Swasan…Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 11

Guys warning this one may be too long or boring one… I really dnt have any idea… dnt curse me after reading this… 😉 🙂 k lets go….

Link to previous Chap:  Chapter 10

 Chapter 11:

 

@Auditorium,

Arj: hey… swa: hi…. arj: did u prepared… swa: I think so… Swa: if they ask me to do any stunt/dance performance… I’ll do it but seminar… arj:  dnt wry… I knw u can do it…  swara smiles nervously… arjun assures her… Seminarsa re started… swara feels nervous… arjun signs all the best… she nods… swara closes her eyes and remember sanskar words “Mrs.Swara Sanskar Maheshwari” she smiles: haan… Mrs.Sanskar Maheswari u can… she starts her seminar and did it well… all appreciate her…

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@canteen,
Swara and arjun frnds are asusual busy with their chats… kav: today u gv nose cut to our HOD… karthi: ha ha ha… u r right… he didn’t open his mouth after that… arj: ha ha ha… leave it guys if he knws we are gossiping about him thn again he ll gv seminar to ammu… swa: I’m not at all afraid of any seminar… arj: oh really, we saw that… swa: haan..haan… kav: ok guys leave about that… 

 

Arj: ammu tomo u r free na… swa: 24 hrs I’m free… why..? arj: Tomo Janmashtami na my mom arranged for pooja, she asked me to invite all my frnds… so guys tomo u all are cmng to my hme ok… swa: what tomo is Janmashtami… arj: haan… Raj: swara you knw his mom is best cook in this world… mainly her Gulab jamoon… hmmm… yummy… all chuckles looking at Raj reaction… but swara smiles and lost in thought of her last year Janmashtami…

 

* Badi was fully decorated for Janmashtami celebration… swaragini planned to do play for kids… swara decided to play the role of Krishna and Ragini is Radha… sanskar is not at all interesting in all this but he is very much interested in teasing swara as lil Krishna…  Swa: if I’m lil Krishna then my didi is lil Radha, hmm… Sans: ha ha ha… but radha looks taller than Krishna …

 

Swa: Didi see him … Rags: Sanskar pls… Sans: ha ha ha… Ragini what I’m saying is true … didi ka bachcha is lil Krishna… Swa: you’re nt interested in all this na then zip ur mouth… Sans: it’s my mouth, I’ll do anything u don’t need to say… Swa: but you’re talking about me… Sans: so you accepted that you’re lil Krishna… both started the word war… Rags tries to stop them but they both not ready to listen anything and pushes her down… Rags screams… after listening her voice they both stop and runs to her… she gt hurt in her legs…

 

Swara starts to cry… Swa: didi is it paining… Rags: no no shona, I’m alright u dnt wry… she wipes her tears… Sans: ragini who ask u to come between us… swa: it’s all bz of u oly… sans: oye its bz of u oly, if u dnt argue with me it won’t happen na… swa: but u oly started… Ragini holds her head and shouts: Not again… swasan looks at Ragini and bcm silent…

Sans: Ragini come u tk some rest… Swa: haan didi he is right… Rags: thn wat abt play… swa: it’s ok didi, u should tk rest, will do it in nxt yr… sanskar chuckles… sans: it seems to be god doesnt wont ur lil krishna play… swara bcm upset… Rags: sanskar pls why you always make her upset… sans: arre what I did, (dramatically) nowadays I not allowed to open my mouth in this badi… Rags: uff, stop ur acting… sans: both sis always want to shut me thats why today God shuts ur drama… he he he… swaragini looks him angrily…

 

Sanskar realise he made them angry… sans smiles sheepishly: will do one thing instead of Ragini I’ll do Radha role, what u bth says… RagSan laughs, but swara face glows with his idea… he said this to change the sis’s mood but swara tk it serious… swa: wow handsome its nice idea I’m ur krishna and u r my Radha… ha ha ha.. lol… sans: what..? Swa: arre u oly told, cme ll do ur makeup… sans: I said simply… swa: so what ur idea is nice… sans: no I cant… Swara being a stubborn starts to cry by sitting on floor to make him accep’… Ragini gives him a pleading eye… finally sanskar nods ok to sisters without any other option…*

 

‘That was the happiest pooja ever happened…’ she sighs… ‘so what this year I made this one as most memorable than previous year…’ she thought… Kavi: hello madam, wr r u lost… see ur mobile ringing so long… kavi broke her trance… swara nods nothing and looks her mobile…

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@dining table,

Swara and kaki arranging dinner… sanskar joins them, he ask swara about her seminar… she tells him… she get excited when topic comes to janmashtami… Swara: sanskar shall we celebrate janmashtami… kaki: haan beta shona is right… it’s ur first festive after marriage…  swara: haan kaki I dont think about that…  thanks for remembering… sanskar refuse by saying he is not interested in all this… swara and kaki and start to insist him…  he sigh and says ok… kaki and swara exchange smile…  swa: sanskar, sans: now what… Swa wo… shall I invite dadi and papa…  sans:  swara u want then invite them no need to ask permission from me… Did I ever stops u meet them… swara nods in no… swa: still u r angry…? sanskar: I’m just upset…

