SWASAN’S PARADISE (last part by Kakali)

Hellooo!Guyss !!M back with my last part of my story…thnk u all for ur support… hope u all like it…

Soo here we goo –

Flashback continues :::

She turned around to ask Ragini …but to her surprise Ragini was not there n d view she witnessed make her frooze..

at some distance Sanskar was standing with a guitar in his hand…their eyes meet ,, had a cutee n painful eyelock..without removing his eye he started to sing

(Enjoy the song ;-*)

Pehli nazar mai kaisa jaadu kar diya
Tera ban baitha hai mera jiyaa,,
Jaane kya hooga, kya hooga kya pataa,
Iss pal ko milke aa jee lein zara..

(He remembers their first meet)

Main hoon yahan, Tu hai yaahan
Meri bahoon mai aa, aa bhi jaa
O jaan-e jaa, dono jahaan,
Meri baahon mai aa,, bhool jaa. . .aa
O jaan-e jaa, dono jahan,
Meri bahoon mai aa,, bhool jaa. . . . Aa

(He remembers their first HUG,,)

BABY I LOVE U ,, BABY I LOVE U,,(5)
BABY I LOVE U soo….(finally)

(He is taking steeps slowly towards her,,n swara was just standing there with tear in her eyes.)

Har duwa mai shamil tera pyar hai ,
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai,,
Dhadkano ko tujhse hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai raahtai, tujhse hai chaahatai,,
Tu joo mila ek din mujhe mai kahi hoo gaya laapata..
O jaan-e- jaa dono jahaan meri bahhon mai aa bhul jaa(2)
Uuh LOVE U,,(4) BABY I LOVE U SOO,,,,

Finishing his song he kneel down in front of her,, n said lovingly “”SWAARRA””(awwwww,,guys m having butterflies)

He took out a teddy bear n chocolate with rose n extended this to her n said
Swara i know u must be shock with this sudden proposal…but now i cant suppress my feelings anymore..i just want to take my heart out to u…one thing i want to tell u from long Swara

“Taking a deep breath”

I LOVE U SWARA.
I LOVE U SOO MUCH..
You know what life counts all d roads we travel,, some are smooth some r rough, some would rather forget.. But there is one road, i won’t regret..The road where we met n become friends.

Swara i wanna travel with u in all d roads. i want u in my life…i wanna be with u till d last breath of my life…wanna die in ur embrace..
Will u accompany me?
Will u be with me?
Will u be mine for forever?
Will u be my princess?

He extends his hand…
Swara stands like a statue but suddenly
Bends down n gave him a bone crushing HUG…happiness,pain,love,care all d emotions were in that hug… they both hug as tight as they could..like their whole life depends on the hug..

Both broke their hug n joined their forehead ..Swara whispers “”I LOVE U TOO my prince…Love is our true Destiny… i cant find the meaning of life by myself alone…i can find it with u.,i wanna be with u ,,together forever…””

Sanskar again hugs her tightly..
both stayed there for some time but came into sence hearing claping sounds..

So many people were around them.. witnessing the start of a heavenly couple’s endless love…

Some were praying for their future,,some were blessing them,, all adored them..

it was just a start of their new love…new life n new journey.

They both went to chocolate shop n then ice cream shop following cotton candy shop…whole day both enjoyed n cherish their old moments…thinking about the beautiful future with each other…(but we don’t know na what destiny has planned for them ).

Flashback ends :::

Back to present:::

Swara- Kiddo,,now it’s been 2 years we r together..u know with time his love,care,respect towards me is only increasing (blushed)… I m blessed to have him as mine… I can’t even imagine my single day without him.

Tomorrow m going back to my home.. i don’t know how will i live? M gonna miss him badly (sobbing)..

But nevermind.. m going to talk to papa about him n our relation(as her mother already knows about Sanskar).
Hope papa understands me n accept us..

