Swsan-OS

It’s a season of summer… She is crying hard but no one notice her tears its not because of she is alone… because its raining… Raining heavily… Summer rain is not usual one… may be nature also wants to take part in her poignant… Summer rainy day… the day of enjoyment… everyone loves… why not she…? But today is different…. hot winds are turned to cool breeze… it’s give pleasant to everyone but for her its burning… burning her more and more…. All her happiest things were happen only on these days but today…?
She: today again I become all alone… why always me… why I didn’t get any bliss in these world… My Grand pa male dominance, my dad hates me bcoz I’m girl… my bro treats me badly bcoz I’m his step sister… my step mom no she is also my mom… she is a only person who loves me… she filled my mom place… but she also can’t do anything unless watching my tears with her welled up eyes bcoz she is also a women… I lost my hope in men’s… bcoz of you only I believed men’s… I believed all men’s are not same but again… you only gave me love, hope, happiness everything… but today you itself taken back all those from me by saying it’s all end… you used the name love for your revenge for the insult, which I did to your friend… you said, you want to break my ego… you want to teach a lesson to my attitude… so only you did this… don’t you heard before, “My character is who am I..? And My attitude is who you are..?” Yeah I slapped him… it’s not bcoz of my ego… its bcoz of his behaviour… but you, you insulted me insulted my love in front of everyone… don’t know why, even though my heart is asking you to sooth me… why my heads needs your shoulder…why I need your embrace…. I know its all bcoz love… love which made me crazy on you… please come back… come back to me and say it was one of your usual stupid prank… that’s enough to me… please…
Still I remember that day just like it happened yesterday… the day you proposed me… it’s also a same summer rainy day… FB* After their study holiday… she returned from her home to hostel… They both are friends at that time… He: Hey… hi… how is your study holiday madam…? Without me you enjoyed eh… She smiles faintly… He: what happened… is everything ok..? She: Do you know Cinderella story… One day evening she became beautiful prince and midnight she will change to her original attire… maid of her step mom… just like that my life… In hostel only I’m princess … In my home maid… Unlike Cinderella I have all my college days… just one different … she had a prince kit to save her to love her… but I… I don’t have anyone in my life… she smiles and leaves… He looks on…
@Night,
Hostel room,
She notices a pair of turquoise crystal shoes and wonders… that’s look really beautiful… she looks here and there… and find a note written “for you My Shona”… (girl is none other than swara) she wore it… it perfectly fit into her foots… she heard some melodious music and runs towards the music… A boy is standing there… he turns… Swa: Sanky… (he is none other than sanskar)he smiles… That place is fully decorated like fairy tale styles… she found herself standing in centre of red flowers carpet… she is totally surprised… Sans: you know shonu, prince kit found his princess ella (Cinderella) with the help of her scattered shoe… but I… I used this shoe to inform my Cinderella always I’m there for her in any situation… she looks at her shoe…

