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hey guyz!!!
kritika here..once again with another story..bt its a 6 shot / 6 epi..if i want to extend it i will..bas give me ur support n all sort of sade tomatoes and eggs are allowed..
enjoy it..thing u will get to know more about pari but i would like to tell that she is justc 3 n half months baby..

JAN 19 , 2016
Annapurna: lao swara pari ko hume dedo. Hum isse sula denge (come swara, give pari to me..i will make her sleep)

Swara: nhi maa aap janti hai pari mere bina nhi soyegi.(no maa , u know she will not sleep without me)

Annapurna: par swara aaj tumhari aur sanskar ki suhagraat hai.(but swara today ur n sanskar’s wedding night is there..)

Swara:maa aap bhi janti hai ye shadi sirf pari k liye ki hai hum dono ne. laiye pari ko mein sula dungi(maa u know we did this marriage just for pari..give pari..i will make her sleep.)

she takes pari from her nad heads towards her and sanskar room.

In the room

Sanskar is standing near the window holding ragini’s photo. Swara entered the room and sanskar try to hide the photo but swara saw it. She put pari on the bed and come towards sanskar.
Swara: sanskar tumhe mujhse kuch chupane ki jarurat nhi hai.mein janti hu tum aaj bhi ragini ko bhoth pyar karte ho. Who bhoth lucky thi jo usse tumhare jitna pyar karne wala pati mila tha. Hum dono ne shadi pari ke liye ki hai and I promise ki mein humesha pari ka pura dhyan rakhungi(sanskar u dont need to hide anything from me.i know that u still love ragini.she was so lucky that she got a husband like u..we married for pari n i promise that i will alwayzz care for pari.)

Sanskar: swara I am sorry mein shayad kabhi tumhe ek patni ke adhikar na de pau par tum humesha meri beti ki maa rahogi. Mein janta hu ki pari ko ragini ke baad koi ache se sambhal skta hai to wo sirf tum ho. Chalo raat bhoth ho gyi hai ab hume so jana chaiye.(swara im sry..i may not ever give u wifey rights..bt for me u will alwayzz be my daughter’s mom..coz i know that after rags its only u who can handle her. cmon its late night now..sleep)

Sanskar and swara lie on the bed with pari in between them. But sleep was far away from swara eyes.

some memories flashes into her mind..
flashes of swasan broken marriage…
ragsan marriage…
swara’s european life..
pari’s tears..
swasan marriage..
she comes out of those flashes..

Swara(to herself looking at sanskar who was in deep sleep):kash sanskar tum mujhe pari ki maa ke sath sath apni biwi hone ka haq bhi de do..
(i wish sanskar u would give me wifey rights along with pari’s mom’s rights)


one thing guyzz in my ss no lucky..sry lakshya n raglak n ragsan n swalak fanss..

Credit to: kritika

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  1. I like it yr

    1. Tq jyoti im glad that u liked it..

  2. it is awesome. ..plz update soon

    1. Thanks sara!!
      I hav 1 more ff to handle..so may be I will post it tomorrow. 2day its not possible coz I have to finish that ff..so I hope u will understand.
      N r u sara khan.?

  3. Nice .. What happend to rags n where is lucky
    I think pari is ragsan child

    1. Sry meghs!!
      I think u didn’t read last lines..there is no lucky..n about rags..u will get to know in nxt update..till then wait n read

      1. Anywayzz thanks fr commenting

  4. Wow nice I think pari is ragsan child….. keep it up 🙂

    1. Tooba tq fr ur comment..n every confusion will be solved in next epi..

  5. Superb and different

    1. Thanks surbhi..I was damn sure u would comment..afterall whichever ff I read , I notice ur comments. So u r a popular commenter..well keep commenting n tq in advance fr ur future comments

  6. what happend to ragini

    1. Rosy tq for ur comment n in next epi fr sure I will xlear ur confusion

  7. Every1 jst wait fr next epi all ur confusion will be clear..

  8. I think pari is ragsan child but I don’t want that

    1. Tq .u will get to know it soon..

  9. awesome

  10. thanks utkarsh!!

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