SWASAN VIVAH:ATOOT RISHTA(EPISODE 1)

THANK U TO THOSE WHO COMMENTED……….AND I’M HAPPY TO GIVE MY FIRST EPISODE ON MY B’DAY………
NOW LETS START THE JOURNEY OF NEW FF………..

The story starts from a big mansion named “SINHA MANSION” and a cute little boy is seen struggling with his paintings and just then he turns around when he hears a voice…….
Voice:Pratham……….what r doing my prince??????????
(Yes the cute little boy was Pratham……)
Prath:Dadu……….See na ……..this painting is so diificult to make and I’ve to submit this today itself(with a pout face)…….pls help me ……..And pls don’t tell this to mumma(with a cute expression)

Shek:Arrey mera baccha…..Don’t worry…….why fear when ur Dadu is here? I’ll help u in ur painting…..Tell me what should I do?And by the way y didn’t u complete ur homework yesterday itself?
Prath:(in a low tone)Wo dadu……..yesterday when mumma asked me about my homework I told her that I’ll complete it with u and when I came to u we became busy in watching that animated movie and then I forgot about my Homework……But today when I got up I saw my books……..and..
Shek:And u remembered that u had to do ur hw……
Prath:(trying to divert the topic)Come on dadu……..First help me na……..U know if mumma gets to know about it she will become a hungry dinasour……(with lots of expressions)
Shek:(smiling at his antics)Wait let me tell ur mumma that ur calling her ……….
Parth:(shouts)Dadu……….What did u do?????????

Shek:(confused)What did I do??????? (Then he looks at Pratham pointing finger towards the painting)Oh god……..I’m really sorry Pratham………
Just then they hear a voice and turn around……
Person:Whats cooking between dadu and our prince????????
Shek:Arrey Shrivastav ji…….How are u?And when did u come?
Shri:When ur prince was shouting at u!!!!!!!By the way what happened??????(He gos near Pratham and picks him up and makes him sit on his lap and then asks him)

Prath:Shanku dadu……..U know dadu don’t know anything……….I don’t know how he passed his first std……..
Shri:Arrey baap re………(looks and giggles at Shekar who was standing with a pout face)Aisa kya kar diya aapke dadu ne????????(What did he do??????)
Prath:(with lots of expressions)When I called mumma hungry dinasour dadu started blackmailing me and he was so busy in it that he painted the trees blue and the sky green and made my painting so weird………
When he was telling all this someone was listening to all this and then suddenly pulls Pratham’s ear……
Voice:Oh I look like a hungry dinasour……haan……..
Prath:(scared)Mumma……..pls……I didn’t mean that…….aahhh…..aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh…….. (acting better to say over acting)dadu……pls ask mumma to leave my ear na…….its paining….. And mumma I called to pretty dinasour not hungry ……(winks at Shekar and Shankar)
Ragini:(leaving his ear)stop ur nautanki……dramebaaz……. and why were u asking ur dadu to do ur hw and by the way why didn’t u do it yesterday?
Prath:(goes and hugs her)Mumma u only told na that in morning our mind will be fresh and we shouls study in the morning so I thought to do my hw in the morning ……
Ragini:Acchha ji…….but when did I say that u should do ur hw in the morning and why did u ask ur dadu to do ur hw??????
Prath:(innocently)No mumma…….I just asked him to help me but he changed my painting itself.
Shek:Let it be na Ragini and I think this will be the most unique painting where the trees are blue and the sky is green……(laughs)
Prath:(pouts)Dadu not fair………

Ragini:Enough of ur nautanki ……come have ur breakfast and go to school……..
Then she sees Shrivastav who was adoring this sweet lil family……She goes to him and takes his blessings and asks him to join for bf.In the mean time even Laksh comes there getting ready for office and sits for the bf but he was holding a newspaper …….
Ragini:(looks at Laksh)Papa……I’m going to my dad’s house…….
Shekar is shocked but Laksh was busy reading newspaper and didn’t pay any attention to her words……

Shek:But beta suddenly……what happened ??????Is every thing alright??????? How will I stay without my DIL and my prince……..Sorry Ragini….ur not going anywhere……
Ragini:But dad I can’t live with my sautan under the same roof……..
All are shocked specially Laksh who was sipping cooffe and was engrossed in the newspaper literally spat the cooffe after hearing the word sautan………
Laksh:(shocked and confused)Ragu……..Which sautan………I only have one wife and that is u and I only love u and no one else ………Believe me……….. (trying his best to convince her)
Just then everyone laughs out loud including Ragini…….But our cutei Laksh is still confused…
Laksh:Ragini…Papa……..Uncle …….Why r u laughing ??????
Shek:Arrey my innocent son…..Ragini is talking about this sautan(pointing towards the newspaper )which u give more time than ur family…..
Laksh:Oh god……Ragu u scared me……..(looks at Ragini who seemed still angry)Ok baba….. sorry……..I won’t look at the newspaper now…..happy…..
Ragini:U always say that but again whenever u see any newspaper u can’t let it go before having a look at it once….

