try to write clearly next time,…..

      Reg Radz state of mind,…Read my reply for Rg’s comment,…

      Then,coming to piyali,…She dunno any about Radz inner turmoil or Arjun’s connection with that,…Arjun and Nandhu were their family friends,…That’s why she shared about Radz with Arjun,..And Arjun asked it officially as Sam and piyali treat him as their special client and so,she dinn gave a second thought about Radz staying in Arjun’s mansion till completing the Ad as she thought it will also be a refreshing one for Radz but Her point in supporting Arjun is she wants arjun to be satisfied with the project,..May be its cox of her bussiness minded thinking,…Nothing else,…Reg Sam’s affection for Radz it was not cox of Neil,..She too love Radz as her friend and it was piyali’s Pov not author’s Pov about sam loving neil and she too dinn go deeper into it,…

      I will reveal the past slowly in each episode so that it will had some spice into the story,…Now started with Radz past in this update,…As ramya said,…It was revealed with an intention not only for readers but mainly for Arjun,…If he knew everything HE will hate himself more than Radz hating him,…

      I hope your doubt gets clarified,…If not ask me any time,…I’ll try to answer except revealing the future plot,…

      • aastha

        Hey renu n manhu tanks for ur replies……..i ve a doubt in ur prev epi f missing parts: wich s tat orange dupatta f rads tat Arjun burned???????

        Hey renu u ve a silent fan too….its my bestie…..yes re sme 1 who introduced manmarziyan to me……day before yesterday…she tld me rat she read all te episodes f hatred to love ❤………i ws shocked n pleased wen she said tat coz she never reads any stories……bt she s a fan f all te ff’s……i used to narrate all te stories n she s quite interested as me……..actu u ve a done a job wich evn farhas dt failed to do……..(its 1 f hr n mine fav……apart frm urs too….)……………..

  3. Lakshmi

    Radz struggle with her conscience and inner voice is really amazing dear. Loved Neil’s supportive words to radz,he is always there for her in every situation to support n protect her so definitely he has more importance than arjun in her life. What happened to Neil n Sam , y they r not married till now. Will be waiting for next update. Love u…tc…

  4. mittu

    don’t make arjun that much cruel yaar…… radhu already suffered a lot….. plss don’t take her ansh……… i feel very bad for her….
    oh…… neil such a loving frnd…… so caring….. if he also not take care of her, then she will die in pain……….. love u neil………
    ansh is like his father……!! arjun want punish them who cried his di, and ansh hate the person who cried his mumma……. that is nice……. in previous episode arjun said to radhu “ur child na…. he is like u….” now, what will be his opinion……? am sure he will accept that ansh went on him……..!!!!! superb……….
    wow renu……. u steal my heart…….plss update soon….. eagerly waiting for next one………
    love u……..TC……….

    • renu

      No dear,..Arjun wont be cruel,…Just after few chapters,..You will understand my statement,…Till then keep reading sweetheart,…

  5. Shree

    Renu!! I loved it di!! Sorry I can’t comment properly… I’m too busy.. Have less time.. But I loved the update di!! Sorry si ennala mudilla.. Next time I’ll pakka.. Update missing pieces too.. Please.. Soon

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  6. Rg

    Hi renu sorry I didn’t comment for ur previous chapter too. So here am commenting for both. Last chapter I loved radhikas story for her ansh. And I arjun listening to it touched emotionally. Arjun now wants radhika back along with ansh but radhika is going to give him a tough time. Arjuns possessiveness is increasing day by day. Despite radhikas mistrust and bitterness and still cares for him when he is hurt. Wat she has for him is hate filled love… Seasoned with mistrust, anger, bitterness, passion,and a molecule of sweetness being ash (a piece and symbol of their love) the missing link.. Ansh completes radhika and arjun.

    Now coming to this chapter .. The mystery surrounding radhika is slowly unfolding. Each chapter not only d readers but also arjun is coming to know abt radhika. Thou radhika vehemently denies she still has feelings for arjun. And arjun still loves her in his own twisted way. He courts her in typical arjun fashion… His high handedness grates on radhikas nerves. And mine too. He is suppose to grovel… . Radhikas and arjuns witty come backs r actress to read. Who finally wins it makes it bitter sweet. Ansh and radhikas mother son bond is truly brilliantly orchestrated. When piyali says when radhika is smiles ansh laugh s… Tats real sweet… and arjun is happy… Arjun is scared tat radhika might love Neil.. tats a grt track. Let’s c whether Wat nandini and radhika s meeting is going to bring. By d way for me d show stealer was. Neil’s reply to arjuns taunt tat next time we will lock d door… That was superb… You deserve an applause for tat. I guess by now Neil has figured it out. Hopefully nxt chapter we will abt radhikas dad.