But i don’t know why,why m feeling restless, as if something is going to happen..God ji i hope nothing goes wrong n our relation got compl…. (interrupted)

One of her friends- Swara,, come sleep it’s too late . Morning u need to wake up fast..

I shrugged my thoughts aside close my diary n sleep thinking about tomorrow’s blissful morning with each other where will b only Swara n Sanskar..

Next day Swara bid bye to everyone..except Ragini n Sanskar..

She was searching her life,,suddenly she sees him under a tree resting his head n closed eyes like he was in deep thoughts..

Swara-(slowly) –“” Saanskkar””

Sanskar doesn’t say anything n pull her into a breath taking hug.. after departing he captured her lips showing his love ,care n tension to loose her.. Swara also repocrated d kiss with equal passion.. when they were out of breath,,broke the kiss n join there forhead…

Sanskar was feeling restless as he is going to loose something precious..he again hugs her,

Sanskar- Shona plzzz don’t goo .. i’ll miss u…
Swara- i also don’t want to go Sanskar.. but it’s a matter of few days.. i’ll be back to be with u forever.. then this distance will also not b able to separate us.. (Both were crying silently ,, showing how much they gonna miss each other)

Soon they broke the hug n stare each other lovingly…

Now it’s time for bid bye to her sister, her best friend her soul mate Ragini..
Both were weeping,, words are not coming out from throat… they hug n cried their heart out.. between sobbing they both said together..
“” TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF””(smiled a little)(BG music Swaragini plays)

Swara finally bid bye to everyone n went to station with Sanskar…

Here Sanskar was feeling strange to let her go alone so he also decided to go with her …

Swara- Sanskar what’s this? R u also coming with me?*innocent face..

Sanskar- yes, my princess m also coming with u.. afterall our destination is one .. rit..(peaked her cheeks)..

Swara- Waise !! tell me r u scared thinking that something bad will happen with me rit?

Sanskar- Swaraaa(angry)!! (Tightening his grip on her shoulder..)
Never say all this !! Don’t dare too utter all this nonsense.
Nothing bad can happen to u, till m with u… even death also can’t touch u .. if it comes he has to face me first… Understand !!! (he left her shoulder)

Swara felt immense happiness by his words..she back huged him n said “SORRY”.. she peaked his cheeks ..

Swara- I know u r with me Sanskar.. i don’t have any fear when u r with me not even death.. n if the death comes i would love die in ur embrace..

Their half journey has passed.. just few minutes left to get their destination.. both were happy n Swara was talking with her mom…

suddenly they heard a sound “”BBHHOOMM”” n everything went black..

After sometime Sanskar gained consciousness n looked around..his heart stopped beating looking hundreds of dead bodies.

Suddenly he saw his life lying on d ground , breathing heavily n calling his name…

He gets up with immense pain in his body n walk towards her difficultly…

He takes her in embrace,she slowly opens her eyes.. both asked
“Aar..ee u.uu fin..ee??”…
Both nodes(but they know they r not)
Sanskar kissed her forehead…

Swara started breathing more havily..

Swara- s.aa.ns.kar i cca..nt se.e ann..th..ing… so..mee o.nne i..ss is.ss call..ingg me.
Wi.ll wil..ll uu c.oome w.ithh me.. I i .can..t li.vee wi.thout uu..(ahhhh)

Sanskar also started havily n said ” Princ..ess i all.soo c.an see th.e o.ther wor.ld..wh.ere u n me for.ever.. awayy f.rom all d re..lat.ions.

Saying thus both kissed each other for d last time..shut their eyes n their heart finally stopped beating..

They died..they died in each other embrace.. 1st Sanskar n then Swara… fulfilling their promises to be with each other till d last breath.

(THERE WAS A BOMB BLAST)

They r no more in d earth,,, but heaven made them again together forever where no fear if death,, no fear of loosing each other..
They r in paradise in””SWASAN’S PARADISE””

There r winds of Destiny that blow when we least expect them…Sometimes they gust with d fury of a hurricane,,sometimes they barely fan one’s cheek..But d winds can’t be denied, bringing as they often do a future that is impossible to ignore..

