SWASAN’S PARADISE

Hii !! lovely readers n writers.. This is my first ever attempt to write something , specially on our heavenly couple SWASAN… Really sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors.. Hope i’ll not bore u all..

So let’s go inside d story πŸ™‚

Hey Kiddo!!(kiddo is her diary’s name) , tomorrow is my last day here , at Delhi University.. m going back to my home after 3 years .. 3 yeeaarrs(giving stress)
Look now m totally change ,, Swara Bose (yoo she is our Shona) who never went for a walk only without her parents, is now living all alone in hostel that too in a different city.. I know i know u must b shocked ,even me too (saying this she laughed at her own thoughts)

But u know na this place only has given me my life’s best gift n d most important person of my life .. My love ,, my Sanskar <3…She remembered her 1st day of college..

Flashback – 3 years ago..

Swara's monologue( Ohh God ji m soo nervous , today is my first day at college.. Don't know what will happen )

Taking a deep breath she took her 1st step in college(her new life,her new journey) n a cool breeze touched her face … she felt happy n smiled brightly…

As Swara was hell nervous , she didn't noticed someone coming towards her & as a result both dashed n fall down … Ouucchhh !!!!

Without looking at the person she said ,"sorry woo i didn't do it intentionally…"(she was scared n nervous)

The other person get up in said,"Hey don't be sorry , actually i was in hurry so didn't notice u"..

They both looked at each other n passed a smile..

The other person extended her hands n said, "Hii !!!! m Ragini Gadodia,, 1st year engineering student… n u ??"

Swara shake her hands n introduced herself "Hii m Swara Gadodia also 1st year engineering student.."
Ragini- That means we can be friends… can we ???
Swara- ofcourse πŸ™‚
Both together- soo friends !!!!
Again together- Yess !!!! πŸ˜‰ (they both burst out into laugh)

Meanwhile Ragini checked her watch n widened her eyes n murmured,"Todayy m dead !!! how can i be so late ?ΒΏ?
Swara was not getting anything so she asked,"Ragini what happen ΒΏ anything wrong ??
Ragini- Swara !!! today m dead !! u know my bhai(bro) called me n informed me to come fast as he wanted to introduce me to his friends…but look ! i totally forget about that ( she sleped her forehead)
Swara- ohhooo !!! this is d reason ….
anyway u go ,,, i'll meet u later..
Ragini- No noo nooo Swara !!!!! u r also coming with me .. I wanna introduce u to my bhai ,, afterall u r my 1st ever collage friend…
Swara- Ragini u go na i'll meet him later….
Ragini- Swaraaa !! u r coming with me n that's finall.. (with fake anger n pout)
Swara- Haaa !!! meri maa challo… finish ur introduction session fast fast or else we will be late for our class…

They both went to bike stand ,,, where a group of boys were chit chatting n laughing…

Ragini- Uuhhuu Uuhhuu (clearing her throat) Bhaii !!!!!!
The boy turned around as she was facing his back….

The boy- Ragini ki bacchhiii !!!! where were u?? i called u to come fast ,, but instead of coming fast u got more late ….
Wait !Wait !!! waittt !!! …. Did someone rag u ?? R u all rit ?? tell me his/her name..

He was shooting back to back question on her … Ragini got irritated n said ,"Arreeeyyy !!!! Bhai (almost shouting) calm down !! calm down !! nothing happened to me… m perfectly fit n fine…
No one dared to rag Sanskar Gagodia's sister (yooyoo he is our Sanskar) ,,, i was just busy in making new friends…

Sanskar-(narrow eyed) friends ??? who ??
Ragini- ohhooo !!! i forget to introduce u ,, she is Swara ,,, Swara Bose(she dragged Swara n kept her in front of him)

He was mesmerized to see her,,, his heart skipped a bit n a unknown smile appeared on his lips (actually you all know what ,, he was lost in her,, afterall our shona is too beautiful na:-)

Ragini- Bhaii(shaking him) Bhaiii !!! r u listening what m saying ?ΒΏ?

Sanskar- Haa…. wo ..h h..a i heard what u said….

By d way nice meeting u Swara ,,, m Sanskar …(interrupted)
Ragini to Swara – Swara he is my parent's one n only son Sanskar Gadodia n my bhai too….

Swara n Sanskar both looks on shocked…..

Ragini- what ??? why r u looking at me like that ?? i said rit u r my parent's one n only son ,, coz according to me i m a girl (saying this she chuckled)

Swara looked at her amused n laugh….

Now Sanskar is totally lost in her smile,, her smile took his heart away ( awwwww love at first sight)

Sanskar comes back to sence n shake his hand ,, introduced himself as d third year engineering student…

While shaking hand , Swara felt a current passing through her body… she liked d feeling n passed a cute smile to him….

Both were starting at each other n had a short n cutee eyelock whichbwas broken by Ragini …

Ragini- Eheem !! Eheemmm !!! if u both have done , then Swara we should go to class…
Sanskar was embarrassed n Swara smiled a little…
She drag Swara to their class..

