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swasan-zindagi ban gayi ho tum meri (short story – 2)

administratorBy administratorMay 12, 201622 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi guys. … I m back with the scnd part…. hope u will lyk the earlier part…. Some ppl would have recognised me I am STAY AWAY…. I M NT UR HUSBAND!!.. writer….

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-zindagi-ban-gayi-ho-tum-meri-short-story-1/

I was trying to open my eyes… partially I can open it. … can only see white all over… where am I…??.. trying to move my fingers… trying to get up… bt all in vain.. I can’t move an inch… I can hear ppl crying. … why are they crying. … ahh… Rago is crying… pleading me to get you… I m trying my best but I can’t… I can’t see her crying she is my life… bt what happened… where is laksh? ??..

I was giving my every bit energy of my every cell in my body bt I was nt able to move… I pressurised my mind to think what happened…. bt then darkness engulfed… like I was hit by a ball… n every think blackout…. I was feeling like I am falling in darkness like a black hole is pulling me towards it n I am falling in it. …It is endless… even I am nt able to hear anything now. .. Every thing just blackout… n I am caged in this back hole for eternity…

Every thing was PERFECT in swara’s life…
She got a caring husband in form of laksh….

A sweet lil sister who was like a daughter to her n she always considered her as a saviour… why was she so helpless that she was pleading her to wake up…

A caring and loving father who had even completed her mother’s Duty… who always wanted to protect her who can’t see tears in her eyes… cant see her in pain even though he had to face all of them…why he was helpless…

Last swara who had got all the loving ppl in her surrounding… A caring n loving husband ; a saviour sister and a protective father…. bt all are helpless….
What happened to her ? Why she can’t move…??
Why Rago is crying. ..?..
Will get the answer in nxt upload….
As I found ppl lyking it…. I thought to not end it in 2-3 chapter bt 7 or 10 chapters…
I know guys it’s a very small update bt making it small was necessary…. nxt will b a very long one….

Hope u liked today’s chapter….

My other ff is :
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Stay+away+husband+

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22 Comments

  1. Reethi on May 12, 2016 7:27 pm

    Not at all fair. U stopped at a big suspense. Now I can’t even sleep. Omg please update ASAP plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 2:56 am

      Wait reethi… Mystery will be soon reveal…. n sleep well ?. … don’t spoil ur sleep for my story

  2. IREENA on May 12, 2016 7:44 pm

    it’s not fair sujata very short update? but koi bat nahi plz post next part soon and a big one and also ur ff.

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 2:57 am

      Sorry IREENA bt don’t worry nxt is longer one…. u will lyk it I think so….

  3. shan on May 12, 2016 7:54 pm

    awesome

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 2:58 am

      Thnx shan

  4. Natasha on May 12, 2016 8:05 pm

    Phewwwwww…behna..very short…?chal koi baat nhi…??? and soooo much mystery… tu bht zyada CID dekh rahi hai kya??? ??? if yes then stop watching…u r a kid… 😛 😛 😛 suspense is not good for health…?? lol..just kidding…mysterious as u said…??

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 2:59 am

      Lol nats I have left watching cid much earlier…. its bore now….
      Suspense nt good for health bt best for story…

  5. alia on May 12, 2016 8:56 pm

    awesome

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 2:59 am

      Thnx alia

  6. Shagun on May 12, 2016 9:03 pm

    Awesome

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 3:00 am

      Thnx shagun

  7. aanya on May 12, 2016 9:20 pm

    Superb plz update soon

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 3:00 am

      I have already uploaded it dr….

  8. L Khan on May 12, 2016 10:03 pm

    Nce…..I think an accident took place nd laksh died in it……..bss now I’m only waiting for sanskar our hero

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 3:01 am

      Ur wait will be soon over khan…. bt frst u will have to see swara suffer a lot…. bcoz life is nt bed of roses as we think

  9. Jiya on May 12, 2016 11:59 pm

    Awsm plz reveal the mystry

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 3:02 am

      In nxt part jiya everything will be revealed

  10. Niveditha on May 13, 2016 5:23 am

    Nice.. But very short…

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 10:51 am

      Nxt is longer

  11. Kavya on May 13, 2016 11:32 am

    Wow sujata awesome!!! Thnx for making it a bit longer??

    • sujata on May 13, 2016 10:35 pm

      Thnx kavya

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