    Hey rent both d episodes were Gus. By d way can u give a mega one for this.. I know u must have time constraint with missing pieces too. But plz give it a thought. Glad u updated this first … Waiting for ur updates. Tc

    • renu

      Ramya,…Ramya,…

      Wow,..I’m in cloud nine after reading your comment,..You got, what I wanna convey in this chapter indirectly,…Dont be sorry and all yaar,….Renu will feel hurt,….First,I wanna confess the real truth yaar,…I dinn satisfied with this chapter cox I was not in a mood to write but started with a belief that our ardhika will help me,..And I already imagined the full script for this story even the End of this SS,…So,I can write easily as half of my work was done already,…I’m glad you like both the chapters,……

      I too dinn replied to last chapter’s comments cox of time constraints,…So,decided to update this FF first as missing pieces will take some more time for me cox I dinn started it yet,….Next update will be Missing pieces,….But,Asusual I consider your suggestion to give a mega epi,…But,cant promise sweetheart,….You knew na,…It will be a little tough task for me to give megha epi,…Instead I’ll try to give quicker updates dear,….

      Next coming to story,…Seems You analysed well yaar,…I slowly started unfolding the mysterious pasts of Radz and Arjun and also real torturing of Arjun,…I dont wanna give entire past as flashback in a single or two chappy,…Instead I wanna add it as a pinch of salt in each updates,…It might looks like arjun was cruel and rude,…But,It was his way of expressing his suppression due to the valcano inside his heart hearing each new thing about Radz after he left her in goa,..

      When all the past revealed,Arjun will be completely shattered,…He cant turns out to be a good man in a single day because of one truth that ansh is his son,….And Ansh has good values like Radz but habits like Arjun,…So,He is the strong thread connecting both of them,…Now,he was trying hard to remind himself his revenge for Radz,…Let’s see what he gonna do next,…Whether he will succeed or lose this time,…

      Coming to Radz,…First,She was in full pain,…Then,She was confused with love and hate,….Like Arjun,..Now she was trying hard to remind herself that she hates him,…She dinn realize that she love him still in the name of hate and there Arjun too dinn realize that he loves her then and even now too in the name of Revenge,…Both were sailing in the same boat,…

      I loved your explanation of Radz feeling for Arjun,..I want to say the same,….She was ready to let him hurt her but she cant let him suffer before her eyes,…Such a sweet person she is,….Now,the real battle between these two starts here,….Radz will never trust arjun in the name of hate and Arjun will be hellbound in love in the name of revenge,….How Ansh gonna play between them in their Hatred Love story, which is remaining part of the story,…

      Neil will definitely be a gem in this story too,…In original MMz,He asked why she did these all as he trusts her,…Here he will never ask his chasni about any but will play a major role in ardhika’s life,..Even he comes for few scenes in the story,He will definitely stole the full update,…One deep Love-Hatred story with parallel Friendship(Sorry not parallel,…But,an important friendship in the same story) will be quite interesting to read na,…I really wanna thank Angel for starting this plot,…I doubt whether i could make Radz give herself to Arjun before marriage cox we analysed her much na,..Its not her character to let a man take advantage over her,..She respect tradition and values at times,..But,I tried to do justice to her character in this story with Ansh,….

      And Nandhini is an important character in this story next to Ansh,…Let’s see what will happen next,….I’m stopping here orelse I’ll end up revealing everything,..

      Thank you so much ramya,….

    • manha

      wow ramya every word u wrote was tooo gud yaar. Abt Arjun’s possesiveness n radz love towards him with all the adjectives. true, very true. His high handedness grates on nerves. yaa thats absolutely true. mine tooo. lol. Arjun fashion. wow so much analysis going on arjun here. I loved ur comment yaar.

      • renu

        Same pinch manha,…

        I couldnt stop myself after reading ramya’s comment,..I enjoyed reading her comment especially about Arjun and Radz dilemma,…A big Applause to you dear,..

        Again Thank you so much sweetheart,…

  7. tabu

    I love ypur update 🙂 🙂 🙂 😀 ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

  8. hey renu i always liked what u right…cos u have tremendous power to understand ppl.

    todays epi us really nice…rads mind n innervoice convo is brilliant… like u i too felt something is missing in todays episode… don’t knw..i think whn rads goes to arjun’s house thn we get to see something good happening from arjun side to get rads belief n love again…waiting for missing pieces update….pls write often na dear…everyday i check tu to see ur update…love u dear!!!

    • renu

      AActually I’m not in a mood to write dear,..But,Went with the flow,…I wanna update later but still updated it as its needed for continuation and so,I made up my mind to update whatever I wrote,…

      still,I dinn started Missing pieces,..(another reason for not updating Missing pieces),….

