SWASAN’S PARADISE (part 2 by Kakali)


Helloo !!! Ev1.. how r u all? Obviously good !rit .. is that a question to ask? How silly i m…!! Here is d next part of my story .. hope u all like it..but before that i want to thank all my lovely readers for their comments… it really means a lot… thnk u all n silent readers thnk u too all also…
i wanted to post it yesterday , but due to some problems i couldn’t ,, n my chappy got deleted 3 times..
sorry once again for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors…

soo here we go,,,

Flashback continues ::

Sanskar was hell shocked by Ragini’s sudden question regarding his feelings… coz he thought except him ,nobody knows about it(buddhu)..
Ragini was also adamant ,, she wants to know about it by hook or by crook that too from his own…

Ragini- Bhai tell me na .. u really love her ? If yes then m soo happy ciz she is soo cutee n sweet n (interrupted)
Sanskar- (in flow n deep thinking) yess Ragu i love her , i love my Shona.. u know what i liked her from d first day of college… but i thought it was just an attraction(*huhhhh)…

But more i got to about her, more i fall in love with her… She is innocent but mature enough to handle any kind of situation..she is childish but kind hearted too,, n d most important she is d most beautiful girl i have ever seen in my life.. not only from outside but also from her heart … her heart is pure….
And after all this hiw can i resist myself from falling in love with her..(saying it with a brightest smile)

Ragini- u love her this much bhai ?(teary eyed)
Sanskar- yes yes yes Ragini,,, i love my Shona more than myself,, i LOVE every single thing about her..
I LOVE when she smiles,, i LOVE when she talk to me,,shares her happiness with me,, I LOVE when she cracks her useless jokes(*awwwwwwww),, when she compliments me , support me n HUG me..
I LOVE to be with her…(now shouting) I LOVE U SWARA.. I LOVE U…

Ragini-Bhai m soo happy for u both…
Sanskar-(sad) But i don’t know na what she feels about me,, does she like me?

Ragini- Hmmmmm bhai i also think that she doesn’t like u
Sanskar’s eyes are filled with tears..
Ragini- coz i think she also loves u..*wink..
Sanskar- yeah i know (suddenly realize what she says)whhhaaaattt???

Ragini- yeah she also LOVEs u..
Sanskar- what u said just say once more i couldn’t hear it…(n started to clean his ear hole with finger)
Ragini- She LOVEs u bhai…

That was it for Sanskar n he started to shoot his questions back to back…
Sanskar- Ragu r u serious? How told u? How did u get to know? She did herself told this… God answer me fast..
Ragini- haa bhai woo(interrupted)
Sanskar- arrey yar say it fast na..
Ragini- yeah yesterday i was (again interrupted)
Sanskar- Ragu didn’t u charge urself today? U r so slow say it quick..

Now Ragini’s anger was at d peak but she said calmly n greeting her tooth
Ragini- Leett mee ccoommplete bhaiii. Orr ellsee goo too dduussttbinn(now shouting)

Sanskar- Haa haa!! Bol meri maa(silence)
Arreey booll naaa .. i can’t wait ..

Ragini- Now zip ur mouth n listen to me..
Hmmmm yeah ,, yesterday me n Swara both were talking ..

Swaragini conversation:::

Ragini- Swara have u heard Pushpa n Billu had break up last night….
Swara- ummmm i heard..
Ragini- i can’t believe it yaaar ,, the most beautiful n epic couple of our college had break their relation…(epic my foot huhh!! ,, epic is only our SWASAN awwwww)… by d way aren’t u shock with this news??

Swara- Noo,, what is here to shock.!!..
Ragini- like really?? Why u think so?

Swara- Yeahh if the love is true,, they will b together,, n if not then how can a relationship survive?? Is there no trust means no relation…
Or if they r destined to b together then they will meet for sure ,,,
Ragini- I agree… but can i ask u one question?
Swara- carry on,, if i say no will u listen..??
Ragini- yaa yaa i know m soo good…
Do u love someone(hahaha direct question)
Swara was dumbfounded with her sudden question…
Swara- whh..aa..t?? No.o.. no.o noth.ng li.ke thh…at …(avoiding eye contact)
Ragini- forgot about that .. u know what i thnk Bhai loves someone…

It was a thunderstorm or u can say a mini bomb which blasted on her head…

Swara was numb,, she was like someone stabbed her by blades….tears are ready to flow from her eyes… but she composed herself n gave an excuse n went to her room…

Here Ragini smiled winningly n got her answers…(pagal ladki)

Now again Ragsan conversation:::
Ragini- so what u think about it ?
Sanskar’s happiness has no boundaries ,, he is on d cloud 9 .. no noo nooo he is now out of the universe…he jumped n started to dance ….
Sanskar- Ragu u have no idea how happy i m … my Shona also loves me… yaaahhhoooo !!!
Ragini- cool down !!! Cool down bhai !!! Waise when r u going to propose her ?

