swasan-zindagi ban gayi ho tum meri (short story-3)

Hii guys….I had very less comment on prev ep… hope u are lyking it….
So prev are :
Ep 1 : http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-zindagi-ban-gayi-ho-tum-meri-short-story-1/
Ep 2 : http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-zindagi-ban-gayi-ho-tum-meri-short-story-2/

So chapter starts from here:-

It feels like eternity I am sleeping on this bed…. or don’t know on what… I m falling in the black hole more n more….
After a sudden I feel light coming through my eyes… I m slowly slowly opening it… my fingers are moving after lot of try…. I can see only white and green all around bt only faded vision is coming… where am I? ?… This is the first question that comes in my mind…. I have suddenly lost my voice… want to speak bt couldn’t bt my ears are working…

I can hear a familiar voice… yes I can identify the person it’s my sister ragini… my Rago….

She is saying something that I can partially understand… something like… “ at..last… It. .. happened…” she sounds happy…

I don’t know what’s going… on…

I can now also hear beep sound coming from something near me. … what is that..?

Slowly slowly my vision is becoming clear I can see Rago near me holding my hand… she has tears in her eyes which I can’t see it hurts bt she is smiling too… I can’t get anything in my brain…

Thn I catched my surrounding… its a hospital bed I guess… what I am doing here… I m nt getting a single happening around me…

Thn I see a person coming in with a white coat may be the doctor…. He made me seated… n was noting something on a board observing all machines around me….

Thn my eye landed on the prsn siting beside me… Rago… she is watching me without blinking her eyes… thn all of a sudden she took in her embrace and crying hard… I m nt getting anything… she was saying in between of her sobs… “ at last di u are here…. I was feared to Death” thn I found my voice just to say “shhh… d..d..don’t”

Thn she composed herself n again sat beside me… thn doc came after completing his work…

Doc : hii.. I m doctor manik malhotra… I m ur doctor… today u came back after 2 months of coma…

2 months!!…

2 months of coma when that happened… I was just watching him blankly to catch him what he was saying. ..

Doc : ur sister was here with u all these days to take care of u… Every day in these 2 months she was there…

I looked at Rago with lot of love…n she was also doing the same. .. Doc passed a smile to Rago. .. may b they have become frnds…

After sometimes. ..

Rago kept her hand on mine and squeezed it…n asked : di what happen that day… u n laksh….

After that what she said faded….. my mind was only rotating on word laksh…. where is laksh… thn I remembered

☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆FLASHBACK☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

After marriage and bidaai laksh n swara settled in the car…

Swara : laksh where is driver? ?..

Laksh : madam aapke samne… (He bowed)

Laksh knew every lil thing that can make any girl feel special… He is caring… He is protective… He is romantic too…
He is a perfect caring husband material….
That’s why he was very famous in collage among girls.. bt he proposed me once…. I rejected as I was nt ready for a relationship… He understood…
Aftr collage he came to my home with the marriage proposal.. papa liked him… n thn i had no objections…
At last by his talks n nature he also made me fall for him… yes I have fallen for him… completely n fully…

Swara : u r going to drive… (astonishing voice)

Laksh : don’t worry I know to drive ok… I have license…. n u know jaan I can risk my life bt nt yours…

That made me blush…. He truely loved me….
We both thn settled on the front seat…

Swara : achanak yeh idea of driving…. something is in ur mind na…

Laksh : ( laughed ) u know me too well… We are going for our honeymoon directly…. to dareeling by car from kolkata…

This made me tomato red… bt he just smiled n winked…

We were on highway…. forest all around… There was silence all around. .. bt some times some sweet small eyes locks takes place. … road was empty n silent…

He thn suddenly… took my one hand on his…. n looked at me… n I too looked at him…

Laksh : ( smiled ) One more reason is there to nt take driver….

Swara : what is that?