THE END…

Thnk u soo much for reading..

90 comments

  1. Rabia

    |Registered Member

    Hawwwwwww hayeeeee one u ended and secondly u mudererrr 😳😳😳😳 hehehehe awesome epi kakali and chalooo finally they will be together in heaven 😊

  2. Navi

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    Awww kakali mindblowing awesome.. loved it. Thus it ws swasan paradise nw i got it.. alas their roads end at heaven wr rhey wr traveling togthr with love nd hapiness..:-D πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ then rags??

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Rags was cupid here.. she did her work .. n now i don’t have her number.. soo don’t know where she might be…

      n Thnk u sooo much Navii… m soo happy that u liked it… it means a lot… :-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Yeah Myna their love is true n bleesed… thnk u dear.. n yeah ur name iss soo cute…

      In our Assamese language Mayna is called to our cutee ones …

  3. Kakali

    |Author

    Sorry for sad ending.. as i said at d 1st chappy it’s somehow based on a true story… n yeah it’s true… not only one Swara Sanskar but more then hundreds were killed in that bomb blast… now d date is again coming ,, d day which shakes me ,, shakes d whole Assam brutally… 30 October…
    it’s been now 8 years that incident happened in 2008,,, though we get scared remembering d scene…. soo thought to dedicate the story to our couple SWASAN…. thnk u…

  4. Maha6

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    U made me cry kakali…. Sad ending tho hai…. Rulaya bahuth….. πŸ˜₯ but story is marvelous n proposal is so nice… I loved it.

  5. Simin

    Thank u kakali for writing this story
    The title is soo apt
    I always considered u as a funny humorous girl but today u proved u are emotional too love u loads……
    Swasan our heavenly couple love u swasan…

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awwww Simin thnk u soo much dear… u find me funny waaaaa !!! such a amazing discovery… u loved the emotional scene … but i thought it wouldn’t make upto ur expectation.. but m glad u like it.. take care dear.. πŸ˜€

  6. Anniya

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    I am very very angry with you. Now ask na why? Let me tell you why don’t you inform me you have written such a wonderful story.
    By luck I had seen it , truly saying it’s beyond perfect. I love it very very much.
    Well I don’t have many words to describe how beautifully you have written it.
    Keep writing, I will wait more ff/ ss from you…

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Anniya give me 2 n half seconds to find words for replying u… uhhhh !! m not getting it…
      u love it .. reaooaally ? awwwww
      thnkk u soo much dear… it’s a really blessfull compliment…

      u r angry with me naaa !! but m too happy ,, afterall we all get angry with our love ones na… huhuhuhu !!!

      • Anniya

        |Registered Member

        Now my anger is vanish seeing your rply.
        I really love it, even I mention my frnds to read ur as. I am sure they will also love it..
        You know I never mention my ff to my frnds so you can imagine how much I had love it…

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Aww awww awwww !! u don’t know Anniya how m feeling now !!! it’s like taking bath without shower … flying without wings… thnk u sooo much… ;-*

  7. Malika

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    Why why you end. choti. Aaaaaaaaah. I will wait for you I mean for next swasan ff. Love you choti. Come back soon

  8. Divya

    It’s beautiful… Want to cry but can’t stop feeling happy either… Vo paradise mein hain.. Then OK.. Great one sis

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Sis !! awww it means u r my new Diii…
      Divyaa di thnk u for ur wonderful comment…m soo happy that u liked it… thnk u πŸ˜€

  9. Maryam

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    Oh My God..kakali..I swear if you were here with me I would have surely murdered you…You kill my SwaSan you are a killer…I will send you behind the bars…BT will also bail you soon bcz you have gifted us such a amazing story, I loved it dear, but I didn’t expect a ending like this..😒😒 I am crying only because of you….Now you have to repent by writing another wonderful story but with a Perfect N happy ending N with That should be a bit longer…Understood..
    So your case is still pending….N FROM TODAY YOUR NAME IS MISS.CUTE MURDERER…😁😧
    ITNA TOH HAQ HAI NA MUJA..