Sanskar smiled boardly n said “just wait n watch my duffer sis n wink…

Next morning at hostle ::
Swara came out from her washromm…
Her face was pale,, eyes were puffy n red due to continuous crying… she has lost her charm….suddenly her mind stuck on her n Ragini’s convo.. n in a friction of minute she broke down..

(Monologue) God ji why ? Why me? M i too bad that don’t deserved to be loved… My Sanskar loves someone n didn’t tell me (*huhhh pagal ladki,, how can she think like that*)
Actually it’s my fault,, i never confessed as i scared to loose ur friendship to loose. but i know now it’s late n u r going to be someone’s else.. (crying bitterly)..

How will i live without u? U don’t know how much i feel special with u… ur care ,ur friendship(uffff!!) always makes me special….if u r near me i feel protected,, in ur arms i feel like no hurdle can touch me… it’s late Swara it’s late ,,, ur Sanskar is going away from u.. ur fear to loose him is now going to be true…(feels immense pain in her heart in whispers I LOVE U SANSKAR..)…
(**perdon me readers i really don’t know how to write emotional scenes,,,, sorry*)

Suddenly she heard a knock on her door,, she composes herself n went to open the door.. there was Ragini ..

Ragini- Swara be ready in an hour… we r going for outing with bhai n handed over a bag…wear this n be ready m waiting in my car…

Swara was blank,, she don’t know how to react ,, she silently took d bag n went to change as she knows arguing with Ragini is of no use…

Almost half an hour later she come out of washroom…

She was wearing a sleeveless purple colour knee length frock…with some matching jewellery like ear rings,, bracelet.. she had some make up to hide her puffy eyes, hairs were straight,, she was simple yet elegant… infact she was looking like a barbie doll(*awwwww*)..

Both reach at the place as Sanskar was going to join them there directly….
The place was weird… actually it was a market with lots of hustle bustle… there were only shopes of ice cream, cotton candies chocolates n red roses…but the most strange thing is that she never saw this market in this place during this one year…
She turned around to ask Ragini … but to her surprise Ragini was not there n d view she witnessed make her frooze at her place..

Precap – Flashback ends n present scenes….

Thnk u for reading…. i know it’s too short.. shorry !!! n do let me know how was it… take care ;D….

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  1. Shreeyu

    Awwww …. Lovely episode Kakali dii …
    And u wrote that emotional scehscene well …. Waiting for next one …. Waise Ragini’s character is really gud …. I mean had fun reading it ….

    1. Kakali

      U loved it !!! that’s a huge relief for me …
      Thnk u for ur cutee comment cutiee…
      i was scared thinking about comments regarding emotional scene … but niw m happy… thnk u…

  2. Nice dear…nd how sanskar ws describing da word for falling in love with swara nd abt her i just loved it..
    Waitng fr nxt

    1. Kakali

      Thank u Mahjabeen for ur sweet comment… m glad u liked it…

  3. Rabia

    kakalii uuu lairr u said that u r writing for the first timeee jhoootiiii :@ the way u write it seems like u have written beforee now tell me the truthhh (angry pout) πŸ˜›

    1. Kakali

      Yeah dii i have started to write from d day one of my school… but this typee never !!!! pakkkaaa!!!
      it’s a huge compliment dii… thnk uuuu…

      1. Rabia

        ummmm chaloo maan liya πŸ˜‰

  4. Tamanna


    1. Kakali

      Thnk u Tamanna.. πŸ™‚

  5. Very nice but post next part fast..

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u dear… n next part is on d way… πŸ˜€

  6. Woow sankar’s dance and Swara’s emotion loved it dear

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soo much dear… i thought u all will not like d emotional scene… but m happy u liked it…

  7. Wow he is going to propose her yeyyy

    1. Kakali

      Yaaaa !! dear he us going to propose her in next chappy… thnk u so much for your comment dear…

  8. Maryam

    Wow dear..Loving it….

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u Maryam !! m glad u love it…

  9. Scooby

    Wow superb loved it kakali. Thn poor kiddo swasan both knw nly to cry and no guts to tel their feeling. Bt nxt part sanski gonna propose i gues waiting for that. Rags is best sis cum buddy.. kakali totally awesime..post nxt part soon.. waiting!!!!! πŸ˜€

    1. Kakali

      Navii ur reply is at down ,,, mistakely it got posted there…

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u dear.. πŸ˜€

  10. Nice

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u dear !: D

  11. Maha6

    Awesome yaar… Poor swara?… Ragini made swara cry ?… But no prblm she has done a good job…..

