swasan-zindagi ban gayi ho tum meri (short story – 1)

Zindagi ban gayi ho tum meri…

Hii guys. .. its sujata. …its a SS. .. of 2 or 3 parts. .. hope u will lyk it…

MARRIAGE HOUSE
A house is seen fully decorated with flowers lights etc. . Children are playing in the ground. … All the elders are engage in work…. girls are giggling… n surrounding a girl who was in light pink n white lengtha… laughing whole heartily… she has spread her hand n in both hands girls are applying mehandi to her .
Girl 1 : so what name we have to write. ..

Heroine : ( blushingly ) laksh. ..

Girl : ohho some one is blushing haan…

Heroine : shut up. … (just then her phone rings )

Girl 2;: ohoo… jijs call has come. …

Heroine : Arre plz keep phn in my ears na I have mehandi on my hand…

Girl 3: Acha. .. what we will get for it….

Heroine : jaldi plz or call will get cut… ok I will help you in hiding his shoes….

Girl 1 : ok ok…n places phn in swara’s ear. …

☆☆☆☆☆phn convo☆☆☆☆☆☆
Girl : hello
Laksh : hello…. so future Mrs. Laksh Malhotra whats going on? …
Girl : ( blushingly ) just telling girls to write ur name on my hand…
Laksh : ohoo.. no need I have already engraved my name on your heart…
Girl was overwhelmed n lost her voice. …
Laksh : shona u there? …
(Yes the girl is swara )
Swara : hmm…
Laksh : don’t feel shy shona.. waise I am going now. .. marriage preparations. ..n yup doli saja k rakhna… bye.
Swara : hahaha. . Bye tc…
All girls from back : bye bye jijs…
Laksh : bye bye meri salio….
☆☆☆☆☆☆☆phn convo ends☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

Swara : what was that huh…

Girl 3 : we just said bye n u r jealous shona…ahem ahem..

Swara : shut up… n they kept on teasing her…

Just thn a girl came had a basket of flowers in her hand n was totally busy in marriage preparations…

New girl : ohh… hello stop teasing di n come n help me…

Girls : ok..yaar

All started to do their work…New girl comes n sits near swara n side hugs her as mehandi doesn’t get affected…

Swara : thnx rago… they were teasing me lyk hell…u r always my saviour. ..

New girl is ragini : di I will also miss you lyk hell..

Swara : me too. .

They did some emotional talks revived old childhood memories n lyk this that day ended…

~~~~~~~marriage day ~~~~~~~~~

All girls are making swara ready for her big day…

Girl 1 : yâar ur hairs are just awesome. … I just dream some times that I have hair lyk u…

Rago : thn dream only… only di’s hairs are best…(showed tongue to the girl )

All laughed

Swara : rago enough. …(all where enjoying just thn shekhar came…)

All girls went out side to give dad n daughter some alone tym..

Shekhar : shona u became so old.. today I realised…. I can now also remember that small shona who use to walk with my support. …n today she is going to others house (his eyes became moist )

Swara : papa u will make me cry too… my makeup will be damaged. ..

Both laughed at this…

Swara : I know papa…. u will always find best for me… n laksh is indeed best….

Shekhar : Arre haan I wanted to tell u… ur bua has come from the vidhwa ashram…

Swara : why she didn’t come in my pre marriage functions papa ( n pouted)

Shekhar : Arre u know na… she is authorised prsn n so stubborn…. she thinks vidhwa taking part in marriage function is nt good… she lost her husband after 1 year of marriage n maa baba send her to vidhwa ashram… from that time she has become a tough lady… I miss my Bubbly sister…

Swara : bt why baba…. We should have kept her…

Shekhar : u don’t know beta… This society is very cruel….

Thn ragini entered …

Ragini : Arre u both forgot me I am also there….

They had an family hug. …

Ragini : I will miss you di

Swara : ditto….

Shekhar : I wish misti should have been here… she would have been the happiest prsn…

Swara : I too miss maa… kaash she would have been seeing my marriage…

Ragini : Arre she is watching every thing from the sky… she is always there with us…

Swara : I know….

Ragini : Arre haan… I came here to tell you. ..baraat has arrived… come come….n u will help me in that shoe stealing ritual…

Swara : haan haan ok baba…..

Shekhar : ab chale…

Swara nodded n went out with shekhar. ..she also found her bua kaveri there.. With white saari shaved head… standing at corner…. swara went to take her blessings bt ppl said don’t take a vidwas blessing it will never give bliss to ur married life..
BT swara didn’t listened a word n took her blessing even if kaveri herself resisted… bt swara said it’s 21st century…

Thn she was carried away to the mandap …. she was welcomed by a happy face of laksh… they both sat together to give the promise to live n die together…

It seemed her happiest day in her life… All things were just perfect… perfect was also a word underestimating the surrounding…. Every eye was moist as she was going. ..

Rago was crying more than herself she had… ragini was always treated as a child of Swara. … n it ws very difficult for Rago to digest it….

Shekhar had teary eyes bt he didn’t want to breakdown before his daughter… He want to stand with her as her shield always. ..

Laksh was happy to get his love of life swara… He always wanted that his days should start with swara n end with her… n that was going to happen…excitement to new journey with swara was in his eyes. …

Swara she was happy as laksh was perfect person for her… even though it was not a love Marriage love resides in this relationship… pain of leaving her family was there bt happiness of leading a new life can’t be unnoticed….

Every thing was just PERFECT….. bt If live would have been perfect then tears would have never come in anyone’s eye… life is nt a bed of roses… swara is facing roses now… is thorns coming to prick her soon…

Let’s c what happens whn devil will come in her angelic paradise…

Plz comment ppl to motivate me to write more…

Credit to: sujata

47 comments

  1. Kavya

    Wow!? I’m already in love with this SS I wish it would have been an ff? but still? I loved it. Please post the next ASAP?

  2. Natasha

    U didn’t tell me that u r going to write a ss..????surely I’ll miss it..My friend told me..nywys
    ..u didn’t tell me.. am sad..??

  3. Niveditha

    Nice… Swara is getting married to Laksh? The how will Sanky fit into all these? Waiting for next part. Continue soon

    • Ya…I too have the same confusion,… But I am crazy fan of swasan.,…..and I very happy that you r writing this ff…as now proportion of ragsan ff is getting high…… so plz try to post it ASAP today only…plzzz

  4. awesome but don’t sperate swalak plzz yrr and ure writing one swasan ff so do not change pairs now lplzzzzzzz

  5. Natasha

    Where is Sanky behna??? sorry for late..was doing chapar chapar with u na?? that’s y..sorry..choooolllyyy…and its sooo good..???

  6. IREENA

    its nice yaar Plzen post next chapter soon. n sorry for late comment just now I read it.?

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