He bent down on knees… Sans: Swara will you be my Cinderella…? You are the one whom I was searched, No… for one whom I born… When I saw you for the first time you become princess… princess of my heart… will you accept me as your prince kit… Swara eyes welled-up with tears… from her childhood she is starving for single drop love care… now that love is knocking her door…its now ready to shower her with only love… maybe he is her prince kit…. she holds his hand: I will… he wear her ring… San: From now…I’m only yours… I will never apart from you… I Love You… Soon to be Mrs.Swara Sanskar Maheshwari… Swara hugs him: Love you too Mr.Sanskar Maheshwari… in all of sudden its start to rain… Swara enjoys rain… Sanskar admires her… Sans: see na nature also blessing us… Swara smiles….
*FB Ends…
that day rain blessed me but today its laughing at me…which is true sanskar… your love or your betrayal… I need an answer… If you really didn’t love me… then I must let you go…let you go away from me for your happiness… otherwise I wont…I never allow you to leave me… I will get back my answer at any cost… I don’t care if it is cost myself…she wipes her tears…
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Sanskar Pov: he is looking at rain… Today I hurted you… hurt my precious treasure of my life… I hurt myself by hurting you…. but I don’t have any other option… I don’t want you to distract from your dreams…I thought to cherish your life but if I’m with you then your life will become burden… I left you bcoz I love you shona… you are always my Cinderella… I knew you are in pain now… I want to take you in my embrace to sooth you… but I can’t… bcoz I want you to hate me… hate me till the eternity… I know its difficult to you, to hate me that’s why I insulted you infront of our college… I’m sorry shona… tears started to flow down from his eyes…
I want to place my head on your lap and get wet my forehead with your soft pinky lips… I love whenever you caresses my hair with your tiny fingers… I want to hold your hand, entwine my fingers with yours and need a long walk… I want to hear from you “love you sanky…” I want my love of my life again with you… our happiest moment… but it cant happen now… I still remember all those beautiful moments, the moment which I met you… it’s the same summer rainy day… FB starts* it was month of may…my 3rd year… 6th sem… DSP exam…Digital Signal Processing but everyone lovingly calls that subject Degree Stopping Paper… one of the toughest paper … I didn’t prepare anything, full of tension… I’m urging to my exam hall… my eye notices an angel… no god of angel is standing in front me… she was is white churidhar… two wings and stick only missing from her hand… her two beautiful browny eyes…a curve of smile in her lips… which all made to forget about my exam… its start to rain… hot winds are turning into cool breeze… those cool breeze touches me with her fragrance… I just became crazy…. I forget to breath for a second…I went to my own dream land… I came to my sense by the word “Excuse me… “ its none other than my angel shona… what an angelic melodious voice she have… San: yeah… swara: do you know where is chairperson room…I smiled at her… she looks me weirdly… I pointed her chairperson room… we both were standing infront of chairperson room only… she closes her one eye and bits her lower lips and hits her head with left hand… those expressions are overloaded her cuteness… oh god… where you hidden her in all these day… again I came to my sense by the same voice Excuse me… swara: I think you are going for your exam… all the best…. she point her thump finger up… I look on… she smiles and points my hall ticket… we exchange one glance… she leaves… sans: oh shit I forget my exam…again I run to my exam hall…
My results came… I got A grade in that subject… its really hard to get E grade to me but I got A… no one believed it even my professor… he reexamined my exam paper… lol… why not I will get good marks… I knew I will got good marks bcoz my angel wished me… actually she comes to my college for her first year admission…always the word excuse me is echoed in my ears… her eyes, smile… it always bring smile on my face… now I’m in my final year… college started for 1st year also… we are seniors… ragging is normal one… my eyes are searching for her… finally it locked with hers… my friend called her… he ragged her… no he misbehave with her… she gives one hard slap… I place my hand in my cheeks…ah… my angel Jhansi ki rani… I asked her sorry for my frnd behaviour… days started to pass… we slowly became friends… my UG comes to end… I don’t want to miss her… I took PG in same college… I did my bachelors in telecommunication but took business administration as masters… how stupid I’m… both are not related… but I did this stupidity only for her… Finally I proposed her after one of my study holidays… I became her prince Kit… and she is my Cinderella… my life goes happily… I thought I’m the luckiest person in this world… but my fate is not so lucky… I came to know about that news, which destroys all my happiness… which broken me totally… once she said she never watch tragedy movie… she always love happy endings… if she was with me then her life will become tragedy… it will never have any happiness… so I lied her I never loved my shona… but its not true… I insulted her and apart her away from me forcefully…. now I’m crying silently…his thought his distract by phone call… sanky attends the call… he gets shocked and runs…