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u Maha …. n yeahh Ragini made her cry but soon it’s gonna convert it on happiness…

  12. Heltej

    Come on sanky propose fast…. Im waiting waiting… Ragini u are so intelligent ?.. Kakali loved it?

    1. Kakali

      Diiiii !!!!!! don’t worry he is proposing her tomorrow morning… m sooo happy u love it… thnk u soo much ….

  13. Kakali

    Awwww thnk u Navi…. u loved it !! m soo happy… n yooo he is gonna propose her …. here i gave her a Cupid role.. she is cuteee na… !!!

  14. mou(swasan lover)


    1. Kakali

      Thnk u dear… πŸ˜€

  15. Arshaanya

    Loved it

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u dear.. :-*

  16. A.xx

    great episode,,,loved it especially sanskaars feeling for swara soooo cutee and romantic.xx

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u so much A.xx dear…. for ur cutee cutee comment… :-*

  17. Hey Kakali, I loved this episode and I must say you are awesome. Continue soon!!! <3

    1. Kakali

      Awwwww !!! thnk u so much Sanya for ur encouraging comment… it really means a lot… <3…
      r u d same writer of luv is stupid?

      1. Yeah I am.. Are you gonna kill me for not updating it πŸ˜‰ ?

      2. Kakali

        Uhhhuuu !!! not gonna kill u .. but wait n wAtch what will i do …

        plzzz update them.. *pleading eyes with brightness..

  18. Samaira

    Aww ye kaya ki ya kal exam hei me kese paro how sanky propuse her?? Acc. Pray for me aaj fever laga bethi ho. So bye come soon with a rocked cappy.

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u Samm…n about proposal u’ll get to know soon… take care of urself.. n rock d answer sheet…

      1. Shrinjal

        Hay Kakali! ! All good..What about u?

      2. Shrinjal

        Kakali u are informing me so late??
        Pehele batana tha yaar..exams r on the head..need to do well coz……
        Summary Summary ??
        Ab me tumhara dimag khane aa gaye “summary” bol bol ke??
        Be ready..

    2. Shrinjal

      Hey di

      1. Kakali

        Hiii Kiddoo… what’s up?

      2. Kakali

        All going awesome dear… heyy !! i have started a new ss “A dream”
        do have a look dear … if u get Time..

  19. Kaynatk01

    it was awesome kakali love sanskaar love u

    1. Kakali

      Awww !! thnk u Kaynat … love u too…

  20. Deeksha

    Nice dear… Continue soon

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much dear… πŸ˜€

  21. Mica

    who is the writer ha!!! how dare she called my Swara pagal ladki!!!
    i’ll curse the writer to have cute handsome boyfriend,,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…

    1. Kakali

      Who is pagal commentator ,, bleeses me to have a cutee boy friend… uhhhhh she made me cryyy…
      Thnk u Mica.. πŸ˜€

      1. Shrinjal

        Hey I meant that tell me what u wrote in ur New SS..not brief.. But pls give

    2. Shrinjal

      Mica!!????..my God..holding my stomach nd laughing?????

      1. Mica

        stop laughing or i’ll curse you too…huh!

      2. Kakali

        U r most welcome Shrinjal… aawwooo !!! meraa dimagg khawooo… huhuhuhu… BDW i didn’t get what u meant by SUMMARY ?? tell me tell me
        … *curious

      3. Kakali

        Hmmmmm !!! it’s a story of a girl who is soo naughty,, talkative,, nautanki,, dreamebazz… she has crush on a boy who has stolen her sleep n becomes her DREAM … she has been loving him since 2 n half years … but d boy is least interested in her.. infect he doesn’t like her a bit..coz she always annoys him like doing pranks on him,,most importantly she likea to pull his cheeks.. huhuhu…

        now they both r in a same clz.. Swara is damn hapoy for this.. but our hero Sanskar is totally not.. he tries to ignire her .. but destiny wants something else naaa…
        soo now current part is that Sanskar has a v.close frnd named Nia.. for whom swara feel wired n felt heart broken seeing them close .. later for some readon Sanskar comes to help her n they had a cute eyelock.. as a redult Sanskar felt something else n rises a lots of questions in his mind…

        Rest all is coming…

        best of luck for ur Exam dear …

    3. Shrinjal

      Ohh dear I’m not afraid of curses??
      Give me a curse, I’ll be happy!!

  22. Super awesome

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soo much dear … :-*

  23. Rosey

    woww what sence our pagal sanky in swara’s love
    they way he was descibing swara was awesom
    our poor shone she was so sad but i realy loved it

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Rosey.. happy u loved it.. ;-*

      1. Shrinjal

        Thanks dear for summary??
        I’ll comment from epi 3 onwards

      2. Kakali

        Sure dear !!! now it’s been running my 4th part … it’s already posted … thnk u…

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