      I hope I will write after a couple of days,..So,thaat I’ll be out of my personal mess dear,…I was also hurt personally and Radz was also hurt here,…Too bad,….

      Just kidding,..Will try to update asap,…

  9. manha

    it was gud. Radz dilemma n her thoughts were clearly written. N after so long convo it ended that arjun is rakshas now. lol. Arjun n his mind never rests when comes to radz. always thinking one think or other abt her. But always end up on her. Now he is feeling bad for her tears. idiot where were when she was crying. ahhh radz don’t forgive him so easily yaar. N what does he thinks of himself. Tell decision by tonight. I mean what??!!!! Looks like he definitely some medical treatment now. N i’m sure that some of his screws r definitely loose. What does he want actually?? He himself don’t know abt that. N irritating our poor radz with his actions. Neil is a true friend n cutiepie. He understands her situation so well n he is making jealous. wow. it was too gud. Ansh our super boy. Waiting for the next one. lovee u.

    • renu

      You are right Manha deary,…Arjun himself dunno what he wants,..Ansh or his revenge or Radz,..,,Poor guy,..Now gonna suffer a lot,….

      Love you too

  10. renu

    Hiiiiiiiiiiiii swara,sasha.Zayn,shreya,Anwesha,aastha,Hayathi,Lakshmi, Subhadha, Mittu,Advaita,Shaheen,shree,subha,Rg,ayera,tabu,susi,manha,….

    My personal heart felt gratitude to all of you,… Thank you so much friends,…I’m glad you all liked this update,..I hope I’ll do some justice to it,….

    My sweet don Ameena,Roma,Nisha(waiting for your comments)…

  11. renu

    A personal Thanks to all the friends,who read this story including silent reader,…And sorry for replying to your’s but I read all your comments then and there,….

    Thank you so much friends,..

  12. naomi

    Renu.. this update was too good. Actually padikkum podhu sirchitey irrudhen rendu perum(ardhika) mari mari veruppethra scene nallairundadhu.
    One yearukku munna vandha fb indhaalavukku irukkunna appo 3 years munna vanndha fb eppidi irukkum. Apparam lasta tap close pannitu po sonnadhu innum kojam comedya irrudhadhu appa enn mindvoice enna sollichinna ‘enna oru yegathaalam ivannukku’. Innum dinner la enna ennalan pannapporano therialla romba aavala irukken.
    Renu, missing pieces enna aachu naa eagara wait pannindu irukken

    • renu

      Thank you so much naomi,…I always love your tamil comments yaar,…Reading Arjun’s state of mind in tamil brought a big smile on my face,…Thank god my mom is not here to catch me,…LOL,…

      Just now started Missing pieces,….Couldlnt get time to write,..That’s the problem,…I think I’ll update by tonight or tomorrow dear,….

  13. I sure when Arjun fines out Neil and Radhika are not married. He’ll want to propose marriage to keep Radhika and Ansh for himself.

  14. Roma

    Awesome, lovely, marvellous episode, wowwww arjun n his words killer episode…neil is very supportive n bold in this story. …rads dilemma n the fight between her n her mind about arjun’s options was very heart touching scene. ..loved the way she is determined to not to bow down in front of him and her courage to stand still is very outstanding. …piyali’s feelings for rads n ansh’s bonding with all the people is amazing. ..the way you’re narrating it all happen in front of my eyes…I watch it literally…raniel convo in restroom was brilliant, neil’s motivating words n his pure emotions for his best friend were commendable….arjun’s words in last paragraph were showing how desperate is he…for rads n his son ansh…his ego is not letting him accept his state of mind…very interesting story….loving this very much. …

    renuuuuuuu my dearrrryyy you nailed it again honeyyy. …I know it’s high time but the way this story is proceeding slowly unfolding the truth of rads past n breaking arjun’s wall of ego n revange…keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug. muaaaaahhhhhh

    • renu

      Roma,..My sweetheart,…thank you so much deary,..

      Actually Ra-Neil bond was an adorable one,…It was pure affection for a friend,…Neil’s each word to Radz will be a strong weapon for her to fight with Arjun in this Battle,..Now,Radz was in full angry mood,…Poor Arjun gonna suffer now for his deeds,…

      I hope you will enjoy the next chappy more,….Love you too deary

  15. Sam

    Hi Renu . I am silent reader. I love ❤ your ff.. Plz plz plz update soon…. you always make us wait for long and I hate it….I love your ff and you…but plz update soon…don’t make us wait for long….and plz don’t test our patience…plz update…..love ❤ you alot……

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