sanskar reaches the hospital… there he saw, he never imagined this in his worst nightmare… he want that to be is dream… he closed his eyes… but no use… it’s not a dream… his love is lying there lifeless… his shona is no more now… Doc comes: I’m sorry mr.Maheswari… she is no more… she did suicide… we tried our best… he shattered… he start to cry miserably… he hugs her… sanskar: swara please come back… why you did this… for that insult… I never meant those words… I love you swara… please come back… all are my lies… I lied you because I don’t want to destroy your life… how can I say I’m suffering from brain diseases… I’m getting color blindness… how can I say I’m dying… my life span is few months only… I know you won’t leave me… I want you to be happy… I want you to move on… so only I said I never loved you… but the truth is I love you… love you more than anything… you are my Cinderella… how can you leave me… please give me some punishment… but this…. Doc: mr.maheswari, she had these note in her hand… he gives some letter to him… sanskar was more shocked to see those paper… its his medical report… he saw swara standing in front him… one tight slap he got from her… sans: swara are you alright… he touches her and cups her face…nothing happen to you na… he hugs her tight… I never allow any bad things to you… swara pushes him back… sanskar looks his report again… sans: shone this is fake… swara angrily cuts him: what do you think Mr.Maheswari I believe all your lies… no… I love your lies, it doesn’t mean I believe it… do you think your one insult part away me from you… no you are wrong… your love overpowered all those insult sanky… I love you… what will you do suppose it happens with me… you will leave me… he shuts her mouth: swara… she take off his hand… I always wanted someone to understand me, care for me, love me… who would accept who I’m… I found that person in you… you are my life sanskar… My prince kit… you filled my dark life with color… lonely heart as love… you are my first love and my last hope… how can I leave you… I know nothing will happen to you… we will live this life together… she hugs him… you are my summer rainy day…
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Bcoz of swara insistence sanskar goes for second opinion… Doc says if he did operation… there is 10% survial for his life… swara holds his hand happily…
Sanskar Pov: when doc says 10% its seems nothing to me… bcoz I heard this from, so many doctors… but for her its ttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn percent… She holds my hand with full of hope… I dont want made it false… her face glows… thats enough to me… Her hope giving me more and more confident… frankly speaking I don’t want to die… I want to live my life with her… with her smile… my day start with her and end with her… so I agreed… I know its waste of time… even though I agreed for her sake…
They ready for operation… Doctor ask sign in some papers… she signs some paper for his operation… Sanskar looks at her… encircled her in his embrace… she smiles at him… he too smiles… she place her lips on him… they share a passionate kiss… Swara: your Cinderella is gonna to wait for you… she takes the shoes which he gifted to her… place one shoe near his bed… and took another with her… after your operation bring this shoe to your Cinderella… prince kit… I know you will do every wish of mine… this is also one of my wishes… she kisses his forehead and leaves from there by controlling her tears…
Sans Pov: We have to sign together for register my marriage … but today she is signed alone these paper… I knew what is written in that paper ” if anything happens to me hospital is not responsible..” how hard this to my shona… her hands are shivered when she signed those paper… I clearly seen it… my shona controlled her emotions… she is more afraid than me… she smiles only for my sake… bcoz I hate tears in her eyes… I too smile at her bcoz I dont want to made her weak… I registered her smile in my heart… my kiss, hug… maybe it was last one… that’s enough to me… she wished me to bring her shoe… I don’t know I will made true this wish… but I want to do…
Swara Pov: today is his operation… Doc asked sign for some papers, after reading that all my worlds’ bcm darken to me… “In case anything happen to patient after operation the hospital will not be responsible…” what they meant by patient… he is my life… I signed those papers with shivering hand… I’m really afraid… I don’t want made him weak… so I smiled… he smiles at me… his embrace gives me more confident… I asked him to bring my shoe after his operation and leaves from there… bcoz I knew he made all my wishes true… why not this..? I know nothing happen to him…. bcoz still my heart is beating… its not stop yet… he will surely comes with that shoe for his Cinderella…
Rain starts to drizzle… Both remembers their happiest moment spent together… meeting… her word excuse me… first kiss… first hug… love confession… every good things happen between them…
Screen freezes with Sanskar in operation theatre… Swara waiting for him in the same place where he proposed… and that shoes…
All her happiest moment are happened in summer rainy day… today also Raining… What you guys think… Did this rainy day is happiest day for her life …? Did she get her love back…? Did her Prince kit return to her with shoe..? Did her waiting is worth..? Or fate decided something else…?
Story always end when it get happy endings… it doesn’t mean every story needs happy ending… She loves happy ending… me too love happy ending… what about yours..? Choice is yours…
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Hey guys its my first OS… I just tried… I think its too long… I’m so sorrrryyyyyyyyyyyy If it is bored…