Laksh : I wanted to spend tym with u… It never happened bcoz of marriage preparation… n I also wanted to say u…. mm… I LOVE YOU SWARA…

It’s the world’s best feeling whn ur love shows his love towards u… that too in such a sweet jester…. This was it for me I too wanted to say my feelings for him…

Swara : laksh I….

Laksh : I know Swara u don’t… bt I will never force…. take ur time… One day or the other u will also fall for me… We have life tym to do so….

That time I wanted to say… yes I have already…

Swara : laksh…listen first I lo…

BT paused as I saw a big truck coming towards us.. laksh tried to handle the steering wheel bt it was too late…. at last laksh saw there was no escape… He just open my door to throw me out so that I can be safe… I was nt able to catch what was going on… It was too fast…

Lastly I heard him shouting while throwing me…

Laksh : swara u promise u will move on in life n I love you… will always do…

He said some more things bt I ws nt able to analyse… I was thn landed at road got hurt badly…n last vision I saw my love being crashed by the truck….

Swara : no….

BT it was too late. ..n every thing became black…
☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

I shouted : laksh…..

Ragini hugged me tightly…. n tried to sooth me… I cried like a baby in her Lap…

Swara : why.. why this happened with..me… laksh…laksh… how can.. how can he leave me… He. . He promised. .. me to live n die with him…. how can… He…. ( I was sobbing like a child ) I even can’t tell him… I loved him soo much… I even was nt able to convey this… He. . He… died infront of my eyes…. He always wanted my confession bt even I didn’t gave it to him…. n he gave his life for me…. why Rago. .. why me….He said we have life tym to express feelings… thn why he left me…. He saved me…n choose death… its all my fault…. I m his murderer Rago. … I m…

Ragini was moving her hand to and fro in my . n was trying to calm me….

Ragini : shhh… di control urself… I m there na…. everything will b fine. … u didn’t do anything…. It was destined…

Atlast some thing stricked me… I straightened myself… n asked Rago : Rago…. where..is.. papa..? ?? He didn’t came…

Rago : ( fumbled ) di..wo….papa….

So guys how was this? ?…

Laksh was a true lover bt there love was nt destined to be forever…..
Let’s c what happens next…
Where is her papa ???.. her protective father not here… something is fishy…
All answers will be in nxt chapter

My ff :
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Stay+away+husband+

Plz comment guys to motivate me…. or if you don’t lyk it I will stop it…

Credit to: sujata

34 comments

  1. Jiya

    Feeling sad for laksh bt wt to do as swasan are destined to be one so its ok loved this chpter a bit emotional plz post ur ff stay away plz

  2. Reethi

    I’m feeling sad for swara.when will be our sanskar entry. Waiting for their love story. N plz UPDATE STAY AWAY I’M NOT UR HUSBAND. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

  3. IREENA

    so emotional. actually feeling bad for both swalak but where is Sanskar make his entry soon.

  4. Emotional one laksh was indeed a true lover but their love didn’t destined together… More suspense to be revealed in next epis….. Go ahead…. ?

  5. Natasha

    Its emotional behna..u know wat behna Wn I was reading this I was crying..cz one month ago my buddy was in this position.. till now c is in this position like Swara… her bf died while saving her..he couldn’t save himself..Nw in every single moment c is blaming herself…am crying now..cz I know how it feels..I saw her in front of my eyes at that time 24*7…???

    This WK is gonna be my life’s one of the best emotional wks..cz f SwaSan am crying everyday..today after watching the segment I was crying seeing his state..now after reading ur ff am crying again..??? koi mujhe bucket do plzzz..???? sanskar..???

  6. L Khan

    Very emotional…..laksh character was heart touching loved his character……nd let’s see wht happens next but longer parts nd soon post the next part can’t wait at all…………nd specially for sanskar becz u said he will come after 3 episodes so now waiting for his entry…….

  7. PRITY

    so nice
    and heart touching
    loved it
    gys pls help me
    to convay my msg to the writer of ff SWASAN YOU ARE MINE
    plz request her to upload hr episodes
    I love it to much
    she has deleted all hr
    earlier episodes also
    because of some humer
    plz

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