    • Maryam

      |Registered Member

      N ya thank you so much for adding my crush (my first love) song, Pehli nazar,I just love ATIF ASLAM..so thank you so much…

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Hahahaha Maryam !!! u can’t do anything to me as m wearing helmet n bullet proof jacket…

      n u r thinking to put me behind d bars… hmmm i don’t have problem… but i’ll send u my fav food list .. soo send them in jail… i’ll perfectly live there… n yeah also my phone’s charger… plzzzz…

      once again thnk u for the oscar winning Tittle… awwwww it sounds soo cutee…

      Thnk u sooo much dear for ur support… love u.. m waiting for ur nect chappy…

      Atif Aslam is also my fav singer !!! n this is one of my fav song…n u liked his song na ,, i read it in other’s ff .. soo thought to add it.. for u specially…

      • Maryam

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        Awww..thank u so much my dear Miss.Cute Murderer…for adding my favourite song..love you for that…N don’t worry I’ll make sure that you receive five-star service in the bar..after all you are such a amazing writer…but I’ll also make sure that you should fulfil your punishment by writing an other amazing story…
        N thank u for reading N liking my work. .πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Waah !!! waaahh !!! Maryam… tussi great hoo ,,, both sides have punishment… huhuhuhu u r sooo smart … do u prefer almond so much ??
        n love u toooo… r u from India or other country ??

  10. Deeksha

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    Nice dear…. But a sad ending…. Everyone there can’t be a happy ending right!!!!!!! Continue writing!!!!! And do infrom me if you write an ff or one shot!!!!!

  11. Shreeyu

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    Thnkew so much Kakali for this wonderfulwonderful story …. I loved it … And ya it is the bitter reality of this cruel world …. And don’t understand how can a person b so heartless that they don’t even think once before killing so many people so mercilessly … So brutually …. RIP to the victims who face such miserable death..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Cutiee !! u r too small/tinny but can understand everything… it’s soo nice of u.. n yeah thise people r like that .. what can we dooo ,,, sooo i pray God to make them mosquitoes .. n i wanna beat them with tennis racket… huhhhh !!!

      Thnk u sooo much dear… ur comment means a lot to me… take care ;-*

      • Shreeyu

        |Registered Member

        U r really funny diii … U know how to make someone smile when u r speaking something serious even … And that’sthat’s wat a reason I love u so much …. And sry I wrote the comment in hurry so by mistake I wrote just Kakali instead of Kakali dii … Chalo a tight hug from my side diiduuuuu … Lov u

      • Shreeyu

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        U r really funny diii … U know how to make someone smile when u r speaking something serious even … And that’sthat’s wat a reason I love u so much …. And sry I wrote the comment in hurry so by mistake I wrote just Kakali instead of Kakali dii … Chalo a tight hug from my side diiduuuuu … Lov u tc

      • Shreeyu

        |Registered Member

        Ab I don’t know ki wat happened to telly updated they r posting my comment twice … May b I write soooo wellπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡…

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Seee !!! i told u ,, u r soo smart … even TU also accepts dat…

        A tighhtttttt huuuggg from my side also ,,, love u tooo cutie….

  12. Rabia0032

    |Registered Member

    Woooooowwwww dear it was awesome I cant describe 😒😒😒😒😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍ahhhh I love swasan 😍😍😍😍😍

  13. maha016

    i love u di, i love u so much u know what u made cry wowwwww awesome ff di i love it to the core . tight hug to u di

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Maha i made u cry !!!chorryy*puppy face…
      But don’t worry i’ll eat two chocolates more today for repentation…

      Thnk u soo much dear.. u r such a sweetheart… love u tooo … take care.. :-*

  14. Heltej

    |Registered Member

    Ohh kiddoo… U made me cry…. 😒😒😒come with new ff.. Enterain TU people! 😩😩😩😰😰😰😘😍😍😍😘😍😘😍