Credit to: Nice..

54 comments

  1. Anu

    Aww! I always adore Cinderella’s story. I’m such a kiddo. And this OS is just superb. Doesn’t look like its ur first one. And trust me this is like one of the best OS I had ever read. Eternal love:)
    Keep writing dear, love ya and you are really…nice:P

    • Nive...

      ha ha ha… 😀 😀 if you’re kiddo then what about me… I too love cinderella yaar… by the by Its not my first ff but first OS… I already finished 2 ff dear…
      Thank you so much for comment dear… 🙂 🙂

  2. G.S

    Wowwww amazing..it was really tooo gooddd keep writing…then i to hate Dsp…i wish the samething will happen to me…
    ??

    • Nive...

      Thanks G.S… 🙂 🙂 you know I love DSP… I dnt knw why everyone get problem with that subject… whenever I solve problems in DSP my frnds will treat me like alien… ha ha ha…. well I pray god to make your wish true 😉 😛 😛 lol… 😀 😀

    • Nive...

      Hi hadi… I’m also happy to see you dr… Thank you so much yaar… 🙂 🙂 and this one is ended yaar… Surely will try to write ff yaar or atleast try to give one OS like “way you are” 😀 😀

    • Nive...

      yeah.. 2 ff yaar… another one is for my love… I finished that long back dear…
      another ff will try to write after this summer vaccation dr… 🙂 🙂

  3. IREENA

    it was awesome dear n i will definitely imagine a happy ending. after a long time u wrote something love to read it.

  4. RUPA

    Such a beautiful OS. I just can’t believe it’s ur first OS.
    Even i love Cindrella but more than Cindrella i love u and ur OS.
    Yes all the stories might not have happy endings but i just want happy ending for ur OS because i can’t see swasan in pain.

    • Nive...

      aww… Thank you so much dear.. 🙂 🙂 love you too ?? yeah its difficult to see swasan in pain… so i also imagined happy endings…!!

  5. Anjali

    NIVE!!!!

    You are back!!! <3 <3
    And that too with such an amazing OS… Missing you like hell!!! 🙁 🙁

    Please come back soon!!!

  6. Anjali

    OK guysss… I have finished answering everyone’s comments at last!!!

    Woww….

    Am too tired now to do anything else…

    I will start writing the next chpater on monday….. After my final model exam!!1 😀 😀

  7. Anjali

    I am soo sorry!!! I posted this in the wrong page… SORRY NIVEE!!!!

    * feeling very very foolish *

    • Nive...

      ha ha ha… anjali you just posted comment in wrong page… but see I typd my name wrong… lol… and “sorry”- dont use it next time yaar… !!!

  8. jaf

    When will u post the nxt part of the way u are yaar!!! Its been a month i think i m missing it very badly!!
    Pls come back na nive!!….. 🙁 🙁

  9. Superb awesome lovely painful emotional tremendous one…. na idhu sad ending nenachen.. bt ne anga twist vatcha…. so i thought of happy ending.. u clever dr…
    im back here … plz read my msg..

    • Nive...

      Thanks yaar… Ha ha ha… clever… apdi la ila… actual eh enakku tragedy eh pidikadhu… you know na tragedy films idhu varaikum pathadhea ila… scenes kuda pakka mattean channel change panniduvean… apdi irundhum bet vachi kumki film one new year night pathu… correct eh 12 ku climax scene… semaya azhudhean… ipo nenacha comedy eh irukku… adhu tha first and last movie na patha heart breaking movie…

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