Swasan’s previous births (part 1)

Hi guys .!! Its a crazy story full of humour…hope you’ll like it…. Forgive me for all the grammatical errors

Scene opens in a house…neither too big nor too small…lot of noise could be heard …lets see from where this noise is coming…. Ohh its coming from one of the rooms…lets peep inside…. A man and a lady in their late twenties is seen fighting…looks like they are married couple….
Man: o God in this whole world you got only me to get married with this woman
Lady : o hello, why are you disturbing god … It was you who came running to me and went on your knees and then what you said yaa * mimicking him* swara … Swara please marry me i love so much* now what happened where is your love gone?
Sanskar: then who asked you to accept…you should have rejected
Swara : if i wouldn’t have accepted your proposal then you would have started crying as you are a cry baby and i can’t see anyone crying

Sanskar: stop calling me that …I’m not a cry baby..okay
Swara: no you are … Crybaby😜
Sanskar: stop it you…you chuhiya(mouse)
Swara got silent and Sanskar smirked ….after a minute he received a pillow on his face
Sanskar: aahh
Swara started throwing pillows on him … Sanskar too started pillow fight…

Another room,
A man and a woman is seen sitting on bed keeping their hands on their ears
Man: sujata …its 2 years of their marriage and they still fight like small kids and don’t let us sleep at night
Sujata : right ramji they both still didn’t grew up… First fight then after sometime get normal…. They don’t even remember why they are fighting
Ram: don’t know whether we’ll be able to become to become Grandparents in this birth or not…. Seeing their fights it seems impossible to me
Sujata : suniye ji let’s sleep before they again start shouting
Ram : first time you said right thing …lets sleep

He immediately lye down and slept
Sujata realising what he said: ji aap … Slept😣
She too slept.
In swasan room,
Whole room is messed up … Feathers scattered all around the room… swasan are seen lying on bed huffing ..why not they did so much hard in pillow fight 😝
They both turned their faces towards each other and then after few seconds they started laughing out loud
Swara : between laugh* why did we started fighting?
Sanskar: i don’t remember …its late I’m feeling sleepy

Swara : me too…
Swasan cuddled into each other and slept. They both are looking so cute while sleeping.

Next day,
Sanskar *shouting* swaraa
Swara: argh Sunki Maheshwari I’m in the room itself . ther is no need to shout … Im not deaf. What happened say fast …i don’t have so much of time

Sanskar: even i don’t have time … I’m not getting my white coat… Its my favorite
Swara: oh that one, i gave it for dry clean
Sanskar : why didn’t you asked me before giving it and wait what did you called me sunki …its sanky not sunki
Swara: i called you right Sunki … Because you are sunki(mad)
Sanskar: swara i…
Swara: ji mom coming…. Swara went from there hurriedly escaping fight ….
Sanskar: mom is calling i didn’t heard it … *Realising she lied *hey wait

In the kitchen, swara is setting dishes on the table

Swara: mom dad come breakfast is ready
Ramta : yeah beta just coming
Sanskar: good morning dad … Good morning mom
He took blessings from ramta

Ramta : good morning son
They were proceeding towards the dining table when bell rang … Swara went and opened the door
There was a big box outside and it was written on the paper sticked to it which said
‘ Open meπŸ˜ƒ’
Sanskar: i think we shouldn’t open it … It can bomb or any dangerous thing
Swara : you don’t want to open … Its fine … Iwill open it afterall someone must have sent this with so much of love…. We shouldn’t hurt their sentiments
Sanskar: no Swara you shouldn’t
Swara gives him ” im not gonna listen to you ” look and moves to open it
She opens it and everyone closes their eyes specially Sanskar and after sometime
Swara : Aaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
Listening her ramta and sanskar too start screaming

Voice: stopppppp ittttt..
Everyone opens their eyes and see a man and a lady in their twenties standing infront of them with a angry look
Ram: avni
Sujata: niel
Everyone including avniel saw towards Swara who was looking them with “what have i done ” look
Sanskar: why did you shout swara
Swara : actually when i opened the box they both stood suddenly and i got afraid
Niel: we thought we will surprise you all but you all gave us shock…I thought we will be deaf today