Sanskar- yeeh ladki bhi naa (this girl na)… i called her here to introduce her to my friends but look !!! what she has done …!…(shooking head)

Swaragini conversation -(after finishing d class)
Ragini- Swara(no response) Swarraa (still unaffected) now Sswwaarraa( shouting near her ear)
Swara jumped in fear n said," Ahhhh !!! Ragini … why r u shouting ?? m not deaf … i have God gifted ear .. soo..(interrupted)
Ragini- Ohhhh hello !!! madam from last (checking her watch) 2 mint 39 seconds m calling u ,,, but u r busy in ur own worlds n smiling like a mad…
Waise Swara why r u smilingΒΏΒΏ?? Kahiin Love at first sight …. (giggles)

Swara- shut up yaar Ragini !!! kuch bhi(anything haa),,,nothing like that … she blushed a little.(awww soo cute)
Her blushing smile was not unnoticed by Ragini,,, she thought something n smiled….

At d same time Sanskar's condition was also same… He was just smiling ear to ear n little bit blushing too(ufffff!!)…. when his friends asked about it he said nothing n continue his smiling session…

Days were passing like that & Swaragini's bond was becoming strong day by day… Swara Sanskar also cime close… they are now very good friends… everyone adored their friendship… specially our SWASAN… they now can understand each other like they have known each other from ages..

Both felt different from each other ,,, their bonding was beyond friendship… n they both knew it.. their heart knows that they had fallen for each other but never tried to confess as they feared to loose their precious friendship..

Now it's been one year since their friendship started… SWASAN bond was out of d world ,,, they cared for each other,, they miss each other ,, they fight with each other n uskee baad ruthna mannana… Both were super happy…

One day Ragsan conversation πŸ™‚
Ragini- Bhaii wohh i wanna talk to u…
Sanskar- yeah ,,, Ragu tell me…!
Ragini- Bhai it's about Swara(in a serious tone)…
Sanskar- Swara…about Swara… haa tell me Ragu .. is she all rit ?? what happened to her?? neither she come to class nor she is attending my calls… (worried)…
Ragini- Bhai hold on hold on… stop ur express!!! ur Shona is perfectly okk.(awww my Sanskar's Shona)..

Sanskar-(shocked) wha..t whattt … w.h.a.t u sai.d m.y S.hona…(stammered)
What do u mean by that ?? (avoiding eye contact)…
Ragini- Look at me bhai… bhai i said look at me (Sanskar looked at her) Do u love Swara ??( Direct question)…

Sanskar-( hell shocked) whhatt !! wh haat??

Ragini- answer me honestly bhai. !!! i really wanna know d truth… how u feel when u see her ??what feelings u have towards her?? is this really love or just an attraction ???

Now Sanskar was hell shocked… he doesn't know what too say …

Precap- Sanskar's confession n much more….

Hope i didn't bore u all… i just tried to pen down my thoughts… n d story will be based on a true story… minimum 40% scenes are real… but d rest part is my own thoughts… Thnk u…

83 comments

  1. Simin

    Kakali i am happy that u r writing something and that too on swasan makes it more amazing its awesome continue soon

  2. Navi

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    Stupid idiot crack mental crazy ding dong bell. U forgot to tell me u hv started writing.. hell angry on u angry smiley.. kick u.. it was superb start do continue.. kids all writing ff here sticking ut tongue

  3. Shrinjal

    Kakali!!!! Hey dear!!! U started writing…u should tell mee😠😠…I loved it…..do comment in kisnat connection

    😊😊😊

    I’m Shrinjal the writer to Kismat and Tujhse Hi. …

  4. Tharu

    |Registered Member

    Hi..kakali….it’s amazing…I really loved when friendship of swasan turned into love…waiting for next part…it is not boring..ok…

  5. Maryam

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    Great start dear…Happy to see u are writing actually I have always seen your comments on a story but first time reading your story…Great going dear..N keep writing…

  6. Crazy

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    Ohhh awsmmmm dearrrrr….
    N tq for always cmmnting n my ffs
    I NVR get time for cmmnting na
    So only I m really sorry dear
    But I do read ur cmmntz

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Hello ev1.. actually i need a help from writers… m trying to post my chappy since last 1 hour but it’s not been posting… “plzz don’t load this page directly” when i try to submit this lines shows there… what does it mean?? what will i do next to post .? plzzz help me writers… as u all might understand what m trying to say… sooo plzz help…

      • Radhika..

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        Di just click on submit article only once sometimes we click more than one may be that’s why this happening or may be some other problem in network connection di u reboot ur phone and than try or close the browser and than try after sometime may this works because I never face it so I don’t know about it much or u contact telly updates stating us problem di they may help u definitely

  7. Malika

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    Oooooh kakali so sorry yr. Please forgive me for latest reply. What to do when I was just going to comments on your ff my phone turned off. Coming to this ep well let me think. Superb nooo fantastic . You rock yr in first ep. Love swasan yr awwww choti I knew that you would write any ff on swasan. Thanks for informing me about this outstanding ff. Update soon. I’m waiting

  8. Asha

    Diii u started new ff. Go go go i m not talking to uu. Ha u know me samaira. Ap mere sab ff parte ho ek reader hone ki nate apne bataya nahi na so m not talking to u atlest 1 week. Bye. M still not talking to u .