  15. Sanya

    Oh my God, Kakali. This was damn too emotional for me to even handle but I still loved it. You are an awesome awesome writer. <3

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Sanya m going mad for ur comment…
      woooowwww !!!! m a writer !!! yaaahooo !!! m sooo happy…. thnk u soo much dear… <3 …

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Sorry dear for d sad ending… i just wanted to show their endless love … which is gonna continue on paradise also…
      Thnk u soo much for ur comment… :-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soo much Mirna.. yess ,,i cant forgot the incident.. infect no one can can ,, that day there were 4 back to back blasts in different places…

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soo much dear !!! m glad u like it… n i’ll try for another one but can’t promise..

      u all superb writers are here.. i’ll will wait for ur next chappy… :-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soo much dear for ur comment…

      there are lots of SWASAN ff like,,,

      *love between SWASAN
      *love is a beautiful emotion(season 1,, 2 is running)
      *it’s not revenge it’s love(season 1,2 is complete 3 is runnung)
      *accidentally urs
      *kuch toh hai tere mere darmiyan
      *hidden beast
      *beauty n d best
      * tu meri mannat
      *falling for u
      *swaragini broken relations is ut oure or impure
      *knowing u
      *true love never dies(season 1-2)
      *SWASAN u r my life (sesn 3 running)
      *new relations begins
      *i m sorry swara i hurt u…

      n lots of … now i don’t remember more.. soo hope u like it all…

  16. Sri

    |Registered Member

    its awesome u made me cry

    but happy that our heavenly couple r in paradise

    just read all parts now
    actually I was a silent reader but by reading ur name I thought to read & break my silence

    finally thanks for wonderful ts
    sorry for not commenting on previous parts

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Ommggg !!!! Sri u broke ur silence for my chappy… u don’t know dear what a big compliment it is !!! it’s feel like heaven…. i m soooo soo sooo happy…

      Thnk u sooo much for urr wonderful comment… it really means a looot to me… stay bleesed dear πŸ™‚

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Hmmmm… !!!! today u were missing na !! so thought u went to trip..

      at first i thought somebody kidnapped u ,, but thn drop d idea ,, coz kidnepers can’t take risk on lif.. sooo…

      • Mica

        |Registered Member

        u damn rite,, no one will kidnap me, since they should provide me a tons of chocolate :3
        just lil bit busy for reunion party and sick also.. huh! made me late to read my swasan’s death huhuhu

      • Shrinjal

        Nahi ii! !! Ye kya?? I read this episode yesterday but forgot to comment!! Sry!!!

        Nahi iii. .y did u make my SwaSan die??????????!!!!!well I’m crying now also after reading it for 2nd time…
        Wowwwww great ending!!!!
        Will u come with a new FF?????

        Thnx xx for supporting me always dear!!!!!luv u

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Awwww Shrinjall !!! don’t cry dear … well i’ll but can’t promise
        . afterall i need to read ur chappies … u all r here … huhuhuhuh…

        Welcme baby … love u too… ;-*

  17. Radhika..

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    Firstly I am very very sorry for not commenting on previous part and commenting here very late so so so sorry for that
    Di I am totally in shock how come someone write so beautifully and u say u write first time like this u know di many says people got perfect with practice but some are able to do the things without practice like born with a silver spoon u r one of them di u describe it so well that I can’t find words to praise
    The proposal oh my god from where that proposal came up in ur mind just love it and ragu idea really fab one and the emotional scene u wrote very well and describe it awesomely and di last part was really a bit emotional as it is already said that when we r going to die or something bad gonna happen we got to know about it and that happen in this case also that swasan got to know about it
    And they died together in each other embrace and they meet in heaven though a sad one their is something good in that also
    And the bomb attack I never got a thing that why terrorist are doing this all? Why they do this? What will they get by doing this?are hey not having humanity? Don’t know when this all stop but hope that this all things stop someday that the coming generation will not affect by this all now also terrorism is there in Kashmir Punjab 10km near border people are shifting to other places because of this all ……….. Just a salute to them who die in this attacks and the army officers also that they live there to save our lives and many die just because of this fights and all may the pious soul rest in heaven a salute to them all loved the moral and the story di
    Thanku for giving such a beautiful story di plz soon come back with more stories as ur skills are just ………… What to say no words are there …. love the story love themoral love ur dedication love u di😘😘😘😊😊
    And sorry once again
    And sorry for keeping u bore by my comment sorry 😊
    Come back soon di withone new story …… …………..waiting