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Sanskar looks at Lord krishna idol in his room… sans: that day I really dnt knw which made me agree to do Radha role…  its ur tears or ur didi pleading eyes…

 

*Sanskar sitting infront of mirror by cursing himself for his idea… swaragini are doing makeup for him… Dadi and shekar was astonished to see the sight, who just entered inside… Dadi: arre what u both doing…? Swa: paroo I’m gng to make ur boy frnd as Girl frnd… swara chuckles… sanskar embarrassingly looks… Dadi: kya… swara says what happened… shekar laughs… Dadi scolds swaragini and shekar… Dadi: beta utho, u dnt need to do this for these pagal ladki…

 

Shek: ma dnt call my princesses’ as pagal… Dadi: ofc they’re, see what they did… sheka: oh ma its ur boy frnd idea… hain na princesses… swaragini nods… sans (thinks): I bcm entertainer to this whole family… swa: ofc u r entertainer… sanskar gives ‘how u knw’ look … Rag: it’s clearly written in ur face… swaragini chuckles… Dadi: ugh, enough… shona u want to do play na… swara: haan… Dadi: thn Sanskar beta ll do krishna role and u play as radha… swara agreed… Sanskar gvs heavy sigh of relief… sans: Paroo darling I love you… he hugs and kisses dadi… sans: dnt knw what this sister do, if ur not with me… I’m lucky to get you… he dramatically wipes his tear… all laughs…  (Finally sanskar play krishna role and swara did Radha) *

 

A drop of tear escapes from Sanskar eye remembering those moments… Thank dadi if she doesnt come at right time what might be happen… he smiles…

 

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Arjun enters home late night by humming… Ram: lo finally ur son arrived… after seeing Ram he silently goes to his room… suj: ji why always u taunting him… Ram: bz I dnt want any lost again, already I had a huge lost… I dnt want to repeat same mistake… by saying this he leaves… sujatha prays everything to get fyn as before… arjun comes and side hugs her… arj: dnt wry mom everything will be fine soon… suj: someone looking happy today… arj: oh mom I forget to say I invite all my frnds to our home… suj: u invited swara right… arj: haan… sujata smiles… suj: I really want to see that girl… arj: dnt wry tomo she ll come definitely… suj: hmm, now u go n fresh up… both smiles…

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Next day,

Swara is too happy, it’s her first pooja… Swara ask sanskar to return home early… with help of kaki and dadi she did all the preparation… When sanskar comes home, he is totally surprised to see his home… he knw today pooja in their home but he didn’t expect this… In his 27yrs first time he saw so many guests in his home and it was beautifully decorated… some children’s are playing in sideways…

 

He heard bhajans sound and  saw lil foot prints in rice flour from outside which is  indicating arrival of lord krishna… he just follow those steps its leads to his in house temple… Dadi and shekar also present there… after his marriage its the first time he is meeting them… he feels lil hard but he goes towards them and get blessing… they hesitantly blessed him…  his eyes searches for swara…  it notices familiar figure covering her head in pallu… ‘Swara’ someone calls her… she turns her head with her million dollar smile… sanskar is awestruck to see his kiddo… she is looking gorgeous… he never seen her like this before… ‘See sanskar beta also came, we should start aarthi’ she says… 

 

First time swara is wearing saree, she feels shy to face sanskar… she lower her gaze… she doesn’t knw why but she feels too shy… she wants to knw how she is looking from his… she needs his opinion… While, sanskar can’t tk his eye from her… she is in his favourite navy blue saree with matching bindi and jhumkas… she adores her neck with his mangalsutra only… everything in her is just perfect… she looks too beautiful… but something is missing, he keenly watches her… 

 

Sanskar goes towards swara… but he didnt say anything and moves towards god idol… all looks on… he took a pinch of sindoor and filled her maang… ‘perfect’ he murmured, which is audible to swara… swara remembers how he cmes to wipes his sindoor, now he feels she looks perfect with those sindoor… dadi and shekar feels happy with his act while swara blushes… she is taking his breath away with her look… he feels too suffocating… first time he feels her as a pretty women from little girl…

 

They both swings the cradle of lil krishna together… ‘this year u both swing krishna idol nxt year ur kids cradle.. .’ a lady says… all chuckles while swasan feel embarrass… After pooja, Dadi comes to swara: beta we are sorry for… sanskar(interrupts): Dadi what all happened is happened we can’t change… leave all this… shekar folds his hand: I knw beta I don’t need to say, but if she did any mistake pls dnt be angry on her … she is a kid… Sanskar holds his hand: papa she is not oly ur daughter and also my wife… dnt wry… Dadi: she is an immature girl… sans: ugh… parooo darling plss… enough of ur both melodrama… already I told she is my wife dnt wry… ok… now smile… Dadi smiles and hits him playfully… swara witnesses this and feels happy…