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awwww Samaira … u r angry with me… !!! chorryy … actually yesterday i post it…. n i didn’t say it to anyone.. specially u.. how can ?? where were u?? underground haaa…

      *now will u talk to me? hello hii!!…

  9. Asha

    Di give the no of episodes.
    … Acc m samaira. Did u remembrar me.
    Wants to help u. Dont know this is ur main problem or not. The same prob i suffred when i goes to write 2nd part.
    … If u goes to submit then u recive massege that “fields types are not allowed” then ( in mine problem what i did) give the same pic which one u used here (see in my ff ulmost all pics are same)
    in that page u will notice a small box to mark. If u write the part in microsoft and then copy and paste there then mark in that box. if not then unmark that one.

    Di that was my proplem dont know which kind of problem u r suffuring.

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Samaira how can i forgot u?? such a childish a question… huhhhh !!!

      N i also gave no of episodes… but still nothing happen…
      It shows “plz don’t load the page directly”… soo i really don’t know what to do… πŸ™

  10. maha016

    diii what to say u r writing wait a minute i want to pinch my hands , aahhhhhh it was real u r writing it was awesome di and mindblowing what to say but i hate u di u dont even tell me that u r write a story but i love ur stry and i hate u di *pout*. but this ff na it was awesome . i love ragu in this .

    • Kakali

      |Author

      U hatee mee *Thud…
      jokes apart Maha… where were u?? where is ur chappy… huhhhhh !!! how will i say u?? i missed ur ff.. but u ?? i will not talk to u… *damn angry…

      Thnk u dear for the compliment… m glad dat u liked it…
      but don’t know wherever i’ll be able or not to post my next chappy … something is wrong… *wanna cry…

      • Maha016

        |Registered Member

        its ok u r forgiven and di i post my next part it is on review i think it will appear on morn but i cant post it regularly because i m very busy with my neet coaching and sorry for that . take care keep smiling my drama queen kakali di.

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Again drama queen !!! urghhh *beating with broom…. huhhh…

      One more thing r u uploading ur chappy through cell phone or Using laptop… i mean direct TU page na?? or u r copy pasting ??

      • Maha016

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        di can i say u something this name na its really suits u and about ur question i upload this from my phone and paste it from wordpad. and ya post next asap

  11. Radhika..

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    Boring??? I don’t even think about this word reading this even u know di I fell refreshment by reading it its just amazing no superb no awesome no fan no … Not find the appropriate word to describe it u just rocked it di u know what di I fell like u r writing since years long u write very well and their meet ragini swara friendship their first love at sight ragini straight forward question and swara cute dairy writing means ur as u write it and I think the story is if u or may be ur close friend ok not going to that after all the full part is awesome just loved it very very very very……… Much and I forgotusing commas and fullstop reading this what to do di but now not going to add as sometimes mistakes are also good just loved it and u don’t tell me about this that’s not fair di its cheating and yup don’ t tell than also I will read and comment and eat ur whole brain by commenting like Hindi idom tu man na man mai tera mehman ok by di love u and love the chappy very much😘😘😘😊

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Radhika u seriously liked it ??? awwwww thnk my baccha…. m feeling like jumping seeing ur comment… it really means a lot… thnk u soo much dear… take care… love u..

  12. Shreeyu

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    Oh my God Kakali dii I seriously didn’t lyked ur chappy …. *wink

    I loved it 😘😘
    Shocked na even u shocked me like this *pout*
    Achha hai mujhe bata diya aapne late hi sahi warna God knows who would have saved u from my outbursts …..
    Well jokes apart
    U r writing soooooooo well …..continue soon ….

    Lov u loads n loads….😘😘😍😍😍
    Tight hug from my side

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awwwww my Cutie loved it… m sooo happy…. m just thinking about ur out brust !!!!! no nooo nooooo nooooooo !!! thnk God i informed u… hufffff !!!!
      Thnk u very much Shreyuu… take care… n yeah a bone crushing hug from me too… πŸ™‚

  13. Samaira

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    Hehe bola hi. Acca m not in undergrund nor in upersky stuck betwen clases n paracticle exams. Thats why said by coz my exam after 2 days. So m last here.
    Acha di m sorry what problem come. U can massege experenced writers like shan di.
    Ok bye m going from telly for 1 week

  14. Mica

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    omg.. omg.. omg…. it’s you Kakali???????? is that true ??
    please Namish! kiss me please.. show me it’s real! *seeking opportunity
    Huh! of course our SWASAN seem know each others from ages…
    they are one soul in every single birth..dare no to forget that *pinch kakali

  15. Kakali

    |Author

    Ur wish is my command Mica… i’ll never forgot it *zipping it in mind tightly….

    *pinching u…. it’s true dear…
    Thnk u for reading ….

    • Kakali

      |Author

      I know dii u might b busy !! but plzz try to be with us at least once in a week. i’ll miss u.,,,, keep smiling n take care. love u πŸ˜€

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