[ avni- sanskar’s sister married to niel- police officer]
Sanskar: avni niel come inside why are you standing outside…. You came at the right time… We were going to have breakfast come join us

Evening time
Swasan avniel were in the hall talking on random topics
Ramta had to go to some relative’s place so they’ll be back the next day… Sanskrit didn’t went to office as he wanted to spent time with avniel and swara
Avni: bhabhi science has done wonders we can even know about our previous births through hypnotism. My first experiment got successful on this
(Avni is a psychologist by profession)

Swara: really avni…even i want to know about my previous birth
Sanskar: me too
Swara: please *with a cute pout*
Sanskar: please my sweet sister… Can’t you do this for you’re innocent brother
Avni : okay..okay i will fine …. Bhabhi don’t give me those looks and bhai those sweet words don’t look good from your mouth
Swasan : love you so much my sweet sister/sister in-law
Avni: bhai bhabi i love you too
Niel whispered in her ears-: i also love you

Avni: *blushing* i love you too
Their romance is disturbed by swasan’s shouting
Avniel: they started fighting again
Swara: i was a queen in my last birth and you were my slave
Sanskar: no way i was a king
Avniel: in donon ka kuch nahi ho sakta ( they can never change)

Here i end the first part.!!
I am sorry if i bored you… Another thing is i wont be able to continue ‘ our journey ff ‘ …. Sorry about that.!!
Tomatoes or any vegetable is accepted but no slippers to be thrown at me as it hurts πŸ˜…… You can even throw fluffy toys at me or panipuri alsp …. I’ll accept itπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Please give me your feedbacks regarding it and do tell whether i should continue this or not…
Any guesses what will be swasan in their previous births.
Will they be king or queen or will they be human beings or not?
ok now bye…see you guys soon

45 comments

  1. Tumhari raichu

    A/N dekte hi samaj Jaana chahiye that ki yeh tumhari hai
    How dare u….mujhe iske baare mein bataya nahi….humph chal Jaa baathe nahi Karti
    This is πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ…..iske aglae parts jaldi jaldi post kar nahi toh πŸ’£πŸ’£πŸ’’πŸ’’
    Btw love u sooooooo much pichu
    😘😘😘😘😘

    • Vanisha

      Vanisha

      |Author

      Really pehle login karke pm check kar…phir bol mujhe… Huh
      Maine tujhe bataya tha😑
      Mujhe subah hi ye idea aaya aur maine likh diya
      Btw , i love you too nbw…. Il post it asap…promise.!!

      • Teri nbw

        Kan pakad ke sry….login karne ka time hi nahi hai pata nahi kab maa aa naaye
        Phir se sry bolne ke liye sryπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
        Love u nbh😘😘😘

  2. Soumya85

    Soumya85

    |Registered Member

    Wah wah sizuka kya likha h awesome yar
    It’s hilariousπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Soooo funny
    Loved it a lot
    Pls continue
    Love you 😘😘

  3. Manasvi

    Manasvi

    |Registered Member

    Vani diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………….!!!!!!!!!! **shouting in your ears for making you deaf**πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    First of all, awesome concept.. swasan fightsπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Loving it..
    And thanks for adding Avneil also.. They are my new chhotu love nowadys😍😍
    Aur vo, box waala sceneπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I was ROFL..

    Now lemme get angryπŸ˜‘
    Why you want to discontinue your ff.?? Kam se kam mujhe toh vo story bataa doπŸ˜–

    Now lemme run to the next chapterπŸƒπŸƒ

    Love,
    Your MinnieπŸ’•

    • Vanisha

      Vanisha

      |Author

      Omg you shout so loud god…i will surely become deaf now… I too love avniel….
      Thank you so much …glad you liked it and don’t angry please actually im not getting how to carry on with it neither im getting time for it….

      • Manasvi

        Manasvi

        |Registered Member

        My voice is s so powerful naπŸ˜‚
        Aur mai aapko maaf karungi lekin uske badle mei aap mere liye ek aur swasan avneil ts likhoge..😍😍
        Plzz.. Likho na..😁

    • Vanisha

      Vanisha

      |Author

      Im a reader … You are a writer so you write a swasan avniel story for me…it was just an experiment… I didn’t had any expectations from itπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…..im good as a reader

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