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All guest are went , swara is walking here and there in her room alone… first time she wore saree but Sanskar doesn’t say anything about that… she curses dadi bz she only made her wear saree… she looks at mirror, don’t I look good…  May be… Sanskar knocks swara room door…. swara turns… swa: whn u started to ask permission… sanskar smiles: busy..? swa: hmm, no… Sans: wo swara.. swa: hmm… sans: Thanks… swara looks on…

 

He holds her hand… sans: you know this is first tym I celebrated something in our home… every function I used to go and stay at my friends home… you knw very well so many times I stayed in badi also…  everyday whenever I return home I feel it’s just the place where I’m staying but today I felt it has a home… my sweet home, it’s all bz of u… my dad always used to say even a hut will bcm palace if a women present there… today I realised meaning for those word… Thanks for giving soul to our home…

 

Swara: sanskar u says it’s our home thn y u r saying thanks… sans: fr cmng in my life… both smiles… swa: sanskar sorry… sanskar gives her question look… swa: wo, dadi asked me to wear saree.. I dnt hv saree na so without ur permission I tk this from ur wardrobe… I’m sorry… sans: swara this s my mom saree my dad kept safe all this saree to his bahu… so it’s all urs… got it… she nods…. He stands to leave… swa thinks: now also he didnt say anything… sanskar turns: swara… swa: haan… sans: umm… umm… he gives sigh…sans: saree suits you… u look beautiful in this saree… swara blushes… sanskar leaves from there with smile…

70 comments

  1. chanu

    awwww….
    super cute epi. lv it as always.

    so most comfertable person 4 her is sanskar!?! nice 🙂

    their last festival is awsome sanskar as radha? omg dt ws hillarius.

    swara in saree awww. must b rly beautifull.

    keep writing dr
    be happy always

  2. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Aaaawww
    Super cute sweet funny lovely bful chappy… sanky as radha oh god it was si funny…
    Lovet it.. its so gud nive… plzz continue soon

  3. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Aww very nice…. Its soo cute nive…. Loved it a lot…. Y arjun is calling swara as ammu??? Whether i missed any chap??? Actually i have a doubt before itslef but now only i m asking this….

    • Nive..

      |Author

      Nope dr… actually na tha mention panla… arjun feels someone ammu presence in swara so he is calling her ammu… hope ur doubt gt clear… n yeah thanks… 🙂 🙂

  4. little princess

    Super duper awesome chappy…. Loved it to the core…. Glad to see swara filling colours in sanskar’s life….both of them r falling for each other..vow!!!…at last he felt her to be pretty women from his little girl…even he started accepting her as his wife…sanskar still dont know that what made him agree to do radha’s role…its swara’s tears or her didi’s pleading eyes…just loved it…ofcourse it will be our swara’s tears..make him realise it…he even filled her maang…something something..omg eagerly waiting for the realisation of their love… Cant wait much to see our heavenly couples together…sanskar being radha is hilarious… Just imagine that funny moment… 😀 😀

    Try to update ur ff regularly… Many r eagerly waiting for ur ff… Love it so much…so update it asap…this was a lovely chappy…swasan moments were really adorable..

    • Nive..

      |Author

      ha ha ha… you’r rgt his kiddo tears oly made him accept Radha role 😀😀 soon they will realise their something something… will post this wenever i’m free… I’m glad u lvd this ff.. 🙂 🙂

  5. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Na un mela kovam ah iruken.. nee chapie post panirukanu solavey ila???? Bt hw cn i b angry on u.. hahehehe semma nive.. mass chapie.. sethu this chapie for u nly dr.. nive gave u this treat. R u hapie???
    Then super ah irundhuchu nive.. aludhu unnoda ff.. wah wah krishna jayenthi spl. Thn swssan moments awesom… thn paroo darling.. then i visualised sanskar as radha.. semma nive hahehe vry funny… totally mass.. do post soon..

    • Nive..

      |Author

      ha ha ha… thala pls kova padathinga… nxt tym update panradhuku munnadi eh… inform pannidrean… deal…
      lol… u visualised sanky as Radha…ha ha ha… one tym yen nephew ku radha vrsham pottom adha sanky eh radha va change pannitean… 😋😋 nxt epi post panrean but first u update ur OS… 🙂 🙂

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Ayiyaa pathuten.. enoda dp nd ur cover pic are same ♥♥
        same pinch dont give me bck pinch now give me chocolate
        😉 😀 😀 😀
        enaku konjum nutty brain.. romba neram kaluchudhn purujuchu… 😀

      • Nive..

        ha ha ha… dnt u knw nive rule..? yar avala pinch panrangalo avanga tha avaluku choco tharanum… 😋 😋 do u really want me to post ur post about me…??

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