Shek:Laksh very bad…
Laksh:(with a pout)Sorry papa……..
Ragini:But papa…….I was thinking that even Pratham’s holidays are going to start so can I…..
Shek:No ways…..u ask anything but I won’t let u and Pratham go to ur maayka…….U know na this house is incomplete without u and our prince ……that too in vacations no ways…….
Ragini:(happy to see his love but still pleading)Papa…….pls……..
Shri:(admiring their lovely family)Well Sinha ji I have permanent solution for this problem…… Ragini can go to her maayka and even the house with not be incomplete…….
Shekrag(Shekar+Ragini):Really what is the solution??????
Shri:Get another DIL in the house……….. I mean now Sanskar is eligible for marriage and I also have a perfect match for him…..
Shek:That’s great and if u have selected the girl she must really be good and I completely trust u…… I’ll talk to Sanskar about it today itself…….
The screen shifts to a room in a sports club where two boys r playing Squash and the others are cheering ……Just then a boy calls another boy who was playing…..
Boy:Yaar Sanskar…….ur phone is ringing….
(Yes the boy playing Squash was our handsome Sanskar)
Sans:Coming dude……..

He recieves the call and then informs his frnds and leaves…
Sans:Sorry guys…..got to go …..dad has something important to discuss…….bye…….
Later he reaches the Sinha office where he is welcomed with an unusual behaviour by the staff….. Everyone who sees him is wishing him good luck and smiling as if he is going for a war…
Sans:(to himself with utter confusion)Sanskar have u done something which u ur self is unaware of…..I was not givn this special treatment when I had topped my exams…. I guess something very serious……. All the best Sanskar………
Saying this he enters Shekar’s cabin …….
Shek:Sanskar ……come have a seat……By the way why r u so tensed????????
Sans:Woh Dad…….What is that u want to discuss about because on my way to ur cabin every one who I met was wishing me luck as if I’m going on a war …… Something serious I guess?????
Shek:Yes Sanskar……A very serious matter…. Actually I’m planning to send u to life time prison…….
Sans:And what do u mean by that ?????????
Shek:I mean that I’m planning to get u married….
Hearing this Sanskar became numb ,he didn’t know how to react and ended up giving a confused look to his father who understood his condition.
Shek:Look Sanskar I know what u r going through and I understand but son when things are perfect if they are done on their coorect time……Even Laksh got married to Ragini when he was of ur age and look now they r a happy family…….I know its all of a sudden but I would like to see my Sanskar also happy just like my Laksh……

Sans:But dad…..
Shek:Sanskar believe me I won’t do anything against ur wish ……And yeah today ur Shankar uncle had come and he has a marriage proposal for u and he told us that the girl is perfect for u and I trust him………Look he has also brought her pic (handing him a envelope )…….Well all of liked her very much but we want u to have a look at her……..
Sans:(still in a dilemma)Dad why so fast????
Shek:(doubtfully) Sanskar do u like someone???????If so then I don’t have any problem????
Sans:(shocked)Dad that’s not the matter ……..There’s no one I like……..
Shek:Then fine u have a look at her pic and ur bhabhi has all her details and u can tell me ur decision within two days ………And if its a yes then we can go to see the family……

*********NIGHT,SINHA MANSION***********

sanskar was in raglak’s room ……. laksh was busy with his office work and was sitting on the couch whereas sanskar and pratham both were lying on the bed with their heads in ragini’s lap while she was carresing their hair…..while pratham had already reached his dreamland while sanskar was thinking something……….

Ragini:Sanskar……..
Sans:Hhhhmmmmmmm……
Ragini:U haven’t seen her photo still……
Sans:(surprised)Bhabhi…….How do u know???
Laksh:(interrupts)Arrey mere bhai don’t underestimate ur bhabhi she is expert in reading minds…….
Sans:(amazed)Is it so bhabhi……
Ragini:I know u very well….. Well don’t u want to know about Swara??????
Sans:(feels immense happiness hearing the name)Swara???????
Ragini:Yeah her name is Swara and she as cute as her name……Really beautiful and her innocence can just be made by seeing her face…..Her mom dad died in an accident and from then she lives with her chacha and chachi and she is very polite and traditional…..Sanskar I relly feel that she would prove to be the best life partner for u and at least now have a look at her pic keeping ur nervousness aside……..

Sans:(smiles at her)Yes madam……..Gud ni8 bhabhi …….gud ni8 bhai…..
Raglak:Gud ni8……
Sanskar leaves to his room and then goes towards the table and picks up the envelope and while he was removing the pic from it he fells his heartbeats rising ……..But then gains some courage and finally the pic starts coming out of the envelope……A pair of beautiful eyes are revealed and sanskar is just lost in those eyes and the a cute lil nose and then her beautiful lips and then at last the whoe pic comes out and a smile automatically cmes on his lips …..
Sans:Swara……………
He sleeps with a smile on his face thinking about Swara……….

PRECAP:SWARA’S INTRO………

Credit to: praju

20 comments

  1. Abdul hafiz (Uma)

    Awsm dear. Laksh and newspaper πŸ“°, lolπŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.Imagine karne mein bhi weird lagti hein.Anyway,HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEARπŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸ“‘πŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽπŸŽ.May you have a wonderful day and may your wishes comes true.Keep it up. Waiting for nxt.

  2. Vidhi

    Happy Birthday day…. N story same as vivah… U knw I just love that movie… N u r writing the same story on swasan is really superb dear…. Update soon… Will be waiting…..

  3. Mahjabeen

    Awesome…nd happy brithday dear.☺☺god bless uπŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸ¦πŸ¦πŸ§πŸ¨β˜•πŸ°πŸ°

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