    • Kakali

      |Author

      1st of all u r not late ,, n can never be … okk …
      2nd thnk uuuu soooo much for urr cuuttee n encouraging comments… u have no idea how ur words have effected me… it’s feeling like out of d world … thnk u Radhika…
      3rd those questions always comes to my mind .. but allass !!! i can’t find d answers…
      4th ur comment is not boring … if u again say this naa !!! m gonna break ur front teeth… okkkk…

      5th I’ll surely try dear … but can’t promise …huhuhuhu… once again thnk u soooo much for ur wonderful comment… take care .. love u :-*

      • Radhika..

        |Registered Member

        Ok

        1st i never say that I am late may be it is 1 day…. 1 week……. 1month……… 1 year……. 1 decade……. 1 century or much more I will never say the words

        2nd ur welcome di and itsits my pleasure that my words make u fell like out of the world and yup the words r all true and what to say I don’t know that such a good writer is my sis if I know I will surely ask u early to write but now also no worries now I got the opportunity

        3rd with the questions some answer also come but than they also become some question and than more answers more questions and at a time I stop thinking about it or engage in some other things because I myself never took things that much seriously how they r if we took themthem that much serious I thought nothing like this happen in future every person of this earth have to think about his seriously as this is not a matter of kiddingly taking ok now I will stop or else I will write a book on it and all because many things are there in my mind don’t know what happen and why may be know but can’t say anything ok now I am going mad ok stopping it finally

        4th really u wanna my front teeth than u have to come here in my place and I will be very excited. For this come soon….. And about breaking teeth I will add makhan and all and u will not do like thatπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ what say nice idea na

        5th hmm u have to try di afterall how come we all leave u after such a amazing story hmmm ok now stopping it

        Ur welcome again love u too😘😘
        And u too take care
        Waiting for u to come to my home
        And waiting for u to write next ff soon ok so by 😊😊 think about them also by

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Huhuhuhu !!!! Radhika .. i’ll come to ur home town … but after retiring from my Job… as i’ll go to world tour … nice na… hahahah… thnk u my sweety Radhika… ;Β€

      • Radhika..

        |Registered Member

        According to research it take 4-5 years and if u wanna more Rome it will take at most 10-12 years after that u can visit here what say di how was the tour plz telll me after retiring when u came to my hometown waiting for itthan my age will be 25-27 or ur age will be 27-29 what say diπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Hmmmm dear !!! not a bad calculation…. but i think my age will be 42-45 … n urs 40-42 ….
        ooommmgggg imagine Radhika imagine…. how will we look.. *noo noooo jerk myself…. hahahaha πŸ™‚

      • Radhika..

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        What do u mean di that we are 40+ means who come we became 40+ ?? And I we become than also no worries we will meet if it is destined if god ji wanna do something they do it by one mean or other and do u know di shanklacharya ji from Assam came here for a satsang and if they can came than one day me or u also will come to each other place don’t know about u but if atall I will come plz come to borrow me as I am bin. Bulaya mehman so if u don’t allow than what will happen to me so firstly only I have to do full settings na what say?πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚β˜Ί

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Yess ,, baccha u r definitely correct if God ji wants we will meet for sure …huhuhuhu dear u r mostt welcome to our Home … jab bhi chaho aa jao … aane se pehle inform jarur karna … :-*

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