SWASN FF. I Hate u & I Hate Myself Because I Still Love U (intro)

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I Hate u & I Hate Myself
Because I Still Love U

Hai all I am mariya, new to telly updates. I’m not a good writer but still I’m trying. Hope u all like this

I’m giving you a small intro

A wedding hall is shown were a girl & a boy are taking pherase.6 rounds had been completed. The girls is soo happy & the boy is shown with a frown face. Tension, confusion & pain are evident from his face. When they are about to take the 7th round the boy stops & declares the wedding to be cancelled. The girl asking what is it why r u doing this to me. The boy’s mother comes forward and gives her a tight slap & says u killed my daughter and this is our revenge.

Just then another girl enters the hall. Seeing the scenario she goes to the mandap. At the mandap only she sees the bride. She asks “u”.
Bride : Di
Girl. : Don’t u dare call me that again. U did that much to me that I never wish to see ur bl**dy face again in my life

Groom:. Bhabhy what r u saying.
Girl : yes sanky she is the sole reason for ur bhay’s accident. In fact she her self did it.

Bride : Di what r u saying

She gets another slap.
Girl:. Told u not to call me that

The girl breaks down.

What’s it. Please tell me if opinions weather to continue or not.

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58 Comments
  1. Rosey

    wow yar great i loved it start soon

  2. Confused….

    1. Mariyajap

      don’t get confused dear its just an intro

  3. Interesting

  4. nice..continue soon..

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u, will b back soon

  5. Again a hate stoty

    1. Mariyajap

      sorry to Disappoint u di. but i promise it won’t be usual hate &love story

  6. Arshaanya

    Intersting..
    Continue soon

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u, will b back soon

  7. nice continue

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u, will b back soon

  8. Rabia

    Continue dear 😊

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u di, will b back soon

  9. Ayonti(swasan)

    nyc.plz continue

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u, will b back soon

  10. Nice continue plzz

    1. Mariyajap

      thank &sure will continue soon

  11. Kakali

    Waaawww!!! nice start dear … plzzz do continue soon.. thnk u…

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u soo much kakali di, will continue soon

      1. Kakali

        Diiii !!! waaaa !!! sooo cutee of u dear.. new sis… :-*

    2. Mariyajap

      i would love to be ur sissy

  12. Pooja26

    superb..
    post asap……

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u di, will b back soon

  13. Khushiii

    Please continue soon can’t wait to read it

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u soo much will be back soon

  14. Interesting..
    Do continue dear.

    1. Mariyajap

      hello pramudi thank u

  15. Madhu

    Continue dear

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u, will b back soon

  16. Mahjabeen

    Woww amazing yar..continue soon

    1. Mariyajap

      THANK U , &will be back soon

  17. Abirsha

    Nice start dr…..
    Interesting too….
    Continue soon…..

    1. Mariyajap

      Thank u shan di will continue soon
      and what about MY HEARTLESS QUEEN
      PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON

      1. Abirsha

        Will update on next monday dr…. I have exam on sunday…. So have to prepare that dr…..

      2. Mariyajap

        its ok shan

  18. Bhavana

    Wow it’s amazing N I think bride is swara N the girl who bet swara was ragini

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u bhavana di, &about ur guess will see as the story progress

      1. Bhavana

        Actually U R only my Di 😜😜coz I am born on July 12 2003 N ur 17 July 2002 ..😀😀

      2. Mariyajap

        so sissy, is it ok with u

  19. Deeksha

    Nice intro dear…. Now update soon and regularly….!!!!!

    1. Mariyajap

      thank u ,i will surely try to be regular

  20. Deeksha

    Nice dear…continue soon and update regularly….!!!!!

  21. Shreeyu

    Interesting Dr …. Continue soon

      1. Shreeyu

        Mariya do read Love hurts love heals if u get tym

      2. Mariyajap

        SHEEYU i’m new here. i promise to read it from the begening

    1. Mariyajap

      its ok shan

  22. Sanjanaagrawal

    Nice dear …. plz update soon…. will be waiting for it ….

  23. Sanjanaagrawal

    Nice dear …. plz update soon…. will be waiting for it …. and plz read I THOUGHT IT WAS LOVE BUT IT WAS A MISTAKE OF U GET TIME ….

    take care
    Keep smiling 😘😘😘😘

    1. Mariyajap

      Thank you. Will sure Read ur ff

  24. Mica

    huh! i want to slap that gal.. sooo continue soon Mariya!

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